【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* Z5 V- T# }2 FFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
* X9 N* ?6 [% {* k2 `/ K& O  JWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  F, c: \& T; x  l" T. B/ UIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
  B0 S- D  o2 u5 R0 z) GLove… just the word love
7 {, m* J% `/ h1 h6 f) d, \Why is it so difficult to express?
( P1 j9 n7 C5 K& n+ D  o  ]I want to confess that I love you,
- v, ~8 q3 p- V  I# P  MBut I never did
0 Q) l: L. M7 V" x/ |One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, z: [3 R: m+ R+ p0 L4 x  VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) J) e+ G" _9 G' g9 {' s: nEntrust my love within your heart
- z9 L1 p: s2 U( ?: y& pLove… just the word love
, A" s/ N$ T% A; f, |. G( RWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 `9 r3 D3 u5 U# |I want to confess that I love you,
" d3 N' [4 a1 u$ h( eBut I never did
$ O$ s: }# \! p- a. Z" HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% u6 E$ U" u* M, u' `If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ S) V7 G+ }! o0 oCan I entrust it to you?
$ H" S8 w) f5 `4 x$ {Entrust my love within your heart
- [- A1 _8 O# {) r  FCan I entrust it to you?
' e. ^8 P2 K! TEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ m9 {* }4 _9 T0 Z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" \$ u% H& W& O( o<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 L/ n# a% t7 s, J& Y% r" f<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
# P5 r  j2 {& E" I  i: g<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
& Q/ f( d; J9 T8 i& Q! q<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 A4 X0 _6 D& {1 b0 w<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ K5 f4 f, d8 p" \<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 U0 m; H" f# a- u0 k! E% g, Z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
$ C+ G6 J& o" V<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 v1 h# {4 E& f5 l2 Y3 H0 ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% _3 h) E+ g  y; s6 v6 D0 [& l% |<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ |* Z0 z$ X% R/ a* ~( d8 Q: W0 {<P>Love… just the word love </P>
1 ]4 }8 t# {/ Y) D<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" P- ?; u! G- K2 s, e! o& j6 D1 {- P<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
$ V; W! G4 ]/ V3 Y: @  w" b<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: M/ J# ?7 b6 ~2 z* S& x<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 r. ?6 ~, C- G<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 Y3 H: S7 \5 p2 p% R0 f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# n' e4 _9 f* h9 T. [4 D1 c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ d3 N/ D! Z7 Q0 D; j& N& c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; u6 u& X  `# _# p( M" a<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% K& R/ ~5 z7 e/ T$ |$ V3 L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. \3 o" Q1 E0 y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- B5 n/ W: X+ M  p<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>