【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# {1 t% d6 e( Y. CThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. L1 O9 |, }& ]& I$ Q8 YFrom the first moment we met,
8 m# `# l7 A. K, u0 o1 b7 xI already loved you with all my heart
8 d* t8 ]0 x( Y; FWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, J. t* @  U8 \7 q$ k- oI would probably know how you feel
% Q+ W' f' x# S6 g  d  S5 z+ [0 m/ MLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" i$ p+ Q6 J2 g0 n; qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( i* z* A  h; X, y  k8 {Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# ]4 i" J9 H  g' i9 II want to confess that I love you,
, y0 M  @) p) O+ `But I never did
% s% S& p" w+ J" MOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
0 z6 C( y: r' d& o0 jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, |/ [! Q0 ~! C, [+ {7 MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' }% a& i3 b6 V! n& w! ICan I entrust it to you?
$ S0 s9 L, [% y- }Entrust my love within your heart
% V, F; e; S: w" j  W( bCan I entrust it to you?
) {7 M+ ^: Z: r! }5 o# XEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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2 `% ]  ?: Y+ W! Q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
+ C* H* m# Z9 h# r( J; Q) |3 Y<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ L  P  C0 X, n: I9 e5 j# O0 H: y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% T1 v1 U' x  Q1 h0 ^% c<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% f3 g' P, w! p/ t<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 f' D" J/ B8 p1 `$ N, Z2 Y! S<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ I. X6 M# c; N# l+ t& _# s<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, e& x+ Z5 Y0 Z! Q" |6 {<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ G' M0 T7 `' O+ V% r<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 M- k1 B# ]: q9 ~  Q3 [<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* _/ V% L4 r! s: V5 q' x/ b<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 q( I& b' {7 R1 v4 E) w+ l8 J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% F4 E1 j1 s1 D( r/ U& l; m3 p<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: v2 n% j! H- E+ s<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% t# y! w. `! u9 e0 [) j3 X- y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
9 f8 H9 {# w3 x5 K. b<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. _9 U6 y- t! \1 W2 o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! R  D) i6 l; ~  P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 `2 ]7 S1 d( ?+ _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 J0 T1 i, k# z" O& c2 i) c# z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 L+ Z& b( o8 u  C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: ]9 M; B' ?" g/ e% Y7 p4 ^& ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
3 t: [" `) _/ y) [: T( Z<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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. Q+ n6 N. H$ x 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' p2 T& V5 Y) D* D# P这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>