【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
: b" M4 @, i. b% ^+ N袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
" S# Z7 C6 I4 R( ^# P我愛你  

; F) U9 t' B, T1 M# \From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
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在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
9 W. N' L, H; U( \8 m我的心
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We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
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縱然朝夕相處
/ Y1 Z) B, q' b; h, @) x% s6 P0 ?還是不能肯定你的心意

: k) g7 H7 F+ t& uIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% N' F8 ~, N, P! h. _I would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
3 a/ I8 K9 Q) O; U1 u3 U  c7 h/ K% T搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
/ N0 [2 c3 D2 t# v5 N8 K你的心情

5 B5 c* _+ _3 W0 M) xLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單的一句愛
$ B+ j( a& E8 v& U3 r' B$ b為什麼
如此難以表白?

0 i; [; f9 V- T" i( j5 t, o1 fI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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/ F* Q/ S+ Q5 U0 r6 Q3 n- t. o愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來

# s- J3 J# @% lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
" N: u* p: f  U# ^2 N: O4 h: S" [  k4 M你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
; j' m8 V- Z% M6 N0 sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, V1 W; }0 \4 r$ R1 w
希望今天還不會太晚
0 V3 g4 ?- ]1 ]讓我向你表白
6 a) r. J; r& \- o& L" F- _我心底的秘密

1 V  C0 M) _( AI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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8 U+ N2 i, f. I% _- S不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
+ p3 {; a. L9 ]4 LEntrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
  s, q" D9 E. ~1 p, T7 D托付我的愛
收在你心裡

  q  z: x4 V5 X3 R% u, N2 B2 pLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單一句愛
! F$ K. e" f! L為什麼如此難以表白?

I want to confess that I love you,
6 ^; L$ {/ w  g& m4 vBut I never did
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8 u. r8 N: i" ^愛你 我想要告訴你
6 p6 W; G8 A# p+ w* `卻還是說不出來

! |5 W5 ]2 {& W7 B9 tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

也許有一天
$ L* W' z3 D/ ]1 n8 Z- d& u5 z你將從我指間滑漏

; a7 M# M8 w8 T+ f+ wIf today isn’t too late,
  d: L& }6 ^7 H- h2 @I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密

1 L8 L) X8 R$ j' F* eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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& J2 N/ \( I+ o& |不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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2 ]* }" H& g, _9 E% E! N9 CCan I entrust it to you?
( F4 H( c2 n: TEntrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
# A6 M$ a' a: G# q" A托付我的愛
% p# [8 P7 B  l$ V7 I收在你心裡

# l3 o# e& @/ d, Q  i8 @$ u; DCan I entrust it to you?
3 T7 ^4 E* j; v7 y9 i+ yEntrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
$ X' a7 V- p3 p+ h9 W+ z1 C托付我的愛 收在你心裡




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对唱曲参赛译稿
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6 H6 y5 y3 y" R6 x1 H+ ]9 tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ z, b* ]5 L4 B7 uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 ^! e5 N& c$ l5 M- x: k" MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
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皎潔月光下
  M( U+ A$ h2 c) g) L天空金銀閃爍
" Q  o; O" |, M' ?% q% d4 B凝視著星空
6 f- K* j9 T2 N& H我心充滿快樂
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/ |! h! Q, N) z* a$ X' T  @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, f3 L, u- ^- I9 Z6 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ d& H" x* L; @$ yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
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月光映在我的眼底
- r6 C, i2 {, o; a- ?3 d. U月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂

It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
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我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
; ^2 O# j0 [1 a( O4 \  ?5 Q終將逝去

/ L, v" G* G; e+ j5 t* y7 mYou needn’t fear anything
. K0 I1 R2 @1 S! z5 }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

9 o* u+ y$ ^2 P3 h( `5 i9 u你勿須擔心憂鬱
3 r7 R% B5 y% P! a% a我心充滿著歡欣
4 N" Q# q: o- \1 J( p愛你
0 F% m! m0 D) n) P: |' T4 u堅定不渝

Every other word you utter is love
! W- |7 K& x( X$ sI really want to know just how much you love me

  S+ n! }  l! ~9 t! @你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

! u; p/ T3 o" j3 |4 _" ?I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
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1 Y  z+ F4 E) R+ l我的愛 全心全意
你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
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能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

! ^2 n; m7 ]  i5 o! t% `I want so much to see inside your heart
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我想看透你的心
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I invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
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我歡迎你將它打開
' c, x4 K1 C. z" R: [, U0 L- z. K- M' w我願意用生命
來證明我的愛
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I’m still filled with fear
6 O' g5 V) A; X2 AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

我依然滿心憂鬱
  N( V% o4 i, J5 |9 d你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語

I regret not dying
: U0 g) x/ |/ ?# `I only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000
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5 P9 ~7 d  r1 J7 V* x2 {7 g可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬
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$ f$ b, o4 J. s7 W; ~$ D7 T5 @7 fWith such a tongue as yours,
* `( C; `7 t" I0 OYour speech can’t even keep up with it

. V0 f% L, d; V" P8 `/ t6 y這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上
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. `4 q; z% A8 l6 M$ h7 C4 S: UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
千萬個心思

0 S) r  m. f8 f) C4 Z' JRambling on about a thousand words of love

訴說千萬個
  N0 }& \! l; V4 _% l愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
% g7 d- w4 `& A* Cxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒