【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 x& o1 R: J, L6 l, H, K; R) |That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
4 Y' Z2 U. W& n9 K8 b, u9 hI already loved you with all my heart
. K' d" h6 t% i" \3 ~7 ?) OWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
( ^2 o( H+ @% ?If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
4 ?- d1 u2 K" A  _+ GWhy is it so difficult to express?
% e8 A0 Z8 s# c3 b* xI want to confess that I love you,
; R/ ~% H- U  Y) [. kBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* J3 S5 M& l# V( ZCan I entrust it to you?
/ I; ?5 t: Z+ ]5 ^4 f, e5 cEntrust my love within your heart
1 B% G" N& |; I" ~Love… just the word love
# a1 X( T$ ]: FWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 f3 ~! t5 l+ q8 t% W8 \; C6 lBut I never did
+ _! |  q  ^* D* yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ k- R* m- ], {1 I7 s4 \" cIf today isn’t too late,
+ f/ v8 m; M. V0 l0 R( NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; j, K6 G) ~( G) P1 `0 nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 w; a8 t& @+ P7 E7 P3 c5 \Can I entrust it to you?
% K: q0 y% B2 U5 aEntrust my love within your heart
- J1 N! {( l& F# `. W. _. KCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 Z$ }& i0 _, y/ m" i- q<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 ?% M2 T$ X( e) |  c<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% h- {/ T! i6 Z5 \: g" W6 u: @<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: J  ?9 u+ ]' h  o  N8 r0 x<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 m' s+ F5 F% d7 R; y<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% k$ a. B+ C7 T5 s<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 W& N7 ]- A+ d: u<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 _4 @$ l) y% I( @& \0 a$ t<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% |1 C7 `# g: @7 n" [! V<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 \' J, A% s1 r<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
- ^4 _6 U  Q& W6 w: B7 u<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ I- k- F; k7 K+ P<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 D+ v$ f% b$ K<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 J2 R; p# G: f8 l: Q& m; u<P>但我不会</P>
( w# [" x& r& o/ s$ Y1 S<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- b5 s( j2 p( y8 v<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; v# s: C# E' j! a, V# Z) [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# H6 U) `" O6 P2 n4 b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! L9 S1 [$ U+ O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, m8 Y. W0 e' I; O: n4 T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 T- [/ a0 _( H<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, T- u1 c  `& a1 T. Q+ ~<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ |( L* I) T' e9 _<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- e( v! P0 f  q& x$ K8 W3 p1 ^5 x<P>But I never did </P>
+ g/ ^& ?  H$ i0 C: b0 @) F<P>但我不会 </P>
+ `: E1 w8 U' A! O<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ M/ n% ~1 J  t. x4 j7 d, h5 X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* Q9 }; ]) Q7 s/ s. Y* a. [% P7 R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' M% w' w: _2 E% c2 w& x/ d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 p; T& J+ H" Z3 r9 i9 e& z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 V5 J3 K3 Z4 H7 F- s. j<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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6 }$ w: k7 Q4 g3 |: B5 z/ P) h这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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( b( `' d: w3 M<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>