【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
& c- H8 k  A$ W/ v8 A9 k. pI already loved you with all my heart
5 Y( C- S7 _2 w; ~5 MWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 h9 m6 \9 t, F( j& qIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
# N. C0 t; h. P" l  BLove… just the word love
& x5 T% A4 Y5 f! g4 mWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ P3 a& X" G# @I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& s$ B2 p, q& vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
' C/ O; |. n5 m2 _5 T' `I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' W7 x. C* u. J( h) pCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 R# ], {  H6 o: d) L: i( zLove… just the word love
! d, @- m' h' X0 b. j# k/ xWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 [+ D6 q+ ?) zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
4 l* I; T4 @. ]4 R2 L8 t6 EEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- Q5 S) k! e, u  G. k<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 C! y2 [% r3 h3 n6 [9 y<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ T: N8 i% x! D( G4 z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ E2 r+ Z! n1 h( \<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
" V3 E% b- b/ i# u<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 d9 `6 ]) l% e# f: I<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) z' L3 N& q8 B" k& k" L9 O<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ l4 \& o+ G7 z/ _5 e! {<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* z8 N) k3 D& A4 A& N<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' b5 B1 [  p& J% y* _2 p<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 S- v5 q) K. a5 w<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- c1 v% n% m) D* b& i<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) b" d0 U5 p( n* ]$ H6 s: J<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ ]; ^) ?' O9 L, l5 E<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 r! v5 D$ c4 E. L( u& l, W, V<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ P2 Q7 X; C* i8 s1 Z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
; U$ w2 ^% u5 o$ F8 s: ~: i; Y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
9 i2 j- G" i* P% H" S2 Y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( j* \3 l1 ]0 e0 R! ~) V<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. `, C% A* F2 z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: [9 e0 _6 T) U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# l0 O7 M- {. Y. F9 m0 ?<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 ]; E% H. n8 l7 ~' k6 q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# N: L8 C" f3 C4 M# b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) P6 Q( ~6 M9 p2 }1 }! w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 A* p# k/ z7 H/ x- K. ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
# i- l9 p2 `: h0 p+ L, A: h1 x<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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% c, S+ ]0 m! R8 Z' T<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>