【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
) l& W, y# s4 I2 G% k6 {$ [+ z" ]The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
# m& O! w  |/ e" M2 ^) W+ ZWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  Z% O7 d) V( OIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
8 E6 w+ A& A. r5 j, ]; @6 U! M5 ILove… just the word love
0 B# p+ Z* o8 K6 ?" {6 m, U% qWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. Z: ?" Y) |9 F7 e! ]% s/ WIf today isn’t too late,
" ^4 k: ~( G" `4 f# ~, F* c5 Z' `+ r5 LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 Z/ J1 t* v' D5 qI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; x- C5 A) o& n2 M) S+ @Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
. [1 q* R4 ~3 {1 C( O4 i1 |- nWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ h' m$ ^6 G8 D+ U6 R! G4 PIf today isn’t too late,
# }, D* B5 Y( Y+ y8 w% z: B  B' cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 A( W( b( r  w& I6 ~7 NCan I entrust it to you?
; ~/ O! i1 A8 E: HEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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7 Y) V/ C; @" w* A( J; J5 \[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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+ |6 G4 b/ x& c* U1 z1 y0 M<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
8 q: e0 }6 I$ \# @* C8 T4 {<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 H8 D  A0 m$ _2 }% H2 t<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 }% a) n! b: a7 J<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 T3 r3 R+ j# ^4 i; Y$ D" o  a5 V0 s<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, y' ]8 U* J0 Q* p<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
6 k& k1 q' B' ]+ ]/ ~<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
7 N& @4 ~% Q3 p0 S, I% @. q! o<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, G7 X1 \7 _- ]+ t4 X+ J<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( R% r: d+ r* ?6 {4 X<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: z5 y: c& a) w. Z5 b; a<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
9 f" ]; @* {. {9 N* o<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* S: }4 O  Z. _4 o' D<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' k: [: ]5 m/ R/ _. [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 M% }4 @( C* \<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 e, d8 [2 x7 Q& p4 G<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: ~: }0 Z; b/ I7 N9 g  ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 |6 w* v7 i' {4 }" f0 {. O<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 S& ?. Q  }1 C# o0 C" z<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! g5 [. i0 f- q! M  t<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
7 ?$ u5 L* E" O+ ?  y4 B' }<P>但我不会 </P>
1 F* q4 r, r2 {; J; V$ z<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 ?, _# i  ?( V" `4 ^* n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 o$ f& M# h$ w" y# w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( G# G; ^8 M0 g6 r' @4 `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 v4 s5 t9 a/ j  ~  s<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. P7 f' s- l/ T6 ^& o<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 x  x- t5 w( ^% m/ C这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; k- S9 p- Y* C) _7 ^<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ c) t/ _9 T( [8 ?/ E<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>