【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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, {/ a0 _: X" `0 P* |3 |9 S5 \我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
. i: @# r. w8 BWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. {' ]. f6 k1 F% JI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* X7 L( M) l3 z# ?# [" Z/ @Love… just the word love
) E( }: S/ a4 Z$ c( z4 \Why is it so difficult to express?
$ P4 p) _9 `0 PI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 m7 o/ C8 p# X6 _) aIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
- ~# e- [6 [$ b8 uEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

- q: C- ~  w8 o* q9 m9 B<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
$ Y2 @4 c, A0 [<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ j5 R8 Q6 S5 [" z3 V6 S<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
1 R; x2 L& N1 A# L<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
0 _* @8 X$ C8 {- X; m<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: {3 \8 _9 K5 e2 K* |+ k" }3 Z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; \5 l% F- e# C) A* l1 J' u<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 _( y. V, W5 S/ ?. U<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 @  n3 x6 `% c2 \! v7 h/ y& O/ ]<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 ]5 q6 k3 |! w+ b7 P$ L<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
6 N6 U- J" i0 K9 c<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 Z3 M# X; \* A- v<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; j5 g8 J5 w; |<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 w/ ^: C% k9 H) W1 y, m! z<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 \; z+ Q! m! w; J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 [. g6 U* O7 m9 ~+ ^1 d( i: u* u4 g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 [4 q2 T; v) {: ~, ^, v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& W* j8 ^$ r" F# [+ L+ X<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
) p% v+ f: O2 m, i, I<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 U4 C* a8 @. n+ T& ~- j) J<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ n7 E0 k* p. k2 D5 i, s8 Y<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
! b1 A. {1 J4 _2 O" o( ]1 X( S<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' @1 N8 Y1 _- P9 n7 C7 @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 L$ M/ W( @- ]% y' X- E! q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) k4 s9 n8 W: G" ^$ h2 G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- d) v( ]" v8 o) F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# G" Q6 R4 P) {: M, K7 t+ y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! M. j! R! N, f3 Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 K% ^; [. ^8 T: n8 _/ A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& U8 t* u# X1 h4 T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ z# O8 Z8 X( L<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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8 K* a) t9 i* Y% c# g' v 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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& d* ~5 y9 s8 ]; _! k" L这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>