【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 m; X" h7 J( s. w; n: pI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# T4 V, N# i5 i% B) c* O4 VI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ g- `5 U/ J- P: dCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& m+ z9 c% ]9 B, s4 [/ z, i7 e7 O! `If today isn’t too late,
: D1 L" t7 E1 y) z* p, jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
5 d* m5 S$ [7 o& gEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

  s; |( S; A4 s; W<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, |/ z! r  w8 }" L% n% S+ u7 j<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 k) w/ i% i  Z" v( b4 d& p1 s1 j<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! b  U; k. E3 \: B6 f<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& C. W: M* m7 o; a<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
" k  ~. w3 H0 B/ V) m<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 Q4 \$ p* Q4 J, v8 g<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) t* |* ?4 D+ `% t' D- a$ i<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ A  ]) k! S! {<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
0 e, o, E: X) J, |<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 N9 v# K# e. W6 M0 ^4 L7 m! M<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* S+ Y0 D+ Q4 E' n<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 N: v6 F; M+ R8 L6 `* h5 `' d2 j<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
# {. B) ~! I! t9 g4 d# _- b4 l<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ j) h( W& {) G  t2 `5 b2 e- N<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) r1 Q& M1 Z. y( [<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 G' t: `. R8 [9 X: E$ R+ r" F1 ]<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 c1 D$ i5 S' _. n) g<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
1 R0 ^' Z( i7 t& n3 m& ~<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' A* ~( W& Q6 X% q  W<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" D+ K/ R) y4 I, F4 R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# c" e1 F1 [4 x! Z# r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) C2 J+ ^2 k: w- X/ j; B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, m3 @" k4 l' j2 \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 s6 w3 q9 O- C$ l6 S& r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 ], @7 m% D6 k6 `. L<P>Love… just the word love </P>
1 {* s: y& n7 {# Y. z0 p* b; h<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" g0 |* z' m9 Q; n<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ o1 S9 ]2 f/ L2 p; ^* s7 P<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ t8 S5 f. @, [( C7 `<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 N8 ?. ?3 H% d+ W& Z2 B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
* ]% e6 D4 a, F, C% }( Z; y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; W& k2 _4 Y7 n. \9 B4 j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 ?0 R; b8 m+ w% r  n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 ~6 A( o/ m4 ~, V" W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& @1 g, H% o* x8 r: D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 k' U& @3 p+ B# X+ A- \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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# _8 H- y4 k2 Y! @3 o% j 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- q7 O; Z+ X. c7 L" F% y# s<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>