【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- w! r6 B7 y: U9 x0 |" `3 Q& d6 aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- `' {, p) d, p' e  MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( V1 K% _* ?- t4 b0 w) q4 S( |6 XWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% x- @9 z1 T& z  a6 l3 vYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) ^3 c3 l2 W/ E  u& E: gEvery other word you utter is love
/ `+ m3 i' r0 I/ J( PI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. e8 _1 ?, I: t8 M/ {8 a3 }  cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 _0 A0 X8 Z4 YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* q3 G: \4 V3 _# aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ @+ t/ n8 `) `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 r+ s- _7 O& o1 PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& x: v  g5 F! _# D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  E$ h2 T7 i2 N! R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 W* I: O' }) X" K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; v0 j0 Z6 @0 E" R/ e. t2 K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" R4 x6 i9 _6 q$ Q7 N2 ?- F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 X- [8 p5 x' i* P7 ~1 W4 H# r" b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: ~' m6 R- z' f8 ~" J" X3 K4 W  C" N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 p$ r6 i! h8 S* n; L( |4 E$ d6 B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 }8 A) z8 `! H! p( r" o! L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- e3 T2 ~; `8 `6 e* Y  _. r6 v- w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; c+ x) P+ A6 d' [- E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% I& J3 `( _' i9 |1 N5 C4 t0 M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. T% h: F2 r+ q0 m8 c5 ]8 _& S) p7 {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ S* k$ \  d  J* l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. x( Q& n3 z+ x: v9 j% \- @# V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 p- Z  E* F7 r' X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 k+ `$ b; D  n. N* e" f( F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 U; S$ @4 X# F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) l' T/ `3 o, ?) Q# B% t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* E% ?$ u5 @; F8 o/ z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 G: c9 f0 G# B0 M0 N<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; A, {# q! ^- M& Y4 f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 E4 Z  _; ]8 }* s. ]3 y  |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) M. X  ^  [2 s; a% N4 Z% l& P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  P* P) C  O3 w% Z+ r: {- c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" d4 s: W$ N) N. F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 v5 ^+ o. @: d( D3 ]) d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 a0 T0 L' y5 C' R<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 }1 N% y, H$ C# w7 Z" X我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>