【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 g9 u) H/ J  [/ t/ kFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& g1 i! A/ X0 p1 M/ R6 nIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, w: _9 f4 e8 h$ c7 X/ J& P8 |0 WI would probably know how you feel
3 Z3 I* f! R6 Q: c) K4 U: Z; xLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, t7 f+ V. Y8 q" COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& M! D# H, z/ [0 b* K, dIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; @% @5 T/ t$ m/ N* O' z$ ]I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 p9 d2 C- a& L' t3 {$ F2 @Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
( N- E! K3 |" G8 X& {( l& P* AWhy is it so difficult to express?
6 K/ c- W  u+ R; {" iI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) N# O: P/ @' g/ xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" b8 x% U4 p7 JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 F6 }8 i4 z" K% d4 S+ BCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

/ W/ i" F" ]& D5 t[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

4 z) T& b7 R; i/ i4 Z! R. L4 h: O
<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& L& O" H: h  ^8 }3 [- D<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ v* A$ C( T% `: j' p' F/ v<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. [1 ~; o  q3 O# [<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 z/ \" }6 q# b6 a9 r3 ?4 I<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. z5 Q+ V: a( `9 ]<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 g2 F" R8 o3 E- W0 o1 f<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* Q5 m9 R7 P8 }% B9 z" X. _<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! A1 f, b) `- A3 w8 v- x: H<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 B9 {! m& n9 \: E% p<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" T( f7 o% r6 a* R4 G' {1 u<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 y3 P2 g/ j4 ~/ {4 U. O! z0 _<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 a$ q2 Q1 a: j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 W' m8 ]3 K% o& H: ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 W  c& I) w& d1 U0 ?* `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 G" X: w! V4 x. c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 f% _2 e( r1 r5 `1 u# ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 V4 A9 h" B% o  c' p<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& h" J$ j7 E3 C; i% p7 t/ i6 F<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! `0 g8 V4 \+ M<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 q% j- m9 v9 v" a: g, w9 c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' }+ m. V# f/ X# T$ i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 H" k6 l# [! Q& u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ \/ v; j( h$ g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

6 K0 Y* R0 u- Y3 n这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& v4 t9 L! y1 b+ ]4 w<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>