【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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% X. W, t) O' U我另将歌词附在此。
7 g% Y! H/ j1 r$ o# s) f, A/ ^The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* |. M4 i. U9 s! ?8 A2 {That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" x, b! J: U6 I, i2 Q& jFrom the first moment we met,
! Z# b% {! U( p1 u  h! YI already loved you with all my heart
% L; T$ q1 z( `7 i% V# u9 [' W8 zWe meet and talk everyday,
+ ~3 C' v  j2 v) ~2 D( I9 mBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  ?- \1 J0 j1 V- pI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
' |$ n+ p6 _5 vWhy is it so difficult to express?
, A% j( K! a1 ]  D& N' z" ]I want to confess that I love you,
4 @. W7 z/ w0 S5 X' Y$ \# @7 j" pBut I never did
+ g/ E8 Q3 H$ I/ s- ?/ AOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ C- r/ s1 B& DIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 _0 |# H, }8 i1 z3 eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 M7 V% B% s8 p0 `$ d9 {Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 p6 G" I% O  P; W8 e: d; RLove… just the word love
2 L2 E" t/ ]5 A. iWhy is it so difficult to express?
( A% s& C6 Z; b5 g  Q- g8 jI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 I2 Z* m5 Y1 VIf today isn’t too late,
; e, ]* ?* y0 |. m& z6 D" EI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ Q- h6 o& S$ H8 |I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ G7 n5 {+ F) |2 B: J$ vCan I entrust it to you?
' o* L4 V0 T- H0 K7 |8 B# L. ?$ {Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  O- N- h' F- d5 D  Q9 G<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
9 d  R& L7 C* V. i) k1 T<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
+ ]. ]9 G# B5 E7 x<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ R/ M' e5 O# N5 M# O* X9 Z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
4 C5 ?# p# s7 \% m<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! f. ~+ |# l; ~+ R; A8 f5 R5 m% n<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 a) k8 L9 ~$ a( V, z+ S<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; ^: }  f, g% [/ \6 N<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( O% z4 A; f- G7 W5 [<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. f7 ~; E* D* z; J' L! a. r<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
8 e0 j& F. _# s% N% K<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 w, t6 `2 b# Y8 v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  X5 \7 y* s, H' c, j: b1 A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  ]; c$ ]" P/ S" R3 N  l<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ K8 [) @6 t3 j  X. \! m<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 u, p0 ^; J7 P- y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% i& o- l/ @# t: [6 v: Q% b<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 |- c- O* m2 z+ R2 B; j. K<P>But I never did </P>
2 F7 ?, L" o# u5 e8 r<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' E0 l$ W; G# h  c" P2 T5 g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 n+ r& v/ y5 X7 g8 B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 Y7 X" Y, Y! M0 O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 R; X9 f( n1 l" U. x- m<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 k$ _, D/ S$ X6 R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: e* h6 O8 Y& J: B' `( i; x/ Q<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
, g/ d  Z8 ~5 z4 J<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

5 A2 y* l3 e. X* o这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

8 D8 V% z( ~( X4 U这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- ^4 l2 c  i7 w<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>