【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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, m4 `8 {  I9 M* `" p0 @我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 a  Q" i4 n, s& n) `That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# J7 Y6 o( a1 a8 Y9 X& i2 ?2 ^From the first moment we met,
' ^: R" \9 `+ _* {* u! D. J9 H8 Y) x" |I already loved you with all my heart
% I6 Y. t, q4 f' @" q5 PWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. n6 X4 K- ^4 u4 U' JI would probably know how you feel
& `; t; @+ H( }, x" nLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* R, G  s7 j0 u1 ZBut I never did
9 ^/ l; b5 s! P& [1 R6 v& pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 E: c$ I1 I: }) BIf today isn’t too late,
% n1 L1 L1 d$ |! U9 i0 _I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 t: A" y( W6 k' Y+ ^$ J3 q. ]I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 Q, F/ D9 O. K2 A* R/ ZCan I entrust it to you?
1 T+ p& x0 u$ o1 kEntrust my love within your heart
7 j7 y" q6 H& j- iLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& j4 V4 z& K+ U: G) t& uI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; a+ E4 J$ e3 k' q. HI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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- @% }* G& k, W# v8 g) c9 o# k' j[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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- J/ h2 |2 `* i; j) J2 E7 a<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ R: t1 `2 m! v3 {, r5 z: Q<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: `" D/ _5 a" f  B% T<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 Q1 o+ b2 ^2 R. V6 q+ }2 D6 e<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 `  p$ L$ u. ?4 V0 b8 Q" Z# A$ h! @<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, C; I7 J3 {. g/ D) e$ i+ W8 I<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
' [5 \+ ?: S4 H- d! j  N$ A<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  U, a0 j0 @) E& `" ~! n6 u  L<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- y2 y: V; `0 `; `% n4 K: F, Z, l7 m<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" q6 O; h$ i* t) L1 N<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ u, B: q0 F8 u; h0 g5 \. c4 V1 s<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* G0 V; i. Y, H, z* S<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ o' ^* A4 A- N5 I<P>但我不会</P>
. N( H9 ]: v5 U  V7 y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
! `$ f# R* ^7 v9 O- |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 l! r8 p+ h1 p2 Z+ L<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; O, `; @% C! b) Q) e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 P; ^5 y/ @" A' y6 P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ S8 _; |2 i: I/ k<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. X& b; Z- ^0 Y6 F9 ]  l# C% a<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( w. ?9 m: Z  K6 l' x  B<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 Z" O9 x8 ^6 H+ D<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
2 C$ g  n* {: y) X<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 ?- F" W( p: A, }5 o" T7 b' f$ C) C( i* K2 k<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( u: r/ R9 O/ E4 m<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& u$ O, S; i, K% X% {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 f5 D3 L. S' Z+ b2 Z! N( E4 M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 |7 U! {6 G% D4 w) r9 F5 M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  l6 B5 X/ X4 ]5 j) F, }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. c, g0 K8 M6 S3 C; V6 b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 R4 V% q6 i8 f7 f% b, p: ^<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 N" p5 i, L, W4 u8 S) r<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>