【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 k  m) r! k) o歌词我附在后面。
- C$ c$ j% Q9 u( HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 l: ?3 F, V' _1 ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) R" J9 P+ ^& ]2 ~7 Y+ }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& y' U0 D4 F( ^( `- cThe sky is happy down to its soul
# f+ Y& R( K1 {2 I* iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 H/ \, f4 w# U% nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! \" O' j; Q; _You needn’t fear anything
3 F4 T: l, n+ z! CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 [& Q; [3 c8 y' K! f8 w9 V) YI really want to know just how much you love me
9 P7 W- z- Z5 U5 e' l% ZI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ j& @: `* N! K" e. l, O: wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 v( ~8 g4 u$ e6 O1 M1 m6 B/ dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 a. v. A" m! Y  W+ ~; [6 o1 [$ KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* r( T0 t* \3 Y+ II regret not dying
& l4 h, T* w4 O0 L4 ~7 WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! G+ n0 G( C1 [9 d- `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# P) U6 E+ O. G& o& a4 V" j# R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 y4 c( w, T9 x# _6 }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 o& z: j" w4 }3 T' j: p% ?) |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" J7 N6 B$ f) ]1 g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 }. b7 N7 q. ?* X$ x2 R& p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 {% i/ R: F8 V& A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% W9 {& a# g+ i+ a<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 }$ u0 Z8 L  {" r1 v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; U: a) j- Y- Z* V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' b  t2 ?2 h" N5 Y% i3 V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# N5 A5 O* a  n4 v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 C: q( ~5 p1 q% I4 A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 g: p3 W; n* s5 v/ _$ z: J' B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" ]( j" \- g6 m9 G' b1 C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  N' s! ?1 `6 X6 }& ~# K/ [<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 Y+ J# C0 R5 u# I; o6 f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 y9 X% r: a2 d/ V0 X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& j( X! h" f3 ]" b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ y- y0 J1 _# n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 ~3 V9 Q) }6 X& j+ B7 `我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ F4 |/ U5 q, \3 t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>