【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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. S, J" F  p' [我另将歌词附在此。
8 I* l& @+ ^/ X1 d" ?) IThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 N! U# {5 V+ N5 ^That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# S* o( u& N7 ?2 \* q0 I( ^- {From the first moment we met,
8 T" h/ [0 s2 d5 k* qI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
: i  a3 I4 q4 J; V9 JBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, V- t/ @- l0 L; {5 x7 v* _I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
/ j6 p3 G3 H& _Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 @, }, Z* i3 h- gBut I never did
  G& e$ _; M  XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 M, P# [  u/ c& u3 }1 N+ aCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, w( V: w) A( q# xBut I never did
+ I& x" b" Y  Z7 I+ pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- [+ Q" J1 w; BIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% G2 k& }" o+ v; p- s- xI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- A# |; }- h  ^2 P- ^4 G( HEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
/ o4 `7 R$ A  W, zEntrust my love within your heart
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# ~' G. J' J# |[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 V8 d: w  s7 d+ a! d( m+ P! [<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% O0 {% U& W1 G9 V* G<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& X' A. j% s* n3 i) i<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" D" Z6 C  o1 g0 t<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; n, b# I' t- d& ]7 @* F  _<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 B: d$ W/ @/ b1 h; Y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
. g  \8 u  p/ Q- [8 v2 |<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; E4 u9 R& t" X1 k3 J6 a<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ w. O$ R  S+ [* U# P( B7 g<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 P' y% b+ ]' ]9 _6 F. M<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 }; G1 }+ o. S! H. q( Z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
4 `/ x+ X0 n( N<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ }, g5 |5 z4 _7 ]  t<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ b! a. l/ T9 N<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 p) n: V, n" z0 {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ {3 D6 X% o$ a, C( n2 C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* Z( d( a- E0 {4 Y& M" `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! R1 J% [/ K& {3 ^# C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( R- G6 [8 v8 u- M0 Q! h<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 Z2 Y4 q9 P& D  u) ~% v! \<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" r9 i! @: Z  {: J7 ?! W6 D1 U<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: D: ^0 X( z% Y& H  H<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
6 C3 U1 ^. z' F$ @<P>但我不会 </P>
4 S. K* [# P' a8 J7 I9 L. D<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( N# t1 d! C* h; O  p. Y% W<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; g- @% i; f3 l; `, D! G<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% }9 Q$ X- j- q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 A- j, l' O: ~4 K! X% P2 K* K<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ h; _& t# g6 l8 d3 \, q2 a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ K! a" O! O2 d! m# Y5 T; z8 g<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; Q: }/ y3 _! A# f6 `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 a' T8 p7 `/ V* P8 ~; ~<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ {3 K! {" J( u9 K<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

6 _; e5 G. R7 I这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" E8 \6 g0 R# a3 Z+ w* c! \/ y9 @<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& |+ Y) T# }2 `2 f<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>