【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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0 ^- p2 [! v8 e+ p- e) Z6 x我另将歌词附在此。
. [6 Y: W& Z6 E  mThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
8 G& j  a# y' Y( V$ p2 [0 yWe meet and talk everyday,
+ B) t4 E7 _3 z/ Y" ^) q( kBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' Y8 y) y9 n( _/ K! dIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
$ M$ y# E: H: y' ZLove… just the word love
  a$ K+ I, _1 a2 O& G5 ^Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
  u: F! a3 l2 t" M; BBut I never did
" K7 E/ A% x3 ^4 kOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ H1 c, c; ]0 ?: @3 PIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; V  g) ?: i8 X+ N8 f1 mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
4 O5 H, H' m1 |8 ?2 iEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 A& j- Q; q5 L. @; Z1 B% o; dI want to confess that I love you,
4 `1 v( p; i7 m- b; X: {; e: NBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, b# \% u: ?8 A' {1 ~  UCan I entrust it to you?
! ^+ ]5 w6 |- v' }) V, IEntrust my love within your heart
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' A+ ~  L% z5 q" d4 ]! d+ B[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) i  k+ k; a& A<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 @/ q) C6 F3 R$ o$ B- |* ]/ F6 g<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 w2 g+ ~7 A0 ?<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; L6 O; z3 r" R: }* t8 f& [- [<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: v+ t$ s7 d: u<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
* m5 @; L9 f4 }0 `' y<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 Z  i+ o* P  a, Y; x5 H8 i<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, ]# I/ o, N- w+ x+ r2 ~& R% J: {3 A# I! H<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
" P7 q& }% ]* y- B7 Z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- K  c2 C4 `3 O1 o! I1 {<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ y, o& q  F( o6 s<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( A' @9 C2 r: s5 d4 a<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ I9 ^' e; v0 H6 h<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ C/ U4 T3 t' k2 B: o7 q  u* y' V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ e7 Q' E1 F' Z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 h4 b9 Y* f! C  W7 ~<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ x& n' M- v! U' G9 X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 W) Y. s7 U1 f: [% S( J: e<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( [! T# P# r/ X% x) k<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. z0 \8 P! v2 B5 o1 w" r<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
- z  q' y, k4 V  z<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 x7 s/ K) O6 d( _4 F9 K<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% H: ^. O  r% o$ U) b5 D3 o2 s8 H, h/ m<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  ~) c, C; i! \<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
( o1 a& [, n3 T  b3 @# X<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- e2 z  t& n# d2 O$ }3 k9 x& o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 [4 E( Y5 _7 G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: ~5 p* A- O: ^/ F1 ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; U( D' E* _9 v3 Q0 ]  t" Q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>