【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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- ~' L6 R/ Z3 V; m+ A! B. R* s我另将歌词附在此。
' R' J' f, p) U2 @9 Q& Y3 ?4 iThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) l  x7 |) X; |' l& t& rThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 O1 l6 D) L4 _+ BFrom the first moment we met,
+ z* B6 S, o5 ~/ @( l! g1 Z" P$ qI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 ^6 L5 b% L! u* nIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 v: X5 i; l  i6 G0 ]0 dBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( D$ q" B( r2 [6 P5 qIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! h4 M. V0 W! c% n( nCan I entrust it to you?
5 p5 U0 p" i4 j. P1 n9 `4 DEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% n7 L4 C2 D2 d4 VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- C1 V6 a; d. l<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 q  {- j9 ^, E  \* ]: F+ t<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 h% X) o+ L( S% {9 v. A) q<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 x2 P( a. B7 k/ u# m<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 s) x$ O# P. p4 r<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 ^# m: \. F* T$ L1 R9 s<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 F+ g- d  |: o- B0 I# _1 L* [" C<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  F! w" \5 _2 Y6 f# J% R<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 d2 k6 Y7 Z  u- W4 T3 D3 d<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
* t6 m; }/ a4 T  m) J' g; n<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" l3 ]) e/ L% D; j<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 `; K/ _; l/ N<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
& N5 i; H/ ~/ y1 L& {6 v/ R9 r. I<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: j$ z+ t7 y) {<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( C2 X" ]7 H% P  e+ p<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ \' |0 R& i- {3 y<P>但我不会</P>
9 K4 x2 p! i( E% x% X$ ]8 N<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ o, g! ^6 }6 u% i- R0 f<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& I, y" ?/ M2 p$ _* F! V7 g& b( a/ G<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 t* y' W% r: s6 F9 t& J' J: b. @<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) G0 O) B. ~9 w$ S<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( _5 K! \& q% z' p/ Y" S' B<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 {% V8 C! x5 V: C/ y1 R6 X3 |<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 P% U8 }  K6 o+ \3 x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 P  T3 ?8 _' N<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. y9 \5 D% H2 j# t8 _- E<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- V! j% w6 Z" @2 L<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# ^( d/ x; r/ ?' \/ U/ G<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
! Z& v5 F: E2 u- F% h  q" D( _<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! }. l% v$ H1 t7 X<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
- `  H) d8 R) |) }5 z( \' F<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 v4 R0 e9 G6 A3 y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ S  C5 O$ }0 J5 J4 U4 R. q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 @/ _) R' m7 m- s, c6 K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- C* N* r4 \" F7 g; ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" W. x( \* k$ _- F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# }$ D& |+ G9 `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% A; m1 u5 O4 [$ `) b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; T1 s9 C0 _* h  C% {6 F% H: i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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- k; [8 q; c! {! l( W这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ m) c, ~/ b! O2 V- n- O<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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( ?6 [+ E# }3 S& ]# ]<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>