【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
" Z. n3 ?' L/ U* l: }5 }  a  G, z8 QThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" J6 S( i2 n( ]4 H0 q9 j- zFrom the first moment we met,
! q$ H4 O, j% ]1 x$ N) d, JI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ k/ Q: M; [! k; f0 BBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( b! V+ O  X% QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- l! G% h% s/ [1 P" ^* MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ }6 ^$ q; m* t6 j4 q: l# ~Love… just the word love
* R, [. W: R0 QWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 C1 J2 o! A/ g$ YBut I never did
, {) L4 o% Z" l/ a. Q: b! BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 k5 a! T" m3 {0 b3 jIf today isn’t too late,
, ]8 Z% P; q4 }1 ^2 wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( |5 y% f1 }7 Y# ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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6 e$ E, U; C1 b4 r; U: S" }8 {2 I$ q[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. i1 j( N6 X2 I6 o, d& f: \<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 J3 a3 F# H4 H' c& A/ Y0 o<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 _! x0 @3 a' e( R' T<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 y. G7 c7 `: m1 _6 g<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ A1 e  ?) j; @<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 x* L  v  ]1 ~2 j<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
5 j6 J4 x( G' \<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# y# s& ]0 S, W9 [- z<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 l. \; o( v% B8 P# B# l<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 ~0 H+ B- A" |/ y' C8 R  D% g<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: ^+ V! G! x5 E5 K5 R8 Y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 K& @6 L; o+ A3 c- q0 }& l: P<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 S7 ?! F0 J# b+ l+ q5 O<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. h5 H( B0 {) M& g4 P" h<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 ~) E( j3 x3 n! \( U<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 }+ M6 n4 J* d; M+ h<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 ]" b4 k+ [7 y/ z. Y+ d1 D4 M<P>但我不会</P>
  ~' O. X6 R3 Z3 A2 K& F<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 p+ {" e4 R0 r0 J6 N0 @5 Y: \<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 V9 T* r8 y2 X! T0 J3 {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ B* Z- e0 P& [  H<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ C# U7 Z7 }" ^, w! w# B0 t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 Y# X  j6 V% R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 p+ U" h; S: m9 h# ]8 Q: w3 V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 u; h7 d7 p; J7 G. [  N<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# e# V4 N2 j0 b. H& A<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" s6 J' y( s# S' k. }. S3 n; Q<P>But I never did </P>
% k( t8 L- K, e/ b<P>但我不会 </P>
( m" K& r! s$ O3 c: s<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' ^& f: X5 x2 S3 A1 D<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. i1 u- t% J2 w5 @3 D4 q, ?! r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 i! k5 _! V* M; W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ [* Y0 L/ F3 m5 H" d" C; w4 O<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 I( J. |: x" X5 S0 i9 r<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 w1 _1 x5 G! e2 ^4 V* ?( F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- ]& u7 `  Q' ^<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 \6 F& W' j" u! }4 y9 z" { 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% [% t: ~! P9 n5 G这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 @( i; F, [) E; M, t* t<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>