【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, O$ c+ s; _8 H. }* A+ O8 M: tFrom the first moment we met,
) |  d) T4 j, T' ?/ q: KI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
5 f) \9 h4 L8 d' G' ]But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- Q7 f! B( {$ ?. XI would probably know how you feel
  {) Y2 e1 _* w8 yLove… just the word love
" y8 V2 L3 ~6 N( z( |3 v! kWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 k% q4 ?$ q" }I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 l; ~$ B8 _! NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 r1 D$ |" \3 }3 d: hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# e( E' ]4 a$ ~. F: y6 J" |Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, {  Z; f6 T, z" ]3 n6 C) E# IBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
  l2 h' [' @1 I2 b7 s: AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; N8 m5 y" C* _/ T/ `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" t' O7 x6 [4 J, ^2 ?Entrust my love within your heart
* ?# z$ c& z1 v$ D7 E, c) KCan I entrust it to you?
: c8 C/ b) H& [# XEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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7 j/ q# j; v) i' H/ [% T) X/ ?<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
5 Q: K0 {0 J' C8 c8 }1 g- U<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 y: g/ T) w% Z4 P+ S& z# u- u% ?<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
- b) N: P! I& C/ v! k, v<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 u9 J$ ~7 n% ^& u! V<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
( u2 Q& k+ w  q, A( B6 r2 p<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( H' K) q& V4 Z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ b, w9 h4 b8 @0 f6 ?<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 C4 M2 D3 d, @: s8 r8 W<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- F4 E1 V/ X' l' c5 {9 y% W4 X<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
* n9 K- t: \# F<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) {: l1 j! j4 T; X<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 W+ ^$ ~2 n( E<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
, O6 @; g; h1 F" Y$ N9 n. l5 }<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
3 ~4 `; @, ~5 a! J. c- B# v' M* b<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* A1 Y- X( E7 g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) H% _- k; J- G9 u<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ ?% d- i- [' o3 x. F8 x- e4 p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  c6 a* K; u4 R. J6 N9 X<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ F' Q8 F5 I% a' k* E" Q; T: ]! Z, _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" p* Y( S! T, `& k7 A<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 V% x/ R2 K8 t+ l<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
$ h- o5 \2 N9 c# T<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ C) Q1 r3 a0 C5 \5 s! M- _: f<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ \) R) f2 Y% v<P>But I never did </P>
# y" P. b; m5 G" Y" ?- R<P>但我不会 </P>
8 }) q6 h1 G" T<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 d4 H5 Y: O( Z( u7 {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 [1 F& D3 w6 ~/ r: a+ c<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 p8 }. O$ {. \$ o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) U* i9 j7 F. W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  m% B, Y. j# N% ^5 w7 F2 {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! x9 ]. s6 U) V( O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

; O; ?: ~7 f& V+ \0 O 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% ]( c- s; W/ e" V" R; P* N: ~这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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2 Q5 L* u1 O& Y0 p<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>