【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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0 ^: ?3 ?1 ^. ], `: \5 O' n1 l, M6 \& V我另将歌词附在此。
3 t/ r' p/ ]7 D/ `, J& T' s& ?! ZThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
1 T6 m) D& y9 R, |* o: u3 j1 lI already loved you with all my heart
- u* a! p' a, r2 w' }) TWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 Q4 d4 n) q1 E; g! r$ J: C4 uIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
! `0 U' l& [- ~0 P$ G3 e5 u* FLove… just the word love
. X% B. c: z! ^2 FWhy is it so difficult to express?
9 b) Z7 X; F6 h7 O- MI want to confess that I love you,
2 [( h3 x  z7 ?But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; ]5 S$ a5 N" L# @If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. n, h/ J$ @2 c6 K, d3 iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 M9 Q. B/ I; N9 b: b3 iEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
: o7 b) t0 v9 d5 NWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ Z& @+ G& m- N8 E! \But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ y  ^7 v9 j, p7 J, O5 [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 W, @5 B' J  [8 ACan I entrust it to you?
& V  x( i. W) q: x' Q" \% |Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
2 l6 K' L; H$ U* i9 H8 v2 Q5 OEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( s. H+ q. W2 H' ?3 V<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% V8 {" C, O6 }" Z3 _<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( Q' n6 m) [( ?3 s% z<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 A" J8 {: K! \' v* A7 m; T' q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ U9 C* t! Z0 M2 C' \  O<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# `6 a- K- |# M, z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( x' B# m! p$ w6 e& l$ E3 Q1 E4 d<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 }! y- O, H3 n  X<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 l% |, @2 b, I<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 C2 _* j( E& X# J<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' L/ e# x8 c: o/ g. d3 s$ r<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ N$ S: ?) v, P<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; W6 d& s7 z: H<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; ~% a5 }$ U- o# u5 W<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 Y3 o3 v3 s6 S# P# X' b7 C<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( c& d, |$ A- }<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 j# o/ I" c+ J<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 @6 Q' C8 W- |<P>我想说我爱你</P>
) x/ t; z% O  O<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: }7 h% Y5 A6 o& a6 [, t. q<P>但我不会</P>
8 k7 r. {# G% E2 m9 Y; ^<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 s; w* c$ w  y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 V, L" \: M, L7 v" E4 j' C/ D% `. w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& P, }' J$ B3 D1 c- N6 j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. L+ l) ~. \1 v3 l; c<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% Z$ R7 A5 `. H+ _& w9 k<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
3 I8 P/ v) ^4 h8 ^<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* D7 l/ N7 [/ i- m$ F. R<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ K; G" s+ H% [6 z+ b$ A<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ y' v8 r, B6 W* I5 ~<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 K0 H2 |+ n' d, T2 a' M& F6 q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 J, \5 }/ [! Q% t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: t+ {& h8 E/ Z/ ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

  ?0 q0 z9 [( c: W6 {& `: E8 f7 `这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- a1 `" z( [2 m2 }! R/ _/ M<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>