【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
+ k  s' C& f  A8 aThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( x. d* I( W# S- H8 Y. g/ M* WThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
7 n8 \5 N5 ~$ b4 T! s( B: PWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
: }4 w! o2 A1 sLove… just the word love
2 ~4 J1 }+ t: o7 E6 |% eWhy is it so difficult to express?
: }' w9 `8 u5 T9 i' H9 `I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 z$ w5 k' X# m3 Y" D6 e6 TIf today isn’t too late,
2 ]1 B/ v' {4 g( ~# oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" J' v; M* f2 g6 W3 a# j* bI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
% c# g4 C, Z( {% u) Y9 L+ L# h, Y8 P, ?Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
4 L  w9 ^; o, p, N) v8 NWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 a7 ]0 i; }  ]% F6 b& D% O6 @0 ?' ^Entrust my love within your heart
* x; c5 W8 n3 i- G0 M" hCan I entrust it to you?
  i; M! r6 s, c  VEntrust my love within your heart
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7 `( G, h3 E/ Q0 M4 y6 V% X[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) p. i1 d9 o" j<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
1 ~) w& S; \$ S& x( s* J<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
# s9 r9 u! i  P$ ^# U<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, F: G. r6 K" F$ A7 q& I# Z<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' B1 A  f( l  K8 d) Z8 p- E<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 S/ L2 \' y' R7 P0 N+ e2 ]* K<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- W, T2 R9 s: c<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
0 B) N7 ~( f! S; c3 I* P7 j! E<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, _* X# o2 L* v0 g- P/ O$ J<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 g6 O" \% L9 u/ y3 i; ?3 x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 N9 T* P1 z4 o- T( D" ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 @% y2 v. C4 K4 @8 m  Y0 |9 \<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, c! q" l8 C. Z" g<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" Y6 ?& x- w: X) @<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 R, ~" o. v) n) j% {2 G<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 a6 U" o) r# b) }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# n. t* d# x0 N2 k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 l% C7 ^( W- E" ]0 [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. e8 |+ p. D6 Y  [% y: m<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
) r) \! l5 j) d% e, a1 q<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ m3 u0 l( r) W1 a% r 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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- b# [) t/ S' a6 }) q3 Y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; \% v; a* ~" x( N# F<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 V9 b9 Q# c0 u/ U8 K<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>