【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

我想我從未表露出
6 p& \! F/ [+ z1 q; {  Z深藏在我心底的那句
& K# \( }1 l1 \, K- P! D! G  n我愛你  

From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart

在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
我的心
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We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
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* Q, `9 ?5 c; ~7 T2 p' O% m- y7 g縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意
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/ v+ H) r8 i# H8 @9 |5 PIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
0 [1 x1 P  c! p( n凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
, I$ P2 v( q8 I& y) n我也許就能了解
, S# u8 {; h, ?" h! e5 [# d8 i你的心情

5 d; @) A0 n5 j6 m" cLove… just the word love
4 t% l3 }! b8 Y0 k  w' hWhy is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
如此難以表白?

, m" D# y5 a" k3 {3 VI want to confess that I love you,
" T7 ^8 T9 c( r- o$ ~# D* CBut I never did
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* I- N2 P8 E6 X/ M愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
- \- a# x" b8 E3 ?; S) _你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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! _9 s& n0 f% v7 H希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密

I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

3 y9 ]: k9 V, r3 |5 k% wCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
% h+ z" V2 k3 j6 a托付我的愛
4 l/ Q) _* J, v收在你心裡

Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

+ m8 E! e$ i& q) f6 q+ Y愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來

One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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) S4 U- `7 ?% s! I1 }也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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% T3 G$ h. A9 }% |! O希望今天還不會太晚
- u! w; W: ?4 V3 j# o讓我向你表白
. g; S- Z+ j: {2 o, s我心底的秘密

I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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5 |2 w2 ]6 o) ~' P( M不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
. H2 P' o/ U8 s1 ^Entrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
- w8 D" i( F2 B3 N& O托付我的愛
收在你心裡

Can I entrust it to you?
8 Y$ e; e& ^+ k7 b, dEntrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡
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对唱曲参赛译稿

$ V; d6 J1 ^7 `% d# YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 y! F; T& G) O+ c* U! dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
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皎潔月光下
天空金銀閃爍
! D5 i7 y1 ]; k凝視著星空
我心充滿快樂

The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% s; |8 C! m  Q; y7 s$ jWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
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# B/ V6 A% d$ N) A月光映在我的眼底
) U5 c( r4 v: }) M/ A月夜陪著我一起沉醉
% y' D6 t0 k9 f+ g) J0 J2 G, U月光輕吻著夜幕
/ w% ~( p( k2 K" A5 E# m星空充滿著歡樂

6 v4 j+ O8 l) e% J$ L3 D7 [It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

- w6 k5 U9 w5 p2 t' V我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
終將逝去

You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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) _( u$ Y; A9 l/ V2 T- O你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
) k9 y& R% t- ?- W7 i9 U! _& @! v2 q愛你
堅定不渝
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4 }. \4 K: `5 t. T3 jEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
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你的一言一語都是愛
7 v# x2 X! }& d- i我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love

5 s5 _' a# N( Z2 C- ~* r( P我的愛 全心全意
: a' X) ^: }0 t& C! g3 R3 @你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?

能覆蓋半個天空嗎?

! d3 k4 v6 A5 Q6 tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 \6 E# G: \" o( _4 d: \9 G" Y8 j整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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& e/ R  c8 b  \- }% f3 l, L. Y: ?/ WI want so much to see inside your heart
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# r# I' ?/ D' c# Y! Z( o我想看透你的心
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+ Q+ n( m; J# I( Z& XI invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
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我歡迎你將它打開
我願意用生命
來證明我的愛

I’m still filled with fear
) g7 O" z5 o) S# \$ L2 J$ LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

, [7 K' T# b6 G  e9 X我依然滿心憂鬱
- c9 B/ S2 |5 @/ \$ j你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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I regret not dying
I only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000
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可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
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With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it

這樣一張巧舌
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If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
+ y# `4 T0 y2 i( D! }千萬個心思

7 A; l9 J, B4 j% j' d3 j' D/ T) v: RRambling on about a thousand words of love

# v+ I* l- @) W: M訴說千萬個
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杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

0 a/ C/ G  K9 W9 X& O6 {+ @" N8 @是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒