【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# \- ^$ \9 {$ T5 l0 J5 cThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. X9 Q6 K# f  D& X1 MFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 y% [& ]* s$ `* j- B9 C% a! D* \I would probably know how you feel
% h3 l; L9 @! M- ^Love… just the word love
, X6 R8 [6 @( G* w+ HWhy is it so difficult to express?
4 {: [6 J* ?( \! qI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 F+ _/ `$ Q  I& ]) t" s. VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 [' z% y# L7 g) E& \4 J) [I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' l4 k' `7 J/ G" Y2 W2 YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 b4 H- ]5 G4 x9 X5 Y4 i9 X4 vIf today isn’t too late,
8 ^) Y; Y: ^, X; ]$ Q" Z! [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! o  c: U  O- T0 q( [& F$ L7 _; vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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9 Z; P* _1 l% E5 k# r! u2 f[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* b4 H8 h. Y4 N2 z3 w) g" F<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 _) Z" ^6 }& K<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; Q4 |, s5 R' Q4 d, V0 q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
" o+ p) N: O( R9 D3 ]% o<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% i9 L, q1 @( s- c<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ u& n6 Z9 B5 R/ O<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- K8 a# a* S9 H2 {5 a6 l<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 O2 M- F/ Q0 _' i2 U- _<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 @- d  @, T! Y. W<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
  L( u  N! |3 ^3 M* [9 }/ f<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- B! s# A+ f( ?# `. H$ B1 ?<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
& a" k* M  }2 v; g  P+ J  o; s<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 k& I% U& x* _- t<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 T* U1 k0 C: Y3 g0 v<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* o: l  S; M+ e/ {1 J8 O<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 \" s7 g- J! N<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 k& ?0 g, t  R1 K3 ?) `<P>但我不会</P>
+ E$ |8 T5 p/ z, x4 A<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. l9 z0 t9 }4 |3 T<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
: [# C: U# V5 F: c  }* S- V<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& [! a+ X, v; s, t: n+ r: @<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 K3 u) O* t+ C4 H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- v2 R+ u4 z+ T- {  J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; r) v+ q8 O! Q* z$ {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: o1 c( t4 o( V$ K! O- d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 b$ Z8 {+ z) r! B$ J! D<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 l6 y  C9 k5 a3 y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 s5 P- W: P  m1 T6 r7 ~* Y: e<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" ]  W% \* D  g) k; x) @7 j: O<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 q. L* D/ X% ]% p; e<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: n+ t% X+ y8 D% J9 {<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
" a: K/ ~  v7 s9 P; K& }/ g<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% n5 c# z; N- M0 S7 t<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 F9 q/ N8 v- \' D2 F2 P: k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ d7 y5 M0 v, k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 U* _& e  Y+ d3 g( T3 `# f9 V+ }7 w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ v- \1 j6 d/ ~/ ?/ I$ U( @<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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$ A; o& U! {5 G0 c 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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1 b) A, _4 F, q6 L& E: @<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>