【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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0 \, R- ~1 O. l3 D我另将歌词附在此。
8 Y4 U. q3 a3 p( m# F3 ~- dThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" V' J9 {" o7 t8 _, N/ eFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
, t, y1 a5 E8 p5 ~I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% J1 ]7 r/ I6 LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ U* A8 [* ~7 f  LI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 ~( L; ~7 K6 t/ @! y: S2 PCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, E" i$ ?0 ?6 C" Z0 L1 F2 P/ yLove… just the word love
. j" S+ F1 C- p6 MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 _* |6 U" Q) [7 i# y) a; dBut I never did
- q- i5 e/ s0 r, w2 r: aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 o' u% h  \4 \9 R5 qI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 \( \: J: B* M# o* l2 u% cCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
4 I: a7 _; C* r% e5 {+ V) S3 e, }<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 p% l9 W! M0 O8 m  D<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& V- P( E6 W3 I: H1 s<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; y6 o' K( @+ p; h<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: B6 x. a* J5 g5 p2 w4 e<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 G6 w5 `" h9 |6 m<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( v* Y3 @' c# J1 {9 n( p$ ]0 {<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! T7 X: a. k4 r  ~. O3 B<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 a- E0 w; x' X. `' U" O$ j<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: g4 V0 G0 r" Q2 O6 o5 V, `! Z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
$ e+ Z& S) V# H# W. i2 T1 @<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ m( H& N! c5 ^% A& x: p<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 \6 d- C4 L. ?0 K6 S( Z0 N9 Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 K4 B; N8 N/ Q6 O% b2 V- h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 L( q0 ?! f2 F" L  l! n9 v; I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 h! @' x/ ?# P  Y$ J' x( h" l4 F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 y" ^7 `/ `5 z+ F<P>Love… just the word love </P>
6 j- @+ @! c' e0 H0 E<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 @6 ]% }* W/ ~5 z) r' L) B<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
$ J" p1 }' N& _  z! L+ |( Y" ~<P>但我不会 </P>
2 X4 q+ f  v% U<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' G; ]9 }6 J5 n* t( D: b. @' k1 u<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
' W, c& P7 d. I$ ~' t<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 w+ C# v8 q' \5 d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 {: W, R3 ]7 U5 U. s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- `0 l) y+ I. z" Q: k* S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 R+ g+ Q: N' S' q- d7 B% N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. E4 o! Y9 F' J* F<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. w' d* H, I2 k. L! K; Y5 I: d( U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 y9 \" Y* V" N8 b<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% y3 v6 Y' c. ]& ^: _+ W. L<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>