【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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6 |& c0 U, h" u2 ~. `) a我另将歌词附在此。
) J- H1 K+ X5 I) L, Y& x3 wThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: Z3 L/ w$ A1 k7 q6 {- T* iFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
4 l# O4 k  D: D  e/ {But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
3 g2 w- p) Y; n- V1 I) p* K4 oIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
! u' H$ J% P( N& o* K2 ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
4 c2 a9 {# a+ y, E4 Y( ?: c0 x9 oI want to confess that I love you,
* l! V5 q: u6 r, G8 M( NBut I never did
: h! J; ~  I5 Q7 d: H( F0 U3 Y/ u5 G6 fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 T& \$ n3 I) eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ n* g, p) I# v) ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. J7 b, i7 }# uBut I never did
8 b# W/ }- j" m8 J' u0 f4 `One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
% q8 I4 ]' \2 C$ m/ t" L& yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: ]# w. X3 a# ^+ rCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& ?* a: u# _3 g$ G5 E' ]" g# h5 \% F<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ ]( [! \8 s0 `0 w; Z<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, U  T9 `/ Q) Q! ^: f<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& c2 o' i2 G, x" a' r7 s7 p; w<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 ~( I9 C4 C+ e3 b0 O  }<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) Y6 F' P, y, |% V! ?<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
" v% h0 R) m$ n4 K" X' G+ F<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, {1 O) m1 s8 [3 p8 W" f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 f5 F, s3 Q/ a. x! e; H<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# f1 j8 v- Q; A<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 H! U7 X! F2 b* h' L6 o<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# Y1 N" ^" I) o<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( {5 J5 L$ G1 V! o; A- L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' D& O  ~0 q" f2 Q6 k" c- A<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- Y3 H2 ]3 J% u, L8 v& p# u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& ?6 `$ y" @8 Z8 G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ C: x' N, a; }<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. B! Z0 m# |' G( l# r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 v" q( q& \: y+ j: f4 ]2 t0 H<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 j, v3 J9 {: l& ]1 O" t<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 o: V/ x% y. }" g, A6 C# ^' e<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. D% {- @( [  k8 Z7 w: k2 b* s7 x+ J<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ y# T& t3 D9 r% e# z9 W<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& J( z4 c% Z  }& D# L" |2 c* z<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 F, L0 H* b0 y7 e! O3 w6 ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- H6 C4 ^2 d7 q: U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ p  D: `. U2 u- ]3 v/ u/ v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- y1 @9 M* D" q7 Y  E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
( V4 J3 n# p0 K0 ~, V<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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$ k! |7 @7 {! }- | 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ i' c6 O: v  g8 [/ U) h<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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8 m3 D" ^: M. I- ]/ e/ v9 x<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>