【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- ]# W" C1 @/ k7 H% FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* @( s; i2 d+ V- y; `The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 ~1 Z5 l+ b7 m! i, D1 E, QSeeing the sky content with its love
+ B( ~* W" `5 Q0 ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! D0 e+ F$ h4 r! uYou needn’t fear anything
- e  J* C  q& h- |" q( HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 m9 |+ a% e  m8 d5 |Every other word you utter is love
+ W1 g* y; G1 C! Z! iI really want to know just how much you love me
: X; \' _4 k0 n  W- II love you I love you with all my heart
" \8 Q8 J0 ]4 x" I. x6 `; n; LNothing can compare to my love
7 [% ]( i4 ^+ w" X" K2 \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 s) \7 q& R0 `4 LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: N# P7 l* n+ xYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ f1 M1 J: ^) P) LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 y4 n$ n# s! A% ]( kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  q; m& \1 v7 J6 w1 s3 x9 _- A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ P% E. l: x2 S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& Q8 o/ E  X- D7 T9 P8 ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' S) V0 U: N; b* R5 ~1 X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* |* M7 M, f- O4 s5 A+ m8 l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, L- Y7 k: E4 ^! d/ Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ D6 X5 h& R6 ]8 y* D$ l<P>你无需担心</P>
) R( ^# N5 H% d8 w# K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( f7 i/ _9 K# ?) \8 z) G9 j% D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& o9 ~9 K/ K2 I3 E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 l# `% L8 i* i  u$ ~' S9 {# t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ ~+ r9 S, j9 ~9 i6 y7 b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" X; x9 a9 u) c) C) n" i; C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; x$ r: L+ g# w. P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 y7 x, `; U0 B7 G) W5 {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) A5 u- H/ M. D( e  h1 w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ y" s6 e! q- _5 P3 `* X! R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 E7 U  V. b1 r% x- n- I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 A0 i. r. O4 q) b8 E3 N$ H( Z, O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 z- h& ~( g9 S2 {' l+ j* r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; P; y5 v; h1 x  B4 M<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) a4 {! I4 Y/ {; R; N. |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: v% [% W" e0 O- n- V4 n+ i- e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" a7 U" }: ?# A" w; `4 W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# I- @! x5 R( c2 V. Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' R: B$ G- S5 Y3 ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, {; r+ |9 U8 x3 u5 E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; i3 b" f" i6 d5 Q5 p6 u我请你剖开它
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4 c( y: k; l5 Z/ e1 j9 K& R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, K; C8 t- C2 b; G( i- A2 P" ~4 ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>