【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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6 T) c" G9 m4 X$ L我另将歌词附在此。
" W& q- P, Y( [$ A# h. ]3 ]) H4 uThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( U! t7 t; b6 m6 i4 DThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 i$ c" t5 q1 m) k1 t6 d/ }From the first moment we met,
- h. C' X5 l, U; C; K* W/ L# YI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
0 a" G1 I7 _  n; FBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! F% g4 `5 v! J4 r$ LIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( F% n' c0 U4 q. z3 Y! RI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. I  \' @$ R: |+ R$ v2 uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 W/ L/ D4 P' U% }/ yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; }9 p" D& @, ^  NEntrust my love within your heart
1 j5 {' J/ o% D3 B4 ICan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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, `/ {8 C4 t8 }5 T, ]) E[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
1 Z5 a2 M( G4 D, S! g<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 l7 k* j* ?9 o5 b8 v, K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* ^( t& ?8 ~& F) n% ]- M9 _4 m<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
9 |- O4 R; H/ m<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. I: B8 g- f0 W- Y) X<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 R# d$ }; n/ w- D<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ V- o( x8 ]# q% k; ]<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 P' Q' V+ O  [2 h- r3 g5 f( J<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ i/ x, G* p" t4 \<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& C- T3 k3 |6 b, f, w! q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ z! k1 F; ^* j$ `/ o<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ W; i/ g( V" W5 @- {2 C( L/ d6 i<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- J7 T) w- Z4 C, t1 s" S<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* D3 t3 h. W+ }9 M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 ?: N5 Q$ W( u1 c' z  e: [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# p9 G  y6 _9 h' c9 L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ y6 ~8 Q! X1 L<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! J7 c% f( l5 s6 E5 ]6 a<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# P, D) e; x# M) W2 @& G<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 [! Q0 t6 J; }<P>But I never did </P>
/ s9 T5 c/ j% e& A<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* a) m; r2 N* {' ]# |; p) }<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" ?' @+ v, S3 o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. p- n% p' @. v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ |1 n* y- K2 {# x( d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" A  o% D# r9 D: [4 n! }' ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: @0 x8 h7 ]& }+ I: y/ B) n  i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 m- f" N8 q1 ~: k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 ~& K3 H' A8 _$ U  d3 o<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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8 d: |! e5 s3 @这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

; v! P" X, y  l, d% D这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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: e# Y7 Z2 l5 n3 X4 ?, S* |<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>