【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
" a- T% Y; R8 d; f  b$ qI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
2 M6 S% C: h& ~! C& X8 eIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( \. v2 }5 c$ BI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 `$ X, u# E3 @) q- ZOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. P* E( p/ v& v! X6 U3 X8 e! mIf today isn’t too late,
- }) F5 I7 S' Z5 D9 {! D7 Y& [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
3 Q) _9 B5 E, nWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, }/ O, q! {' X( q7 C" f) g+ FIf today isn’t too late,
+ ~9 e. Q+ D* E  g7 PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 [; p2 u' @5 g2 I0 ]Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
/ x! Z% }0 m6 h5 Z4 _( I( jEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* d5 d0 ]. g& \1 ^* N0 b<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 O- o0 j% g/ L! p<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 z' M  q+ ~* G' D- _<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* V6 Y( t2 ^! X: @* J8 r0 K) {( p<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# m- j3 m1 l8 n<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  S" r* S. p  g! d, U5 P% c- x5 G<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 k2 u8 v+ T% |# Z2 c$ L# S7 f$ y" E<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ N1 g0 S" @7 d, P! q9 `0 t<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 h( E0 l) j- q* G<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- o, n! f  |5 e/ I% q4 f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 X# C# V) V& g<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
9 t) j, d4 {( b9 ?' X<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
6 a9 n' i$ t7 `1 c. N<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 l. ?( t* |" C. h# g5 `9 b# C<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* o% k9 y, t6 N  U# i6 Q! V<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, g6 x% ^+ J1 D$ [: z1 w$ }<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ C5 L6 Y: Y$ w3 B0 S, G" m) U<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
8 l" s! _3 w. j. w( m* |<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' r2 t: }; a+ o' }- D<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 P9 N5 e6 C( w" p' D- t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" b+ x3 f; O& v, M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 @# l" s) A7 J/ ^- f<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) }" J- P% m) ~; G5 q) g5 o9 _, i<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 Q- }. A+ N. D+ }<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; p. N7 l2 N( Q4 H( F<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 b- J" U! j( C7 Y$ L1 s9 e* \<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 O2 @( O" g8 K<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
3 w) b9 t( s: G2 Y" _<P>但我不会 </P>
# S5 n9 e6 t9 x3 D' D/ t<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! F1 B' u/ V" D( b# K4 c" G2 p8 ~0 O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% g' A2 q" E) }7 I<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# c$ l# P+ {: {+ J3 ?7 c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ ^( K5 T  {6 z0 G% A" Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ C# H; y1 {3 l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 U4 ?5 N- ~9 S. }' ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 g7 e+ x) i7 o7 L$ K9 F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' Q% i8 l# h) S4 k0 M0 ?# ]* M<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
! q7 D' m$ h  o0 M<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( R) y9 J2 G6 q这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( w% r+ n7 D& ?. Q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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