【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% t$ [% K9 a* m4 XFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 }$ ], ^: P- @* L8 q- Z3 UIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; ~- d- T6 i* n/ HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" o1 l- q6 I& R1 nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
2 n: R  t8 g5 EWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
5 J8 z8 @! l. y! A, RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 y$ B9 B5 j( a! d9 R. I8 Z# fCan I entrust it to you?
: u% `+ G& I7 z0 d% P& M$ H$ @Entrust my love within your heart
% ^! U. h- t/ ], M9 A) j/ P. W9 @Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

# t) n( {2 U, J8 P, A4 n# I1 W[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  [0 G8 j) H# x7 [' Y5 D<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' I& v$ R2 E8 y6 g* O. k8 O/ }6 c<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 n( F5 J& ]" j% `3 K( I& i. u0 |<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 X! I' s; z  v) V  H<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 z0 \3 Q: a2 X4 z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- w8 P! w  m. j* y6 p0 G<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! |, @. Z" A' ?* r9 t6 ?- s, K<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 q" x0 w3 U. c8 p4 z3 U4 r- G<P>但我不会</P>
* z- X! [  S2 D' _2 c' z, ^0 j<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 f2 v2 {% C6 |8 M0 z. t/ P) @" y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 S3 L. \7 w3 }4 y7 D6 [" |6 E<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; |& U0 f/ `  @, r: E1 G3 h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* ~5 z2 [1 G4 S# ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 k" {# d5 k7 i& g" r<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% U; R3 u: P6 p% b5 }1 e: [  u<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 Q7 a! `) W- c<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 r' ^9 h) c% [! o3 d  k: c: e5 p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 L" p7 R% g! {. P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 u' m7 V5 W- B) s. ^6 }- s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* }" S7 S  R' o4 a+ @<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 O9 e! a5 W$ N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# A5 s$ R/ f$ E1 v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 G. X& [3 P8 ~, j<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
3 S& q' e5 D; p; B/ K<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

" M  q( |0 O% d这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ ?* d! S! F1 x# a这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' m% l3 L: j; {: v<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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' B, o* J8 J; d0 a<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>