【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 u4 ^+ n) L) g3 D7 f# Z+ `From the first moment we met,
1 g+ X" J+ Z) K5 q2 z/ u- C! b, cI already loved you with all my heart
+ d2 E) z6 c# O( V$ c0 ?We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
) Q- r: l. [0 T& c9 @Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
" c  u' e6 ]- L) Y) t& h; Z8 S7 bBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! F* A3 x2 S. `3 x9 Y/ cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ }$ z; r4 l1 Y7 P5 I3 aLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
8 s: d+ z, B9 ?6 F7 u4 x1 GBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ C0 |: T% H: D9 |, E7 _9 T5 r2 qIf today isn’t too late,
3 M6 [$ U7 @8 W' V  W1 E2 qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ d5 T- _* A. U( q1 \- |: S# }Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
5 N( T. j$ D, z# [* @9 a, p<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
9 d! k8 U& t2 k3 [* y2 H. K) O<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* B% A0 o: N3 W4 n8 e( C9 U' c' u3 E<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ w* P, ]/ C: \  o6 B9 B4 R  Z4 t! k<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 n& Y- ?7 ]# U9 K4 [9 r% m  O9 r<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ V- F6 k' d9 e# g7 Q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
! H, W( k; [2 I<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
% ?8 r7 Q6 p) ~, A/ m6 E/ S# l# I<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 C. {' a% l4 R3 }<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 k7 B" ^; N5 D2 t2 @<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- n5 m& {9 P8 B<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
, I  N& }8 [" N<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; z# e! j* ~9 l$ L7 P<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 B  Y  k% u. F% [* \  Y  a<P>但我不会</P>
* i# x+ }1 Y! G+ o: O% {<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( a  P3 \/ Z, s8 O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 K/ _! w$ g4 }$ C$ Q' z; L<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* B8 [, {& e1 `/ A- U& A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 D) ^% h' i0 Z! G<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  k1 U: h6 M2 L9 Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: t" d) F) p4 r9 C0 h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 d: N2 z6 m# i3 `/ b5 _1 U<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" L3 `  f( ^2 q9 [<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
) e- q& g; N( E. ~3 o! N, d<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
2 V1 z6 Q8 A5 ~( C+ Q5 ~- V<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- L2 X. g" q- U; l$ j<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, K. N& D, v3 ~4 {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. c  g3 ?! u  v; v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ G  I; y. g6 j" m. [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 A! R  r3 n4 d' w( C9 X% O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  j  N3 ~$ r; [* F6 P<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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/ d$ w% b6 w/ n- U/ h+ `6 @这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>