【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
8 h5 e# g+ p( ~7 H; v+ IThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% N: j8 R/ X* \+ \# pThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
) ?. c: R: T5 B$ W9 b4 L1 ~) ^" p  V2 F& rWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# p. x0 S( r" D; N5 {$ XI would probably know how you feel
; I$ ~$ Q7 H# B" n1 E1 nLove… just the word love
, b0 e7 A, y3 U0 I6 p2 AWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 x: d+ q! a2 LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 W6 v7 K  Q6 k9 v. \0 w3 tCan I entrust it to you?
9 u( r: r. g: n1 @- @: KEntrust my love within your heart
$ ?4 I) }( l; B# \, qLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ i, @* c/ y3 G! i; ]. ^$ |! DI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" G& [- W" X* o& ]# Q/ QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 O5 @0 R  b9 C- [  X. oCan I entrust it to you?
% A% `2 A" \* m4 r9 GEntrust my love within your heart
4 O7 v' K1 t7 A/ fCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

9 s) E# b6 r% U7 R$ f, Q[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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+ K+ Q/ N/ e7 G2 o, p<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  p, r8 X6 m! y3 @, }  k) O1 [<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) b# ^6 q6 o( `2 g3 H<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# j2 c' B! D4 k" `' x& N<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& b& b% ]' z; o2 b+ \<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
4 C! b% f6 v1 K1 A9 {" W) r$ ~$ K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 r. e/ l2 r# c4 n# E<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ w5 @" @+ [& |6 I<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 j  R% h9 _% k3 L<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 k- Y! F" k% J" h<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ }) X. X+ _+ N5 k0 E<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% z/ C4 q2 R$ Z4 X<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 {+ P6 M1 ?- `* [6 x% E<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& Z' Q2 O8 X% T; f$ I. d  m' v. n$ o- Z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 i- J. E" K$ h$ H# v4 @, G<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 \" Y; P1 I& B" s$ F  K+ |<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ {& U) l6 {9 o/ _  ?* R# P  W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 j( t9 I( H* J! `; V! L<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 n, w( _7 [: u! B% g* X  ^1 M<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& `# c- ]! P6 V) v3 @<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 b0 e; B2 a" a* I% O9 j<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
5 q% u+ A/ K% I' }) i9 D8 k<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 S% u# l+ s) o% m5 [: B<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 C* u. d$ j, c; \3 j<P>But I never did </P>
& I/ x) k" c' {: h* U2 N<P>但我不会 </P>
: h- r9 |. _* Y& C2 ?$ Z1 C$ e<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. {0 L& E& t7 _( {$ ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 G  g/ d3 B" b# x! R5 [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 P8 q4 J& I2 y9 }8 j, D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; G. ^' r  V. `/ y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, w: F. s4 j+ h8 n1 k6 U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 C, a$ Q4 I* e; {' [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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/ V' W( z$ V' \" u. M+ Y这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! O( O* n- |9 C: J4 l& z* X<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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