【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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7 q9 U, N7 Q' ?! f$ J, W我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 O4 C# Y& m4 n9 v4 iFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
2 o8 }" s! P  j7 |: kIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 O& g( I# u7 D  dI would probably know how you feel
. w7 z! N+ Z4 U+ t0 Z. K( lLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ k2 ]4 x3 V8 `But I never did
. b# b$ r# y4 U. [1 k$ S  `( ^9 Y& tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ P. {8 B+ R! ^I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; ]- [- t5 a; _: q! bI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  N& k6 X' n: k" M; J; _3 n+ rEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: p% Y% ^( W7 C4 w; {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, A3 \8 z. k+ u' ^- O- EEntrust my love within your heart
) v+ I( u1 y% F* b' R+ {$ i1 F! N$ eCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

6 \& n% p0 u0 i5 q+ ^[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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5 D, {0 l' `* Q1 h- r<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' }9 i+ ~2 O& @% w# \$ S<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# T- R5 b. |* @. q$ P& a7 r<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# s$ o+ h9 H& c' i1 R- {( ^9 i  E! d<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" t' p, I7 P1 r<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 a2 X: r2 n+ E8 I1 W0 C! K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' g2 O1 K+ n1 l# o<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! W$ X8 Z6 `( p$ R) {6 a<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 L0 X9 |* ]2 f<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- B+ h6 q5 L( D& g& P7 }2 }<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& d2 W( C0 V$ Q; B/ K3 z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 I8 j: G/ E+ O7 q& M* ~<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: T. ?6 r0 j/ m& w5 I<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: D2 a. A2 j0 m( q; n1 p# T<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
& N' F: }  Q* v, D, _, L<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" w% L$ p* s) a7 _<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ H# @- b3 p4 ?4 n- @+ s<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- S$ w+ W( V* Y/ V% [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. G# |1 c0 ?+ n& |! Y( @  d<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: {( r0 _+ r- |' ]) J<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) O$ Z% |" a- U9 d' G  i9 n$ ~- g<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( m, c' f4 L# Z0 K! n, {5 O<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; Q7 M& N) N1 [2 I% g<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  |0 n0 W# ?% k<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 r( ^8 L' l4 x5 U$ o. z<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( _. g0 Y+ Q  |, Q* S/ _7 E<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 J' A0 H# S  `7 |- O# O" X<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; ^8 h+ j; [7 ~0 W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 U- P/ k  t. h. @( H- K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! f( S1 f7 U" O  J% a3 d<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 j2 r# l1 w+ b* Y% G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 X3 |0 ?7 m4 e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 I: p  z+ X) p9 S9 w( u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 ^$ ^' M2 H. `<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

( r2 L* W1 {* v1 B3 _# L: f这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( F- V6 z, c' U. ^9 j<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>