【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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+ r  [9 K0 t  Z; ]6 v  U! V6 e9 r我另将歌词附在此。
, Y6 ]$ v0 e3 X# QThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' U( f, ]* k$ m; @$ p1 \: AThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" J: B+ K" H# I$ N7 Y: K2 e7 R2 j$ gFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
7 e0 w+ r9 T; D9 L: zWe meet and talk everyday,
. c9 P2 F7 G- K% D/ XBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ n, t7 H) }. y3 MIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ C. B9 M* m2 N% a3 l6 ?I want to confess that I love you,
: J' \! A& u3 d# uBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 u4 M6 t: l% s9 }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. u% N, e9 \+ W8 Y. w# SCan I entrust it to you?
8 S9 f( I# G. C9 _4 ^9 L2 IEntrust my love within your heart
9 f* H& ^$ r2 P: FLove… just the word love
$ N; W2 `6 z, E! G) k0 u  D: y7 \Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 z& w: {  l' WIf today isn’t too late,
: ], n. A  M) h, r! }! h* UI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 C4 R2 {* {& V* Y7 B8 R9 {& XEntrust my love within your heart
3 U! _. {' o: I0 eCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 P' k4 P3 [2 M0 ~9 E0 {<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: X" L2 l5 B7 |8 k  v/ M<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
1 V: |; m) W( i* `& p$ B4 v. m5 P<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' o: V! B! k2 \( p  c: ~/ ]  \+ ^<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* l" L, a4 p8 Y. B6 n8 p) K4 e' i<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# l/ E5 H( V7 S' \* y8 o<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
0 A! M% c# L& ~<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 c" q, _  ]5 f( ]! L<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 ^, b# [3 z9 w  G<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% Q' J% `! y; t2 `# ^6 O<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' j- A+ g2 Y6 \4 _" V7 y8 ~' `1 y, u<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
4 G* A! V# C2 u2 k; q<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 @  g9 G  u& T) h0 [4 t<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' a3 V9 L6 N( h) m<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, O% C5 }" ?( U- v9 t9 H' t4 O* d0 c<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! c, {/ ]6 y/ J) z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  d5 @6 _2 F' f$ H. o<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. u5 d; ^/ a9 b5 }+ @<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
1 h, `& _5 A! l4 f+ X4 {5 g& q<P>But I never did </P>
' }0 j- _( c6 T7 {* t<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 L4 p" j8 u7 x5 ~0 b: H<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ p! K, Y5 b% {/ {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ j. m8 u  S1 x. ]% f% R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 F+ {2 W, G( Y2 L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 }1 v8 Y5 U) w6 W" u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' E% R( w5 t4 L- R" \( K9 w, [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  d- ^1 M) E, N2 v) w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. C7 N6 w# u% q' x<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
( z3 i/ q4 u* M# J3 E* R5 R<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

0 O  C; X0 x! Z  R 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ |/ J: v, M' f2 u" o. X. y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 _0 R! G$ X9 ]6 G4 d<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>