【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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$ _$ H4 l; z1 T我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; s0 _: m0 x0 t' ~4 _$ T. m8 k% }) PFrom the first moment we met,
. L9 E8 s; ^8 P! P# I- D& uI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
( h! x$ ~, n( UBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: `/ }8 e, F, X- u. i2 PI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
* V: g9 A; E5 D: A1 U! k5 KWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ T8 s5 t* P9 H7 g; T% ~. R- fIf today isn’t too late,
% u" g3 V. f5 F% @6 _5 H& dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 ?9 n0 n7 g# y% q! U2 Y0 OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 y/ s8 F. W# p6 J# k) \Can I entrust it to you?
  H1 B( _8 P  [/ F$ h6 ]Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
% N$ f7 e& D% L+ n  s$ u! o/ V4 iWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 M. I2 k1 h! A8 l4 d* mBut I never did
# ?! _: m! ^  z* v5 e9 xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# W8 J7 n0 L3 D) L" hI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* C( u4 r6 V, UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 s" k; B& b: D: K; D- |6 oCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 i: q9 e3 E& y
' B3 V5 v3 B7 y- w/ Y# C[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

7 b7 {7 G- o$ r$ k<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
7 \( [' A; i' _+ u<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ b( k9 _( Q6 i+ A0 r! [<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 [" S& v) y; a9 H<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ E3 \+ W0 u( e  U<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
" F% b- P. a8 f1 O# r" j) l<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 m7 S* s/ C4 J8 m<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 [  ~( n9 v/ F<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
, {1 i2 [, v& k" a+ c  e<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! O# t2 v& s1 z7 h" _<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. t; @* r, M0 r8 q' {1 `<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) P% r2 R8 b; ~/ A<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" H: O% C* w, I2 ]) T0 l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 u, s- A% X& t& w+ H2 F( O<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  k! O2 m6 d/ p1 s; K5 l  W9 g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 L. L; Z/ Y/ z2 @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! p' H  a. z+ e# r0 N, i: i! x<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: x' t+ \3 U! z  m<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# [5 ~' u" L# Q! z4 `<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) R" b' Y: V& b! D' g  |( w<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' S5 B# u% b0 O6 N: e- a8 [) y<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ M& Z' S' O! ^$ Q<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 d8 T) `* {7 Q2 p3 {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; A# J0 E+ K1 x- [- U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, R3 o% A. D6 Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& F& ~* d+ R" }$ C2 y; G- Z$ ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 x2 P! ?. Z: V- _5 h6 n5 d<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 S( S4 Q$ d# G3 t4 D. x  k 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: B# S7 u. j+ Z( e4 a# Z
这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

$ l/ j0 q7 F2 B* j# v6 y$ E<P>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>