【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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. W0 j/ T0 A7 M( w: |+ Y我另将歌词附在此。
. U) T4 E/ I% e! dThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  P; m4 ?  x) p4 F5 U. O6 ~- A' N7 ~From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
4 Z0 A, `  w3 u" NWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) Z; [/ ?( N& IIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
8 i9 w! b5 w9 v& D  a6 Z4 I$ I/ n6 _Why is it so difficult to express?
+ y8 C9 G: a4 B( II want to confess that I love you,
( V: X, `2 J' |5 Q2 MBut I never did
5 U4 d5 n5 W6 b& POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, h  i  [' @8 ~3 P1 j6 rCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
2 r0 n5 |+ f% }9 g* j6 AWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 i; W: a" T, \9 y+ a+ VBut I never did
1 |( a4 [3 G7 i. T2 \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 y0 ?8 n3 m% N7 \3 GIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" e5 q2 o$ }  ?" o& p! c" iCan I entrust it to you?
2 O' b' i. y* r$ ]1 m7 q2 QEntrust my love within your heart
+ e! a# F9 j# _1 OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 @; ^6 B8 }1 C<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! H0 k! z! o# W2 s4 l<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# l5 D$ p" T6 n% M% v" Z( U) \9 M<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
) _( w1 {) D8 u. A4 c  g1 r2 e<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 c0 h/ E; u# F) ~8 _; S" r' J1 t<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' A" x% p  N% S4 f* ?: |3 A/ w<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 o" }; K7 n) V# V<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 j/ \+ y' y7 z<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: `" c1 F' {1 r  h' V  V<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 ]7 u3 ]- q6 k) e# U. r7 k7 k3 ^<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 P0 K" n( e( I5 ?+ w<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 x( I7 W: s# ?7 h( r1 {8 ]8 t<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
5 c) v0 W* ]/ p7 [$ h! Z; h* ^<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- H! a, G* B/ ~) d<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 H$ [- s4 q+ h1 P& P  N' l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ p  t; R5 j* e, P9 \! b8 R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 ^# {, u8 p; r( L  F, F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 |9 j" G, @1 N# N<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- p3 S( }1 [1 f  f: L' ^! J1 A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% I7 {) G3 o! k: e% d+ w0 ?. |( @<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 a% t4 l( C. I<P>But I never did </P>
# J& O4 T, g; E. I. |7 U! ~<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ L7 G  Z; \9 ~, p% M: [: Y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) L' t8 @! H2 u  x1 v" u+ |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 w5 k2 C6 i6 ], H) W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ A, J! |& E& {0 f  e; f, U1 P4 {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; u) ?1 Z1 F' w- S/ Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' o0 Y5 `. _8 d: m  S- d* b8 w<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ y# o1 X) g4 ~, x<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ Y  O" Q% a, t; u( A 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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/ x( d! Y7 J% E$ x这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 d1 Z" {) H3 }: k" V0 Q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. m/ c* \# a  Q% B2 {: C1 T<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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