【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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: t. y) E8 e& i$ a$ U我另将歌词附在此。
+ @3 y6 `& {" j4 N( `9 E5 ~! AThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
2 w' m6 C5 Q) H' [3 ~0 }1 g$ H! RI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
: d) P; J6 I! rIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) J/ }/ w# p$ H8 b3 ~I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
; t; z3 h! H. h, U8 Y2 MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ Q, [2 @+ w5 f2 ^! LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 W8 }/ Z& f: y# O3 W* eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 A; q- L4 j- n3 a( T4 n3 Q* l! @Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 i8 S/ r9 G+ q8 P5 Z7 L8 mI want to confess that I love you,
# I* {0 R) j/ EBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& e" d: n5 D& j* h) a- H4 VIf today isn’t too late,
% {/ q% G) x; t* \5 C8 V- k8 yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- M# m4 `8 \* ICan I entrust it to you?
/ x2 V8 V4 |2 aEntrust my love within your heart

9 j. [3 Z! n4 a4 i[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

. ~* O1 v& V! t$ Y6 M. G# R6 j<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 O" v  H/ a0 O  u( C<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 }& {3 R$ ]2 d. R<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 x$ v2 W8 j( ^* w# x: F<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 D+ a. E9 B2 Q. y+ U<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
* u* E. A& i3 R<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 \; B2 z7 N* \6 |! o<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* E  ^" x* i; B) ~<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ T9 U" n. I# D8 Z  h# E% ~<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  {- r: Y- ~5 z6 i<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ s, {! ?) z9 q$ n<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! b5 V2 s+ @+ P! r' }<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# J9 |% }# E9 H$ t8 G, n" {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ f) c1 m9 `* u$ I& @7 F: }1 p$ S<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* K+ G5 R/ L6 R$ {, P) v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. h( A7 R! H8 ?/ M+ C- d( v& ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ f7 s3 d) m' y6 k) ]0 M1 F/ ?* M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  p+ L' R6 x' m/ _! V<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" \% ~3 E8 ^+ O# K4 i. I, M<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 _3 W  `, n6 e+ C# ?<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. M$ S4 ]1 J( Z$ x+ b7 z<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- Y; p" T/ b$ y! b) T0 ^3 E<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; W) r9 y. C" e8 ?- Z* [<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& B3 l) ~% E- s  _. k. _  r! D8 U4 Q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. q, o$ _2 w6 D/ b- m' l4 _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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8 E* F% b9 \' Z0 N  G+ b" W8 w这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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: G, a% D1 y* z$ c" U" H8 D! I5 I<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>