【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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3 }& S! A7 j. P. H! Q我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 H) y+ k' A; B2 EThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
: }# w( M5 Z+ P" Z3 N- oI already loved you with all my heart
- o) F( _0 t( x1 D: H- S- ~We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
( R% V8 ~/ x* l2 _Love… just the word love
6 l5 y5 u( K' d/ J/ p% U$ N: gWhy is it so difficult to express?
( K6 j% `" t7 I% w% ^  LI want to confess that I love you,
2 U' a6 r! d1 A, x8 BBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; q6 H& ^( T% r- xIf today isn’t too late,
5 N7 |* X8 e$ Z  M6 r8 H! gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" z8 X; F2 y- U$ D% o* |Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
' r9 {1 s2 ]7 x1 Z2 D1 m- r, N0 q4 |6 NWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 p- R1 \( P  W! KBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; @1 b% V0 f# ]2 sIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  [- H% D" S% H+ |Entrust my love within your heart
4 ^. j/ Q# F1 Z& D1 [; vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
0 ?2 d0 M4 K! m  e3 L) f3 i<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) ^1 w" R1 l" ]$ w; ^<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
- H2 t+ L* K0 I# S. m! z, d<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 r) L$ V; w! \1 w. [; I5 w<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 F: w$ Q+ O$ ^0 O<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ B# c& ~$ _5 s/ p. q& p<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
- [, l- }" T! i" a% B. U<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, o5 l; y# E1 T8 ~& S<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ _5 \! O0 r$ ]2 z& w<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
' a* p/ I4 p+ J6 p# _<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
4 t% A8 N# S) t2 e  l0 k7 `<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- A- w2 h1 Q0 F: G0 D<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: i* b9 T8 t6 y4 m6 u$ R" f+ G<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
. U; e. r7 E0 D8 n3 @+ ^( v5 O<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' L! f* l! D  x! @<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 b1 r# }: r1 o$ f6 b. @! D<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 s' }* o3 C1 O8 z5 r<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  }5 m: e9 ]# ~. k; a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* j# ~3 a: r  U' C5 Z5 H1 ~; Q/ t<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, Q# G) X# T) @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 R" J+ W7 L2 ]  p) Q: J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* }" Z. _- Y; p. N% P9 Y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) |( I3 e+ J# w<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  T3 F8 M( j" a5 {* s<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 r& `0 {. H) W  K/ t* U3 i' R+ l<P>But I never did </P>
9 \; D7 q' S+ L1 _; b9 q7 V<P>但我不会 </P>
1 r9 w4 A( d& a, p/ P3 s( p& x<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% `6 L' r9 v4 ^  `! i" |: I<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& C4 t/ J  g' o<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- w# G% w# d! L- }1 t" q$ P- Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; Y! q$ g$ X4 d! R/ G( M, @4 @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% z1 v2 D" F2 t4 |) ]<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# `1 [9 `( @& u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
0 D  ~$ P; z7 ^' L<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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3 D! I/ o1 L, |# c这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

  d0 k9 }3 i0 J# `: R/ m3 n这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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3 F/ g# z1 ^9 @* Q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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. D3 r0 {7 _( s9 ?<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>