【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, I7 O2 }9 N. ^7 B8 ]That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; A6 ~2 X  V9 KFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ N; I8 X+ A( c2 r4 I; eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; |4 a5 X% f; p0 k% i! n, O7 l2 D# B9 qCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 G$ Z4 E* V/ E$ E4 U' J1 S$ O( u% WLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 f* A) a) P* d6 m% r7 }& FI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
" J# c% Q5 X3 jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; t; ~& q) M" d9 _* w9 b' g9 vIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 c" Q5 U* K; c( l) vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' k  S) S. R7 ?6 l. \% ~4 q; J# }Can I entrust it to you?
' \5 p9 i3 x6 Q: [" l( [/ wEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ P3 Q  L( Q5 U<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 u  B  U  ^" g2 o: k<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% D: E3 X' q* @( j$ ^# }<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: v8 h6 y. w& n3 K2 j2 K6 u<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  E7 U" }7 d2 H" j- c) T7 a0 b<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 X: ^' a6 x2 _3 f* W<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" {, N8 E/ t7 w$ S<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
) l$ N- j2 O# u) u; o8 f<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( l4 p. U2 T1 z& M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% H: h# U- T: P! f) u) G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ |: a2 k/ w4 l& X2 c<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ e) b7 Z3 S7 N5 s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 L7 Y, \7 _+ F5 r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ e" j' D* N& _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 b- V% x! n# l% R  g( I<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  g7 [% p* V7 |. ?: u<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 ~- V* a1 Z3 W( H" Q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 D# T/ j& a5 h5 x; ]- H* f<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
' ~( L  Y. |- s$ S# t# B) V<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& \5 j5 U' ]: ~! ^0 e! `<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( [$ B; d# s) T0 N<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" Y' Z/ `2 [/ p0 e8 Z4 u; \4 x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ V! g1 `  y) F5 a# v- w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 y2 k" a% T7 x, Z' U! s, f" N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  G, s& y8 [/ u* q, ?<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 m2 H5 @( u) Y' e7 ]6 r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ Q3 ?7 x$ W5 e4 b0 t<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  U/ [. a8 ?1 s& J* e" W/ R<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>