【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
) W6 F6 @$ M2 s, M9 xThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, u, O6 |( v( |9 I! e1 r$ b( lThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
( p; C+ E4 i9 {4 q  B/ U: q9 uI already loved you with all my heart
4 h( w% H( f2 i) \We meet and talk everyday,
- Y. L4 z. B+ @: G% o  iBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% |  w5 k$ T/ F, P! aIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
5 L2 t; ]) v# w/ u+ YLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 X; m, _. j& G% n. JCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. O$ L0 F3 r4 iLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' v; U8 _  r$ n0 AI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: `( i* {1 W" M0 ]One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
' h6 n/ X0 y0 v9 R! d% [$ ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 [! u0 R2 |6 w( ?$ HCan I entrust it to you?
2 ~0 l+ |, ^7 i8 \) Q- ?2 ?" {Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
' V! t1 L  n' C/ f2 V% AEntrust my love within your heart

. B6 z# w) m# k, }* n[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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1 ^( n+ H& T( B" V<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ `# |) a$ R$ `9 c+ I' C/ U5 m8 T# A<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
$ B* z) e7 k7 b2 H<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
: [5 b5 N0 T! N" l8 n) ]8 Y<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 q- W/ U; I) p- u3 X; H; R7 \" }<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, L4 ?8 A: N8 e<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 t9 Q: G2 ?9 e# w) ]4 E. x<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, z3 l8 g7 Z2 X; t<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 U5 Q$ K8 x% v<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) m- ^: v( z. ^- u$ G* B<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 o' r. ^0 @5 i* b<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 c  M) e8 a% q  i  r3 _<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ g" D8 K5 m7 a0 ^$ F<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ a$ _' |1 |! Z6 d  b$ B, o3 j& L<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ }1 O# R# g( l<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. H# d: V" g" K: ^<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 X$ {, ~) t! C4 ]' m6 Z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 K! D. [) V* @0 P: q6 x<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, d( h( Z# q9 A: X4 ^# c  s9 I<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( c, x& N5 y3 r* ]4 d6 e' k0 i9 ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 x/ k; t* d' G1 c9 n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% c! y: B  k: q! q+ [+ u  M<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 q+ W& D" K. q; z' Q5 P7 v$ r1 Y) [" w<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 K8 G1 f4 L9 L( R6 o<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ g# s, S6 w; H+ ^% Y<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
& g) |( o/ n+ y: }% I<P>But I never did </P>
2 i4 V9 u" ^5 V7 Q  ]1 @' Q4 B) b- L<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! b5 `3 T' z# S4 d( |; Z( z7 ~<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& m( }& e7 J7 H' w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
( D) [# v5 C4 O<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
( W7 @2 h# a0 X4 ?) G$ i<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! M8 B5 k" s4 s1 y' f) M# @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ t% b  U0 W! m8 y: R<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- Q6 J, w, r/ m# ~7 d  |" T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 X! R& N$ u8 R9 }: H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  k5 w% g2 `. d  @& I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 t$ q# J8 I) L6 u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! v5 O; q9 p; I- ?) P<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
: x9 x6 b/ {* B<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>