【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
4 l7 t; }  o  W) C+ N: c+ k% FThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 Q- ]# N5 {6 h* |That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
. Z1 j4 J1 k- U6 FI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
  u' F8 ~7 |! r  T6 n2 {0 wBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& r6 x' `- @" tIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
$ [+ V8 s  D' UWhy is it so difficult to express?
# W0 A9 f* {2 S0 LI want to confess that I love you,
+ N; [% ]( V6 V: N8 aBut I never did
( L; l2 G- \" rOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- G5 e, S$ g1 X3 S4 M5 R2 H' {; `7 MIf today isn’t too late,
( ^/ n8 v$ ^2 ?4 L! q0 aI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( g0 X" N2 G0 E* j/ u2 x; HI want to confess that I love you,
) q% ~+ {* H1 O- N- m1 u+ hBut I never did
0 K8 J/ ?# E# G) sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* K; t% b, g- U( ]  pIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
0 w* o% @& p7 v. E% V9 |* N6 s<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
+ e+ C" e. V. p7 M- l8 G<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 n# P0 L- X4 R& d<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 E/ P( P* ^0 U6 ~* _<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 Y* ^0 H2 V- c<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
9 `' U% v; x6 a, {8 o6 k" Q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, }& g5 D, W2 c$ D2 L3 q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, q& ~# x; \6 m& @) y" N6 I<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 [1 z" X' A) y& E4 c3 G<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 {% i- x2 v, t& X! L- T* v& O% F. Y<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 D" R7 ^4 B5 s6 S4 |1 h<P>但我不会</P>
% O( M7 Y# [. Y2 R& c3 T* f# y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& i  `/ x9 A! {) w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 V1 Q/ q' w- A8 A# x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- E9 r" c; p6 r; U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! c0 `; H5 ?& s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 R2 K4 E: Q) A$ S5 C& b- [  c$ e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 p8 A3 O6 E- p6 T1 F<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 }. |2 B$ Q' r- t, }<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% Q" t, n+ a2 F<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
0 c; C' E$ y+ W<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 |$ [  r' x( \6 m4 Z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* V/ n& e- \! I2 Q: ?4 O: N& P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ Y9 |$ k9 y: W7 V  O8 r<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 W& c2 s; g, `( P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, z; o1 D& y; J3 B5 g3 x1 i& y: O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' ^7 z8 ^( c# w1 u" Z; S/ ^<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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$ E7 s$ m8 L8 `2 q 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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6 E/ o- Q4 ^! r% b# Y# X( }这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 D. T0 \3 d  X( ^: J<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>