【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ `7 i- `* ^5 K9 s+ D4 m! OThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
/ J6 v% E. R. r: T% v' H+ PBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 `/ J; W* y8 R/ G* g3 N( i: aIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. m+ x7 R! Z: A# t0 GI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
8 n% H6 {* C4 }But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* |; Q2 R" x* F6 pCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
6 l. b4 h) J7 H: RWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ W" L  w* B+ }$ t6 G2 U6 [( [% sBut I never did
- [+ x0 {  G" L. \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
  l+ M4 N9 Q. ]7 i) d$ `* D% r2 LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! K# Y4 p3 \0 U2 B8 oCan I entrust it to you?
- x8 V; u6 ]; i( ]- l0 m* W: EEntrust my love within your heart
' E. l8 ^: h. R2 ^& D$ N- P" gCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
1 _7 ?( F) A, Q( w<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- i# k8 h  I7 F<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
6 ?4 M  a+ I$ y0 e0 T# {' U<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 U( b  ~- `5 m  |+ m& }9 f8 W<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
$ H+ W& Q( O% l* g<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 F# j1 W. @. {1 n<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* ~* f  Z2 D; \: i. J<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 d+ m' x8 n! _$ e& S<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- W6 s8 j) J3 p4 ]<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 @& U5 Y0 W  |6 i# [<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) d+ o* }/ }% P# v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, k* o' O+ X+ f2 Y: T1 Q0 ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 v; _3 X" ~# o7 A<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" ^+ S" f# @3 r  V' R<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
9 d0 t5 Q  _, c; Q/ P. b<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! h) Q/ P" ~/ [( W' d, B<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
% \1 Q$ G* p7 Z: o& g2 B<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' ~6 L1 Y+ V8 R2 @4 N<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- u' ~7 j% V8 T' m- s: b4 W<P>But I never did </P>
7 ?& c$ h, C3 \  j<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# p$ z" K3 @7 a. u  K<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 ^* s$ q5 G* |+ j3 ]) b) O<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ n% F& Z& |2 e7 J. X; P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: v. t- j8 d2 F9 j3 i$ ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 e$ P8 W& u& v& ~2 ]% Q" j: k7 n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 `2 J" g- H: Z& E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# [3 V. L- E4 \2 H3 z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 I+ K5 l. T1 `3 P( i, q! Y7 a4 @& ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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! H) R2 v; R7 P2 S 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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. D9 ~/ v: r* M* y$ k3 O这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 D4 A& j! ^9 K3 B<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% K, z) D8 D2 X. o7 t0 W<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>