【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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2 g7 \. Q0 f0 ^% N+ M* [9 W6 S' i我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' Y) @, k4 _; ~3 P: pFrom the first moment we met,
9 h0 h  ~5 j$ k# }' x% ~+ l7 BI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
) j' U, F; h: H7 GBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' m$ D; e* Q2 x1 wI would probably know how you feel
0 j6 b3 _, \: I# G9 I, v8 XLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" W0 D+ l& N/ _$ c1 T1 GI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* g! O& c, S& u* ]% ]5 LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 L, f! W4 O/ W' dIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; j! _. I8 @& t+ p# k5 i/ c- a" D, |Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
2 J' s2 S9 _" `7 @5 xWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 A: S$ i3 d5 IOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
! p9 a0 @- g, F# S) H2 ]I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 A: r3 `; }7 P' O$ \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: i3 Z" M& S  B6 \Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 o! u' s4 M- L7 BCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

( S+ Z1 ?$ Q% y: w: ?. `  v[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; v. E; Z9 h7 |& ^7 M: Y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
- i( o2 _) u4 Y* G<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 c7 Y& i0 F& z2 `& Z8 x- e<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 k' U6 s: F9 {' e# @% b/ Q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
) y; O  d, n# t9 N9 a% H7 c9 L<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ A& l2 i+ _4 r2 ~7 q$ a6 S<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# U+ [! q- l+ y7 e<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* h* N4 l# D$ u+ s+ G  y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
8 v# C& g. j  t* o; F<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ C  ]# t7 s. r1 m) m6 e9 t+ x2 G<P>但我不会</P>
. |8 p& [; o' z% I<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
. \6 B" w  h" C1 _2 E' B6 ~& k  @4 m<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: B; ]* J' j  ^" y; P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) t6 A1 |+ Z7 x0 \" L  M: o<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ J( e$ I& P; P" i, ^$ \) Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. k& r: c* z! A/ k2 W7 b- f+ E% L; g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. f+ L0 y' p- j5 Y6 Q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* x; j! ?" j( t0 G4 r9 E; w<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
; J4 M- U* ]# @) ?9 a; R0 J1 B9 v<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- }+ S  a# c* U- `2 F<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: D4 O' r( b6 ~7 p3 \! U+ R2 f' Q<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 s- _& Y/ J  L, \8 g<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 R- Y, i# `9 l: |  W' f" L<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 l6 I7 y8 F6 e<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 c; }/ d1 R" s) }0 r8 i! C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ h0 }. B& j* ^" S, c) ~<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( M% b/ g4 M, w$ Q; a2 {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 Z  U# h* |/ g0 i/ l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# p9 X9 N2 B& Z8 n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 t/ T. n" ~' a1 w4 e/ C8 W) }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ d# ?# U5 V. W0 L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. i/ q. ~7 c& R7 S6 c4 D4 m& ^2 e<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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( i! d, F% y4 i9 y4 j7 @<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>