【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
- I2 w% [; q* [& ]7 i3 b% ~, pI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
+ W5 p) w/ }, Z7 J" fBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! X# u' s# {( ]+ s% TIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
) |, G3 |% a- r6 \6 [Love… just the word love
9 G/ T7 I! C+ T" d9 ?Why is it so difficult to express?
' A4 E: o: e9 m; y  b) e% OI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& _; o  Z: K- R' J' j, vIf today isn’t too late,
1 S) a9 S5 @0 ^8 G, x+ P: UI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ E* U$ J: \, l- D+ QCan I entrust it to you?
, D! T# G& g8 m% a; AEntrust my love within your heart
5 C; r3 Y& i" Z, f! P) B0 X) X/ a# m( PLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) `4 O- r$ T! x6 k* r' HI want to confess that I love you,
1 v! A/ H! D+ z* m% R+ B. m* `, yBut I never did
$ O0 B3 m6 X- {, o3 O4 tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
! ?& t, ]& \) @9 |I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 ?5 B( [5 g( f4 {# h" iCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
$ K, a) m( ?. o! A9 x9 yEntrust my love within your heart
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$ w: A$ k9 h8 ?( V# b[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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* R! J- i+ L% e/ ]( z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) l. h1 K; k1 k1 |<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 {6 B1 C; H: }1 j% t- p  ^<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; T% p, R* u. a2 F! _! H7 Y3 l<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 v6 Z4 C8 \: u$ b9 Y4 o; H<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  K7 C$ ~* o! Z- d, L0 e<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
9 c, Y8 R- ]( k& H; ]<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# J& v0 J4 Q( u. J0 B, r! b7 O/ r<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
+ Z6 T! n1 o5 J: U  A2 @2 T<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 O2 w. S* [8 e<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; d* q' Y8 t; W0 v) o<P>但我不会</P>
/ f- a& A( `" {' S<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 A" ], O' h; ?! O/ [8 i<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
: ^+ I: O6 d3 n- y<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ H1 [& A8 `) c4 Z& f; p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! z( j; \& @7 O2 j# V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% E$ u4 r' t  U$ i( g0 |0 t" L5 {7 N% Y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 C7 l  v, w' D: s- b- V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- z: V0 s$ [  e<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 [7 N. s4 n2 D! P, {0 f  [$ A7 C<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- [; s9 V) W8 `% \/ C3 Z  v3 \& X<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* }3 H# z" R0 ^* O; q( j+ h# p<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 k9 ^! {; K$ y. u<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 h- p4 ?& {7 d- \6 h. z8 O# u<P>But I never did </P>
( H1 S; Y1 w) i+ U<P>但我不会 </P>
2 B( a4 H3 h  p$ |! h<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 D! N, K. ^7 m, O<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 ^2 J3 f# M9 Y' b2 ^<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 x4 y) {! l' M3 N) [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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. N9 x! h2 T; H! J这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* N' M- `, h: K# Z3 q3 z<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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) w+ d0 f1 f. w' H8 U<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>