【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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% P( O- e0 m4 i4 L1 D$ L6 w2 F% g' l我另将歌词附在此。
0 H/ |& |) R/ y# P( y3 xThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ \% }% ~& D) |/ kI would probably know how you feel
- p8 M- t' w3 q4 dLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' c0 s7 z+ v. a; b8 TBut I never did
* z8 s2 ?& q) l; {# o; q" M0 POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: A3 @7 o7 R; g3 @, |4 \If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 n$ W2 @: j2 U. z  h  b9 OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# J3 |( d$ N; s, B, wCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- V$ e3 Q9 K8 t$ l8 x' LLove… just the word love
0 [( H9 U# U: c" q9 bWhy is it so difficult to express?
, q0 r# Y1 P' j. j" }$ H7 `I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
; ?0 ~& O6 D* g: u& fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ `8 A/ y. c9 O4 h( h. gIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 a2 D( f) ^& PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 q6 O) i! ~( Q' C. }) C* BCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. e# {, m1 s& ~+ kCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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2 g& C* B3 W4 I% T  g2 W<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
" Y0 c9 M2 u# R# M5 i<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! I' u' u) d& g0 d1 P+ L<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 U+ V0 x( ?, Z" c2 F' t+ }, ^; G) Y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
8 V' E2 g5 Z$ t2 g  G<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 k3 o3 f& \& X! Y9 N2 G5 T8 _( a<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' R3 ^9 T5 Z9 q9 x: t<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 X  Q% A: m7 I. i<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ J" w' B- i0 _! T<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 j9 M# q, ~$ u* M2 k* J/ V<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
9 B- e; m" F$ S, N<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 J4 ~6 c: |1 ]1 h9 ^- F<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- _& ~% C8 m* s, y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
; s! \6 L- y0 A8 p' g<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) z/ p. m5 i$ Z! U& t7 D3 D% m<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 h( s  Z  b; b: F<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ r+ U4 h1 L8 g# a. b<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 S! y; C/ G% K1 ?* @# \- Y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- J: d# L' K7 M* Z/ s3 G. D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 C9 D9 l0 Z  t( m4 A( a* M8 O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* D; y4 f. F! h& H$ J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 M4 S$ I6 u- Z0 u2 s: Y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 V( T0 ?5 l6 s/ A<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, Q. s8 c- r2 a7 G# I% N3 E, N<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. c# _: l6 q' H<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; L/ w4 }8 L/ ?+ f<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
9 ]. s+ h3 A5 U" ~3 y$ [# G" F<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) L. M( l4 w$ S5 @5 U<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- U4 ~, Z* O& V! Z% e* h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 h2 M2 g( l; [$ F. `<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! N) G+ E3 E5 A; H* _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* ~  e& |" m3 a; r- |, |$ Q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 y. t$ m" Z/ }2 Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# [7 F) E: ~: G7 @<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% B/ @* r! c$ k9 \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ f$ W5 K  E2 \/ \4 r<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 v' g; U6 }3 w- O- ^/ N' T5 n2 G这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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2 c6 f( V4 H6 g0 e<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>