【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' m3 n; ~# T! bThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 ^# Q7 d4 ]4 a9 s+ W, l* ^, QFrom the first moment we met,
0 c4 K+ _7 V1 r1 AI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
' ]# {* R! J3 u$ y. N8 QBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 X$ l! ^! |# R/ D6 lI would probably know how you feel
2 k( ]$ j; l- Q+ ILove… just the word love
1 p. R: j8 A/ B' B! a9 ?# f, DWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
& `0 r  l5 K7 @8 JBut I never did
  }; d; b) d# F  ?- N$ D3 ?One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 M; M, _) ~% k, e6 ?/ g' k% YCan I entrust it to you?
  g& u& D9 b+ z* ?+ |0 H. zEntrust my love within your heart
) h2 V- c. N) l: `Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ `1 E' x5 M/ }6 ?6 o- G2 KIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* ?+ I1 n5 {2 v6 ~4 V, n% |6 XCan I entrust it to you?
2 s& N) s; c. B' rEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
: y. [+ }5 A( h, q+ a. e+ ~Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" _- ^  R$ J0 ~% c* D<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 }7 Z2 K& F9 H8 }+ I* E- Z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ i) ]; I1 i5 t& _- c3 r<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 T1 Q- z6 V# F0 n' @<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 M# x6 Q- p8 k& R. J* ^7 D<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 v0 L# _7 s9 u: E- h<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" ~* r4 g1 U/ {5 K. c  M# q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 Y, |' {3 v* n  L<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, C9 b4 t4 D% \, G$ J9 [# O- N- A<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 O6 G- q1 b1 q, e3 {( q7 r<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 a, x) |4 U; z8 l% }! t<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 E7 H: }4 Y9 g<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 r1 Y  y6 u& v  `! ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' M( D' L/ a+ ]1 r% J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 {' N, Z1 S# f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' \& O" \$ E4 W+ z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 k8 W$ e4 i  N$ d6 h  f9 N2 W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 [  \3 m% G% M<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ e$ V- y3 m  V: H# h<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 A4 E: C3 q& ?# f  k0 v<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 Q4 M( z9 \$ b  ?: D5 F6 [<P>But I never did </P>
* x8 u: A. I; J0 m4 `<P>但我不会 </P>
$ G1 Y8 H9 ?: o& c<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 K; M) d/ D0 f: X<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* _; b2 w/ m; d  A<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% \! A6 r/ ~7 v) ]<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 C: {" G; o& Y/ J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& s1 c; a& R' k+ S) \1 d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  g2 u" k3 \: _6 j$ i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, ]0 g1 T4 U. J0 ]6 h  M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* c2 b  A! E: t. _* |7 L. U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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0 B6 X/ w2 x; ~# d这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 ]( v( d2 a8 |4 p这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! _* p; q: N. y) e0 u<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>