【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
+ u3 K8 P( C" A  D4 [xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

( L# }7 T- k8 U  n$ ~' c' v一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
5 E' k# \# y. b/ b3 d( T8 @$ `: _5 WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空

With the moon kissing it every night
0 w, F2 b- e$ b$ r/ \看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
$ k" |  @+ V/ d& vSeeing the sky content with its love
' o" {+ A/ i: Y: B+ s/ W夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
% B: t+ G# \6 w. A我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
0 S$ V+ G  Q2 e5 V0 j9 R* nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ d) z8 I* B6 g7 D我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
# Y7 K# B3 \) t口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ w& y/ d9 t5 {+ C+ I6 ?6 j+ U+ ]$ ?爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
4 m( w" Y" n  l) e$ T0 L  w世间万物  皆不能比

, p8 q2 R8 v5 a7 a6 ^: hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 S( i: g/ w3 r能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ ]: Z/ I$ L  o4 s3 T2 o! R* o整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
) n5 Q, R8 \. R5 o  w我真想看透你的心
! |3 I3 R7 g& A) ]8 q6 MI invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
0 {  u7 i3 g0 r8 F( H. W: t, kTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
. m4 g2 `0 m# XI’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 H2 L7 k) b: s5 g$ c你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
5 ?3 B$ V8 i4 [) O, O真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 o0 |5 a- f3 n* J也恨不得  多如千万
- j# t( S  q* Z/ `& z# p4 f; ^With such a tongue as yours,
' R9 c5 g/ s, F8 ^你这张嘴 真真厉害
& k& w: E3 N& cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! G5 D9 @4 C( y; t若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
( f! \9 r* o! L/ ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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; d; u+ c' ~/ H3 P. [The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
0 U2 T+ j- U  u6 m5 C4 |That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
+ N' |& s0 H+ k3 RFrom the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
- W0 d  W6 a+ b( E) i3 \* l+ ~& Z( }I already loved you with all my heart
9 f( @( f5 \2 \( e, o+ t; c从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
9 t% Y1 M' N* p你我每天见面寒暄
% k( }; Z5 ]7 m# S$ H$ W0 x, K9 gBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 f$ R0 v5 m# |% j5 e, t) O奈何从未谈及内心
( [/ Y" ?* j  G" I8 M3 RIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ R: [! [- x* G. r+ ~) d' w1 W若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
- j4 r1 f- s9 d, QI would probably know how you feel
) s8 i. I! _  [' q, m, u+ Z或能知你心意
8 l) @+ Q9 o  r' |4 iLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
5 M5 E" w' Z5 a: t. W( H/ T5 @: c$ rWhy is it so difficult to express?
, r9 i5 |+ P( [' ^6 z) E% w为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
1 x* r8 a( O3 I) m& ~/ F9 G我多想向你表白
% d. {" z, c; PBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
3 z/ c3 ~' p- n' ZOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 E1 o! a9 m+ j只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
1 M' D6 v  C0 ]+ u) {If today isn’t too late,
) V. y; [4 s% Q. F6 M7 c假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
. E1 a" ]  |8 {( Q+ c/ XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 [* c! H( j1 f6 G不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
0 `2 m% K4 A( J" z5 J9 A0 n可否将它 托付于你?
) j7 H( f% K2 S  ~1 E' ?1 oEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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- C" Y3 e$ U# KLove… just the word love
, h" F' K1 [0 V" p8 a3 G* [爱呀，爱就一个字
8 x  a$ r8 A$ f$ X# G/ B) [2 kWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
0 w0 E0 z6 _$ ~) s& t4 p我多想向你表白
But I never did
& Z/ J$ V1 ?! F1 G  M9 W却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 ]$ P1 z5 M. K" L! Z; ^只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
0 h5 H, L5 Y9 w0 Y' E- U8 qIf today isn’t too late,
3 h# I2 }2 t* D# W+ a假如还不太迟
5 n5 a0 n; o2 s$ K0 e8 }& Z6 ^# x1 NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
# k, D  y, N3 `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 o% f3 p# s" \. U; E* b不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
  W+ h& s  G, x# D2 q3 j可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
$ j* K& f) i. a- Q从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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4 T/ r  y* W1 w2 V4 mCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
9 l. u+ e; i$ x$ AEntrust my love within your heart
; V; I2 w6 ~5 m; l! K' |从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
0 y1 @( O9 f/ W0 b  b2 s3 f老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
7 K% c! B/ a0 j0 Dvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。