【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
) n; t  O3 u6 a$ `9 t, @; gThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ N3 p5 ?5 p# w  N1 j5 X; }% Q! pThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, K5 W& ^$ s1 w: ^2 l% q$ _From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
# G& M- y0 @  g6 oBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
% e. H2 Z' g! P/ `8 B% f/ N, gLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
* b6 r( d; k# s' N: F* v/ L& p6 v6 jI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
; A8 f# H' I4 ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 s  C7 X' k5 R+ j. GI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# O5 e( O' B; k0 ^+ `" N2 {- hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" t/ @+ V8 l& \$ MEntrust my love within your heart
5 `7 ]  f4 w: a+ }0 [/ b- |Love… just the word love
7 y; N& _2 E1 K' KWhy is it so difficult to express?
* ^  _# d4 M; T- t/ A. gI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 }% Z- |9 d3 x2 C7 vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" o; ^; i$ g$ @1 [Can I entrust it to you?
: }" Q! v' g4 d% Y% O- |2 ~6 KEntrust my love within your heart
, D7 x9 k# K4 e; E- G! U6 kCan I entrust it to you?
0 g6 ?3 d4 r% t' HEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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" ?( \$ e/ o+ @  L<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 ~1 V, \8 w" D<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
7 J3 P2 _! s2 E* J' `<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 _2 n6 T- p* R+ X4 T<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* j# h" y% o# ?# q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 w# Q9 I$ I$ ^( u! R  V<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% p6 o, m$ v! h7 V  z( o<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ X0 f: i5 a' U* d3 t<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 i, R( b; ^; Q<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 }( c8 Q  L  ~+ R<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 n: i5 X; A% \3 A3 X<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! \7 @1 w  u1 w, Q# y. f<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ O* {0 H3 r$ j, i<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- ]; E( X8 i5 V( d/ }<P>但我不会</P>
* v7 b2 q2 E$ D4 v  t8 l* {<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* u3 C/ ~# i+ O; ~! Y$ ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 y- }' _& f) y5 Z<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 y  a* t  ^& H; S9 K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, K7 E' X" Z( I5 L<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# |  U  S. E+ m+ `+ r* v3 ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, F2 P( b" Y0 x# D<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 ?- N+ b9 t: N7 `<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ E6 c/ J' S6 a+ q" g- C. q7 l<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( y& v- b# R( i, ~( F/ C6 k<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
) b- X* N) \! y, I) W<P>But I never did </P>
5 x0 ^! G( T1 h; B5 Y) A& w9 n<P>但我不会 </P>
5 B! m4 k% X' j- C4 D# B: O1 T<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- c) @- {9 n" B$ z2 ]+ B7 }2 Z* l* k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 ?( u+ ]8 B2 v* y6 E- o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# D3 [+ y- k, t- b  C5 t<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' @. N! X) G5 R' d  R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& ]. U  d  V# }. y: d% y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 T0 G( s% Q# {  b: s% D! I1 a2 e<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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" E# N7 X1 L/ y  ^7 F 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

- _5 g  h3 K8 T这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 l+ P7 s& l( m' |<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>