【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  _( P. x* t' u5 iFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
5 ^% y$ v0 \: A( g" tWe meet and talk everyday,
6 T& _5 K0 Z% g* J, `3 i8 ZBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
- ^" q3 V) S: ?) W. ?' W5 iLove… just the word love
2 v* k6 p8 k( J% mWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, Q8 r0 @. n6 s/ E8 D4 T% COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 y) l2 m9 q* c! Q2 {If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ T# p  j$ T4 }" j) c' Z4 A5 m3 VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 m1 [& n& d: e/ _) yEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
( [# x0 h" B+ L4 u4 D( j( t$ T. j7 I- ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
% F% k$ k0 v$ H. ~$ ~: O  B$ V- XI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% Y. B0 t$ Y6 h' u1 B2 Z. ~One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ T1 N$ x, r1 e- w; qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
/ z; y- B5 @( p2 f0 bCan I entrust it to you?
6 H, n- v& I3 i# q+ P! K5 XEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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1 s% ~8 v+ k4 {* b<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% N0 N) L4 t! {% e* ~5 x% {+ W<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: d& G6 o; o7 ?4 Y  l5 U( {<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 ?% a! t" H' N0 h<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, L% O  c6 D3 k6 j# I<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 N! J# H& m3 s0 G, G<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 x9 C8 r( R  \<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 w1 \; B3 u; F) K* I<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  L6 d2 L+ o( p; |- k! n" a0 d: H<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
8 d: k- g- ~0 n. R7 G. N9 d% f2 e<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 e6 N9 r; e. l6 q<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, _# n6 o- o; ?- P: F6 R, T0 b<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 @6 c' S0 {" [! N1 P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ |  i1 F% i4 I! g1 [<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! \$ Z6 O1 ~( c" k, a0 f" b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  F+ x. U% P) v6 c<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 Y6 h( C" y. |- D8 f- d% o0 f  {<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! B4 f: K- H4 P& J2 X2 Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) X! s# t: w7 L( A  ]2 I5 {- d3 Q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 b8 ~$ ?  S# _& @* E; h/ B- R6 L, I<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# C% p0 h. X: K: l5 {<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# q6 F6 U6 ^  g: c9 P2 ]* P<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" K' Q" p4 Z+ V4 Q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. u: d& \( X7 |" A0 ~! O7 ]; l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 p4 T- }0 ~5 w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 B) i& G7 q3 j! n: _: q. ?9 B6 k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 p# [) D! W# F6 H0 s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  \4 f/ ?3 f3 ]2 i; }2 l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( j$ @1 a, I: K0 h; c% n0 \- \<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>