【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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9 N7 ?3 s1 O8 Z3 L我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; Q3 I2 b1 v  l$ K. }; |% oThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 A- R; }- z9 {1 p" C! _! e3 _From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
$ k2 F' i, @  @, `6 Z, o( cWe meet and talk everyday,
& W' P" Z' z, gBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 U- V1 p+ Z1 H, w/ B( ~4 d9 q' o( s4 hIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
& ~( K# t, T  G! wLove… just the word love
: d3 u# w7 r; y2 \. z3 KWhy is it so difficult to express?
% }1 N2 c4 b; {' GI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 f% x& r  {1 W6 YIf today isn’t too late,
0 l8 ^  k4 p/ T% m5 LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ F! ^  n& N( hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 ?. ^% W/ z' y  f. ^$ u3 }Love… just the word love
& ^* x; y. @9 M' w! Z2 nWhy is it so difficult to express?
  X% }; r6 R' b0 B; @# {) ]I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ J7 o  ^0 g  ?, J  ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 Q" h) G5 V' xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* R' \: e7 q# w' }' Q- {( M4 T) bCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
+ p: G- b4 t. F/ N! KEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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+ Q% u5 d2 J4 i* c) u<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, E5 H' i. m2 G/ G$ H/ L$ a) F<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) e/ L, Y! U5 i9 r# @) [<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! b8 `8 Y9 q6 z! M7 K. m4 w. ]<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
% W$ u6 s) x! J' \, z<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; U+ [7 \* e* b0 \& z* k: y8 T<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 f3 h9 u4 B4 Z- p" @( m<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ g" {% s" [: {, j<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  d- D; }' z" |7 }9 x6 A<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 j, t- |- }% I/ i- z6 I<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
  C% q+ l) F( I" r2 \4 |<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ C. Q- B) W# t+ ~<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& W" U# |. E" Q7 p% Z2 M! r<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
* M4 E4 h$ p! m& ^4 Z$ K& |0 U  D<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
% X) Q/ l$ Q4 K) E+ _; A<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) G& o; w5 [9 m* R<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- E) K! i- ]3 N$ d4 h" c: N<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 l5 y/ D, o& V3 K- b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, ~- Z8 M9 H$ w6 t8 n! N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 Z* [; |- F' Z! _! D  O; h<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 f/ T, y8 Z& ]% x1 f6 f* u<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; G; m! P# W- K- W) v; ~<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ B! g# ?& c  f<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
: O& _1 r+ ~% P4 o* F<P>But I never did </P>
7 L/ r. p; d7 _+ ?8 _& l<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. u* @' p. Y: m, _2 Y! a/ h<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# {, G  u$ K3 u0 b. m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ Y8 k% t' k! G  e! G+ J% }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 P, C2 O; n. W0 _: W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 O# G) Q: I% \$ j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, G5 c3 c1 L# S7 a<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 i9 ^; R* y, h3 v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ f' V" P* b3 d+ d8 y- A$ n6 O<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' g9 ?  Y+ {0 y4 D( O<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. U; `3 k* t3 @/ v. u: P/ ~9 d1 N 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>