【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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  D( H, |. y0 X$ \5 M2 k* H我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ I! S8 K- i  J+ [3 [# jThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
+ J/ X. k: m- g1 x  QBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 X" ?! x4 |1 vIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
: M; b' z8 ?* }* Y! r1 A) XLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! n7 j) u. g) }3 Q( Q1 I3 JI want to confess that I love you,
0 G6 F- O, r( J8 b3 ?" XBut I never did
1 P/ _% ^2 `) b( N" g& B9 q2 DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
. b$ b9 s# J3 L8 {5 rI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 p, `9 ]% @" gCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
; F5 c1 c4 Y1 L5 ~6 V, J+ a) ?6 QWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
8 x4 V- N  i! WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% Q) S* W4 Q- b1 x3 J0 I6 i& ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 a1 D0 y) g' d  w, SCan I entrust it to you?
: K/ A0 ~0 v7 ^% b4 t" h) aEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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9 V! ?# Q2 p9 L[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

% T, I# ]1 ~$ k3 U5 Z. S<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
8 j, T3 ?+ q6 y2 D& V6 z: o<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ f" V/ {) a% m5 b# r<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
' Z" r- s! e& W/ g7 `7 a- B5 @<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
" f# V! x' Q4 N  h( W4 F( x<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 K% U0 e4 h& W: r5 F<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
. f! B: s: B6 S& V; D5 p, S<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
: ?# Y& s+ N" p/ k<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 i( _, I) D2 U9 x2 J9 R8 D2 g<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! S% M0 o1 x) L" z3 B  [<P>我想说我爱你</P>
, O5 s9 o* T. u5 v# w* z% D+ o<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
, A9 b% a; X1 t. T$ a. r! R. m$ a3 y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) A# U$ P" f; A! p- v* [: t1 j<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, D5 Q9 V7 b) r9 u' k% B<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- m( D) ^- ~- C6 e. B7 J/ B<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! y) j3 K+ @' z) w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ {% s' j+ ]) _  ?0 r<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ t- C* i* }0 e# I<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
  w9 \9 p- o  J% L2 L1 b<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ [$ Y' d( Q) B<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ {8 I  `& E& f<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
1 g2 R" \  g- \<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: v1 E3 S( X5 J' w* e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% G0 ~* `, e2 g* h3 e$ h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 E1 X8 ]: ^% O  p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ W8 P; N- E0 i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) r& T3 a/ _0 {' t3 {, M<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 q0 [7 p" S# E' m<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
: E: Y" L* q: o. l, F<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

; ^" U4 o9 A% q4 Q# ^/ P这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ D; [2 w, ~& p5 L& O<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>