【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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7 C  {, X: H' B我另将歌词附在此。
5 m' n- ^- }# i3 A" lThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
: s3 r5 M. c3 EThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
& f6 P3 v) u1 Y8 v+ E* d1 [From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
, D  a, r4 T2 D2 E4 ]+ h8 nBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 W" \3 w6 Q) _! O2 gI would probably know how you feel
, p% b9 b: v2 h& }Love… just the word love
8 [( A4 y  f1 S/ s4 t4 B$ Q2 F2 BWhy is it so difficult to express?
' }6 E: r! v# h& YI want to confess that I love you,
5 }  @) Y0 i: j& p. mBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
! @/ c  s- d, }0 W# d) Y. pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" W  J. s3 }8 \( wI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 o, H- h% k0 q/ B# l* bLove… just the word love
, J$ p% z+ B# w( e3 jWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 w  [& r5 |- oBut I never did
# b1 \1 M; e' g7 ^% f# R" e! OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 S# ^. p* ^9 K* Q4 _  {% w7 tIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 a! p* g0 o, Y& B; N' q: c- ^Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
" \6 A: f; S) N# K4 V! bEntrust my love within your heart

* L, a, v1 H+ d4 Y& t) G[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

/ n4 T: ?- |2 D& V' F+ t<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  [$ H, ~" S/ {2 \0 Y<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 A7 i1 ?" }, `' {' x, z2 f. j" a<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' K6 V3 `2 j* Z* Z7 b' m<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ U$ X+ L/ s3 J7 b) u<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
0 Z- k7 j5 |/ O7 v5 Y<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 I1 @: c' a* r" L1 L<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 _+ s: d( H4 O( H  x<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 |' M6 v) t- [<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
. D/ d" }8 @% n<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( {/ c% E- D$ u! E5 R: q<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: g( y* v) ^9 ]<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
7 [+ b: }$ D3 G* X3 y4 n9 Y<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 H1 h" r1 E! }# X' x<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 t) q: l% u  F; x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 G' ~* Z. ^8 o+ ?% K' l<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 K" e5 o+ C0 x6 W<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 |; O+ ^* Y/ h4 l. Q% s' L; l<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# W+ R- t$ A4 W; Z9 [7 {8 w<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
1 o  J2 f, Y3 Q" T<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) F2 L! c$ t' X* L$ m<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 s6 [" E7 I( Z/ ^- R9 f<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# m- }& i! b" n) j0 v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 r; y: x. {7 i; y# r9 [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  R- `$ `4 E% T0 P/ ^, L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 i, Y! f$ n4 U9 L) D+ @+ e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 s6 |; w, X: w2 R<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 H) k# u8 N: m, T9 v; l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ K% Z$ Q& O- E. S' f2 Z" {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 d/ J) o3 Y0 J% q0 H<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 b5 `; o9 ^8 T7 U- u( ?<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 T- ]6 I" p8 J* V: c 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>