【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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0 d2 L' a1 @1 D$ T我另将歌词附在此。
! x$ R; V! `9 VThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 f: I1 T9 X9 X2 L; T/ o$ JFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
# I( c6 X8 @$ L8 sWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 I+ U& s4 Y# D+ ]% w: y7 VI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* r4 M+ j7 e3 q3 ^5 s0 o* {% cBut I never did
: [# B, ?( M9 I, p3 Q0 LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, x* V0 _- B5 V! ]9 x" DIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( K6 j+ ~2 R+ `! v6 T* `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
: h) m. f  ~+ f# _Entrust my love within your heart
. J/ Q7 r6 D) Q3 oLove… just the word love
: Q, N8 B0 G+ u1 Z( Y" O  FWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 p/ T$ {5 h" u  C! fBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 O. \( \$ E4 }1 cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ T9 e, ^3 o7 l6 v9 B  |Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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3 |6 {1 b+ e8 d6 o1 M3 ~[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
! r1 R+ P9 u$ [8 @& c0 S7 C<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% B) |' c) W$ N/ ]5 C$ s<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# |5 L# g7 w& b( D" S3 Y1 x<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 H# E, y+ E$ |) m, ]  O- k$ S8 W<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 o" B, _6 r# {6 p8 E<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 f0 K  P5 W% }3 E1 Z<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
1 t/ }! D; W( V4 f5 x<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 m0 ~4 s; N4 ^" A' I$ T<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 s4 X% o: h( B6 W; V0 o<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 F2 O6 O7 f" @  v/ k2 s<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 X, o% P# ]( V: r7 H( e+ O% O/ c<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  w' p$ P* a2 J3 J  a1 R5 X" @<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( n8 \7 E! _9 o, {2 E- p<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  z$ ^1 `  l# q/ ]2 @2 c<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
; q9 y* \- a8 m; c! n<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 ]2 @1 K1 o8 Q' K<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 p8 U( j% ?& m<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: K+ N$ I" {) t% W# L<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( j, _' h* @- z- _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 j3 h$ @+ u" ^  ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; J1 o' ^* W' C& |) R  y4 t<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ b% ?1 o* {& |& |& i8 |: \9 S7 j5 N<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" o9 d7 P3 `7 @<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: L6 b- A2 }, \7 L* Z) X' d<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. S% z; [- y8 Y<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ K* a" }& v  F" W( Z6 O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 V! b: z5 d. ^, H* W' Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 w- n" B; x5 \6 U2 K0 J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: n. V- m" E) C/ X! a& f<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: T- }+ S, w1 }$ n/ a<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 v' D% u. D/ G, e% N7 A<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
. G1 c/ D; c2 \4 _$ j$ H<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

) m' Q6 ?+ O  f$ I9 S这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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& f1 ]: r) Q& N这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 b1 ?' u- {$ z$ p! `<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>