【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' t; k$ w4 s( i5 i& l$ SThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 ]3 d  e' g/ h$ _# MFrom the first moment we met,
) i9 n) D2 w" e+ m, b2 RI already loved you with all my heart
* u8 T+ U/ L! g* h: F5 }We meet and talk everyday,
: \% w' p( j/ m; Z& DBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 L  s' s# N: f# K( }8 p8 QI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
, A' `# t1 p0 m8 f/ g4 T- b& gWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 @6 t2 s8 x) x9 l3 ^6 X6 ABut I never did
0 N: m2 Q9 c2 l* Q- I2 G3 BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. e% @  @6 o6 F8 SIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- j* D" o! |$ s0 z; J/ BI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  f' \- x6 W2 ^, t/ h4 g$ \5 ?Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 q" U8 [8 ~6 {  D! iI want to confess that I love you,
5 s5 F7 X! j3 W) t0 gBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. h* c$ ]' k2 F$ `6 G* o9 \* @! s& ~If today isn’t too late,
7 \% K# g. N" a) mI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) a7 c6 S( q+ i8 ?8 f4 @2 tCan I entrust it to you?
1 c4 b3 v& w/ q. g* ]Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; j' K( t# B8 }+ \; C4 a! p: h9 @<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 l+ K1 X( b* n/ y8 g<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* Y- g/ B  r  Y9 d0 K8 p<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. y) x( i* f1 R<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 `" |, r- V5 S<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' H& M! Y" |+ _1 |& c<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, g/ v6 m9 j& g<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& X; e! U% ]" z: Q. G% o<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( h4 ^. r) k, B0 v$ ?<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ A' L* c/ V5 q) g. [) q<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; C+ W( `( ]) I+ T: n0 O2 q% w<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* m1 C8 F) U$ k* i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& c$ O, c/ ~3 j! M<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' l8 n0 T* S0 ]4 `. g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! l( F$ r; H4 v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& R* s6 F7 @7 d4 q4 Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 E- e: _( R. _$ V3 i9 A) q- [4 d<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: _+ g- h0 v" E9 |2 |4 y7 t<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  W8 {0 u0 |( T# E. g, C0 b<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  C- x: J. o$ u$ }* |6 {+ N<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
- z: r; v4 X; y0 r1 I+ h* h0 U<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( |  \  S) b' z0 Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
0 O5 i: l5 H  [0 T5 f" r' S, J. I<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
, i. s) b; O. z5 ~4 B& z  ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  P7 r+ s) o6 s- k4 |; B<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 X6 q, ^% f9 g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' I- e. z5 e' T# a+ `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  \/ Q$ y) `/ R. m' s, |. {/ O, V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 v/ x1 [" L# I& f6 s- h3 }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 o$ S: t) V; H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' T5 Y% d" u6 i: R<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

, m6 L3 ]5 p* `, W& f6 X8 d& A这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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. F/ {# i0 i! _6 ?+ Q; l& W这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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; v0 V  y8 k) p* J<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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2 i3 V/ K3 E$ _+ a( ^6 G* c* z8 [/ S<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>