【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
1 p6 B" ^; _/ e9 p& e$ C* h7 d  I0 Y6 vThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
4 F9 p3 c! B5 s, d% G4 J0 H5 r3 {I already loved you with all my heart
. V- n  p, U7 Z0 Q2 Y0 fWe meet and talk everyday,
- Q0 z, ?' y  w  @5 CBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
7 u& D, Y  h! e  {- L& Z  l! O8 mI would probably know how you feel
+ Y- K0 c, B8 B9 r/ c# R  vLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! J* q3 i2 Q' B5 f7 [4 dIf today isn’t too late,
% T, s( C  W' ^% ?3 J+ ^- M; _I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 x: E- S1 ]/ J3 ]2 V) H+ OEntrust my love within your heart
; ]# ?4 n3 R+ b9 YLove… just the word love
. k% C; a: S6 P1 ]4 b4 b: j# HWhy is it so difficult to express?
9 N; X: \# i/ d7 nI want to confess that I love you,
# \0 ~- p% j$ {2 a  XBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( g6 j# i, t: Y) `7 b  uI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 e$ |, w2 V( g4 I% S4 T) i( c; `' RCan I entrust it to you?
3 H1 {3 @# c# A; z4 qEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* T% ]: m  Q& f. X; I<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 j) m4 a, R1 w& N+ N<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* n; v7 w7 L0 j/ J. F<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
6 g, F& T) k# P& g- P<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& {- }5 u! a8 g, [$ z2 v. f5 y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, W  x* H' ~5 i* ]<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ j2 H; x' t. {6 |3 h<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 q4 ^: X+ P4 @6 s<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* ?4 `7 J( _9 [! i! z<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% r6 T8 v5 [8 Q. m! D! d<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
  o% T0 J  H- g# N<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; m' r) D6 W* s$ O- _- f<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- |4 ^1 Z+ ?9 I4 w  m$ o3 X+ ~<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 l2 P6 e/ q( C) u$ v<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 I4 D: a0 q  v6 {0 K: Z: o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& X& Z, j; {+ I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 V# r& l; O- |- u7 H/ Q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 f4 Y/ T8 z5 E" |( k8 V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: \! U/ j/ b* o. T4 e: u" _<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 O: Y0 r  A+ h  j<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# [" c4 X/ h) R. W+ |# h$ T, e# N: Q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  w) A3 k, ~- v% Z/ |9 {<P>But I never did </P>
* P$ O) l3 L% G. v; r" Y7 k! y<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! z* r! \' M6 C* B9 A( G% H<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 {: E- a2 @: K<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
( C4 m! O' D6 f6 b7 F: k/ I. o<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- }# G  f3 C5 J& u# T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% z! D/ U5 V6 z% p2 b' l& [4 `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! [% @$ m1 x) W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 |8 ]/ A0 ~' n, K# P9 G- f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) K$ u* p# S6 @6 V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# |4 d( T5 h- ?$ V4 B<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 G: d( Y9 [' {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 a& _  d4 Y( `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
3 }+ Y' z7 C3 O( q' F<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

, h+ C7 R9 Z* M8 p" q6 P$ G" z( H这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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/ N& y1 t* N4 V' o<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ b4 o2 D% E2 d! ?<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>