【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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. f" ^2 F) n2 y" U# B( _+ c" {我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& T9 z5 f; h* W: `% }3 z* CThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
  Q/ u4 m1 R" W. {0 [. S  ]8 MI already loved you with all my heart
' U. Z' i/ _2 u. LWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
' H( _# [5 ~& _7 F3 q  tLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" e) `( P& E' d( M& AI want to confess that I love you,
$ l+ t3 j; P1 k1 |  zBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 u; @( E" j) Q* `/ U8 k) SIf today isn’t too late,
9 p& n# S  i7 j9 N- t" jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% L0 L3 y+ Y+ T  y0 zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  }7 u: t) j" [/ g, S9 z$ mCan I entrust it to you?
4 g; p+ D0 \/ s/ [7 K6 aEntrust my love within your heart
, C! n4 A  _  `2 i; _2 C4 PLove… just the word love
8 D* w2 ?# z  h, Z" n; M. H3 Q6 y* BWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, o  o  a! _# ?One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 @8 p% R9 @  r, Z# c( }- U" xIf today isn’t too late,
( v' F* L( g6 s6 D2 b; hI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' q- U1 |+ L' R% ~) W/ q; ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: E5 ~  G% ^- V' E1 u# aCan I entrust it to you?
- |8 Q2 E% d# L! P# I+ Z( h$ S0 CEntrust my love within your heart
  Y3 F6 ^) |' c) [# |- zCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

6 h3 O+ V) u# ^  n. ?[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

$ K) o+ @/ d# U7 G8 Q
  m3 r4 G; r6 ]5 }. N<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 d& a' J# K: }<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& w& b* F5 i: z4 m% a<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% j* v; z6 T: L6 Y  @* f: W9 G0 d0 \7 R<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 @5 y" E3 a' }$ n<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ D! E; h* b; Z! l<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 L3 o% _( w0 N% Q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& ^* \1 l' @+ G/ P5 H: ^<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
) b" [& _; l! Y9 e<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 \* _: C. w! b. a+ W<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 B: K* L: o$ A9 v: J7 g; m3 I<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* x  C7 n* t/ `/ e' M<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ A$ @* p) `5 k" k# L$ f<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 x& }# p9 r( z' {<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ A/ ?5 v; `: U; e) J5 x1 M5 l' c<P>但我不会</P>
+ S0 t" h7 l/ e4 f8 W- B2 N4 p<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% J$ z$ L0 F+ R! R+ e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) _8 W# q" P- }0 L<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ E5 J* Y  V9 c/ e0 U  W% p<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 l/ y/ n! x' H* ]: T( l6 Z5 T<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 B9 H4 {2 ]5 F" c- ^2 n1 M! h; n  \<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
$ W7 D7 h  U. i1 K1 A3 B  t/ W<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# K# s; V4 t+ `4 A<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
* A2 b3 X: M3 X, P. S<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! P9 }0 Z8 l7 C/ u6 _1 i. m<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. x* z& @3 R0 @9 s( ^  |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# k" q' t3 l8 o9 B% p3 P9 B9 ^1 D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% P0 t: C, b) V' Z7 c& y4 k 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: K$ ^- t# F. U  |0 `7 a; _<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>