【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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3 v  g. e% ~( h: ]% q* Z' I6 E9 f我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
5 A" J! H8 ^5 R! H# c2 P& eWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, _2 s! [. {0 z0 U' `: N) p6 II would probably know how you feel
; R6 r# f! w# Y+ o7 g$ [Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' b! ?' o7 Z" n$ PI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; \3 h; O( t$ F" ~% s+ w8 hI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' W. U8 v% Z$ T) b' e8 TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
( }/ z3 }% G: d  K6 `' _' kWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 W' ]! W4 `7 s" y/ OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 t& ]' @& t! M, P: M( FEntrust my love within your heart
" o. S2 L/ a% gCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) b. r) f  R- I7 [5 y- C+ ~<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' \4 ~1 G1 }: M" ?! ?<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 t) E  [* B) S9 o! {<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 H  Q+ A# O! i1 I( j<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
0 R; H$ k$ _' Y( M* Y+ P. s<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, ~8 Y* b5 O* y" X* n<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, x  U0 a3 M, {" n<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; S. Z3 w" [; t' H/ p  k# J<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) g# W2 [- h( l5 h, G2 H2 v<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 c1 X. ~6 e* _6 U<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  l  F) a7 h% j, j5 S" }: j, g2 Q1 M<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; Y% S7 m& w5 T; l# J2 H7 |<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( d. C+ t" o6 `2 C  I<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( `4 W2 V  B6 z) z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 A# L8 H* b* @7 ~<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; o3 p3 @+ J) ^1 e! U+ G<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 z, i) ?' B, Q( Q7 Z  l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. O  R" C) C# w: X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: s! M8 d' V# v* `<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; O' Z6 }  o+ T2 o( F  K0 x<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. s6 F9 p# R( ~& H3 P% x2 O<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  X# m( O3 d2 `, t& ^, E0 m2 v<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 V0 R, `# z, X+ T# x<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 z5 K5 p0 Q6 w4 M5 M' w  G<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 K6 ?3 D& S$ h8 I* a<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 ?8 A8 j5 Y) V. l<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 i  [/ {- l, l! [3 @3 C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& q) m; J$ N2 A+ g  f0 a& ^- L<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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* ^8 o" ?1 i! J, f% \这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 T$ J$ Q% E) e( B) V<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>