【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; A7 y! d4 L3 D8 s; V3 K# uThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
- o  i. I8 a& x7 {I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
+ W: [+ z- R) g7 lLove… just the word love
/ p5 ]  y, e8 TWhy is it so difficult to express?
: x: E/ k: a6 K6 D* N5 J2 \I want to confess that I love you,
0 z; H+ _$ t  L4 H. i, l! F7 P: jBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; [. I8 m. C/ @# vIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& T/ w! U: [- C# T( FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, z' O5 c$ y! W( A; W3 XCan I entrust it to you?
& O. W/ W  e( h, }! i0 SEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
6 O4 l" ~. ~$ o# Z1 U' zWhy is it so difficult to express?
; M# x3 O" [' NI want to confess that I love you,
/ s+ W. O5 S: n3 n. }. [5 R3 R/ HBut I never did
, V$ b' ], T* `One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 N& s: [- y, N' MIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) R% u: k* Z1 I: |9 ~+ N/ o# k9 ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ V- l; t7 F. C8 n! P; W7 cCan I entrust it to you?
3 Q0 M0 p- A: E" c7 b9 ]Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
5 b- ^; V' O$ Q% S9 ]  |- R<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 f7 k* @) a& B<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ t6 s; i4 E1 q/ Z5 ]<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 S! w8 n$ H# v- _6 b" _<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 ~; C- O2 S* M9 n' j1 O5 q5 K<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 M+ z6 s& N* |  v0 a<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( y# ^5 M; T6 ^8 P. r; s<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# I. C5 t) v" |5 I. b" c<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% L4 H* \0 Z" V! p' F6 R$ t- D2 y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ Q3 [$ Q8 N  x" V! k<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 L- ]. {: J* m7 J' a3 {<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% \  G# w; R! H, k* ?<P>但我不会</P>
: V: X: _7 O8 b- _% X; D' g<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 \, j% s8 _: K# J; u<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. A  \, p  f. W2 \/ M9 ^<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 g* V' u9 {0 N<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 z. }; z; i+ I8 ?8 j1 u<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ A, L% x, c1 R# s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ a& x8 B$ \! Q6 ]% j5 m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 J' J; `% m) d+ p<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ Y- o. \( }2 J: _& h) X% i( z6 d<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% e: u6 x9 p+ z2 B# |) |& C# G* y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 {/ G9 O3 O. B: e$ y; L- [  W<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' ?3 \2 @! [6 L+ |% M<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! {4 E. Z4 B9 c<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
6 g3 X9 o- R  |<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 Z# |4 r; `. T  ]* U( J4 b<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* V2 n+ q7 W* Q% {5 A# ^2 }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 l+ ?. N1 f1 t! z  J4 G<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! |# ~, [! o0 r5 n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 G" v9 g# a; {. n) W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 f' g, Y8 u# ]<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
* A0 F' ?( a$ [7 E4 M1 L6 ~, ^1 d<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  p' Y5 o! k3 L7 `<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

( m. p+ g* D: C: k8 {: N 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 {/ p# I: F0 z5 Z1 G' N7 {<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>