【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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7 `' V: \6 K. Q' l7 F; w我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* v. Z; o" ~* f  ?; H  _: AFrom the first moment we met,
6 X+ w% W! _0 G$ e6 CI already loved you with all my heart
& j+ y2 U' F  F7 ^8 ]. I  RWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  y8 d& N3 Y3 v: z0 `2 V5 E) b( ?If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ Q- n  z# ^! f! W) e0 W: T8 f- H0 l7 tI want to confess that I love you,
8 Q* T0 I, k' pBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 [7 {. l3 G! R8 h8 OIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! |% _4 k+ k/ j+ J" L' g+ ~* @$ @I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 E2 n) v6 w8 O8 a" _% zCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ ~$ M% j4 t8 ILove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 w2 m4 A+ q: ]! R1 r9 II want to confess that I love you,
, @* I# i( ^1 y( w4 @8 |9 uBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  K% \7 ?' ~1 I! U9 ^- B, S% aIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' t+ E6 w9 w0 r1 X+ UCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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- k/ r6 b+ g: N! I[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& P$ F  k6 {5 U# i1 {<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 r- f, g/ j6 j2 q! O- I<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% o' V. R% J1 @: H' ^' o<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ E/ a* H9 C9 P6 T<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 Q  S1 n- T% s<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& s# D$ U0 [3 W4 k9 q' f<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; ^8 m0 j' D5 z( L6 y) f& G8 \<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* e; s- X* K; I: j<P>我想说我爱你</P>
+ `' j3 Q3 A6 I- A% D<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 T/ _: N7 o4 F<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' u0 {" W, N4 E) i9 [8 ~. C( J3 k) ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& p$ q) g: C' J<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' i/ |4 x/ a) j/ I$ s8 {0 r) y. Z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' a+ |- w3 F4 X- o  b! E4 M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* o5 ?0 S9 Z+ g" P/ k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 Z  {; i' ?# L5 }, ?2 E& k- w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 Y9 `. T2 t% _+ U& L/ `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! K6 e2 m/ }0 Y7 |2 e<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* ^0 L1 ^7 Y6 s3 z" }* E; a9 z2 P9 h<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* U: ]) j6 _+ K<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 T( r, z; e$ L* L* l<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
+ H' u4 u  ~) n% }) z- y0 ]<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 }" w/ j6 g  I, Y$ j( O! P" B<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ p  ?5 }  x3 Y6 B1 l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
8 }; w1 c- G! d4 P<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

  Z0 \0 L0 s3 r) v* `这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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6 v; O  B3 }3 ]* g7 O这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>