【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
1 r# ^; u" p. x: ]From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ O/ t' k9 H% }* Z+ X: l3 I1 y3 g+ i! tI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' j+ o; L/ N1 nIf today isn’t too late,
6 |( S3 \7 b3 S* ]I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: q5 y6 L, X( _4 [% @9 ~0 [7 rLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
# ?1 t7 `; y0 v5 z- q  X7 ]But I never did
% n7 {2 Y% V5 g2 I" N$ S; [' mOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. m! ^# @7 [( L0 h  {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" D9 n  m# l8 X( H" }& ICan I entrust it to you?
8 ?/ n% D1 G  L% X1 S( x) q% _Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
: r' n$ E, G! ]! ^+ w9 d; _Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

) s8 ^" o$ t* s5 a3 G<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ U, F$ Y% F- ^/ r! t<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* @, F7 y; z8 \5 Y0 a3 p<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- ?$ \5 g2 Z; ^/ ?3 b) g" ], @) t<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 m1 V: k" b% a" j<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  Q& h  O4 p: d: J- r; X<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# N2 [  @8 i5 \  J4 [<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. w; j1 s% @4 t7 D) ?2 _" b<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, z- c% R' c0 @2 j' y4 s6 `<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ i! y! e( `4 u6 f- h" T<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* h9 q% U: R5 {* Q9 A$ i; M2 K<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
1 X5 t. f" F* c$ u( v; I<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 [. B. e. a+ r! Q  f4 Y<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 T: c  a: g9 a% {# E3 h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 Q3 ~' J; ?/ q( b8 t<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* M5 ^4 J$ @4 T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% O4 ~( K/ A! u# f: S<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  a* a+ F$ G2 E$ d- {5 _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( q- f; t5 k9 T" y* c7 b<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, U/ T! Q# b! q$ L<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
" ~9 p! k! r9 i3 p* ^5 U: |<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
0 [) X6 Q) v+ Y+ h- F/ d<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ K' t0 q2 c, |$ _<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 {0 h7 e8 g/ x* i( Q3 m<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( r5 C% ^2 x) G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 ^5 C5 l5 X2 o5 }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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1 j# v2 ~! i; g3 V9 h) C 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% }* S/ F3 r9 i  Z/ n这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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) p% x4 j7 v  @- F# g+ m* {" m<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>