【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 P& I0 n0 ]$ BIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
5 @  c1 c( V6 NLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
& {2 m/ I* `; Y& I& D+ {+ U& `* ]But I never did
3 j0 U' u$ h  e( n8 ]" GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, x& c, d+ @) V9 \# b3 D/ {* F& JIf today isn’t too late,
. G$ V( A0 e8 K( k3 [, kI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; K. e( H' @3 S, |' aI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 K8 f; r0 @* }Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
! ~4 A. _6 l0 n) Z8 ^' HLove… just the word love
9 i. s% Z/ Y; T0 [Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) p/ J7 `" P7 ~" }, B, }But I never did
% |3 o- c0 r: ]" \( yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ d. f8 Y7 c, s% X* y/ i: S7 H8 SI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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5 p$ E( G, {/ `[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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  l6 G" V5 ?0 {# g2 B. r<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ v( }# S2 [, S/ P8 w: O6 w/ Y<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 g7 ^$ P7 |( e) o5 v<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! @4 b. q5 O- i1 {* u7 W. g% V<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  U8 T) ]$ I- h' x) W- q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
( r# h1 u0 r- W& d<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% a4 X: B) [6 r* E<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 m6 D0 i2 j# G( H" c- t2 W: p<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 K: u) B4 l: G( U. M<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 F( t) J/ W' @- q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: p+ p& {+ t* P. c<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 R( D& B  n, [1 s* f+ k( |: _' @1 O<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& z% b+ `* X( ]<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  O0 d& e3 G% d! d" o<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
" ]( A% |7 Z1 A) B7 C/ }+ c0 a<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ Y6 q: c9 h3 w; o+ D1 g% r<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
! C- x, B; U' W9 z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( X, C2 n3 k1 m3 T9 Q, f2 `- t<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 b( Y0 c, G. c9 t<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 I/ U& G0 L% X* R: Q. e0 N3 G<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 @4 r1 y7 T2 [0 e5 W7 D<P>But I never did </P>
- m: ~2 D; N. u+ x' z; I- p3 Y7 A<P>但我不会 </P>
+ D2 v! V6 J* z) }<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 j7 B6 s! j! G* i* I<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 A. U1 f: Y# j( F! \& {& |<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 ^( i6 M1 v0 A* }# O1 P: S<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 W7 }/ y0 {+ P5 b* ^2 q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; k( K; u( R8 ?% h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 {8 O! a! A6 k3 Q# {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 i% q0 G" a5 ^/ ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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; U" q5 ~4 [2 X( \" Z 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 _7 z- p9 O" ^6 q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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( R( R. R9 j6 a& S$ E<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>