【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( [. P' a, H: f! RThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, K9 r, _& l5 d$ I( j# P  J" u' E6 AFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
: |' \4 B$ [) c. ?If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
5 r" ~, i6 ^7 m0 F, oWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
( w/ c. I' h9 e7 zBut I never did
, V/ t# w; S+ D9 x3 t, |; GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 {& B; w: A5 U, S( Q' SIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ Y$ \7 M" F( B; |I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 l* k6 y; X( U5 |2 w8 B* wCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
/ h% n; U2 ]4 D) O, a" vWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* I' ~) e6 w4 y* Y, Y9 d2 QBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 q5 J' I+ C& E0 g( L& OIf today isn’t too late,
8 ?: K1 M6 x  F1 V6 E' dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 c6 v& ~$ g! EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 O, ?% a7 N5 N7 _1 ~' K2 BCan I entrust it to you?
2 b" U( W; q5 N5 L2 o% S  \& j3 ?Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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* M5 m7 a9 w+ I% R[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
8 d6 H2 [8 Q) d2 O6 M<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* q" Z/ i" K; _<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) Y7 c( j& l. V5 ~" c, `<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
0 R; n% g+ ]' _6 J( C8 V<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. P; a+ M# ?1 q' e+ n6 [& _9 o<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  D* |: X2 X& o% l3 q5 ]) O( j% q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! e$ ?# f; B4 A1 _<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ V. [8 m' Y! Z8 C<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% y2 n1 V, `, F" {1 L<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 g! T2 `% X, g2 U5 A  S. z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, l  R- q5 r4 |<P>但我不会</P>
1 ?; B' \: T) K# l) n<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) l! A/ j7 @. Y! @7 r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) ~: P& n* {2 @1 h9 ^4 ?* y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ D4 ?. t( G6 ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; l( P6 w2 f; e. J/ g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 j9 W' b$ _  ^+ [1 ~" Z% P% e- o1 ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ x2 m( y3 U" t/ F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  U: y: W  J& i3 V) @& ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 }# G) G) g) [- C! T3 q( j<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" H5 h8 ]+ l* w- U0 G  N; o<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- e* u0 k+ r" A1 c<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 x2 m/ ]& r5 ^. s" Q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 Q" f" B4 `9 Q, @1 ]1 Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ J* D- L* K/ C0 C7 a% w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 l3 Z& Q! ]4 s/ _5 v% o; F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' [0 X/ y) @  T8 H<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 f" ?. x  W  g: V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  Y" t- W1 i- E3 C5 f4 K<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 @$ X) m) ?. K<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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- G$ W1 `* H; H/ V9 B- V3 _ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

: c4 L5 \9 w  y5 g这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

* `7 l9 L* Z+ d这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>