【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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) ~% c, T, S$ F! B! p6 {  x我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, ]5 }6 l2 {3 N( ~$ e0 _: ^. zThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
# i+ E1 K5 G& O' MI already loved you with all my heart
1 r4 S5 B" K: t1 R% ^We meet and talk everyday,
$ \3 h' W3 X3 ]+ bBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 b4 I/ B; |" J. n7 D& LIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
( E$ Q) }9 {& ^- E6 O8 f  m" Q8 K$ sLove… just the word love
1 P6 S/ l  Y( k4 W0 d$ g( nWhy is it so difficult to express?
9 C; n3 a  R+ e. \I want to confess that I love you,
; u/ e7 W4 m3 oBut I never did
6 L) F! q/ x; H  p6 t# }. k* sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ |) j2 [0 C  ^, ?8 n1 Y( KIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 _, G8 |5 y0 @' x/ JCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
& r0 O, `+ s7 I) z- P+ ^Love… just the word love
8 \0 e$ ^1 F  \% k+ j5 {& V' b( iWhy is it so difficult to express?
. M0 y. `: k& ?; N: ~I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: J8 Y+ H6 }# J+ U7 k. RIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% M0 ?# i8 v$ l* F4 B6 ]Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 y- M6 M9 U( d5 pCan I entrust it to you?
& i5 X3 j2 A  c: i# g2 EEntrust my love within your heart
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9 Q+ y( E" f( j& H[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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6 o+ ^& l$ V; |<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& n. z7 L0 x) d4 N# U<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ M  a( b/ \" A1 ?<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
' s, r% h8 }! C<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& G$ g- `9 }; r3 K* {, u1 d2 E4 Q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' L1 C# I. q: m& [1 I0 h2 d9 o<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
6 [, k0 ], n7 h# E<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
6 I$ Q: q4 G0 r* q<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' j" K4 K' M6 P; U0 _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( d/ l2 {' h& W4 x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- S( r, Q  z8 p, g' e<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
0 F) v" t" f4 }  G<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* q2 w( C- U- K+ h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 u3 i: n4 _7 V  |<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) l8 F7 d+ A8 A% w$ Y" I<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; P1 a7 {, l6 C; j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  F" z. w' C# T& B, V7 B" c8 U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 v- M3 ]5 T+ y5 u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: r- M' H: r3 W! y8 I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ ^' Y0 F. Q+ B! u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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2 [6 A) t. ~5 G: u- j0 r& a: O& p<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>