【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

我想我從未表露出
6 n' n2 f, u( s6 b4 e深藏在我心底的那句
- |' H) ~) g1 I2 A' K1 z1 o% O我愛你  

+ B# y0 @9 ?" q" k# E( ^1 oFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
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在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
( E" h0 D5 D% u* D- k; P, W我的心

' E3 H2 h* M# _$ e5 `2 vWe meet and talk everyday,
( E+ @5 E5 ~7 b+ q& w9 \1 c5 qBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
你的心情
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" {/ b4 l2 ~* Z" x8 }6 |Love… just the word love
: ^0 L* w$ o' \3 jWhy is it so difficult to express?

# E$ M: `1 T5 D' [) ^+ T/ v愛  簡單的一句愛
. o. e8 \; j8 a1 b0 W為什麼
如此難以表白?
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2 t+ f# x1 D, m4 ^' jI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

9 ~% y# r3 M  J- z& |愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來

One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: T) _3 Y* B9 z  ?也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
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/ k4 b% Z/ {0 b% X+ i/ d6 ^5 `8 TIf today isn’t too late,
4 V  a. P" P8 P. x" `I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

: O8 K1 T2 M% K( E# U$ W希望今天還不會太晚
2 r, a/ Z) d6 t8 P  @$ Y讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密

I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

% g2 W- y" p! U) V: d* w3 ^9 _Can I entrust it to you?
9 p2 D* Z7 Z! `, U, W# LEntrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡

Love… just the word love
1 G: f, W# ]* k* M! p7 wWhy is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單一句愛
- z# s; R( G5 Y$ p5 {5 G8 @為什麼如此難以表白?
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( z$ J* ?6 g3 @) ~$ mI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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' ~1 |+ x+ T7 q1 L3 e6 s愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

" ]6 U/ u  @" L. o1 x& F5 m也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

) H  C" z/ l* K& K; ]If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

希望今天還不會太晚
6 H( P+ H( K% m+ M3 X1 l3 E2 m讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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1 P3 f) g( c- U# FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

6 T1 P! q' F# C# K5 B1 q6 q+ K& XCan I entrust it to you?
) j, h( C; Y+ V. P3 o' g* a8 q1 K1 PEntrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
' I9 l" |) O2 Z" ^收在你心裡
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& ^9 h( r! w/ OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡
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对唱曲参赛译稿

The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ ?" o. T; Z' Y! N6 ^1 iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! q5 s, ~, u/ dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

皎潔月光下
天空金銀閃爍
/ k0 y8 L- Z5 |7 D( _9 A# h凝視著星空
# q5 A" F* ]- B( k# l5 U1 O9 s; U$ p我心充滿快樂
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The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% U' w! q% ]! P7 H+ p8 F6 X9 G; jWith the moon kissing it every night
0 s) v3 O3 x/ m9 pSeeing the sky content with its love
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0 M: i8 W3 s7 F' R: C月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
: ?! Y: t' `1 L3 R: F$ ~% ~6 Q+ G月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂
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It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
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我心卻充斥著憂鬱
/ }. H. |4 E, m. I1 h; m害怕我們的愛
, Q9 a8 i) P0 U  K* w3 M( ~8 n終將逝去
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You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

, O0 a- r* [5 ]: h, J0 P; E你勿須擔心憂鬱
4 t( I0 N7 D9 U6 [4 h3 x: ]5 d. y我心充滿著歡欣
, O1 s% s+ F: \2 [' i! d. A愛你
堅定不渝
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Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
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你的一言一語都是愛
" d: i: A  v  a$ w; x我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

I love you I love you with all my heart
& v5 y" q, V: U+ O2 aNothing can compare to my love

我的愛 全心全意
) [! {, B4 }/ J0 q4 L. L8 ]你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
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) z* @8 |: X& {能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, M- m  ^: h: {/ U. F8 ?* L4 l整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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I want so much to see inside your heart

我想看透你的心

I invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die

我歡迎你將它打開
我願意用生命
來證明我的愛

2 c7 {! E* O- q/ m6 S+ w% f9 SI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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  M) O* L$ B- P' q6 b; ^我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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I regret not dying
I only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000

+ Z& p* n2 x& E5 l# v$ a/ A1 @可惜我未能以死證明
4 t) q- p2 i5 s' q  m我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬

With such a tongue as yours,
0 C3 @; ~* f7 ?. ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
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這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上

! `) e4 g7 _3 f2 ?% c1 EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
6 q! x$ Q+ w* |千萬個心思
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Rambling on about a thousand words of love
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訴說千萬個
愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
  t& r+ h0 B+ M- v9 @3 T5 B5 hxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒