【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
! X& f' {, o9 _6 {( d% HThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
- O9 T" r0 m- [1 G% v' NI already loved you with all my heart
$ Z( ^( L. B" ~* \We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) ~: a4 q& ^+ r4 M8 g9 e7 \; [I would probably know how you feel
2 z! S# e' e; T! NLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ C+ F& N0 w& U& p0 S  Z: {I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 h, P# J* a6 R+ t7 Y5 D3 u9 bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 x6 f8 Z- I+ e; p+ dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: t; H. w2 M4 h* X: KI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, a% u3 R  L5 y6 E9 qCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
7 K; J4 W  k! gWhy is it so difficult to express?
) Q9 z4 r  u4 d; i) a9 |, ^7 j& w( A$ JI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 W3 b. `# L4 U- F& G% T3 ~If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 P# o9 ~7 V( A: C6 W9 EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 f  p( O( [+ d, m: FCan I entrust it to you?
8 Q) w4 r1 h* r7 h! S$ p3 D$ QEntrust my love within your heart
; W% Q$ O  Q1 U8 N/ L  u  d4 lCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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' w  ]3 \  h- _1 p3 {<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) W0 b, W( r  E' I$ r<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
+ z0 y/ C: C- g  v+ v<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 W% R9 w5 g- h  x( G9 S) z" @<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" _, n2 p9 E) G5 J$ C<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* n6 `% O+ @7 q, R<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
6 I- V5 z! m) X' h) F/ m7 ~3 S" F<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
( f5 I$ r! _% g# a& u+ m<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 ^% d/ e2 t) i& @7 W<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. R6 `, i, q3 l5 {3 [! I<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 n9 R3 o+ r5 N6 n2 `: r<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" u. B. V7 W4 W, ]: O: u<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- k# f$ B4 P- ?% P<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 @( v6 @/ y( D/ `9 W<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" f  {! I2 q# y9 s7 \$ \8 o+ E! g<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ T0 f0 e4 e' x* N<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 Y5 L% W/ i, ?" _2 V/ g<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 g: B- a& N3 Y: G* F% I<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* ?8 i# {$ U  |8 |# D* n: a: d<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 E) S6 H! p% F0 [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ P! S7 Y5 \, W; V<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 H- x: B$ @: D) `# ]. E+ l<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
0 X( B+ H& w3 j, z: @) m( `: S3 u: m& Y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ J* ]  U; ^/ t" d1 D  n% S1 H8 Z<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 o  z* P. {! i9 o! b: L<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
2 K% C; Q$ X# ~, u' F: E! b9 z<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* q' a2 k" g+ I( C% F+ N  h( f<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 m9 y/ D' j) p/ k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ B( e3 c) a( ^) O; Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 G% a. B/ g% B, V0 g1 t4 b+ `, q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 e0 j$ c! P' Z  b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 D8 z1 G: _. [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- A+ S+ L5 E7 W& F' ?: \; D<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& z; z% a' s( ?+ L9 _9 H8 x; g7 a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( _& J- K- Y' \+ q. c<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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& g! P& N3 }0 t6 r& `. o. H 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

( l' Z: q; d7 s- i  }& y5 F这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ E7 d  p1 y) o) J9 R1 z  j<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>