【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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. S) I$ U" H& `" z" t我另将歌词附在此。
' d  J7 G( S( o. x: [The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( \& j0 W- t3 @; ^That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; N3 ?  E' ^" A; }- u& I! N$ AI would probably know how you feel
: I, g) _7 M1 i3 t" W$ W1 A* tLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( A1 I9 M: n% c2 d# j4 eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 t# j6 A2 P: E! ~Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 I$ R$ k3 z. N, _% HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% K: y: F4 ]) `- R$ |If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ F& z( j2 @" v& L8 U0 oEntrust my love within your heart
9 b: t- e* ?6 D6 m" S8 O& bCan I entrust it to you?
, c! S. D$ D  z/ Y; _Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 r9 H- [" _. Z; \( j: [. i; y2 P<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. y* l) B# x: r3 e<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) l7 L5 h* D! _2 B<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
9 o; r0 ]5 D  R& p, Q7 a<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 {5 ]3 w% u3 h- W<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" o, s1 L9 V2 K3 Q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* D" S  z! O) I8 w( i! X7 h<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 f! C/ F+ `: N+ G<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" C7 ~4 o% F9 G<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 P& l; N( v7 g: i* T<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
# }4 ^2 ?! r* F<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
3 N" \4 ^2 q& f* ~6 P# `<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; x+ a( e! A! c  [+ u+ g$ k( C<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( \( S* q& l7 h& @<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; a' _( Y1 _; u$ [6 V9 _<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& z, X- r+ |, l; n0 h2 A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  F# O# x8 a8 ?# v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( Z5 k4 y" l# l3 D' a<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- h8 \% Y: P( O8 ~" _$ e<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 H. G8 i3 X9 \# E  A) s  r<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 k! p: b, @8 k/ |. p# Y<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" G3 }' D. \7 F  F6 x<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
1 ?4 ~8 ^9 |$ b+ l. r/ g5 P; k<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, S+ r+ j; T0 Z$ f# ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 a7 j8 \* [! f1 M7 l2 f  f<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 v6 l. g$ L( Y- D: j- f<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: k+ E3 Y. v4 g) c$ S( `. J' W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 U% @5 r& d2 T1 F1 R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
" B1 T) S0 p& e5 Z<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 F6 z2 V9 U4 t3 h 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

3 a* |; P% D" p5 Q+ a% U, L9 ]这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ i' o. u; M+ f+ Q5 ~- M1 Q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>