【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
6 P, P0 _9 h3 j  c( E) \+ k, sThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

我想我從未表露出
) M& a# j, N6 b/ }9 Q深藏在我心底的那句
我愛你  
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From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
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在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
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- w+ `6 v% ^( ^; TWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

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. |' z6 Y0 C. h2 N% h還是不能肯定你的心意

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
你的心情

Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單的一句愛
6 G+ ^+ H1 j5 t為什麼
如此難以表白?

I want to confess that I love you,
9 o" k( E- A5 g6 e0 x- ]But I never did

愛你 想要告訴你
' U( ^9 [. o7 J8 N3 R  \9 l卻總是說不出來

) F, l" c/ S/ _* |4 r8 qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  O) o  I# ?4 l. @5 [+ E- r. p/ q也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

7 u! _8 k0 J4 `4 T6 _9 c9 n$ e$ mIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

. i7 w4 d$ a0 Q* X8 y不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 U' R& T3 }$ F# k2 ]4 U可否讓我托付給你?
( a& f$ P# H6 O$ H* U. ^托付我的愛
收在你心裡

Love… just the word love
. Q% ]* B9 Z7 S3 BWhy is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單一句愛
2 k- h& M/ s6 U8 Y; e為什麼如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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  g* {. q$ G; c愛你 我想要告訴你
( U( n8 y" g3 @+ X/ a卻還是說不出來
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6 T' X1 C+ d" W$ E( ]1 S/ sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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也許有一天
* u- _) l( v  [$ |- l你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
4 q; e) t$ D: J: R' pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 G4 D* m2 l, @* y* m9 A
1 P6 j" V+ [/ B0 h希望今天還不會太晚
" }4 b9 G/ _; s1 z# o讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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' R3 \3 F! B; Z: u* ~: E$ QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
, |( o9 T$ E0 Y, j" k0 VEntrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
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! K9 [3 m8 y# r+ `6 @Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
: C0 T0 b/ Q* b1 I/ x9 i% K. M4 o( E托付我的愛 收在你心裡

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对唱曲参赛译稿

The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 ^! A/ P& [' i7 j- OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

皎潔月光下
" w! P, H  }0 H* B! K( r9 M天空金銀閃爍
6 \9 a- k. g9 T' Y3 I凝視著星空
$ [+ b* `. C0 l( ]6 P/ b我心充滿快樂
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The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
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4 V; j6 t$ p9 e2 x. p% u3 X月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂

$ z; Q9 N7 D1 K' \( Q6 z$ gIt fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
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我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
: F0 B; [8 ^9 |9 ?! o終將逝去

3 K' B; _7 r/ d" O" }( s0 K. ]! Y3 mYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
' O; X2 o% H6 |* t* P0 e4 p愛你
' }4 j2 V( y2 d' ~, t2 H% p堅定不渝

Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
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4 a4 U6 l& y3 [/ X- v- F你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love

4 H2 s: |1 l# k3 t1 R5 W我的愛 全心全意
9 n, H( ~6 {7 s8 B3 v你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?

能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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I want so much to see inside your heart

3 v6 Y* V0 m" Q3 m: `$ y% \我想看透你的心
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I invite you to rip it out
5 a1 I- \+ {- y! g0 _1 u2 A. pTo prove my love, I’m willing to die

% ]. l8 x# r% j' w8 A6 H  Q我歡迎你將它打開
5 S' z: d7 o4 v) m$ r( s我願意用生命
來證明我的愛

% `% q. V5 i+ U  J* |. S8 uI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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& ]8 }! d: I5 p- m+ }$ R2 y( b# V" I0 D我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語

I regret not dying
, N% D' x* ^1 |* H2 E4 P$ d* TI only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000
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可惜我未能以死證明
& e8 w  \# {0 g/ C我只有一張口
  N# d3 c- }2 l8 F7 }8 D/ {遠遠不及千萬
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With such a tongue as yours,
' j% Z; J8 y3 Z  q5 K% [  ^# lYour speech can’t even keep up with it

& h& K! T, a8 j5 Z/ _* G  X* _這樣一張巧舌
" m& ]- y5 m4 J你的言語都跟不上
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- A" f* G% k9 N" i1 s+ }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# C4 x' ?2 e; Z$ [) `+ B% G如果我真有千百張口
9 r' a8 i' i" s8 u1 K9 \) \我將對你訴說
* |% r, x% |- Y, m千萬個心思
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, h2 Z$ h, c7 _8 cRambling on about a thousand words of love
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/ z* n0 `- ?$ [+ R- I訴說千萬個
* q. A7 `) X  ^5 |! E愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
* p1 e) |. S0 fxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

5 a9 X" x' v, H8 ]+ m. o& P是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒