【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
6 p$ I- y5 G* o, g9 _) v* z: m0 IThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 C# R: x3 K& t5 }1 vThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
% _! R* V9 J; A/ M3 uI already loved you with all my heart
' x1 p$ W) C5 ^2 Q$ `/ VWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% H& D  N  u5 _# h1 vIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
0 F) Z5 o5 B; Z  G$ q1 ~  G! o( A/ YWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ L4 e; u: T5 [/ s' P8 E( OI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) l8 `% E( ?1 Q1 C* s" X2 WI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- p- k- T' j1 C; k6 l0 Y8 Q4 {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
" K4 ^$ k) T- y1 @4 JWhy is it so difficult to express?
4 j3 ?. Q0 s  H& ]  [I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 _- q3 V: e1 F6 i) tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: H1 D+ h) J' c" ^7 mCan I entrust it to you?
/ C( F! d. @6 l( gEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
/ n5 @" L0 q0 N3 T9 dEntrust my love within your heart

: Y% E. _9 R+ Z$ ^8 w2 v9 E9 d[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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3 Q7 j% i6 n1 Y" X" ?% k<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& L$ v' @' I- Q: m; y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# {- K" y8 K" E4 Q! D<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# {9 V& w' B  E: X' Z; s<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' L: d& G' S- v<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& w* O$ o- I; m7 T9 g/ `3 M<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* T5 c! O- F  K; d5 ~2 M<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
4 a" P% A& {8 G: {! Z4 j5 O<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ I6 j. h  g; W1 D% K' v<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 r3 D- Z  ^  V2 m<P>我想说我爱你</P>
* l6 Y% c2 ]8 D) g- d& F+ o1 Q<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 [5 I9 k1 W" _/ g<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 v" U7 l$ ], w5 Z& k<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  T# A% O& }! g6 _1 k. B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, ?) c; f# P+ b2 R8 [/ x8 G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: [; }4 r& a! `6 R<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 n* S' ^6 e6 [<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
$ o5 x( k  d3 l5 y  Y8 \<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
% e& Z6 d3 e! D" ]3 B" k- N<P>But I never did </P>
$ O0 p  A; B3 i3 I  r+ t/ r' Q4 o<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& O( C2 v4 B- n  G' w5 ~<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
( t. T- n; M" C! G+ E! x: k<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 r$ a6 m  g1 R7 L) Y4 y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& @* @( y7 h, O% h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 w, |$ M4 b9 ]9 V4 m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 u6 _& o7 X" \0 \9 G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 v3 r  O" n' A) d+ f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ ^: r  t7 c) z7 q<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

1 J) R. M& v2 B# u3 |$ a这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

! P1 D& A6 C$ Z3 T$ `' e这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ c# g" s* {5 }' O/ k<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>