【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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1 M6 a: c# D7 F" ~我另将歌词附在此。
2 T# d! y6 x, X. t; QThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: q& c( k8 p, s; E- HFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
* D1 g0 n- `& V0 |We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 A- \+ G+ G) `! Z8 o! P! G+ BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- u& [' Z2 O2 T  G1 v1 z" e$ ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* o* x( z, r( D6 @' DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# t' R5 c: k6 RLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
, M/ R: e: K; |6 n+ w9 Y& ], VI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 K, U6 C6 l7 A% G: kIf today isn’t too late,
0 N9 ^# L+ Y/ f2 l$ K3 a3 n6 LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  x3 j) f8 o( WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ j( B4 B. V) j; N  c8 f4 ^Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
. c+ l' U" e2 R# C' NEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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" r0 ?' x% C( b<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 x& O& [% U- P. W4 _9 [, d3 {' Q<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ S& Z$ F, R+ c+ F6 l! S! \<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" K; I7 E7 y) Y7 D% V5 t<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 b- `6 S2 b  @<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 l% `" ]% y* r% P7 T8 h5 N<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' g* F4 M5 Q: X+ b5 f) K<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. c/ v+ w/ w2 [6 n<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
# ]( _2 A6 E: ?% D<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 w) _) r, f) m4 C$ g8 ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* ?4 z( M- x( s  u& b0 C% r<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 _1 D% s4 @. a; d2 z% o<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 Y% _( n0 n5 F! o2 l" A' Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ K& C: z; ]7 o7 u5 }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 b2 a9 b: q$ k3 ]0 W6 \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  @% b) G4 I+ O$ }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* E1 j# e2 l: Y3 h- }/ I' e: }0 W<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ A4 ?( o) i: O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
. {" ^! e( e! n! p<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. ?, _$ w) D1 Z; [1 z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 D$ Q+ U( L/ v4 ]1 d<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ R- ]% j, c4 V, d5 }<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' z' r8 H9 b" h<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 k( ^" c0 `" D4 ~7 T, e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) h" T/ k1 S6 Q' N% c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# M/ G( A0 F1 K# R3 F/ Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: F3 g% f; R& N8 o* a  ]+ Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 j' r5 B0 t3 F! a- u! d5 Q/ N- e& B<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  D4 i% D* I- K1 X5 D1 y<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
: B2 X( v7 V/ y<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

( H* R" x/ Z: r2 b, f1 k这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 y& \6 \( d+ x6 Z+ C<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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; Z& I8 ^9 t& j6 k1 ~( A1 W<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>