【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* \- L4 }  L& g2 v" r% }3 M; b8 |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ F! ?+ M5 K5 x% q# a( }The sky is happy down to its soul
! H( H! Y$ P. T* N7 \1 SWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( `/ }3 \( w4 _" a% sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ Y) `* k: e% H: ?/ aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# Z3 H/ s# S. A* U8 O7 tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 R* W7 R- j7 ]- S2 e8 NI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* }6 ]4 u+ V6 lI’m still filled with fear
& y& u& ~, O1 H! [& h8 D* wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) u8 @& \6 t2 N3 rI regret not dying
$ d7 A) \; W$ A4 K4 MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 m/ k3 J, [$ r5 H  m: }3 d6 sWith such a tongue as yours,
" A3 K; V3 \6 [( uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: s( [! _5 b& J: I# oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 ]  |: r6 T. l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 h2 Y! e6 G# v& Z! Y5 w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ s+ J2 A/ ^: w4 q4 l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! v! a1 q7 d8 I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) |3 y9 T% ?, z. V% I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ I+ {% R9 t$ u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. x6 a; E  ~! B$ `" \" ?- Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: y: ~( g7 \6 y7 G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; M# a/ d# A/ m+ I<P>你无需担心</P>
1 R  h" x- X/ N! X. f' Q% ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ _0 q. k0 h, _) \- T( O0 L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 _4 W! j) l, {5 ~4 P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 p; C! P5 c/ C$ p3 R4 e" K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: \, o8 \% t+ e( _. W# W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; y- h( L1 G0 A( N% B" u# |# j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' T& m, C7 E- Q- z: v2 C+ g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ y# s8 Q5 C. ~2 D% R! B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 B/ p0 Y6 d9 R6 V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 Z1 y  t) h4 A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 R4 ^/ g8 ^( j8 F' r9 `+ ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 ^! m- ~/ L, Y7 y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  A; ], r5 A' v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; H: k$ I3 K1 H+ K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 ]; c! V& c7 M! b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( \: q& d2 z5 w/ F' [# ]. n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 u: C2 m8 v) k/ \  ]<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! X3 M9 ~+ w: ^- a9 _( t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ K; t! M3 g; H/ p3 k$ W2 B1 ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ T. d( ?. t( i& K6 Z8 I2 e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" B" S+ i1 J- }5 ~! t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% s$ V# ~3 z1 A! O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# L& Q3 b* k; A/ @. }/ t" y, l3 B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 V  n3 c. H. \) |$ E. y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

1 _# X8 i0 }% l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% e. J# G' C9 u( @2 i+ k# l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>