【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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9 P: B" e7 g9 P/ u# G- j2 E我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& }! I+ E, U& X+ UThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
8 v) [6 f2 m: H( gI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% F% c2 V- H4 @2 y0 B5 {I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
. ?" W! h# g0 X: F, C+ rI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 h& q$ ]/ W7 N$ gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 j0 B* Q0 |. q8 X- y+ O4 vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 V7 ~+ B  m# JI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ v7 q# q, ]4 G/ w) x/ L, [: Q: xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' x' r# O! k$ W9 a' n9 N9 [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, \! C6 u) ^" wCan I entrust it to you?
: f3 Y7 Y; y( I5 v& q) J# P# I& XEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
# [2 [0 b# B8 Q+ zEntrust my love within your heart
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: l; V2 P# a0 p[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( U/ e4 p0 R0 E$ @! m  d<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% I: y0 c9 _! ?% E- L<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
4 d4 |0 @' [; T9 u* ~7 x! q" j<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ ?5 _( y% n+ u5 ]8 w& i1 T<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
4 S9 |) C6 L+ A* P: H$ v# s<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 Z( g. D. `2 m2 Z% Z# F) f7 b<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* ], m* r' p* j, C3 Q6 a" g/ |<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% X& I7 n& t+ Q( K6 J1 ?0 P5 T3 P<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ B, O. Y8 L6 B% p5 s; n<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 t6 S0 N" h1 m8 v9 y' V<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. w) w3 d3 G) l8 s1 k8 n<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ J2 c( t2 m6 u  m<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
* S" n  F/ p% T) j' k9 y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 p' K5 l. l/ T# u/ a3 d/ N<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( M" H/ w0 O0 q7 ]2 k; T<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; ]0 E" ?: J- O7 L" E* v( M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 x/ }$ E7 x" w: Z* e, |$ ]& \3 B$ v3 S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 a2 Q; l, d& n, d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* `2 Y8 ]% S" W* N7 \7 B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 V" @' w  B& |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- X* l5 X# R5 b9 O4 X<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 N- W' Y+ K# _<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
3 b3 Y( N8 I/ I' n- e: |7 I<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* E3 K9 E2 {  e% j5 b<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
4 q& m9 t7 O9 x/ ]3 w7 @$ ~8 ?<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: y5 Y! j* v7 l/ R+ D3 a8 P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
; O$ W0 a, O; J: V; [<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 g  N' K  q9 \' P<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. x- o6 F& E: u0 f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 l4 h0 A, k: ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 [  r7 C2 Q6 E$ U<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ x, N7 }0 H  k$ {/ r. @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" [/ f4 i7 \& l& t7 K% R( k" W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
- l6 _- S' U5 ~: z/ _* E4 v- k<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

2 _' I  u& }& O( e+ N 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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6 T( p, J" c0 G' j+ Q' ]9 [2 i  t这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( d; c1 r* V' ?. D<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" l' l* a1 z/ S6 |; O<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>