【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 t9 a5 |- {, Y7 L% N* `4 O歌词我附在后面。
3 [# r! p& {' }: ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  s* K- ~8 T8 O% o' a) V" F  mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( _6 n; Q& C3 V8 A9 Z! E- KThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& _7 h% |! c) qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 i  f" V' W/ _' T9 dYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 O2 m* `$ [9 YEvery other word you utter is love
" S+ ]+ ~2 t  j6 _I really want to know just how much you love me
: }- M& f  a8 y  jI love you I love you with all my heart
; T' q7 G1 P7 F  m# q! @8 ZNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 V3 U( {- n0 mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 F1 m- R$ k" F+ N2 uI want so much to see inside your heart
1 F1 I: ?0 n0 R) J' A; N: AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" o: O4 ^3 t% t# ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& n% Q. G1 ?" o4 D& F4 dWith such a tongue as yours,
# U2 s( r5 c  t8 z5 WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" V: ?: U- A  v/ T# x1 D( m& mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 R) R  p9 @( s$ \/ @" P7 {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ h: ]! B8 H6 n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' @2 c( g; E6 u) _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 b. A: I9 F. ?6 x" N0 g0 @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: t6 l( ^# X- F0 u; q! x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# w# d- n9 ~% W) t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ D, h: ?" t$ p: ?/ t) H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- [5 [2 f/ A1 B2 ~* J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- B1 A' F: Q0 c, x& u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; R' q6 u4 q$ `# c4 R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 _8 g8 \, c4 i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# i. N  h2 q) V6 u! c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 u0 X  a) F$ K2 @: ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 P- m. l' a9 Z. W: w' |/ f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. w- d2 g4 r8 y' i) [; I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, b! r. ~/ W; O+ }- `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- X4 r  O1 i* n) l# K+ q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" G- b- q& h, a7 O) Y% O7 ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! x$ R6 `, [1 b; G, L5 B<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 X# `  X0 _$ L2 @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, d% L) X. }9 d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) ?0 X" J5 r0 p+ W' [0 j, @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 b& a9 M6 N1 Y+ p8 P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: V% `# Q, |' \% j<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>