【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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% [1 ?% U2 ]! j' Q9 N' c+ u& S8 F我另将歌词附在此。
( x% {6 X2 I; J# e' w  zThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, X5 f2 n& ?/ [# fFrom the first moment we met,
. ^: n9 _: _# W+ ?I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  ~4 |6 W' S3 F! D& d7 z8 @If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
" W2 \  r8 m$ ]4 VLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 k8 h- p4 S9 b3 Z) iI want to confess that I love you,
; n% _' g7 b& _# g1 o6 iBut I never did
% i+ R" j+ g5 O+ R9 s" L  z" NOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
. `: N* D7 }& R. k" T5 zEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: y" d+ }5 J' hBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 P* M8 q) Z' o3 b- S! w& lCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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) S# E3 e! \1 x# {& E$ _/ x5 B[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) q+ |" [* N" b  h9 G<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 a& ?/ m( P! d<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
4 D7 |( ?5 L5 C<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
( ~0 Y* X/ D5 T- r! v<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 M/ I9 N$ M) `% K1 [/ q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
% y$ }$ r& @# r/ l9 }4 q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 W) t7 m( A/ T' W<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ G  A9 x: |5 o% R7 z( b+ Z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 W- X1 g0 ], Y+ o  |<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 j7 t. q( |& |6 s<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  L3 C* ^2 n$ R5 r) q<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 B$ F! f$ y8 y" K2 O<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ ]4 y4 j% f8 U/ f9 ~/ m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 f' w8 R! f$ k6 g8 @0 I" s( d<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 T. w  o/ a+ Z3 P. D% {<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 d9 [- O4 Q9 q# y& `5 c6 u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, N8 j: w7 x/ q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
9 z9 J- g3 S3 O0 y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- _' F: A. u2 L( ]3 K4 u<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, V$ W3 @9 X7 B" e' e8 P<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- {7 C  X; `$ r, u+ v( s1 Z* w! m<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
/ m. m. _, \0 [  r. X; q0 ~, c9 j3 U<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 [! [! I9 \8 {; J2 r<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 j2 X4 f* u; Z7 f! R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) p; Q! u) ^: [$ n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 B* j, O0 S' w; A% v+ ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, e( O$ K, \  F- ?; |9 t. T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ \' d" G/ G! r2 y9 _! n<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 @9 y4 R2 ]) O 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

5 }/ Y+ |8 p* v5 u+ h, I这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>