【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
7 ^1 c9 v& @( Y6 x5 \The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- `5 M% w! }' p2 G6 h7 \  }* |From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
) C# F2 Q4 G  @8 M, C1 UWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
( [3 }; E8 ~, X  iIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
: q6 s& \* _5 ]7 g& KWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 z5 G& t. X: Y+ d4 d4 N8 C% o) wBut I never did
, Z8 `% ~9 N0 \3 X7 GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& f$ z% P: X* A; X4 GCan I entrust it to you?
# J* k) K2 r3 f6 Q) x: WEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; R) R& z* E  N+ m! O4 b) k4 GBut I never did
1 w) v: u0 i/ _5 t- z2 zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) v2 O! k5 W8 NEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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% N- D& s, B9 V+ \+ w5 r+ s9 t[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 j# I8 [3 t; v  W<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 r5 e4 N) x1 w* t<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, h% R% u; W6 y! E1 F5 |+ U<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 C; c0 Q3 l4 R5 C<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
8 f2 f/ [* V) O$ B8 I- W% f<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ t4 ~) y3 S% L5 b( m& t2 N<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
* |. o8 X, i$ H! d<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; u$ |$ Z( Y9 ]6 @( j2 @4 U1 o8 S. I<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* a) Q; q: D% J$ @* H$ {<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& E8 ^) L9 n+ k& Q2 y$ ]7 {3 H<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 h6 s5 D! x8 T% u<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% n4 O! `* m9 u3 ~1 B% \8 |. e- |<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 w& \% V  N& _; P! l  w8 w$ \$ q* `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 M) h2 {) A& @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 `1 k  L& \3 s' S+ r- ]  u, m<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& X! i! H$ Z6 X% r1 N0 e+ v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ M7 p! c% L" z: Q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 p. Q: n9 Y6 f- p( J<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
% g, d2 G2 P3 @; S  ~9 A2 ^<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! Y) \  K' i% w$ c# y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 `/ W7 L6 d9 d- k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 a8 g6 v' N% ]# w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' Y8 S) [( k9 t* r9 z5 g- I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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0 [$ N$ A7 m9 F这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 ]' l1 h4 ]8 h0 ], z# I<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 ^  h$ p3 E% e. P/ y<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>