【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- O+ J) a  d' HIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 I& M  A8 ~5 M' FI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
$ O6 K. }! X2 r* z* b; e7 ^$ E' h% AWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
! f" L" _' Y3 L( ^: g) P' m) vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( F3 G) I1 M5 `+ ]- Q  ^2 R& VIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! k" s* _" p8 w% y: O, N5 X6 _2 aI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
- o) T" i' V$ M0 P! GWhy is it so difficult to express?
, Q3 F0 H. Q. L  ]  w4 p) TI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
# P2 U) T& Y; ]' w" a3 p  VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 T1 u4 [) J/ J* T% K+ P- z/ v) n$ JIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  w4 w! R/ M  B6 ^Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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$ I) e8 `$ l3 g3 J+ i: e& _<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: H5 }& D7 w- s/ h5 O* D" q# B<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
5 K- W5 h' m0 c. k. @<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
: T$ t4 y0 @4 f8 _0 ]& J<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 T+ m: r) f% o9 ]<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
+ c# r+ A# J# Z: w; N<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 N* a! G4 L1 E( [/ A<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- g5 D& C" {1 N: F  U<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. m7 O9 ^: n  Y9 b/ k. w<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 @- [5 T' p. m<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- D% l  V, `' f<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ t. Y5 k1 o0 s$ g2 J<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) p- J5 g' Y8 b- s* @5 v$ O! a- D<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( O2 }, w/ Y9 ]7 d* G& k( b9 ?<P>我想说我爱你</P>
' d% G' P3 v! @7 s0 F& s<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 a/ _4 s# C5 w# k- @. ]<P>但我不会</P>
* E  O( l8 ~5 K<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" o9 A; _% P  x% C; Q( c) k2 Q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 v& O; h; W3 x' h: r) G<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 d" j0 R- `) t3 \8 Y* x<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% a$ \% E8 H% Q) E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# l$ C0 n# z- L1 v6 |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, N, b& G" [4 A& c( O0 r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 i& |+ W& `' n5 I0 G+ h<P>Love… just the word love </P>
' G! f2 t% B; o5 z7 t; Q3 G$ C<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& I1 g% ?9 ?' b! t3 M6 o<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
6 R" j0 e  b$ q: e, e# y- P<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 J# G- B- B! ]+ z4 l9 O, R4 I<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& ?: l- O9 O8 x  n<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
& [9 Q7 U. G+ N& b* D- L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( O8 F7 x4 p5 ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& @7 _0 o" Q! j: L$ ~* F& Q' H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' j0 i3 a; E  f- A3 e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 ~3 h6 B9 D+ ~) P0 F5 z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ P) O! F6 O" ]' P0 ?( F0 O9 g8 @# _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- L, y! h( Y2 R; [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! x" i/ N# \( c- z- U<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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# h- c4 v9 t( k4 r6 m2 _这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

, {; M4 Z8 s. {+ s# _这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( L! O; f# ^8 q8 u/ N<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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4 }: i8 d6 n+ y1 O<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>