【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& ?  d4 n/ b* U# t歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* b% t3 c$ `+ o: eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ P  b, S$ z. e# _9 C, J; wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( H& Q- R9 Z' }) r, o7 tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. D! N0 C7 o' v% P7 M* B) SThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ c8 Y8 u) S$ ?" O0 `/ `- TWith the moon kissing it every night
& H( u- _, A. p1 k7 J+ S/ rSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 a% n' t& Q1 E( rYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ H; m5 |" V* ?: M; ^$ h3 eI love you I love you with all my heart
& b: {3 p9 i4 y6 c/ o- E2 HNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# n. ^8 I4 h- eI want so much to see inside your heart
+ i4 T  B# _( k3 u/ BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& d3 C* s8 J, b" u& Z% j& HI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 @0 O% `( e; @" k7 R6 D; p/ Y) AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 l- }% v( ^# l' u2 C( j* ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! Z! F6 U' X0 {1 k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' G+ u8 b4 n$ A$ D5 `6 F. l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 M8 Y. [1 O2 J/ C4 s( v: P% c$ j% f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 q% g7 C8 ^* D( q) G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ \* O9 |6 Y7 t$ V: t" u) h' q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ P9 T$ M9 P( }8 C* t) ^& i5 B! L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 w9 p9 b/ G; X- q5 y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) X$ w- q4 M* L/ x8 j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 R4 x% z9 n+ \# F4 n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 ?9 O8 m9 q; G9 z9 ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: ~6 J; ?3 P  r  o5 n& ^2 F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% x1 T7 h# p" p  p5 ~5 S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- o7 g3 j+ C  `4 B: A4 x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 z0 L" a" H; ?, m6 Q5 L7 A( s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 g% p" g8 Q$ K0 N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- [3 T% @+ b+ U) i3 U; I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) ?7 F. f, o* T1 w# H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! w$ E/ e7 d8 w+ ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) d$ D. T9 Q- q! F1 m<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ D9 |- |1 E2 u- y" k  R) e+ v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* A! i+ H# V3 z; d/ C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# @' y$ c# c6 w. a6 o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 m8 |" i& u9 Z) F; n# a. H7 _9 h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 V% o  c" ^" B. @, D0 }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>