【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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3 D6 W' L) Z6 Z我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- s% o0 Q  E, T7 k! f4 |' bFrom the first moment we met,
7 l8 B& ~. ^5 l7 U- X8 |I already loved you with all my heart
  ?, D# u( {9 k& J" U, qWe meet and talk everyday,
5 W1 v9 u: W2 F  i) _0 {. yBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; h! k! S  h- M) t; w0 E9 qIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& a0 {* ]+ |4 v% l8 w: cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
9 b4 J5 u( S: F/ Y" bWhy is it so difficult to express?
' z: P, A) A9 e2 B$ qI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; u  F0 M* v1 WIf today isn’t too late,
& M0 L8 _& O: Z. dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( y( e9 U6 B) R- A6 [/ vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
8 a! Q7 _* f- h+ x, K1 E, B7 eEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
8 W, H: S. Q9 d3 W" O# V; l<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
" j* _$ n6 |* X3 }! |$ p<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" p3 `1 A. q- m5 ?8 r$ s- Y5 b! S<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" E0 V  O+ Y7 z' T3 g" d3 u<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; h3 @! Z# M: v4 i' T, b% G) q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* f+ Z" R5 B3 G1 u4 Q; s) s<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; E+ K: Y# F4 V( I1 Y& c<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: s9 e. A8 W5 \/ V<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
4 D8 u" P. \3 X! i2 ~; U<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 n) a7 O6 D4 _, X- l' z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  P1 e2 `$ ?. e9 j3 l# X6 p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 y1 y8 Q, j0 L$ V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* F6 c# Z& Y6 e: I<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: u. v* u8 Q$ x: F<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, r6 t0 o: S& E2 I4 R0 e. j<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
. z5 @( e, D2 V" Q+ A<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 Y. y' n$ E  H; l. I5 x<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' Q7 [! I7 i& T<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. H% }1 n  Q+ ]* P8 T5 y$ i1 H% J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- y0 C' _% g& }+ P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- j4 x: i" f/ x: |! K: u3 }  |9 h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 w( F, d7 p) ^7 N<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: e3 c' {9 A! U4 R# k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 n* V+ J; G0 K9 T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) w3 v( I; l4 u- P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ z- r8 ?; h) Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, M$ A, x% j5 \. Y: |) _' n<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
- W0 |2 U. L7 s) e1 ~; n4 d8 d<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 e# [6 k' ^6 U4 n0 H, z9 c% _ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

! j0 T1 a  w+ @  z. o1 I6 s, q这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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( l, W+ _% t7 M1 U5 L<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>