【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
! C3 f9 K, T: r" x% ^9 aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# W( b' |- X; a6 x! xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 q; |9 @+ w6 S, i, r. XThe sky is happy down to its soul
  s- o& u  r7 V8 C! N7 D5 o; FWith the moon kissing it every night
# \' r0 U: j: d0 Q+ RSeeing the sky content with its love
6 P4 y# Z5 f$ ?  MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' A4 _0 _9 J& h, WEvery other word you utter is love
4 B; N: C! |* x6 ]- P, x) ^I really want to know just how much you love me
* [+ C8 C) l3 M: ]; k) z% PI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 t# ]6 t% Y; N- n$ {5 J& OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! k: z& o* n+ a- VI want so much to see inside your heart
1 d: Y- J( j0 b0 _& s/ O* QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 K7 Q9 `2 F+ TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% r  z- S; |" N& E9 M% gI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. O- l( n: F  z3 D  jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 z& x) Q" D/ j& n8 N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, q" a7 k- q$ p8 P" Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( y+ Q% ~3 |# d* ^9 a* X1 @<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% V/ O% I$ e, D/ r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ z' \$ k% ?$ j, Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 |1 Q, T+ R8 ~5 S9 Y" }2 Q5 q1 e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! K( o6 }5 M: _$ ~0 K' C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, t2 e/ c# E/ f) M. p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 N1 m) G! f! T2 X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ o& T$ T! I- R0 k  N4 b3 ^9 [# I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ g6 b8 @/ G$ d3 h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ \6 `% K' r4 V& R& \% @9 o0 a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* v# k% L/ T* H1 N6 w! [9 L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 D  n2 l" b7 G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% H7 V: E8 M3 b* R3 i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 u2 A! |) V) A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: J. `  I. g$ J* Z; B; g  G6 }* j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 b5 f4 l* Z$ k2 u. G& u+ i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ {" }* v/ r* o- F& ^8 @: c  d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! b) `) I' ~+ X6 x6 a3 a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 v9 n9 t, v' g7 R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 B) m" _( h6 Y* Q+ g, a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! \: C7 ^3 q: R8 `4 o% d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, Z% g: I- q2 e0 R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% D) c1 a0 W' X6 s" x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 m( U* |5 n1 l<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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: R8 m$ [9 O' T! ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 O, _( w, V! `1 U, K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>