【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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' {  f  p7 B" u. \$ {我另将歌词附在此。
- V4 C0 A- {9 x& h$ \1 |, d: AThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: z- {. ?: e: u4 |5 X9 oFrom the first moment we met,
( l5 I; n- G: w3 q# xI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
0 q/ `9 {- f0 l4 G: x& pBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
, p, j! D% t; E9 k2 G& }If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 W7 }6 @# p/ |8 {I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! _1 J/ f( F8 w+ y# `6 `( U) T  w: M6 UBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: A- c& d  s' w- a6 Z2 z' P( sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; Z' K$ a# v& }- g/ b% k+ t% X  yEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
& p) T$ r8 G- ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ ~( }8 Z: ~/ W9 N& i( N; mBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
. B, Y, S: H2 F2 J- b7 bI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 k% p& V3 m. `- h- [; mCan I entrust it to you?
. c) u7 O2 I5 `- QEntrust my love within your heart
8 k/ ]( h, [3 \( K7 e2 Z6 f6 `# }Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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+ Z' C8 Y$ J5 h0 C[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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, R9 B) V7 `  ?! |- M<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ L4 W, e) l6 F/ F<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& i/ \5 B1 o* t* L5 O<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* k/ i1 @, O0 k: N3 s; k<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: i2 r* _& W! ?. g: s<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
4 |( z& p; U. X! k& E2 Q. n/ j<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& J; U& y( q& Z<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& r5 ^' a4 Y5 A3 V& |4 ?* ]  b3 H& T<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 y. D! Z: c9 E9 h9 v! J<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; D- ]/ S& s1 C<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 K6 o8 p2 u2 Z$ h! o$ }) I8 @<P>但我不会</P>
- o/ Q5 k# T# e' d' O7 c; j<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; M4 ?+ V; W# m% v' C9 m<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- v  W& j7 P0 T% Y# `2 v4 p<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- J5 t7 I1 C% S# j8 f; a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# I; g) Q& k+ g  S- {$ A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# p: a3 j) X  j+ ^3 w# b<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. c  \0 @+ A0 ?4 t( k, \<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 n$ x6 [" [+ m<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
! ]) r/ e( s9 F: y<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
6 n' p/ Z' a7 Q* ~<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) G* d% w& b+ r2 I# D: @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ a3 ^; `, {4 O) I7 C" R<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 i! g: W/ B. _& B' }6 W! j' I: I6 J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 o& w2 ^, F9 |, T) w; {/ M& L9 H, ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, o$ L* S9 O. S( c  O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 y" z3 V5 y6 P- Z+ ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ e$ D* s! }) f- q" P+ P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 R+ Z: C+ K5 w6 X" z; l/ J<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 l8 |  y) J! _6 }0 r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& C8 ^" u0 Y/ d# S( G$ N; T  O/ u- N3 V9 ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 ]7 F* a$ h% U/ L& w<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
# o. h9 X/ R; ?" ], u) H3 b<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>