【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
9 o1 P6 v9 M! `' J3 l5 v5 tThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 q# W2 B& t1 c+ h9 L) t/ L+ |From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: H. O& z! n7 z0 `9 x6 pI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
% |1 V5 Q* Z7 Z8 D* a% U( eWhy is it so difficult to express?
, h7 N( x( x4 ^# WI want to confess that I love you,
+ h$ M7 @3 o5 l" WBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 H  J! r& o# m; hIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- z# {$ ~' T  e6 T- |I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! C6 i9 u9 o& o2 NCan I entrust it to you?
# z. s6 J  _; p& Q* CEntrust my love within your heart
/ O( v- F5 d$ @/ U6 o2 mLove… just the word love
, V) c8 ?7 L# t& y6 \0 F9 PWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ l! f9 G2 q3 \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( q* I( V  M+ }" D' KI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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! W9 P+ L7 G2 Q8 N  T9 X$ |+ c[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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9 f" Z9 C  ^5 H( x! `) f, s<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# y8 I9 K! I6 b4 G9 B<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, N5 n9 c! u9 Z/ t3 F5 g<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% ~2 A7 k- }) I) V2 J2 K0 S, E1 H<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
. e  p' B6 G) G; S. U$ X+ X<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* Z+ m( ]! u8 `, V2 a9 W8 j' o8 D<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, S' w! \: A5 h( u2 Q; |<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 U/ [: S' L3 w) y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- d( z$ K5 |7 w! X<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 W  `: u+ w( w( u& W  v" }<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. q' n5 S! R) l5 p3 K<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" J' U' A5 e: E- V& s<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" z$ Q8 I1 S8 b<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; O- \" R- s( ~2 V. E9 X<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, y& o7 R8 m  q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 c, b' |5 v  O" m* J) w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 @( `) ~- @2 M1 l# y( H<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, B2 n/ E7 v9 ~<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 I1 n0 U& X3 T8 M0 a* x& O$ S: t! N8 ^( Z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 M7 c  u6 J( k- b( l<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ P# f: X9 K+ l# w. G<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
$ j0 S* k2 @6 A4 E- }# ?- W<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) o- C/ j$ V0 Q6 E8 W! V; \% @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& ^; s* v- N# C! T4 I: V<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 S# x5 m. e3 W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 u  c9 p/ c9 f1 U# U  h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! ~9 T4 w: l5 g! G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' @5 }6 }' j8 l0 X" I2 s4 A<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( @5 n& Q* d0 O2 h& E# `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; b5 O" M6 X) c, w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

5 a9 h5 ]. y3 b4 r8 P这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ m: }! h. n5 K7 v<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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. d. P* x4 z: l! _+ Q/ _0 T: F, `<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>