【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
" i( n5 g. ?9 w; nThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 `( v; R3 u6 }3 |That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) b3 D4 V4 o% n' s, A, B# z3 O, B* L, B7 EFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
& i8 ?3 l9 f' ?7 |1 q' _We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
, _. {3 q6 O3 r7 K6 O1 r, A5 q5 [' f1 YLove… just the word love
5 U! x$ x0 n: S. ^$ t1 ^& V8 tWhy is it so difficult to express?
. G- Y# ~' F& w0 o- ]I want to confess that I love you,
1 A: j% A8 w/ _& ZBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* U0 r- a( X# o4 L! r& n, x( gCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
1 Q' x) R' n# l, G& W  N" oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 ~. E9 w/ I3 Z! h* EIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 _8 l4 D+ F4 fCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
! i, L0 M2 U" G! ZEntrust my love within your heart

1 B1 c+ E& V5 A( w% V7 [. X" V$ Q[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& G- {: n3 Y4 X/ W7 ^- S- G<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  U1 R4 V) [/ G$ P9 |- `<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 e7 L  X  y3 W# H/ V0 _5 ?+ p<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
  c: F3 ~$ `- G7 n9 F% P9 U7 V<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 L3 s6 G1 B9 s, z; b<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 t$ K/ m( i; T; [+ y% I, z. C# K<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" _" ~& B' y; d5 k<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
. k: P+ d, U5 t  _5 |# F3 T<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, n" r' B* L" T2 Q$ D' \<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 q1 |1 T9 M& F<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
2 p6 z( q0 I, ^' ~; n( n9 ^% F<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% F* w/ U" r* Q7 y5 E, S/ B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* w+ P6 L0 a! Z2 M1 y% B) P# m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 @& h: R& \, i3 U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ i6 p- c. \* `1 Q3 K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 |. g/ r$ A( S6 t  _1 m, i! l<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ g- v  W' w0 r* m<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! c( H5 j. @9 {8 e" }0 O, d<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
$ v/ W- S0 U; s6 H( p<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
5 r/ l7 m" A8 k$ X6 C' X<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ O; d0 Y; y3 d' Z6 T3 }. w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! Y7 B- v2 S( X& L<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  K/ |- e' V' X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: h+ m7 ~' `( e8 H. Z) o: ~<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 a& e5 j5 o" G* K  k+ g8 [- W$ S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, c! m7 ]$ H$ N, k' n- F- C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) Y# ^  K' I+ ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>