【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
) i( L: p9 p+ J2 [( }The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* L. _$ b/ \2 s( C# jFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
) C2 L" _: ]& ~3 F+ o  BBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! m6 u7 m) I3 R! z. o; ?0 kI would probably know how you feel
4 ^6 c# ]* ?0 ]) N/ l+ wLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' G# f+ a& t# r6 O( O" xBut I never did
0 G  W7 n3 u! \& r- _+ LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. e  s2 q. E  |. d- [If today isn’t too late,
; q' h  T# ^; [: N7 g9 m5 u4 }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, y, J7 `, `. E( _9 @I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# f* i$ ~; j0 [) a9 IEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
4 U; |! z- O0 `# n& ~) M. e1 S% }Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% z( @3 e9 m6 E2 LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 C2 A- q& d3 Q- ~" M/ DIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' d/ e1 `2 o. ~; MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ Y% ]1 g& E: m9 P+ ^) t/ M5 gEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 |0 M5 S' U8 K: L: C/ ~' V<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 A2 V* b$ ^2 Y# L! f4 [3 c<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
- W+ ]1 E- F) D% K3 m$ z6 e<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% @% z" N) n  y: R( @' [<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ w. G1 X' D2 h& @9 s<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 [9 l! }9 H; O' A" P<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% I1 D5 y3 z' _& p3 W0 z4 o" |. m$ Y, u<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' k8 k; \% |: O1 n<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
# z$ `8 \8 V7 D# Y7 o<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 U  ]7 ?8 I) T/ h8 V/ C<P>但我不会</P>
8 c$ F/ \7 c/ @$ ]+ u<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" I6 W. ~( |& t4 B- j<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 V& b' `4 T  c* _<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 ]& w6 C4 u7 d& r' h6 Q: I5 e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 K$ A# T( k) ^+ t; k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' _$ e6 b, C% o# I<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- Y, P. F1 \) B) C0 M7 C! u# B<P>Love… just the word love </P>
& P+ a" b6 p! o/ s/ T<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ l2 T0 I( N! |! j, _7 M<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ M8 G$ @# L8 w: V) E<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 F$ v8 Q* Q. T<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 I: F2 L8 X6 k' q8 `. J% r  V<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 M# A" R- A0 x( e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) i8 j; \. o% a' g- L<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# g& N8 q9 Z0 v0 f+ ?2 G$ O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' V1 K+ E3 X' F4 r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 d9 J9 M" x( j' t: z5 t( b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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6 }" y8 {, y( s+ y+ r' J/ J  s这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 A' {; d' V) d, |% ?# L<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  D- z( D3 M0 p" P9 p4 ^  v  y6 `<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>