【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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/ x/ O1 H; e7 q' }) [我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' w% c' T6 g3 c4 a% h4 n$ FThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- N! h) _; M0 n8 M/ b4 M+ _From the first moment we met,
  z" K- E0 k! `7 l# _I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% s6 n+ n2 q3 b6 [) o* U* QIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
) U5 `2 Z) [1 O& b& l6 fWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ \6 w- g! `. d9 f4 I4 fI want to confess that I love you,
4 h2 L. f: s( x+ a1 h& {) FBut I never did
0 g$ z7 N' Y5 d1 y! i& cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  J1 V2 n. r) b# u  m# yIf today isn’t too late,
. _8 v- h! u- Y# D, T7 N- u3 N: JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 `* T1 b; g1 M/ V7 e" v5 B$ e. [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( M5 c, M# ?) d; y9 ]* {; pLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' X+ G2 i7 s2 z/ Q# II want to confess that I love you,
( B7 N( b3 b) w6 R4 o0 h2 XBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 \+ J2 Z. ?9 jIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' @( @  S- J$ ]. _8 lCan I entrust it to you?
, u. S' }' C5 i( G( e5 aEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
! K" \; d# N5 S0 H8 i<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  k! a+ W% F) B6 L<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 Q3 J8 O% p5 u3 ~) v<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* @8 o6 `! [" {, X<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 h7 O4 j' B5 f& K# _<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- A1 y- O' X9 j! L8 V- r7 W" B<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& T. p8 T  T& ?, b: G) s<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
: O7 J/ X% f+ I) ~$ v6 k<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 ~( g0 L- M# ~: s2 u; y( [<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. A( ?3 m3 |9 n<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 J+ y+ [( _# H  ^8 e3 `$ B<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 c* o  b, ]0 P6 {1 K<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& d7 A; ^+ |0 b  h- C: n/ L, W0 i<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* p+ c; K+ V! Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' C0 h) y" }0 ]/ n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' r* c' B, ~; {3 \9 f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: x+ A4 Z# a2 a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 I. T' s" \0 ?' {$ f<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 z! k3 x) j! y/ T) y. R# B<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 l# x6 ^3 A4 ~. o5 H/ K<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- N( n* f4 o+ g: F<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 I* H9 y. \. Z6 ~0 ]<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 A  q8 p1 B1 N8 q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
+ k, C2 D1 ]* h, P: K<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
& g; W* o8 T( s0 i% d( B<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* f) t- ^+ C; F: T2 V5 k3 y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% ]" q2 `  O6 @: c7 v3 `+ J  ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* Q$ ^0 Y4 i! T' ]1 B0 D: l: \1 O6 {<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 ^+ [; D( i( ?& W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' n% P. D( K% p: }% z' o2 u& U<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& F( W; `) U4 D2 B# Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: L1 p: }2 i( F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- ]7 s# n. ?5 B) T<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>