【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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- v2 M- U( n; c) r( v4 b# X8 B1 N我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
我愛你  

From the first moment we met,
5 `- V# @+ n8 ]/ t: lI already loved you with all my heart

2 w) U0 p; G, L( d3 S( F在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
# _* V/ L, o' S9 ?- K! g7 w$ b/ f0 ~我的心

We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
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縱然朝夕相處
' I5 v) F# {: t: `: ~! g/ m還是不能肯定你的心意
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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. u5 @( Z  e; o5 fI would probably know how you feel
$ N, p8 P# R$ z% ^, ^5 W凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
6 i% Q" L0 y" ~2 j" f6 i我也許就能了解
你的心情
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Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
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1 K# [/ _9 J  f- Z" H+ i' i3 q愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
如此難以表白?
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& F- ?5 D- T7 Z3 LI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來

8 k; u+ R& l8 DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( P4 J9 f" K# p1 G也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

- Y* G* Q: w: C) @! V; ZIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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% v2 q1 Y! @3 P; D3 L* {4 _4 C希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密

, T. F( r( D# d  j0 F1 v4 R! z% c; OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
1 j5 G0 B0 y! u8 i, Q, PEntrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡

4 ]8 Z8 v( ?. |& \Love… just the word love
: H& n' N1 Z" N% b) oWhy is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單一句愛
. G" D; _8 |* V1 h$ Y9 }. U為什麼如此難以表白?

I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

愛你 我想要告訴你
$ N9 Q. V4 Y4 z5 f- s+ H5 @5 V1 \; u卻還是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

( E4 C" e- o% `希望今天還不會太晚
  o/ e0 N, s2 {- `2 m! Z8 G7 A讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密

I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

( Q6 S' z# c* L5 j! @不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
/ H( z- T2 K; C2 p) j- x9 iEntrust my love within your heart

5 u" x( B- @8 j* f$ E" x4 j/ |可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
  l: l/ Q/ B7 w$ h- r: V收在你心裡
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+ [; P& A' B* U, N7 O# l1 {: m$ `Can I entrust it to you?
( B8 H/ X) Y& p# z& `/ E/ TEntrust my love within your heart

/ d" J1 Z$ l* Q# i2 Q6 k: z+ U可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡

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对唱曲参赛译稿
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0 ~( s! ?" Q* d5 ^6 r8 iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ X9 c9 {8 p2 P+ t. m5 F2 ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
! i2 H0 r! X- P/ WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

8 @% a8 ~7 ?+ Q1 x, y皎潔月光下
/ h! K- t) y3 U& J3 G天空金銀閃爍
凝視著星空
我心充滿快樂

The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* Z. _' H$ U6 e) r- G# o+ HThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love

月光映在我的眼底
7 q# K3 }+ D4 Q& {* B月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
3 a0 i- i0 _% Y7 u4 S5 v星空充滿著歡樂

It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

6 h- q9 d# I8 T( y; s  Y  W我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
終將逝去

You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
0 {. |* ~% `' z8 K2 \/ I- Q/ h5 o堅定不渝
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Every other word you utter is love
5 g& s, R1 ^& KI really want to know just how much you love me
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9 D6 T3 i( b. r! ~9 q你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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* N- Z. o  d$ M, S4 g% r2 CI love you I love you with all my heart
3 {8 d+ R* b# i/ P+ J" }% kNothing can compare to my love
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1 V1 b" Y& ~5 @% H' M: O/ c9 `/ b  \我的愛 全心全意
! y5 `' P, w- i2 N你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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* E) D# p( E. h/ vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?

3 h) B7 R; x1 f( o" F能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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8 z) g6 [; O( G1 uI want so much to see inside your heart
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我想看透你的心
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I invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
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. v( y% x' w& y' G4 A* T% u1 Q我歡迎你將它打開
3 M% V( l5 ?+ I, M! o0 N我願意用生命
# z8 y* k% T9 F& l3 v來證明我的愛

I’m still filled with fear
% \' y2 D5 ~3 X1 B9 v* AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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0 j5 O1 ^2 C+ G3 a  z) G9 V: @3 C我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語

7 V2 Z, i9 r% u0 rI regret not dying
$ N" L7 h* B7 Q4 n+ \0 W& FI only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000
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6 o: c9 S% x0 c4 P& h: e& e可惜我未能以死證明
6 E! L% }- M0 _! I; A, W" ?2 ~# n我只有一張口
6 o  u( y* V' z9 P* l遠遠不及千萬

, w$ ~4 P) D! Y. E4 w: uWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
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這樣一張巧舌
! h( C3 h2 U% G8 e7 N- D你的言語都跟不上
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6 u2 i! v1 l5 K1 \* ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 H' z& B' D& x! }6 W5 a如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
5 ?/ v* r0 N" O千萬個心思
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  d* n. z& n. G& }Rambling on about a thousand words of love
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( p; u# R. A& q  p訴說千萬個
愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

6 d& @  h& m9 X* C& q# U是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒