【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
' J; o$ w4 y0 N; }2 P( Gxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

% P6 h3 l8 V; f& c0 ], _2 x一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

' {2 Z. V  _, ^7 Q% T3 [再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 p6 f' P6 I+ a$ q5 `3 u0 ]4 l皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

7 _" t* N- d7 N) K# uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 k% |, b; W0 [' u/ I/ x1 X月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空
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With the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
0 b4 U- W9 I3 v2 }" X我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
) h" c# L2 h: J6 \- C/ LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
  }, l( W* Y( I- t5 x4 Q% ~口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
* E9 F4 Z- N1 r! D  o真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
- g+ K% e: C. P8 Z2 @4 U' LI love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
1 H" J) T  j2 PNothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
" {5 Y% |, m) [0 _1 u" u1 EI invite you to rip it out
& x* C: R% D8 ~$ S6 F: K1 }' w! z你尽管把它掏去
) d/ }$ n* L3 T, d6 i1 sTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 {$ X: Y% p$ Q) Y7 F4 z- O你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
  ]& t/ x5 Q1 }( S3 n; ?* O8 Q& m3 v真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
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With such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
! B: i4 o- E' V2 ~8 eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
1 v, `! v5 t: D3 V# i# E$ ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
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That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
, `$ ~; i: N1 }) s2 nFrom the first moment we met,
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I already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
8 F; [: S5 |# Z! t9 eWe meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
3 t) a* B" n3 D) L. R. f- OBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
5 M- D) t1 B. W  ^奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  o) A+ [& z5 P, Z# k# z若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
( I. Z) T* [; w2 V, s5 j或能知你心意
2 B7 V! e; N2 t* w/ C2 {. ~Love… just the word love
4 m5 l9 S0 D0 y4 c( ]! r, a3 M爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
5 E. [, {) i4 N, GI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
0 L) q; G$ U6 ^* c1 W. L1 G却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
4 z; ]2 |" a- zIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; {1 b. y8 @/ q9 ?+ w/ J6 ~$ M不愿这份爱 逝如流水
2 \' V' x; Y: {' @6 R  t8 b; yCan I entrust it to you?
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4 D( \3 ^6 ^& L4 u% b2 y( lEntrust my love within your heart
/ j1 R0 A. a5 |从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

5 |7 w2 ^. p# Q4 P" jLove… just the word love
* ]# f5 [0 W( L! f爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
! L% y2 N* V1 F我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' \- r, K# K; [' g: y) E8 I只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
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I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 a4 M1 q; K& `* f" U/ P* ]) z今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
* }. S8 U% i/ k9 t3 jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ S# t* |) }) H9 H# K, B不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
" |( p! |/ X+ W2 R, E可否将它 托付于你？
1 }- x4 Z. f% r: JEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

Can I entrust it to you?
: D/ V* M; ?- \1 ?. G7 D) a可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
3 G( D9 ^/ O& b0 |) S3 w6 b- Q, }老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
, z: _  v( n% V刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
  i: U/ z/ O, K- r老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
: b' R9 J7 w; [6 _, K/ O+ O刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
: K6 s  y0 z0 _& w, Y3 Xvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

' S# {" {# _' B. P) h7 q不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。