【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
+ i; D! \3 @+ q4 }! }7 vThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# }# Y( [5 `  R0 m( g% ZThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) v  W+ Q& w4 |- ?I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& V& R5 B1 X9 Q( ~+ j. {' B; g1 EI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( C/ n1 G! s; K, ^  L( o# _3 CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# S( Q0 V0 {4 Y2 F/ U+ K4 }Love… just the word love
) H# |, d' h" Y- r7 TWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
  s. r1 w, p8 j7 @" U4 ?But I never did
1 A2 W) U1 }* l2 w' zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* n& t7 A  t7 z  `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
' A* O0 Z  j( B6 g6 |8 x( f3 mEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
& s9 R1 ]! u* L4 _Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

9 k* X, ^$ n2 A8 z5 q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 U! h2 }2 Q" e3 u/ A<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
2 v% W5 [/ o5 u" s<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' y% B( {7 `! B, _% l8 u( B<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
' C8 A. Q2 M9 Z+ M7 M( `. m<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 d- y/ [0 e2 j9 B% F# A<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 W3 x, `; y  X. k+ E. `' H2 ^5 o<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 e) |3 I$ X' t. R  F. e<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 O% T; N* y+ M" O( V$ |<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- m! V( n9 p# [* j8 x" W<P>但我不会</P>
/ B& X3 u2 P% S; V- h/ B<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ J7 x( g/ g% @9 B! r, k<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* @. G1 {( ?; K+ o! J8 ~/ X! @<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: q* y7 `: L8 @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* I1 [. |) ^+ m# w  h: `1 O<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 a4 h# R$ a: `7 F5 a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 C- e. ^' o/ d$ A7 U! ]& j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' D# i0 q* d6 |6 F  B: {<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ Q4 P. g: r4 J9 r+ b9 `7 ?<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
" Z4 s/ p& V. Q# \' L$ o<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, n7 Y, E; T, [+ p% G% q* |1 M<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( R. s! |) j5 ^( a6 e* X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ B4 I) P9 s! P4 d/ |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, o- \# u; _2 O6 G: }" [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 T  z: f; Q' M1 C, d, Q; G<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ @5 H) c. r1 L9 \8 t' ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 G, j7 O0 g6 R' G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 F8 `6 |. M4 ^6 j: L4 K/ ~4 v<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* h% p, J( J) R( o7 k<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ s5 `  t" m* z. C' O2 I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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" a* |& U, [+ ~( m1 T7 [- Q/ P 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

+ G% G4 L) @% K6 d- f这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 F. _0 H; z( ^3 r这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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1 E' r/ t# l" _+ z  d<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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6 @7 i& \$ k! H( S0 ^, H( c, g6 z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>