【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 {  w+ t0 O9 d4 }: U4 k& fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 H+ |% ?* T/ c; a$ {; FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 r; ?" i0 s( P; I- a5 pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 Y. r" l2 d, ]# gThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* F) K4 W' D: u% J/ {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- O0 e) p! Z& R) ], l1 a1 BEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ G! c0 j/ P- A( s0 ~: BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 x% y6 Q9 U% y. q+ ~3 o: `7 zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# t! n  a( d6 }) BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( ?- |) }8 g- L0 aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' t% V( _+ P( ?& l) J2 }: @  |; S# R& Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 i/ a4 E* s1 ^2 }# \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( @- u/ g0 G2 S' c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; Z) T$ _/ X& h2 L8 `6 L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 `+ V9 H# _; \' h( A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" ?! z. E. T0 M' N+ u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) a6 v3 k( h; w, A4 Q% N  n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ z4 n/ X& a) \1 S4 j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: G' a3 g1 Y: p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: O* q" ~7 x) f; Q, q" f% H5 p; Y2 f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 k9 q  m7 f: v% t3 G2 E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 o# ]* w: ?+ ~1 ^. A/ N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  S4 |" p  x- p5 o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 k7 j) m3 `$ P8 d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 n- i) _5 [, `5 H# r2 C5 N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) w) M" Q" z  H% Q6 a. `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% w% Q, z9 x# M6 _9 Q3 |' _6 y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) l: B' i) b; U# ^# V5 h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 O+ T1 F" i+ W* q; @# `" T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 D( z0 l: j9 T# x1 J  Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, _; _; _$ }5 y' G: t/ b<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& n! S0 a. D9 q" m  V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( B+ f' [# t0 z' ^' c+ f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 J  a" \5 h( b( g9 _6 i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* @( g- p1 d; |0 K! V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

6 M6 D2 r* q4 M+ `% N2 c4 j9 h/ v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  e& T/ w5 ^) A! @3 I4 ?: s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>