【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 y5 h% x( T' ^5 n  p- `9 d歌词我附在后面。
8 J1 q2 n$ y% u7 b# V2 a" ^/ A, rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! ?$ p% s4 z( D  j% {Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) \) V' D! ^8 `- D+ X: dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ N! s/ `& E' ]( G9 J. ~# ~" q0 mWith the moon kissing it every night
) s& y0 k  Y. r8 ~Seeing the sky content with its love
- i. b( W4 J% ?: L2 jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# d2 B7 m5 O7 ~6 E# ~5 S) R% oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ Z9 t! `5 U0 ^5 gEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- F7 ]* Z& f# BNothing can compare to my love
: }4 X1 _8 z% {# C/ i9 A% o, ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 {6 r/ `3 Y. C1 ?' f" o( P+ A3 gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ s/ c/ y0 c( g( [6 TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 D  N$ k5 s  |& C' cI’m still filled with fear
/ F4 U- P6 \5 G( A7 E  N# R7 T5 E+ JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. x5 r. h4 \( ?0 J- kI regret not dying
1 }" C/ g  [) s7 Y! iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; n( e' c+ M9 ^; |/ nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# s3 U: _8 l& K; y9 d# |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 q* V$ I4 \7 d& `/ v8 \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ }9 D3 \9 h2 a  N4 S/ ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- v0 r4 X7 x" E& t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. v. V# X# A# Q. ^7 K. n6 g% I9 U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( i  P6 L; W# h2 P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; b3 W! l- i; @8 T0 D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 C$ N) P8 j" P9 k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) Z. v- O% |" D) M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 T, M9 x" Y; j) T: x! d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, T& q) L9 m8 X7 B, L' K0 C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' u; W5 P/ B- z1 U" b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 O$ n' J4 a3 F% N5 u# n' G- s# E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. @0 S; q$ F0 J& z" S6 c8 V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, ^% v9 s+ G) Y% W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 M5 O4 ?! p: b9 |) B9 N2 _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 D. X9 S1 ~1 ]* a& j% F% H  Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. v1 s4 L; u/ s8 y' B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 v# x: U) z! u. E9 A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% }9 i0 U+ c0 O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 j# k( z5 g6 O' c! u8 n) n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ R/ J5 U& |. ~& T3 v$ N+ m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 f8 |" O# t; v: \) j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( D5 }. o  g. j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 g! T& I$ Z0 n* E8 M. w' W8 p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) u, F0 D5 x- z0 h5 F" F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 _& I' M$ h: r1 ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: m# s5 M7 K+ O& H9 r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; F8 X+ T2 C; p- R, P$ M5 ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& C' U' D" m, l( k5 t1 o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ [" D8 X3 L5 J( I' M; @' [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* |8 F' I1 t% v5 ~; V, T! X$ L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ r. i; _$ l# q1 x  n. Q$ b2 |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" r& p" \6 ^0 L. Z6 n- r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 R: y+ j+ b# n! \我请你剖开它

  S; h' Z; n& P- [5 ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>