【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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, Z1 c7 T  m' I; x3 T$ H6 N$ e4 z$ B我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 o( E5 o+ s/ ~* a5 M7 A' rThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: O4 c% m8 x( }- @) FFrom the first moment we met,
4 E6 e" z' s2 a: @) f' J- P+ AI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 q! m6 W: @! Z- t7 Z) yIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ V4 U, {: w; tI would probably know how you feel
0 ~3 d4 |, X% C+ q( f" i+ y6 aLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( d4 J+ v! C- d! hOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 x* ]4 A1 ]& W2 F/ d" zIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ W2 n" v5 V' x6 `0 DEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
+ `" Y8 ?* B: a1 Y1 EWhy is it so difficult to express?
& |( y5 }% s" C% m& |; C: ~% i' BI want to confess that I love you,
5 I; e  s* I4 t* Q: j9 KBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( f8 e' Q8 q/ R. q8 z; PIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 R4 r8 i4 r; K8 OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 W# k9 H& J5 k% L1 o) p- uCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- ?" P9 K$ t/ k/ Z) n) V+ BCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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' ?/ Z2 o8 }" ?[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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+ v* Q! j. h8 [4 H<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' c5 v" {- ?$ P, O( l<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ g3 H+ q/ L* q  i' r<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* p3 ]. L0 W  @( O- m* b<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 G0 F( h$ C: z) k<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 W! d& g& v* R4 ~2 `<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, u" @5 i+ N; z0 Z2 \  e<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! @5 |1 i4 ?  A# \0 Q0 d+ ?, N2 N<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  A9 k" I5 y" D0 ~<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
1 z7 u  ?$ G8 l: s! W2 S<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ Z+ e5 `9 R2 e, q9 @$ T2 X" s<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, V  [* l( B6 \; G<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% r5 W8 U0 G% l. q4 T<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( t9 T2 m+ t- V<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 s' X1 e3 n" J/ B/ Y1 d+ y<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: d* E4 q$ `0 d/ p6 l4 [  k6 E<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 ~3 m3 d+ }6 w! c9 @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: ?! l9 O! B+ a/ h) q( i2 S# k<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* q$ ~+ t  |. o4 e" C, U<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 |& u( `3 G+ H  h9 C8 t' {; v8 h<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 v( ^# ~) [  g<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" @( Z5 S6 U' [<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# {8 q2 L0 N; G* T<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 _5 E, m& c) x8 t<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 Q- I" F4 \0 B/ C# K" b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 a: s% O9 T- ?0 X, n) ?2 ]* |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 [+ ~* T; |5 F/ J" Z) B6 q' k. Y# U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. S& q/ q+ l9 \9 l3 W5 Y<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

0 ?& z5 Y% S3 A- l, |0 S- g( s2 k2 h" e6 D 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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: ?- B8 ?# h9 V7 M0 c/ n" c! A这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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- W8 c1 Y% F3 g1 X5 `# r) h+ |这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ b: N, y5 o/ H3 d" O, p+ N6 L<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>