【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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# G5 X1 t! \, I1 ?8 S* L我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
8 p: z# T% D, z# f' \! y$ ?5 o5 vWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  w9 Q7 g" S* O" k% I- f! QI would probably know how you feel
5 r- [% d% C1 K/ S5 e% SLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
  m" Q; m' e7 oBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ S" A7 h; s' z7 F* |If today isn’t too late,
% ~/ N% h: B4 CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ x* o0 B0 S% o2 D5 M  B' d$ RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" f1 Y2 C3 I2 E& Z" h3 |3 HEntrust my love within your heart
1 `- @! e/ ?: P. c% n; vLove… just the word love
5 |9 V5 a$ N3 N7 ~" t0 qWhy is it so difficult to express?
, P* `3 O8 C! ?1 q  x+ Y3 r+ V. LI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& @* J+ ?7 N, V( NOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- Y- |( i% s( l  f. E3 H0 lIf today isn’t too late,
; d+ y: x& I" @0 E  WI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 ]  @# W/ b; l2 r( U8 F6 L' oCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 E! B. p9 c" ^  r( P7 UCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

3 B. Y! r' D7 x$ d9 K3 L[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 q9 c. }9 z2 i2 @<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; t3 m* n' v8 k0 q( X<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 ?; \0 M# {9 X2 p/ J<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 e! V1 Z, X- y* u<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
; X9 F5 h4 ]2 Q( s2 P" [8 S" A; Z<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
! F6 M9 N- k! O<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
* y( `  e. r; V" t1 p( |<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
5 J; g: r7 a" v$ V9 d- W; O( V<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 ^  _- U9 t! ]. f1 e1 e3 ~<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# _$ c0 O  s% p( n1 z8 M: m<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: F' n% t* [9 B3 o<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 `4 o" W) b( Q) x& `% p; g<P>但我不会</P>
9 \; k5 V0 @0 O0 y% Y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 M" r' z5 }# h) y/ m% [) x' p' X! x  H<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 m. c; z* V) R* D% m6 ^3 p; o<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 e% F- W. x+ e8 F* y& v3 v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' Y! {6 {( D. Q: o! v' a4 u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 a6 J/ A3 i2 a7 d, G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
2 v! z1 o& i% u  n% t, G; r2 K- D<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 g$ H7 {" x  R- \+ n: Z0 x9 M0 a9 m<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: Q+ I' }9 ?4 s) ^( s' t& y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 o; P+ ?9 _4 J' O: {- \& {<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
: c7 m9 N6 P+ Z7 G! Y, Q) S( h1 B<P>But I never did </P>
" L* G7 y/ G% W  u) _5 l<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 }1 l9 |3 j: v0 q' U<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 ^+ m& i' w% G, B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 n/ ~, ]: i# P$ y5 n  }7 ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 k3 b- U0 S* z# }$ F: q3 W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 Z/ w% S+ i' r1 @/ w5 {+ p<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ a3 H4 E* u: I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 h( |# ^5 [4 j& n/ i- D! z' [<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

; P/ p$ P$ T* ?  m( U; o这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 @' c8 Q4 j: z/ H0 w这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 C6 y3 L9 c: X$ H<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>