【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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/ B! L* f  j4 p. J. m$ ^我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" A6 j2 g# B) F$ B, F6 _* L4 lThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% I; [, }4 Z. r; cFrom the first moment we met,
% y. B) I1 X- P  tI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
' c! `7 J. n' y2 V. Z5 YLove… just the word love
" B4 b( W+ O4 X8 g8 iWhy is it so difficult to express?
, D, y0 w6 @9 D# h4 }  `0 S, m) U  RI want to confess that I love you,
3 Z. u& [* o7 @( \But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 S3 [: R& |2 n( ^- \; DI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- Z7 ^# f4 P! x# oCan I entrust it to you?
- s+ N! d* ]6 J/ Y& fEntrust my love within your heart
! x& Q2 g* s* ^# vLove… just the word love
  N. v3 m- P! aWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: c3 q0 k* X& d5 k: p  KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
$ C4 g& i7 \+ ]  \& ~. Q  QEntrust my love within your heart
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' M8 o/ U. }2 ?5 c2 \  _[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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. ^$ c/ i+ J9 N$ R/ Z; Z! \: a<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ R2 _7 }( O' d. T# b# e<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 _; J6 e) \2 t$ v% d+ r' ?<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# i% ^5 k! c# m) N  k<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% L# `: m( I8 e; K# ]4 ^. O3 n<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 ]" X6 m9 G( u<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 C4 V+ Z; y/ b* m1 @2 k<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 o3 a6 Q" c% Y, m5 |. X<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
# v0 \, Y2 g; |7 G1 `( `6 w0 c  X<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* k- F+ V% r/ X+ ^1 Q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, g5 e5 T7 F' W% v8 J8 q" m<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
2 C. B/ @& b6 n: y6 ?<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. f2 m# R! b4 x" u* c; g# j7 T8 _<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
, Y* {5 G9 K5 j# V+ h' h<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  A. U. j/ _9 V! G3 k<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* @$ p; I5 @2 V# Z% @+ R, G<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ y1 G, \. R, r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( n2 N0 O$ }4 k<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) K6 r1 O" W! E" L3 {<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 V- E" W7 \4 a, Q. i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 _1 ^6 _, N5 `, Z' S  @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 v1 F8 Q. K) h9 p4 R8 N<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
9 g& ]5 z! S2 v. I  n: p<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ O( W2 d. h# z+ J, g<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 Z& k5 m( p3 S# g4 K<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ Y# ~5 \2 V3 L$ L<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
( \" w* O/ f6 |<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' K4 n# @0 L* a1 @% [4 J& c+ r$ a0 w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: ]  \: i5 r# c" F9 t$ s/ }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: f7 N0 Y1 P5 S  v9 y  K7 \, j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- ?6 k8 X( P3 b% c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
$ l2 `/ U8 @1 _7 a" O$ s& b<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 L  G' s, D$ X$ _* w& q* G( ]6 O; T 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. L8 @3 W% z3 \: O6 E这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 a5 ]) [- Z# G" }, o; k3 W<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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8 Y* d1 s+ G# v) B0 a! {<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>