【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# v" ?4 Q- ^: e1 d: ?; FFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
8 H5 f' f% R5 yBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) Y+ _+ ~4 ^& R: {. WIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
. Z; m( d% H7 P" [. TLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ q. m6 {/ ^; m2 \7 CBut I never did
( q& J# O" q1 |+ }9 XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ `# R3 u* v: {" |% u. rI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& y/ t8 }! b, b2 M. J" e- q  `, tI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) B) R5 S/ I% X' j( N6 U( Q8 @) f7 MBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 K3 p& v% }1 o. J! L  S' }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, _' }  z1 p( i" YCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# R# |+ i4 U  }" |7 SCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

# K& u  L4 ^9 l  q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( w% z2 v3 I7 O: X9 a0 S0 h<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" i% y0 t; B8 l' @<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& r$ A! H* r% q" Q) H<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 w" m0 G0 U8 b! S<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% k( T7 ]3 [5 N0 b& F+ w+ M1 z<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" ~8 T$ _7 ^* v2 W<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 U- r6 ]" I) k3 M: G* l, Y! Q<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 A: `: x) o& t: B: H6 h, f9 V, h3 O<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  ]: p6 e; ~1 L9 n& \- I<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* j" A8 l& z/ b% D' U' S<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ Q3 O4 J: c: M) @- ~) ?4 ~2 {<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) U( E1 n1 ^$ J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 ]3 V8 n$ y" y, v5 X<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 @* w3 w. t( V" b( @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. p+ B% ^& [; Q. a0 K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  j( `8 m% v2 o- D$ _$ k<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 y8 D# W  ^0 x<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 {/ i( ?& t( f; `/ ~<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 Z+ c. e" }5 G<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 j* n: T( @3 d<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# Q6 J% Q8 k; b/ H" q6 o8 Q, Y( l<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 H! Q8 U% }7 B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 r# v! z7 |5 k; ]8 x5 j" a0 [+ ?<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 W( h1 y/ I8 ]2 ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' S; T" g6 m+ t2 C4 `; x+ L" w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& K$ ?6 N4 C! r8 t<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ k- }# Q4 \/ f' |<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>