【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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/ Y' }' ?( i8 `& n0 N, A% Z# v7 ~我另将歌词附在此。
+ v8 f+ l! _  m+ [8 p% }* LThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 A9 F: \1 P% p8 p* vThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 f. q$ X2 j9 o; a. S; ?From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& Z" t/ o8 s+ w$ ?6 c" F  kIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ s7 H( u/ d! K3 KI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
4 ?2 [6 R& K6 t8 ~: ?1 VWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
& O" X$ `3 c/ I% j. QBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 n' m+ y" ~( m' x6 \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. A! U- V8 f" b" f1 o, I+ ACan I entrust it to you?
7 j& b4 }9 r; k3 @- uEntrust my love within your heart
! e0 J& F" ]9 @( i& HLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ s" U. p1 p! E( Q0 d3 b3 A2 tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, P% a) G# B( {: ]# x: hIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
' s) v$ u. M+ J+ S: a0 a. YEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
( H' T; ^0 l) U" j% DEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

: o, n" `( }( r9 O8 c" t% J<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 g( T- V' u2 K% X4 c$ E; W7 y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 ]3 ?9 }/ ]4 K: V6 i3 U% b<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ Y' V, b7 ^0 \0 d! M' V3 q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
) q5 \6 R2 }  f0 {% h# ^<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* B' f! N/ [/ _3 B+ p3 l8 a5 l<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ ]# ?7 H  y3 Y, L<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 U( D/ o: d1 o: s0 y6 v: k<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- h: V# R; ?; Q6 S5 Z<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 U0 ?) t9 j! t$ i* }% t<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
; j$ U9 H& S# X8 h+ h* p<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% n- }: _; c3 R. x3 n  _2 g; _<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( T! G: q7 k% H& `' }4 N<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 @& m  E( M- ]+ W5 X# K<P>但我不会</P>
% v( m( d1 k2 T( c+ z& }% ~<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ o' F- Z0 I3 u: Y$ q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
8 X9 l3 R" g/ ]<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 y% F1 J6 v4 W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( [& O0 H/ `) y# F/ r# p, y  Y& _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, m4 q" O" A3 g8 b1 a! e$ f<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 @* q" d* V* J/ u" c: Q9 S' a<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 L& u8 q6 T/ ]2 {<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 {1 D; D# B' M7 ^<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 l2 n6 M2 f4 Z2 |% B; b<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
0 ^4 O; E6 s9 _6 s, z% v<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 H! l' f0 w0 y# g<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
% F; i! j* \/ b! c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 V8 @' o5 e' D3 o+ T0 H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ g* ~* A# K, V0 P  _" Y; O<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ |9 u) z. q1 G- U1 L4 W<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 o5 z* O, b' F( t3 v% i6 B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( k! `- [! }' O+ `! ~+ _8 S( f<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

! t8 u2 Y+ |3 }9 h5 T; G 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ L: }6 y) q% h( ^5 y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 c1 w+ J! V6 M2 j$ o! C<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>