【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
& |9 K6 c8 r2 r$ \; hThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& F: _) j; R- u) L5 iThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; t8 s% H2 q% A# H5 Y9 F0 oFrom the first moment we met,
: |9 [9 _5 }5 L- x/ f6 X% FI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
0 V* z" t0 m3 S: W, d+ gBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
1 v- O2 ^5 O* OLove… just the word love
) y9 t: c8 s+ Q& J8 p) dWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
! p7 Q- t$ n* M" ~: QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; a0 ~5 S& k6 ^1 ]Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 L' O  M8 \/ q" E& |4 QLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 e* j; T! `/ l6 iI want to confess that I love you,
* `% X% X6 v; k+ \2 I9 ^But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 k, g& a9 z& dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 e$ H8 D$ g$ b" P3 O  Z/ l7 OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 |# a# _; G# nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 {9 V& i0 M/ {, t' v8 s/ TCan I entrust it to you?
+ g# \1 ]6 c2 D; R3 o7 IEntrust my love within your heart

5 j7 i& S$ `5 a6 G. \[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! q7 a# q  j- h' r% Z( }0 Y3 g<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( U8 o1 G2 N: u# \0 O4 q<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" Y* Z1 x4 @; [2 x1 n$ v8 j7 G5 e# C<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
" U6 X# a: U1 K<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% x1 F3 {1 g- m  M# l/ ^<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
7 I% }5 @7 ]" e4 q6 q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 B, t. O+ Z) D( g3 ^<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" W6 S# G$ u( y8 [" i$ Y: Y7 [$ Z4 B7 r, q<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 E0 h6 y+ W  ]! ?( b( q: l<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( J4 i; i* Z1 i: R<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. q: ~; S! V% Z& \0 R, A<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' w. D/ Y3 q8 l$ B* \6 ?4 _<P>但我不会</P>
3 J  D: }( X/ B( N- x6 u; Y$ N8 ]$ I) w<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, B% u/ y8 l+ p3 X2 e0 t2 V  ?<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 F2 L4 Q6 N( v" l6 w8 U' m3 P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 e- [+ {2 l) G  y* P; |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' H, r, q' G9 [: H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" }6 c8 Z- Q3 S! [; u, f  b; G  L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 s* z- {- o( [3 a/ q7 v# Z" n; O& x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) S$ T( i9 g% M2 ]! M<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 n% h" ~6 j/ Y4 j# S/ @$ H! N0 c<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ C- j- f7 z  W) P, `<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# V7 B4 }: H( |3 l<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; g+ h1 x1 J  B* m# o; h<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
# J: D( H, }2 C/ u  I" R; ?: e5 A<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) j  Y: L3 W4 u. \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; A: i' }# S6 p- v: g9 v" M! ~<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! y6 F1 s+ ]# D1 w4 F4 D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 T8 @: t7 o" x6 {* k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ O* O& A! C- n5 A, o% S- a<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  v. E. e4 n% w" T$ F# p$ A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  l( X' |% p3 K6 z+ x* u, V) m- R5 G这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) c$ i3 Y/ ~7 P+ }# {2 m4 ]: q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>