【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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" E+ ]- T9 n" s) [7 \: M我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( }! [$ R) P; lFrom the first moment we met,
& Z8 c/ Q. x9 b! ZI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
4 }7 f. |! W7 O3 J' {' a% jBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* ]4 V, l$ p8 g* S6 j1 KI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
% N+ b* l+ F. j9 Y5 y! W) hWhy is it so difficult to express?
4 Z1 {# Y4 ]( `9 GI want to confess that I love you,
6 `) v- z0 F4 J5 i, yBut I never did
. {* e7 B& n1 w" S1 `One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* j4 w9 P9 z* Y7 e0 h) yIf today isn’t too late,
8 [/ U. N& l! J1 d9 D& @I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 L& f3 Y- s9 s* K( p9 [6 q$ E4 z# DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 C! H. c0 @1 E: ^, d* z( g4 sLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; j7 v# b" w4 R5 y, J  a5 o& `# [I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 \2 C- m3 E: u! LIf today isn’t too late,
9 y6 o4 T' H8 X7 n% uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 J0 _6 ?2 p% y- EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. I& w5 J3 ?4 F6 u6 B1 e2 C! FCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 K0 {$ N- ?5 K, s1 {2 D  u<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
+ T; @1 R* s9 r. u<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# ]" M0 s2 c+ O4 u<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  d5 f1 \2 D& O* c- t" `- y<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ {3 E! _; i  p& u# }<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( A* h- z& b2 D<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 B* S4 v6 E9 P( ~) v& M<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
" C6 W/ o, q* n/ P<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 s; U  R; C/ A4 D<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 ^. z9 m  }% l<P>我想说我爱你</P>
( y0 C; m, R- \( r<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
4 X( u- W  j- J5 U) L. X) j9 |<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) u- d. J: Y; p( r+ m3 h<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ {: z4 \( o% U- s8 n- \# J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 \( v  r- w4 K6 e( }+ y! e<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 a% B  Z/ W) u- T<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ f: m$ P, m5 A# T6 b$ w9 p1 q9 }<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) R; J2 G  e8 y: `( W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% O& o' X+ D7 Z1 e- Z5 R8 G5 h  k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" r( l8 ?$ A; Z$ f<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. t2 _' U' s$ |1 z$ Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. d" d' M+ Z# |; n$ v<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: i2 o8 ]2 \* e0 ~+ |7 T  P<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ h, a  d# p2 x" J; p<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ e) B) H/ @+ t. w<P>But I never did </P>
% O/ L' I5 E0 L/ b2 L" S+ v1 H<P>但我不会 </P>
; X. A/ X7 O6 }, `3 ]2 \<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) u- ~) V* y0 E<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; ?9 k: F; @3 S4 t<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( O6 R8 W5 a# c+ G7 q  [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! W: R4 b( R! [0 w' l( W9 t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) b  S6 A6 u0 c) J# Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ S( a3 \2 J0 ?* `- U; M9 T/ O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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3 D- I* u) v0 c" J$ y/ ]$ a+ `这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* W" c) N0 C% e: ?, H<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& q% S) j  w. L* |5 s<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>