【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
) f! ]0 ]3 i" |I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
( G8 H4 D5 k: y5 k. d5 l9 qIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( [* y, @- O. XI would probably know how you feel
4 b; `* P+ ^9 h& n. [Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  n! M9 ]) @6 u# h2 nI want to confess that I love you,
8 a0 D) D, P, ^$ w6 hBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 X! v! h) _, U' SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 E9 Q4 M" l. p3 L2 u& DCan I entrust it to you?
  o1 L$ l0 c) m; Z# l+ V. B- QEntrust my love within your heart
! H0 }- T$ z# q+ |" h3 s6 JLove… just the word love
9 @. o( C; v) q9 j; c- xWhy is it so difficult to express?
! x, J# |9 C4 G# E! [" KI want to confess that I love you,
" [. g+ k* Q, l  |- y  fBut I never did
; `  z7 |, J# c6 Q6 `0 x0 m2 qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 i, ~6 `- F5 T$ NIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 Q7 i* O! d7 UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% Q$ ?6 i) G. a. t' L- LCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
) r) {9 ?  j/ Y- @! lEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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4 l6 K0 U  F" f9 X/ T! j<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# H5 D  S/ v+ B7 \2 j" }<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# J3 J* w0 i- l! {3 `8 W" N3 v<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 Q) `/ Z( i1 I! M7 f; }+ W; `<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 T. ]3 l6 b, H2 X<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; E% n9 o) {; B) q8 l, |7 m# P<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
( M* N, d% o* f0 O0 o<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& X" g% o% Q# a<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
" J; y# z* U, L. y( |<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. B- D7 K3 H( E3 o: t4 m0 ~: X- R% ^<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 q/ D* ?0 K$ C' K<P>但我不会</P>
6 L/ N9 I: M  s- k( Q* w. J9 y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 {9 F, Q" A4 {<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" J" }2 y1 R3 ~$ v: @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 j% f* A$ \9 }$ f9 Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 F8 e/ w3 C" X$ o/ }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ W6 t3 ^# |1 m  \$ h8 u7 @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' Q9 A! m- @& {- p; S$ ~5 ?: ^<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* p1 W8 y+ x' {<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 d/ D# H: G# I, |<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
7 |% p8 D% u& s# u( O2 p6 L+ d/ u<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# d) N  _- O, K/ O. L3 G# C% h<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
! d1 p3 q0 m* R& \- I<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 |5 f& {- {7 O3 |: ~<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" R# p8 d5 w: z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ X7 e) C% W! a6 d<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ X8 O2 |) ^" I2 H4 j" ?! Z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* \; x, e+ k+ A/ g2 q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ x- G% |' L- s' U; z- ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( r* X# ?# P1 M' F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- g3 o( ?9 a# p% V0 W: D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" w, ]8 l+ u8 k# o: Z1 L% b& q7 f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
& y" _3 R% t9 B7 A) J<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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0 J4 O6 m3 |& d, a* W. H这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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, _6 g4 ~, X0 T) f" {3 e- @<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>