【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
& F7 p" A" D. A2 B, ZThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 r) f. G; g2 YThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
) \+ `) h$ w0 g2 K, O; ^I already loved you with all my heart
( q- D3 z2 j$ b6 K( GWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
* r' s& g  T* e6 k& kWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- }8 V2 U) [- h$ Q8 \But I never did
6 x& ?0 f! ]- d7 `& O" K4 \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- t( I$ S8 O1 L( e- o% eIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. f- N# c% y0 k/ _( d# z8 o5 zCan I entrust it to you?
1 e/ a1 ]) f/ ~6 M; ^# Y! }Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
6 g2 p$ C( @" g3 JWhy is it so difficult to express?
( G/ a2 R! i5 v: s: N' j0 iI want to confess that I love you,
, g  m9 o8 ^! C, ?& Q* Z- O" xBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: @4 Q7 ]4 E; d. r2 W% CCan I entrust it to you?
7 t4 c) n9 z6 |1 HEntrust my love within your heart
% i% J8 l- f+ y  f* i4 PCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

% T: Z# X  |: w% m% ]* Q5 |<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
4 H+ r! {- h$ e9 W) J0 U7 q( S<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 ?, h' E2 R. ]1 B+ b<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. B" P+ K0 A6 w1 K<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 i( w) H7 y0 t4 O% L4 v9 g1 C5 `" R/ r<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
/ z& I# h4 a& A0 U. ^$ K0 B<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& G2 b" Y3 g8 Z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
4 Y5 s5 v( j, h* ]; `<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  _' b4 J' b* S: ?9 k<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* J$ E$ D  c, g7 R<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& i  w( e8 r" o<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 N0 a) X: e# H+ Z. F<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 K: l4 Q( J. W<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 m1 q  F5 g: G3 [<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 E2 o! _. a, o! _<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. Y7 d* `  @, h9 Q, g+ ~8 r<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ I" i( O  g, b/ ?( l<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 o) Z/ b* ?4 g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; L% d" u! _$ n+ J0 p; Z<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
! r! z, E" J: M8 v* G8 t<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ h# H& m2 {- i$ m2 s<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ w7 R& A3 b7 M# ?8 V/ }8 M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; N. |, |% d8 S5 x; P# n<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 r- n: F4 \5 g/ P( n( h% f3 E<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; X6 s. F1 P+ g) V) ~, }( n% S<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ Y% W' z! h9 ~' e2 ~' O" Z. [% M8 v<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' K( \% o& b/ b3 j<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, W6 m! G2 }) H9 Q) K, n& _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 C' @3 u7 Y, Y# E: ]3 N5 [/ r<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 o1 ]* h& F- u$ ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 X9 L$ Y4 k% E  L  f* E* v7 q) b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* a" v7 r* K! \( D# ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% u3 l& O: @: h3 S' O<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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2 `. }# i2 K* a, N 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>