【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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! [% n8 F, t% p+ R3 I9 E8 S我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
1 S1 q, J* T0 S5 CThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
) i# \& ?7 L- X" J3 E; C4 m1 M: dWe meet and talk everyday,
& n1 S/ O; a! \% wBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
4 Z) v* T1 @1 y& L% X4 `Why is it so difficult to express?
9 `- z" `# C" E+ cI want to confess that I love you,
5 _0 @9 a6 J0 ~But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# ]' t4 o+ t2 [, }! OIf today isn’t too late,
: m' y7 B: A# X; P: w- W* bI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, ~: t+ g! t4 I; Z: @% uCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 g% Z; ^2 Q8 P2 V6 ILove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* m/ e9 T1 C( _One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, {3 `, H- R. h- Z4 @3 N- NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; R0 r/ q4 `; JCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
' D: i' m) s) H: E8 NEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

, L, H, N: {* e- L<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 V: P5 }! t: N- i6 [+ X<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 D+ a1 @) Z% p5 @<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; ?0 O/ h7 ]4 e4 A- U<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 O, u& K3 \7 p. t1 s<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
- Y( E9 g8 {8 j7 D<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 w$ C! _/ B1 ?- K6 Z" j. ]<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
* x, b+ ~% Y0 J' U5 }+ Q: S<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
" v  Y6 E( o, [2 r<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 F2 q& g. S% ?+ q! k) Y: h% H# V) ?8 x<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 |7 q( J, _0 \0 j6 G1 a, t, v# ?<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
& W! x6 Q8 G+ {; l- f<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! D3 W! [6 J0 c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 y1 g2 c0 ~! \/ m' l$ L( t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 ~$ {  [& `1 ^# r5 V2 k<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 u, U% X$ f! \, ^8 F9 _<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- I! s6 X: f/ p3 ~' h2 Y) h<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 f. }4 V- K; M; l2 N<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 k# ^* H9 l  G6 l<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' c. Z: E2 v9 G- }% @: s<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' y5 R: f% H  t) D: {# s<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 M, l. ^3 p. s! h' }# r2 t<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 w9 U0 s7 \( j. ~3 e  s<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' f% y3 W0 o& p: p  }' u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 Y" k- H0 I' F/ _3 u& q2 Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ Y: U8 M; Z( W2 m5 Q1 }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 c* X; ^. `$ V* ^8 w; _1 N<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' b' d; p3 j9 t: r& i8 H$ ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 }7 d* \) b9 B5 p2 E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ c; X5 }; d+ d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 L; s; v( @; X$ t/ P9 ~0 B, ^<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

6 n3 U; i, K2 G% d: k 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
& _: N4 z% w. _, ~  L& j7 j
7 q: ?0 j: ?- ^8 V7 Q这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 O2 M# v: j3 j- G) f
* l% c) x( S) r7 \; W这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ W4 H4 w2 T, J1 s* j1 u0 n& D& ]<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>