【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) J$ U1 F0 v# ]  |! DThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
! m! y/ E) T9 D) P2 H% mFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
* m% I4 k) L* [& H( `4 d2 s# lWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ Y* I0 b4 E7 |3 ]3 {0 b2 d1 o6 MIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
* W8 `8 Q7 M8 }1 p4 F3 eLove… just the word love
( s3 ~* A) ^( {. ^9 yWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 p* |; d0 V% W. b0 i3 C7 h/ eBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 l; w, i$ u+ k# g2 J+ \) G3 u1 CIf today isn’t too late,
3 w2 \/ ]9 e1 ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' o+ z, m! ?' J- m, B* G8 r) k# \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% e& Y& C9 V2 w6 s* J/ F4 n; SCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
% }7 s1 N" r1 X* i& OLove… just the word love
5 t# A$ k/ U/ g# Z5 S% L: `Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( @. D/ K7 f9 pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 M8 C% a. j7 a( K6 g8 x/ V) \Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

* f8 w* G) Y( m- `) M* D0 X[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
$ s, d  v  U% K) I' n0 P<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 m# t8 e1 @. r* t& A7 M<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 a) F* y- \# W8 Z3 O  `<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 t" }, r- w+ P+ _# L<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ ?, c, a3 o/ G/ C. _  p<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 b9 e" ~+ ]# Q0 F7 ~3 r<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
5 j8 u) F" ]+ [( M<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 Q, P* [6 i7 E$ I" B7 `<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 O! Y4 R3 S% O4 j$ O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, h$ i$ `4 s7 O; _$ q- v$ B" c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- H) j' k4 j* A" {. O9 x: @/ r+ j<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" ?0 ~! t9 C% o) w! m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 O/ A: ~/ z# o! B5 k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' @2 w; X6 u7 Y6 C- Q' ~6 T<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 y5 K! J. x; f& g<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! d: @# D/ M5 [4 A. C+ _/ W<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
: G9 o- t2 G# M3 D" B) D% x<P>But I never did </P>
0 D+ m7 R2 r' B9 F) |( g<P>但我不会 </P>
1 \/ n  E, ~* U0 o<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
6 t: e, r  G. @5 W9 e' k<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: g' K5 q4 V5 j0 I; b$ o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 v# O2 F& D& s, g7 s<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# x/ c+ {( d% Z) d7 z3 v, F<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ E- B  N. c( d1 W% l! V5 p<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. e2 `3 h8 T  ^$ l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

3 ^  l' m# ]1 M5 Y( n  A* ]6 q( V这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 a( O8 b; h% o这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 G# u. |  Z- J<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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4 W  A8 S/ ~5 {. o& a! r5 M& I<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>