【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
% g1 }! n! K$ |* kThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. u% l2 V2 \4 D) s' }& u+ ~2 YFrom the first moment we met,
& g0 Y, K2 ?9 d& I! gI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! w9 X2 d% U2 w) [  F3 EI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
1 J% N5 x4 b# I5 r. UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ @7 @6 O: x1 |  \' gIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! u! {& M+ w  i9 t" aCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 T% o: U! c& y# |, k+ aLove… just the word love
# v  N$ |9 d/ s1 p4 w; I9 N7 e5 rWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ s1 ~- F2 X( P: xI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 W4 N5 G4 C( h. ]  vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 k- ~' k3 b  }9 U0 HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& r9 T% L% N! a* L: Z4 j( u! Q" f6 y- G<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 b3 r  {6 P# g$ V- R: l<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 B; Y% [6 p- x0 E4 {<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: V, V, `4 t4 y<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ u" \4 V! q! D( }1 l1 h1 L2 E& X<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 B; g0 ^( F$ w, \5 U<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! {6 C% \/ \2 y4 d8 H2 i<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
( J% i: U6 K) g, @* z<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ |3 T! |& l* Y+ P! f% q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ ^6 L( W, l) U! i3 J4 L<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ a" e! w$ W- C3 @- J) o. U( W" r<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% O2 [5 ?1 D/ b! z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
: d" m, k1 Q1 J: V/ X0 D# [$ T<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ C" |5 l9 f& v' E# |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 y" o: n; T6 B5 F7 E% o% ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& W2 c) k4 c, Z1 ]! t+ h" u0 F5 q0 ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 d) |% T+ a% c( D<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ [. X, f2 Q- x0 S* C<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' O  ~* Q+ I4 }( }# N/ s# q  p% A1 \+ v6 z<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! l' ~& i- K/ p; Z& Y<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ D. \& ~0 `# l5 X- m6 o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, p' h/ u- _) r" c) v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 |5 ~: t! \, T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 d$ I& V9 D4 Q  F8 I2 u+ b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 C9 o" Q* z* N# i2 a<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ l' b. C9 W& T* [; a7 k0 W<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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6 Q9 @0 B! o* Z* }, ?- A8 f这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* U$ O: L. b3 |' a/ l" x<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>