【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# s; Z) B& T1 f1 b) o6 }' GThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ H! b2 o; u' eFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
; F1 R/ ?  e- i9 @We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 i. u$ i3 g/ W0 nIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: d; R  U: g( r5 J* R$ II would probably know how you feel
& t, m0 s& y+ U$ u, b0 @Love… just the word love
/ O( b# [$ s) i6 N( u, D1 ^Why is it so difficult to express?
" |( u3 k" J# D8 j/ L6 a0 ]I want to confess that I love you,
$ G3 `# x  r' W* t: U3 h6 c  j$ IBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ l2 c' Q9 n# p" i5 ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 q$ p9 G5 U( ^5 jCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
& }4 v  J& w! T9 A) `- k& k: V% iWhy is it so difficult to express?
; X) C6 ?# V$ X2 H. {0 oI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: o) t+ g$ a9 p  |0 }4 VIf today isn’t too late,
( u( ?( R% D% S" |9 A+ _+ oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ T1 l- n; W- B$ U7 ?# y; ]Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

1 \) E; N: R3 E! W( i' d6 ^' L4 |! c: x* D<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ H3 h  U$ x" ?/ F) W% J<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 [- Q3 z4 m5 `! x- B! E<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 {$ y5 y% P3 P- W4 a+ z/ O( j<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% X- k5 j  P( [4 D/ S; o<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& s" Y' g: M: u8 j' F( E6 Q& \<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
! L+ p6 x5 |/ D' K9 y) `1 v  ?% j<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  k5 r, P- x" `" {* j& C( ]<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! q* f+ \* v; x% ]1 y. @- a& X<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  Z$ T5 Y1 |1 y: t0 J5 Q- a<P>但我不会</P>
- H+ M- L9 A6 ]" X  d1 }<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% `5 R, F( I7 {% J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 G( W# \- D6 [<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ @+ e& s# r) f& o  E! w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 f; j& q4 M$ ~( ~2 {( a<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 r; M1 F: w& t<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! U, d7 A2 k; I# ^<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
2 Y8 I8 @5 Z. Z. K! V% j: v<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
! d& r; m3 r  X* U$ F% x, y& H/ k<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" |' P, t" a, m  l% u/ u/ O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) E0 d) v9 r4 }/ b- X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ I+ p: E6 A; a( t" g0 t8 F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 f1 H" ]: s9 j9 [; j5 v% x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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& {& ]6 N* W: l1 S. v% x这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 O1 O7 R1 F$ K6 @- b<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>