【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
+ M* F) L0 m4 C/ PI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
- }2 i3 h  Q  c* H  F' ~$ T( H9 a3 HBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" S. R. J* y7 j6 a% j1 jIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# d/ ~3 a4 G) ]+ `& n! W2 KI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 M3 G+ u6 a1 i. Z6 W8 m( ABut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% R  p7 Z, t% IIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 H: _' @$ ?5 A1 [9 LI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. R0 |- i# C- @% F6 R( nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 G# D4 ~4 k/ p- f* n, cIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 p8 {$ v1 \/ I* c0 n5 K+ HEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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1 }' f! g) V+ n( D) q4 h9 }. N. y& T<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, j" w4 e* C( R. F<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 W/ s" l4 n3 o; `3 `; N<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ [0 r9 C( L$ t9 H  y0 c8 V<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
- \7 G0 D0 F0 T6 q6 |6 @5 A# ^$ C, _<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
7 G+ }3 N+ ^+ P0 m, [$ H<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( T: I2 ~% w7 }, j" S$ _<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, v: u/ x! {2 n; V- `$ j<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
) Q0 a( V0 o- X6 \. w2 F+ T<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 |- A& _) n8 `( q+ W0 z7 f<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) k: r1 S1 T- U4 U+ y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" U- `) \. J) }$ O4 c- o<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 a& k3 M3 J. f<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* @& `, g4 h  P" ~3 w. M- {<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
; I8 R- `7 P( O* ^<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 X( s2 K8 n2 I) ]% d- T$ Z/ ?5 M<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ m5 }! p8 l1 n; l3 ?<P>但我不会</P>
& b6 [0 ]  P7 S$ F: O8 g0 X: {<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 V: ?4 k9 |, A/ Y9 @, D8 X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
% A, x% \8 g0 g3 R0 X6 x% G7 T<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' L6 p  x: d# ~* q- u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 K* l3 ^( s8 j' n. m9 M<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! S& F5 F3 w! k# T4 O4 H' v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ i" K1 Z: k+ b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& G2 n9 z1 p% j/ x  {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; m. u& b9 Y. m" j5 G& M% i<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, G  e2 `8 f5 Y/ m. i/ _# K<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ Q0 ]. _: a6 g  _& G, y$ T<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
6 R; R/ p- p+ K) k- J0 ?<P>但我不会 </P>
' Z) _% U- r+ a5 B<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* |+ i) a7 v, b+ I* E/ f3 ~  [<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% Y: h" h$ n# t1 j' j: s8 ~( X9 U<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 |% y- l8 ?- ^. L2 A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 n  P' K7 k, R  {  t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 V0 h! f, \" s. _  Y& U1 U! h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( s- |, _2 Q8 h1 R$ S$ h<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 A" X# z" w+ {, U; R/ b<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

2 |$ W7 G6 K1 x5 O' m# U6 y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" p  r' @' M* @<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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8 k2 V# I. ~* e) D& c; Z4 {7 `* \<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>