【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
4 ~; B/ I* Q3 T. {& v6 yThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( Q$ B) `3 {" n% iFrom the first moment we met,
) J" N, a. o3 }1 ~+ a7 l$ [4 B! y8 II already loved you with all my heart
, r# J& z4 `7 N8 Q% Z1 k% ^We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- w0 ?4 i$ a& S; p+ jIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" g" d, P4 f0 q5 X7 g- nI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  G6 }# g8 ?! \If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 U; c) y) ~. u, A' zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 D. V( \+ ]# q. o/ C* VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* T3 S; d: N5 N! n" ?* cLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# e5 ?, I  ]3 E3 E0 QI want to confess that I love you,
/ n+ Z8 i+ i* W. g! s; aBut I never did
0 _- c+ a- p% w1 H2 }5 nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* `) a8 V* {. jIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 M# u% v$ k; b9 `Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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/ t* a7 z8 ]# ?5 I2 A" ?, h7 q- n[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
5 t& \1 W0 k) A5 K  _<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. @; _/ v# q9 L! q<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 R; f3 h6 X; C) I* x<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, e4 w7 Y! y: F$ P& W: B<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& _. E4 r, T% u<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, T/ J" Z; ?. V$ Z9 \. r<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- O- o2 ?( Y; @1 F& K( A<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! I4 m1 s* |) R7 r2 E' n<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 l/ |; R9 y8 B: X( r1 Z8 y6 [7 w0 M<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* J6 M8 H* v" A<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& F* Y- O, V2 H4 z7 @+ C<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 j; u$ l8 x# Y; c- G; ?5 _  i<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* b! a1 L0 J' B" F  v<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. P+ M# ^$ f& C1 P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# X  g6 N8 z- ^3 S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
- G7 I% i) v  e( ~7 D5 [. D6 [<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. h$ F" i/ C+ s" Z9 H<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  U( ~; p) S; }; {<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. h6 _+ ?  p- {9 |: V& w# x* z<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 H1 ^' y' C$ v$ d/ E<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; t* X1 b/ U# v<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 M& }& \) v/ M7 }: m1 F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ _+ D# c" r' W' O6 s/ b2 ~4 Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 x" u$ A1 }! b' X  d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 ?/ E' j* Q2 [$ ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) \- G. O& T: D7 l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
$ f  _, G3 s; b; f7 S% ?* h% t. t! P<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
% a7 D0 L" c8 S" N9 S9 @& O<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ L: [3 w0 p3 l% n* ] 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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0 g# M# [9 _0 J2 `这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, f9 e: [1 T9 t% f: p<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- t3 g. n$ c' a, m' o. |% J4 j<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>