【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
9 v0 r1 E8 m. Y: C1 D2 e7 ]  w+ H0 SThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
  q! M, D% z0 i' I' z+ s7 n4 VThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; _* W, D5 q) R' hFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
8 e/ Z; X) Q& I. P6 I' @/ \We meet and talk everyday,
9 Y$ X1 l5 E# p! wBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 x. y: f; {5 a7 y$ LI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 G9 m2 L2 ~( ^' QI want to confess that I love you,
. S1 `- _4 X: ^! P1 i' T5 F% gBut I never did
5 v$ T8 N3 N' T& g7 ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 @7 ~1 \4 B  `4 k7 `1 VIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 C% S& C& @, s7 }2 b1 K, xI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 M% u( i+ E% a; A$ vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: O; n/ I$ J0 ]* k" i& y  ^, gOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" d& G+ I' T+ M% Y! uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 `6 C: {7 B( ?% }0 K8 b' ^+ \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- U, Q6 _- |5 c  K" |# p& QEntrust my love within your heart
  D& m3 p4 A4 N8 ]. X0 {# nCan I entrust it to you?
8 g; X3 F) k; u% lEntrust my love within your heart

0 o  q) g1 a+ E7 @[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ I& _$ b8 p. `; _) ]<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 S: F- w" T! V2 E0 u: N& O' P<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' B0 O, E& `) G<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 U6 {% L. J# C5 ]0 }<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% v/ h( ]9 a' J- [9 f<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* G9 X2 i. ?9 e5 a<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
9 `# X( y3 p9 a8 A. r* ?! l$ ?<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( i$ s( X; V5 Y0 Q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: }( w3 K( I& r<P>但我不会</P>
' {4 \+ P7 d- R1 B: m) y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& H( |. v' R) |2 ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( c8 A+ E) N# D- G2 r<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( r. G5 E$ w* C/ _0 O, b9 o- L4 I. d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# D" B  N% g1 I; s/ \# m5 f<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( P- y. Q2 o- H- A5 Q! R8 f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% Q5 t5 l2 v7 P% {7 C( I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 @" `6 M7 O& O" I# M1 r: V* l9 W6 ], o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# j' ^, C. u( r/ Y4 U) b1 ]<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* A4 L8 i2 d, j% A$ U<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' ]$ Z' H% l# Y! U; L5 d- _<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! d- E# V6 r" l2 {2 x( r7 L! a" ?/ ]<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
9 }$ L9 R* I  A<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 }: L# e# n1 _. D8 Z6 p5 {<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 C! i# F/ o* O# |- d; h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! O* V; k7 y' `$ Y0 m, b<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 W8 r1 }5 s5 [& U+ G+ B9 C<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  H4 Y. |9 ]8 v0 l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 g# i- V: x! t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 d- R2 ^: b' P' C, O$ G. k3 R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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+ {( {6 o: A+ D) ^这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% M& M8 f8 ~5 o- g9 u. u" Z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>