【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
  A/ f, O8 Y" c" x袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% F! D! a8 `- S  d7 c: D2 K4 \1 _+ aThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
" _" `+ p7 @( s5 N& c6 J5 c  o我愛你  

1 C' S8 [8 @" p1 Q9 fFrom the first moment we met,
( Z2 s& S) I" a; c, DI already loved you with all my heart
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在遇見你的第一刻
0 l- N. `6 F6 ^; h* m: @  {- A你已經深深的佔領了
我的心

) w& S% s# g+ g* x" F* M# x. SWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
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縱然朝夕相處
# n9 K" P$ w# @8 Z: z) E3 t還是不能肯定你的心意
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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" b4 z+ j3 Y; W& f6 Z; OI would probably know how you feel
8 c& ^6 j$ W6 [' r1 L凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
3 D3 H6 j9 A# L  g# a( ~我也許就能了解
你的心情
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Love… just the word love
0 ^; g* A4 P: K0 j4 JWhy is it so difficult to express?

) }, n( T9 |1 g9 w, C愛  簡單的一句愛
. j% \( p+ o% `: T+ l# ^. h0 y為什麼
# v6 W9 x' q0 r2 H1 |  U5 l如此難以表白?

" D9 z- s5 i+ D& \; u6 U& u- u' G+ PI want to confess that I love you,
+ @' l- s9 E4 U4 h" q5 u6 WBut I never did

" }" c% J/ o2 s- m' q! W8 r2 ?愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
3 b: A3 H* R$ R) y7 m1 g; t8 g你將從我指間滑漏
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; f  ~: W) q, v' r; K) j9 z/ DIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
' N' R( v, a  _+ V6 ^; B  q我心底的秘密

* n/ g5 M5 S' R+ P! X& ~: m! cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

2 C6 i" V8 _+ n, x1 O, u. zCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
$ ~& A8 i7 ~5 |5 y收在你心裡

Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
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$ T5 e- Q3 n: q+ W9 j愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?

I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

2 o- v! L& }0 v" K愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來

One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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也許有一天
, X$ m$ H2 c% X/ e% r0 n( o( C4 Q你將從我指間滑漏
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4 `4 m' W# H0 d1 |4 f' hIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

希望今天還不會太晚
, u) l% n  T2 b3 }0 ?& P讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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) n9 M* L2 B9 y" v- z; jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

" r; @! ^8 ^' s# E% H4 Z; z不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
6 G5 b- k% b( A' @0 t/ [- \托付我的愛
收在你心裡

Can I entrust it to you?
* Q. q; C% ~, e  n' M8 O* q; Q4 B. bEntrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡
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. X. N- {% ?. X, H" Z4 C+ `对唱曲参赛译稿

: }0 Q! _+ f% D  M& @. qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' |1 K' B2 E( q6 r! ^" `Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
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皎潔月光下
+ C/ ]( B, r. {% l天空金銀閃爍
凝視著星空
我心充滿快樂

, j5 i9 J; B' [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, p5 q& a% _+ O1 h% ?! Q9 zThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
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& Q, X" ?" h7 |' X8 j+ ?月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
! j7 _" }% e0 p; n$ ]月光輕吻著夜幕
6 J. Q0 F1 {2 r$ R星空充滿著歡樂
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, Z* z2 ]# W( t$ K; `It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
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我心卻充斥著憂鬱
$ R! l8 B' \7 O+ y9 R) o害怕我們的愛
終將逝去
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& N: Z! I  X7 m: b6 J$ ^% yYou needn’t fear anything
% J( F$ i9 }# n; D. gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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! k- P% u$ A2 d' o5 K9 \5 s你勿須擔心憂鬱
! n$ v; A# U$ L7 s3 o我心充滿著歡欣
) ^# ~5 ^$ G1 }( Z  O  e& h: @愛你
堅定不渝

9 L  J1 L) ]6 x0 K6 K  BEvery other word you utter is love
! C3 J6 {0 ~+ w4 ?% [, O; {I really want to know just how much you love me
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; ?8 P! f7 c* j" S你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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" M+ Z& ?/ f2 n7 {5 rI love you I love you with all my heart
8 w! x1 M: \2 ~Nothing can compare to my love
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我的愛 全心全意
) U" `) y% j1 u4 z. B你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
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能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- _4 p2 g1 o/ k' A9 n7 v) Z- S整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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I want so much to see inside your heart

我想看透你的心

I invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
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我歡迎你將它打開
! `% I+ d$ X2 J; t& ^. E" ]; L我願意用生命
來證明我的愛

I’m still filled with fear
; H5 P8 B, M4 p5 u5 O( Z: AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

我依然滿心憂鬱
4 O) ]8 R' f$ ?# ?你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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I regret not dying
( U4 @+ H/ e  m. jI only have one tongue
# q: `- t( G( KIt’s nothing close to 100,000
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4 E, P: f' S" s2 Z可惜我未能以死證明
8 i; U9 q, r4 Y& @; ]6 |我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬
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With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it

這樣一張巧舌
8 O6 {6 V! y- m  w4 z你的言語都跟不上

If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
' A: Q$ i* B7 t4 k1 n$ J我將對你訴說
千萬個心思

- Q$ [# r7 e) r8 {+ ^2 A9 KRambling on about a thousand words of love

4 r$ z9 b" }: D; C, k訴說千萬個
愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒