【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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! r6 Z1 s$ r& o  L% O2 f- E6 @# e我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
  @5 b7 w, ?7 SThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' u0 ]8 c) i, G- P" l+ `( @From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
& [, S; m, K7 x  r* GWe meet and talk everyday,
) z+ }# b3 S6 n" [0 F, ?But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 i/ W8 E( I* lI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
) \6 L! x3 a* C$ n% jWhy is it so difficult to express?
' X7 i1 N  D+ s6 ~9 oI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 P' d& s. Q* ]! o  p- t( {5 f! XIf today isn’t too late,
3 q! r  t5 l2 D# T' KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* r3 n$ P" m8 l, {% ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
' r# M; h% A* r; D2 qWhy is it so difficult to express?
' m' U4 K- I8 ]5 tI want to confess that I love you,
8 a; D  h$ T0 U0 D" nBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 J+ b* N- r8 b6 ]- t4 QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; W; o, I  d6 vEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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& n9 A0 @( f; O3 |+ j5 m5 w[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
$ ]) c& _7 v! j: R<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 B; T$ i. |- Z5 F<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 f3 v" F. ?" u8 P, }<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 I7 {- M. p+ g+ k$ \4 i, u<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
4 v; h% D* x! J9 f  k. n! v<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
2 D0 [3 p3 I8 e. l<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
8 b" ~& L0 `% U; g- o* z# S<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  z. |: \7 n# y3 M: j* ^<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ F& T2 o: @  v& S7 v( v1 {<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 n0 V6 A' G( f. n) e<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 W( ]/ I' r% q! k: }! k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 |; ]' m; a' O; L5 w, x8 i<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* _! [" M1 h" e0 v' l5 C<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* ^7 `. d6 V) j+ Y' i2 G8 g# t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 b3 F% R$ q- n' P8 r5 }( D<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 m" O6 n- H8 s& |8 K4 N5 O<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) N7 W- K! f) F0 [/ @<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ @# r  r! `" |8 N9 U' @4 n<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  K2 G; k* A; m9 l+ p; L& M# ]4 G* |<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ R  V" U  i; P. [9 D  U7 z- Q<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
0 A8 Z! ~6 l, ~9 B3 y" H# ~<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ H/ `8 ]2 a, H% V& ^" j, m( C) B; m0 @<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! [4 U5 _; U0 U3 }, h2 x<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  S: i8 ]  i! K9 S  o* \<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" X; Q# |! @# T1 [, c<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 A' }- A1 q' r, n1 j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! z) n9 T1 u7 t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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& H* F3 @0 q5 P0 z3 T这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  F: p( g9 T4 M8 K) G<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>