【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. x# t# m5 O% zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 U- L) B* R- U' b* d! |8 [; MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, m& n- f" R3 kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# y- _" t6 s% w0 D$ }/ hSeeing the sky content with its love
0 t% K% g1 U+ s8 ]. p. _1 RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 C) i, x) ^5 H4 q+ CYou needn’t fear anything
1 ?& J/ r, x" x" AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 V( M7 d7 z1 z/ Y  F0 p- |# RI really want to know just how much you love me
9 o3 e: [. E2 ]: K/ w! p/ X! b& EI love you I love you with all my heart
+ C% d0 T! X; J$ K+ X( p  f' ]; `& tNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' w8 H) D+ g# k: F2 @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 H# U& P0 Z1 Q6 Z( c" aI’m still filled with fear
- K; n* Q- Y: rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) {- b3 ?! C- y  k1 bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' C8 s1 P. U- X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 ]5 E4 c; v, x7 K( v1 X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( W( ]$ @8 U/ F. g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- w7 _5 a  M1 p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- h. Y( _& A& D# E1 S# b<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 j- p! G4 H7 a: E+ \- n/ j; }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# i- s5 u! R  r, v7 o# [% I: F' b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. @. C/ k. L2 z( }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ ]* w! c: t7 }3 L- J7 H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ r6 m. H2 f( ]- `& z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" Q# ~3 H5 j. c1 V) t3 v<P>你无需担心</P>
% U% h4 V, V  E7 P. F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; O+ O5 v* O, n: J$ N& n9 i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 C  l2 [& }! W* `) X/ h$ m1 Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 a* L" b# K+ g; w& L0 a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! K: }. t" D% Q+ V+ ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, e5 B$ Y- J* L' D2 Y6 ^6 C) v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 G& O" p8 c8 S: F% F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 U0 E$ Q- T$ r! _2 V8 M& C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. b: h+ m: v1 W. G1 Y2 ?$ Q- L1 z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: k- S6 X" p2 k8 ^" o' |2 u* @& ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- g1 T. Z! y8 X- w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 u0 ]) H; w4 Z, N* K+ T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& V& p8 J6 d1 V. @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& t' S6 k% r0 Z) c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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& ~4 k' D6 e+ L" @  j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ t% J8 y- ?' S# \8 W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' ?1 q3 r, f, `) N9 X" U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# w+ g) y- K/ d; K* Y+ ^1 U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- o' }5 w8 Z: T. Q2 @( L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>