【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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, e+ M7 b4 c1 I* S, [5 _; [; m. ^我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
* Q$ t+ ?9 X# x& h4 ~I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ b4 S* r; A! L: h  ^+ @5 p- xIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
4 c) H* @3 I+ f, m: }Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) j# X3 G# o, C- mI want to confess that I love you,
+ q# z5 q+ a" DBut I never did
2 x. [  |$ c+ G+ mOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* ^+ Y. ]) y; _0 C/ NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 V& p* Y- G2 [9 J8 `$ ~4 `6 J  a. ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
$ T' x$ C1 U- n5 TWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; s: y* z* G( ~/ @But I never did
) g5 Z9 ?0 Y5 ]' S/ bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 \" D7 d) L! E. h( bI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" S: h0 [) o: Z/ N% O# XEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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+ K% ]( ]) T0 z  r7 `: a+ S1 h6 M[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ A! n1 ^# N: \; @: @( l! b<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ b! h5 [. ^7 _1 r  i, c* J8 Z<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
( i5 g2 G. P$ ^. z! `0 @! N<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! y) f1 Z3 p9 y+ A) h3 z! m8 B: l  Y<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) H: d( o8 ~, m. A& d<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
! P- o3 N' N% {" [  F<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& i8 j, {8 A0 E0 ]* Y" O<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! F, x! A) H. P3 i<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 K/ F. L. M1 Z) W" K( \<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# {' |$ B$ @% G, \3 \8 [# [) R$ Z<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 u" L5 d! B6 z0 c<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 |0 b) t, Z/ U<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 q/ F. M: o1 t<P>但我不会</P>
' s% ~6 C/ ^6 C; U0 l2 w$ d$ b  ]; N<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" W: o. d% j9 j# ]& `# p. k  W+ X<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ h% C4 l0 K# r! k<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 ]: c2 f$ {$ K, o+ V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( z3 S) W: Y# @  s9 D" {8 [3 b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 T3 L; V& n* V3 E: X- \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: m0 R; J6 z0 D3 v# j* E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* y1 y. s4 T2 F3 t<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: i; t  b8 L6 V3 i0 K$ q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  D3 J& n) X5 c+ L* f9 p; x<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 o4 B0 F3 q8 X* K' U" Q. C<P>But I never did </P>
. L# [6 X7 `, J7 t. @9 P# o<P>但我不会 </P>
2 w7 S* O5 ~$ y; {' l8 x<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# e* n) U4 b" X$ x8 c9 e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
( t6 b- w0 q6 `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 a+ ]/ O% d/ v6 ?& [/ o% Y8 m<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 v5 p* y( c- H$ _9 B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 S8 D; J, u$ a' U3 o1 p# ?- R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% ~4 Z' V  v2 ]) R! z3 o3 i<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 j& N- @. A8 R: O, t/ ]! t这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 k3 N( h. n% A4 O# Z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>