【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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7 H. u0 ?* ~% J; u+ H我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# _/ {9 E5 c' t+ QFrom the first moment we met,
5 f- }$ D, f/ PI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
# k% r" ]1 Z3 h: K2 NBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 S& E$ k- }, G8 L* p1 b( s  M# CI would probably know how you feel
" [6 E1 |/ B, E9 F8 e1 l, I2 _! MLove… just the word love
3 `5 Q6 E. ?0 I+ X8 m7 y6 ?Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 H9 h' M) d$ a  ?5 dBut I never did
+ d- \' U  I" w! ?; v& pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" k4 G/ P" b) U5 l8 MIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  P1 i; v+ e- Z& Q( D9 iCan I entrust it to you?
# i+ C5 z1 p. ?Entrust my love within your heart
" `$ c2 @- L3 Z# v8 H7 P) j6 vLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! z8 G  h- r4 F" z" fI want to confess that I love you,
& {9 {# U: Y+ OBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
0 l/ T* b. Y7 g, g8 cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; ^$ h1 J" H, d  B4 D, _4 k1 DI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 U; w7 Z0 S  {8 D) ?, \7 e) dCan I entrust it to you?
3 S, I$ O5 _( pEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, a+ E' o/ C0 e. [5 v8 n8 F6 q<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
$ V) q5 G6 K6 [! G" B3 i2 S! Z<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* j- M. u! ~7 }. k0 f<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
) r8 O" R! v) N, X# s<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( t) h7 C$ X  u' g9 E+ p, S! B0 _<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: ?, w% a5 r! ^: D8 M3 Z<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
! X2 l/ a& P4 j! s+ I' B0 Q) {<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 H- z; p6 T" M: R<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) r( y5 S$ u; s5 l% i9 M$ a* m6 H<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 o; J( d* [/ r<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
, }8 d5 q+ R* P* W<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
, `: H1 Q9 S" n<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, g8 a* m' [. d$ O- {<P>但我不会</P>
! v3 H+ q/ K- m<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 t5 ^5 F. }  H, k9 P4 r; O<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 z' |0 z9 C/ v: @( n( D<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* B5 k/ g4 M) Z& }$ W7 ]: q0 g- o& D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! a0 _7 M$ ?4 V1 ^- c& {1 k7 ~& Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 y( _0 v, |( |2 e5 V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ P8 o* W# e3 A; p- b# ]% {- P<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 }  u+ ?% q8 K" u! a% M; g<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; V' ^/ f. c( u* K7 F0 j& J, [<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
5 j6 F: I! Y& D/ ]* y3 _0 r/ u<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
7 M) {* M/ J5 m<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 Z! t7 I: u6 P) B<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% M4 F* F/ t: M. D- w. I7 w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ y% X  M7 L1 U+ `. p: i: l8 x* n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 a9 g' l3 m6 s<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  p! W' i  m& o1 V- g# W6 R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ L+ C+ t# j  `7 q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

# I1 o. |4 \+ l. Q* P9 ^3 N 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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1 r7 K+ Z2 U, h8 e$ |这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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8 f" ?/ E+ x6 f# n" I这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ X9 W3 }  a! D# V+ J; Y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 ?! U" a% e" J% @7 T7 [<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>