【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( T9 j+ v1 v8 v& ^That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. P( I+ P0 |% k& E  q2 UFrom the first moment we met,
& n9 j, D5 q" Z/ U7 ?/ vI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
, O& A" a/ U- y0 C  @( o% iBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
) V8 p6 s2 H, lLove… just the word love
3 r9 H# }/ b" A! E3 i' pWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 r# E3 w/ ^7 d# O" xI want to confess that I love you,
* x9 s" G$ l; {! X: ~But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) K2 J8 w; U& ~0 |) k; jIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; P  P. T" v' L/ E0 _, a+ c2 t# mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 z4 ]  {7 B/ yCan I entrust it to you?
! x9 w, K! \5 v6 \6 w+ PEntrust my love within your heart
& s3 Y/ Z1 O- d; m* [Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 H0 }" w( t: [6 Z. J+ zI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& Q) `8 p3 c3 R% ]One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
. E+ U0 j: b( QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ m0 @+ f. S9 y6 ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ ^$ V6 T; d, C2 T/ zCan I entrust it to you?
' \& E- b- Q6 ^# Y1 ZEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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4 k% t  ^( w' k5 K; G7 F3 K<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  @& H) B! Y/ S2 |$ k<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 T) d6 N, i1 C! J5 f<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 @* b+ j  ~  l# {% I<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
( f* r% K( E8 Z$ L- V: Z) i' S; T<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 h8 S# w- N2 f+ a& g<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, Y/ _- D3 X7 Z<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" g# o' c. F7 ^7 ]" G6 U<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 q+ ]5 G' b! f# Y" s3 x5 g<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
. F" ?+ W( \- K% i<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 g1 I9 W' L7 o8 _<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) E- w5 p' c7 q7 {! A; E6 n<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ b, k. b% `1 L4 A$ F+ G<P>但我不会</P>
5 K. i' q! G; A( V& e: K/ `<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! D0 c# s. k+ \, \. @" U# `<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  h/ f& D% i& j4 f  O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 r! q* j/ j: J  C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 }( E3 h# S: T2 E8 T6 C1 w5 Y<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: ?: ^$ W! y. k<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
) [: x& f, d6 r# t: X$ d3 `: L- }4 ]<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
3 ^* F3 n  b1 ]" e2 q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* ?, N- y' ~' D* B# H<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 O3 {: w4 Q1 r# P<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 l' C  t( W( b% z; g0 F! U% ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& ]. o- D- }' H' y7 d; j: g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 r- b" H. y2 q! E<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, `! ^7 h5 e7 Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% q7 T2 T8 q' a2 q$ W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, {5 p# h4 v$ ]5 b<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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* p% ?' s: M9 U- o7 @% m3 y4 E: ]这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- P: k: m2 E' |* c8 |3 \1 H<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>