【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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5 k# G3 E6 u6 T' h1 T% w我另将歌词附在此。
( U& F7 z- R( K3 U" O" X9 jThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
7 k6 V) u& Z& aWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: s5 L. _5 R* ^But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 G( {" p% _# I% y0 @Can I entrust it to you?
( c6 u& P0 H4 m5 x2 F: ~) JEntrust my love within your heart
4 \- s- P9 S% y3 O) T8 WLove… just the word love
. Z# p# I! b0 ^Why is it so difficult to express?
  B. \% I; L% Y& ~; |5 A) V! tI want to confess that I love you,
- k0 v: X* f, I* k, M. B# D& hBut I never did
# o+ H) T% c2 P8 ]2 sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* v2 T" O0 t+ {* o* C0 `* LI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 M7 c4 K/ d+ i: _' mEntrust my love within your heart
& y# l& {& C5 W! B$ S! Z7 q& o4 U# SCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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: @% E% t  V& a, k<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; M- d/ R% B, V4 v+ M+ G- }: M8 J<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, F1 x% T$ @8 }4 E* r/ P) T<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ p5 w- |; k+ v" E( |# p" L' P<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
  M- Y/ B# `5 e" @<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  T/ {& Y) g. @# _0 ]" o6 k<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 k3 Z0 E) v5 B  {3 Y% q$ }3 T<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 `7 l7 Z6 x1 e8 k, ^( _% ^2 g<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 x2 r8 S2 q6 v- M<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- u$ A  O2 P+ \  g2 m& K, t<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 r: N9 @; Q! D+ [<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
, I8 P8 z8 N2 ]5 x) d% i<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; o& Y  H  f' X. P- o  k  P<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 B0 Q3 W! ~! S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ e0 u2 j5 z3 U<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 b$ a& T6 L8 d9 Z' T$ P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; V! b: A" g. X; d! T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% k/ J- q/ @( E% z: A<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. `, U1 o0 ^  a$ c9 v7 e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( ~/ j" P! D: j' [' q" y  V<P>Love… just the word love </P>
, ~" k' g0 Q+ ]# F3 x<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; I" Z! Q$ N$ w, d" I. t: p" s+ l1 Z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" p1 l5 I9 I$ r<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
* l+ t3 l! M: Z# _( y( j  i% s<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
+ [, |8 m0 u, p* v<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 i* O0 ]) k/ H. E& n0 C<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: q1 N9 ?6 U2 z% L) q5 y, O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  d5 N. K' T6 |; n( s9 h$ P. [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% @9 W, |$ J/ ^! ~% V1 Q  j; ^3 p/ r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 v& m6 c8 q9 j. l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
9 ?* A3 b2 o- R# |2 \8 A<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 e; {4 X" ?* l3 Z! N2 s. e  g 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

  I$ G  m+ I) J& @" Z这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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4 D( p8 _3 j# `) L<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>