【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ p& `5 n; l* H7 f5 h+ L# _) w! e& j! n+ nFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
, f  C: e7 |% [3 h# K/ \We meet and talk everyday,
# M$ s, f( U5 y7 v+ HBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
3 a: ~' Z9 O! X% \  t: \, jIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, ?! D2 r  Q$ P0 U( E: e3 [I would probably know how you feel
! Y. l! ?* W4 tLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. C: J  B+ }  wI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' c8 g# r$ q2 kCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 P6 \- p' M$ J. H. MBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
. i; R$ X4 g( SI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, Z  g! S. A, iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ e9 s+ A- c$ eCan I entrust it to you?
* d" W+ P2 n0 F* k7 c6 P, r  A: t, JEntrust my love within your heart
- @2 g( x1 A8 S2 l+ t, R5 mCan I entrust it to you?
0 [7 @  [* D) p% }Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

* o+ s  L2 v+ W- T<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 l, c/ C! h1 s* }<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 X4 l" U9 d6 k; N4 B( u<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& b9 N! a  ]4 F) x3 Q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 a, ]3 f% Y5 }3 ^$ s0 f! q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% U% X3 n4 R/ _9 ?' v<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 L; C" }/ \$ C2 {<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ }' m$ n4 X% I0 n; S9 n( M3 s. Z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% s! X, X( h' R' g" \. l( G+ Y; j<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
  A) c& D, s% V% ~1 w6 y- r<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
4 x' ~8 n+ S% L& h; N<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ s/ ^9 x5 D# s6 M<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ G  ?8 R# M: H0 j<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
. w/ [) F. t" k1 t<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- w- C9 J. }2 ]0 ~<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% I1 \' L2 i% r: P" b<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" k/ E" a4 ]2 |# Q* t<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  f3 B2 Q& S6 _1 f4 Y; ?<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  Z# }- V# J2 m5 q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ z/ s9 t5 D; o# }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. Z, S; Q+ s( ]- ]( J( b<P>Love… just the word love </P>
4 K0 d* T4 W7 x, i' n5 {3 `. g<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 q- W2 ?# C% |& P& Q# s<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. O3 Y$ r1 l* ?' U<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! E9 r4 c5 ^& n( \5 L<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. K' |, ^, v- `6 ~, ]( z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
# O4 X+ B5 ]* K3 F! U- I<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! A2 d* j# ?2 N+ @0 `6 H9 Q1 b/ J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; X* H" p$ ^: F' u: [& a2 K6 \; K<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# l. l/ e* o) |. q# b1 Y# j4 V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ n8 n- O7 E2 E- L<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( I3 d$ T- k$ `+ D; d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# p9 A  ^* w3 K; G  h$ w* ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

) X% R% N$ C5 E0 Q 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

3 I/ p; _. R% j% K) m2 Q4 O这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>