【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
; h5 Y7 J. ], @& H3 `The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 f3 c) T' J3 L) _From the first moment we met,
) o2 t  ^7 I9 V; Y1 I6 {I already loved you with all my heart
, P$ |' J4 ~+ a% E; C6 W/ n9 UWe meet and talk everyday,
; h+ ^9 _0 A, A3 U( l. WBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ k/ k+ Y6 W9 VI would probably know how you feel
# t& o9 r+ x& j8 u  z8 S1 CLove… just the word love
+ G; Z; i7 l9 t1 w% m" @Why is it so difficult to express?
2 y* ~# T6 q8 ^8 Y  H0 LI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 ^  Z/ ^+ G1 qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- \; _8 e+ O7 g- e! n$ C- t) hIf today isn’t too late,
# a9 |! ~; O  C0 s! B- yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 K5 D- [, V, I9 i9 _" @: nEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
9 o- K+ O; R$ o! k4 LWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 l, ~. e$ X4 J, ~One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; i% h% o! r8 p) v# C: o9 yCan I entrust it to you?
& j& G4 u$ {: J! fEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
6 Z0 u+ l* E# U: s  f( iEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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$ @' J5 C7 C: g" b" G8 e9 n+ I<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& `$ Z) Z& ~7 {2 S+ R+ G# k7 }<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# i4 ?  s7 N1 D! b* K% _/ t) [<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% S8 |6 u9 d) K1 d8 n: ~, ^% }<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 m( S% T3 T5 l- l% {<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 D. ]2 p6 Z8 p' x& ^3 P<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 N+ M% z4 l3 G  H6 E<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 l3 v: |8 F2 o$ Z7 |. S! T8 N( |( W<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! ]$ h& F" S2 v" F0 P. I/ A<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 C" e& M! K4 |# ?<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' Y4 q+ j4 `6 k/ E# k1 b<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; e% s$ M/ g) i<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 g, x3 L$ }6 J4 l<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
  y- V0 X3 t( `( f1 V<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 V" I2 V  K/ t/ V. ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, d; z2 c& t0 ^3 N" m+ g5 K2 n2 e3 g<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" C# s6 Q1 c3 q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& i  \& \* o) R: H- o: {! i<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 `& n/ Y- ^' k# F& G9 V- O<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, D8 Z2 B5 y- t+ _$ y" W<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! N# @* B8 |/ V' `<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
) S6 h$ ?7 C$ G! n; f<P>但我不会 </P>
+ b2 c" M8 V- d* h<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: B9 _" [/ Y+ {' ~, K  `& K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ {; ^) e1 b% t+ c9 H, X0 c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# X9 Q; [8 E- Q! n7 C, o* m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" Z6 \6 w# R1 c! }2 x7 r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 [; {' b" l, B8 |1 x8 {8 J这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' L" m' A/ I% ?- q0 V2 J/ N<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 \, ^& q- d' B- x+ X* E3 o0 V<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>