【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
, `  c" t* S9 ], a( k; kThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 }6 ?/ k- O. B) n5 U7 h) W( c9 kThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
" j. {- y" W* I4 T9 _, eI already loved you with all my heart
! D7 H' A' p! r: N( rWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' H. o, ]0 S( h! C+ M; O9 s& PIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
* w( G: e5 ]! L; O5 n" u. v) BI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 Z; S7 ?+ \, ]4 hOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: ^: ?& E# C5 b8 \# I' r: iIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 T6 D3 \$ O9 J! \7 FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 @0 m+ b& l0 z! S7 ILove… just the word love
3 p' L* h  I) B% Y: w% g- ^Why is it so difficult to express?
) F7 B* F$ J3 B4 H& AI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
+ \& R) h/ O0 F& L" `' h6 L1 MOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
. E& ~# k- V3 t7 A% p1 |3 tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 c- f5 Y+ W/ r; }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 |/ W/ s/ g2 q2 s3 \3 kEntrust my love within your heart
5 d# i* ]# X  X8 j+ J4 e5 WCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

! B3 D* |" m6 ]/ G4 C2 p& e<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- E  W7 J8 {/ Q, Z<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
1 N, I5 I$ T0 x6 O5 t<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% }. X) x, @. Q9 a<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& _0 \$ {* ~+ {<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 D0 F' l2 h+ o. m. S( y9 c<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
- ?- s. p7 g, ^5 Y<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 D3 Q6 f7 a" x' r6 J& E, n<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 M( W6 Q8 t7 h# e<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
; D2 \' @. \5 v# z7 M( \<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' L; j  s% z: u; T  n<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
- U8 v/ p7 R% i. w" P<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  @; W' z9 k* Z- J7 e3 A5 a<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( F- R( _* n6 T0 C% [+ W<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 Z/ x  {6 Y9 Y, x: }; F  ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: M* ], q, y: U; P<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# \" c, q. `- D" }/ R8 ^( M<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' P- @. [2 R! j% l3 I% {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 G+ b+ J& X+ |. F: T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" X% Z0 G* q- E& i# F" R: A5 p<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
" ]( X! Y. G" _  f& G( a2 n<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- Z6 I6 v; j8 U<P>But I never did </P>
+ [7 @! l( v" u% q5 I- ]<P>但我不会 </P>
2 S2 e( o) N$ M; P0 L0 D6 W<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 m6 a) u  a! {: B: A0 u<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 n# {! D: V: i4 ]: P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ R" H1 z" Q: e9 ~# O6 F8 \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 H; u, c8 d" t# ?) Z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  m+ ]" ?. r5 F! Q2 ]7 ^% U6 `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 w0 \, D0 L+ p! Z4 r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# k' n1 u0 ?7 E; |  c- j* Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 h6 c& f: L5 o5 e. z7 g+ S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ j! _3 P9 v" [3 T$ q 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- r6 b8 s! l& V<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ P( I/ A& }1 I' u1 K3 Z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>