【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
5 k8 _, \# @5 X) |( T) RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 S1 ?, Y& W4 p, V' C# A4 AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 Z5 _, O, H1 N' L# f2 R# ?The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* t, J" J) _0 S% p' A1 k+ LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 M: i2 N3 B% j- `& _2 TI really want to know just how much you love me
- _  z% j* \! g, _! [* R9 b, |I love you I love you with all my heart
- W. S. z( K. |Nothing can compare to my love
2 ~6 G) O6 J1 Q8 W8 kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 V. s+ i( b' T: t' kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& k6 m  a- i# D8 Z, \5 bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& Z5 t' h4 H4 I7 a. ^/ f# P2 uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# J2 u( m' @+ R+ D4 C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 M5 g2 O) Q$ c/ g8 S* v* J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. Q( y# j1 |/ x: m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) T5 s2 G" a& X. s4 A! {8 X& S3 L% H. U<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 X6 k2 A6 p, V  v) i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 X/ w% `" a( W3 u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' s0 h5 N( \; |- D+ k! x( k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; r' j: n# \& \" ?, R. P8 K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' K# y( k& c; a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 _8 W: R0 T5 E; r% t) T) x  N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, K2 F  J4 x, r) t0 k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, w, {; y& I' F6 C9 ]7 S<P>你无需担心</P>
6 @3 S0 `6 G& u" c: `0 \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: h# t+ K4 s' ]: x: }: z3 j/ G% f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  m# h; I; d  F7 E: H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: E. u4 @6 A! Z* Z' j, M3 d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% d" w9 \: }( m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 i3 }% g6 H6 ^$ A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 Z; o: _: B: K, G4 t& D3 b* J1 g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 b  L4 {3 S9 m. R, Y, E+ a6 A2 }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) M% A; {8 L( c% W9 T5 v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 B6 o/ y% A7 m  G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ _1 g& z# _4 n5 S) Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 _2 `1 O4 a7 I  V% a7 J* Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& Q. |5 N: Y$ O+ R; [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; p& ]1 [2 H  {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, h1 o; M" c3 o& X% R' e0 ~6 e<P>I regret not dying</P>
' B: |; v/ }% j/ K- r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 Q! `8 u/ \" Y6 I1 x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( ]; B7 G1 V) C2 T5 N" Z, T# j; S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 u9 C7 s( z% k' d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. O( r% R1 h. Z* o  b# C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ z5 e; r1 o3 c$ m7 q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& z5 h$ ^" V1 v; h4 H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 k' ~. Q/ Z* H/ g7 Q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' Y0 o2 |) t5 b: E& S4 q* N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>