【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
5 Y! i5 Q1 ?+ @2 yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 B4 n8 P5 Q6 ?The sky is happy down to its soul
, x6 Q$ h  D, bWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 |7 F- j8 n, }6 H7 ^# J' mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 n0 r2 c6 ]9 B& c  `3 I+ bYou needn’t fear anything
2 x* y$ P/ r4 u& F3 Q4 PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 M' a6 z1 Q; [  D0 lNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ o. W9 q- @0 z( k, ]5 r( I% p$ }7 |1 ^I’m still filled with fear
- _! H7 B. q% D# Y' r2 Y1 ]! m& OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! v" B9 B& z5 w) k# h: T0 E8 r1 ?4 qI regret not dying
& z$ F0 q5 a0 L; z7 m2 GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( X) F5 u) f  E7 uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' U& \' `: t8 T; \8 ]: \9 U+ C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 m& D! k0 m: z$ h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 x& F8 [( W6 _  c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: K2 W8 Y" z& y+ F. P7 D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 s. {" V" {: L% I5 N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. x0 e: H0 p) L' K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: N, m( M- K% N6 p0 F- K9 X/ _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 c' ~5 Y7 F7 t4 D( h$ P  U! V/ S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. c+ K- d' v& r$ N3 u6 b6 ]2 F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ y0 D8 A! ~) K$ C+ W* p0 S" |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 g: a- K$ d% S" p) O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 g. H" M3 S$ }! L! |/ n  S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! x  f8 c+ i# N  R; e; ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 M- v2 \( t3 U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# V" w3 v8 ]% A& y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 Q0 h: [5 h" V6 e) S0 `7 u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& a7 |- s7 e) s/ \. d2 Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 b6 e5 {4 F& K7 I- N5 ~1 Q0 y. S6 f5 s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 q& Z3 [% u  @# R9 C" _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 S; y; k1 E0 @5 {+ Y3 H: f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 m. k* F2 ~+ p9 e' }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ q  H+ S7 ^( C$ J9 S3 Y, y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' _' g- q. o  A5 p( L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 S* Z, x: O2 \# l# w2 I  x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: z/ G* Z" F4 U, T: d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' j  A% f" Q) t5 ^4 b& A- h  t+ g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 {; y, I9 t" G! U5 ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 d1 J7 Q2 t; K- F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 {. E2 I6 T4 C- |我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>