【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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0 U# V# h$ d# s% o我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ Q) x* S. `4 \% E+ e3 `From the first moment we met,
' m/ M( [8 \# y9 i7 O* x& h' UI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
( U0 |. {9 N+ ^# ~+ XBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
! j- o4 E5 r( X) bWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 E% s& t# K9 t9 YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( [4 c8 L) V- U/ I' N( N- `I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
' j" m1 u. a* D$ M8 v3 l8 t9 VEntrust my love within your heart
/ r' s; Z5 e# ?: ~( oLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 K" W1 }( t: o$ GI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' W; R  @. C' |: H! h1 hIf today isn’t too late,
. P/ a2 n5 F5 [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! d; i( v' \$ {$ W, F5 zCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
- w( M; [  Y* [) s3 t" LEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
$ P" {2 r2 U* [$ I, c8 Z<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
! P  ^& \& A! R<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" A0 p5 l; z" m2 r7 h. j<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! Z8 w! [$ v9 w! t5 ?4 H% c) O% s<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% W' c& ^: K, f+ }% k4 {<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. ^3 l& A& S: e, k<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 d; g. L6 Y+ p0 v( ?<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
9 i# N6 ?3 b3 O& @. t<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
: O$ P. D! d% d+ t9 I<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: `: q* L, b2 T# H9 T<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 s" x8 J& D8 L, v5 M+ |/ L/ b% A<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) k2 P0 _9 o" @5 n: V( h<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! v3 e$ A: B4 G1 w# I8 a6 C<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& j- Y( k+ M  Q" v5 Q. E0 P' x<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
# ?) f8 U8 Y9 {+ K+ C7 L+ n" g0 i<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 s& I. K/ a, C4 ?8 R, A7 K  f9 G<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
! E& ], D- c2 @. b; |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; Q8 ~" {, L  H/ S. @+ e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& F8 \6 v% A% |  v4 G3 e- B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 w, o5 o5 L. B' T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 O/ M: ^+ {3 B0 [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; ]1 G: b* n  K8 A. }5 V<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 D' }0 F* Y4 ]<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 I& Y- A1 N, @<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
1 @7 ~$ M8 r  O# T5 r+ [<P>But I never did </P>
7 a2 L( G5 X4 n1 _8 O4 R# s<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ |& D6 Q. H7 L! D1 `- P$ q) b! P<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  [$ Q6 w3 ?7 s  a' s9 p* \<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
+ |) K6 [( l! Y) \9 j<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ v- j, E9 l* k3 S9 y! H<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& H/ T4 x0 w( v' R<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 e( K& n: _1 Q1 b/ W1 _$ z0 O8 `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% E; U( d  U3 H6 Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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, m% A0 y: r2 q* w- t这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& ?& z9 c9 p" T4 f0 w+ \: f<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>