【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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% X& C+ l/ f" `4 n) Z我另将歌词附在此。
# q$ K5 p' z9 D5 b# G7 sThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' n: y+ u0 c2 X  mThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 t! z4 ]( l/ D0 Y0 r, dFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
. c" T) P, B" v" WWe meet and talk everyday,
# V& P8 h) M6 W% ?But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ w: x. D7 B8 j  n/ v" ~( OIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ Q. C' a" m) r. ~2 e, Z7 zI would probably know how you feel
$ i! B: X* G9 o, F( ?' \' K3 NLove… just the word love
2 z0 b% K/ y0 H* r2 tWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 _5 J, ~; Z! J, K) SI want to confess that I love you,
$ M# w. g. t* G9 p5 h5 mBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 P! a* W# H( d! w% _8 q9 z9 yIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. ]9 R1 u$ y9 l$ pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
4 }7 f9 b! b5 n8 Z% ^Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 i! q4 B, s, q8 |I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
; g% _" l; G' P5 O" aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- m9 G# y# W7 L/ yIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ @' B) c" ~' a. `, MCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 f- a  ^. V) \/ ^2 H6 ?<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. a& ~0 s/ H+ A3 ~3 L+ F<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: \! k! D6 k' M7 @! X: V" c- z<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! F4 z5 b* o' {8 ^* v! P<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 V6 \  O# S6 g- Q+ o<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
& L/ L" j+ J& ^7 @  t7 b# S<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ ~3 C. E5 H! a1 D. k% e" d+ b<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, I3 O0 ^# t' c/ P3 l( t<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
+ l3 w. |6 A' v/ t! ~3 @<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! F% _; @4 @9 ^$ ~+ n* b3 P<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 Y) g$ O  L$ U2 g# [' C- y* H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. m9 u. P  }& ?! o! X<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ N* |  z2 C. }. k- [' R; f<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 g% Z3 L& y. `; j, X<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; M; B0 |( s8 v$ z; F% t! W<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 ^+ C& i1 W0 `) z) n2 A- P<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- b& L( F% F  P, N+ H8 J<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* ]' g2 z9 y+ Y: l2 l<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# X" d' b+ m! t  z7 L) E<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
% z2 m5 c  |' Q) Q: s% H) }6 l* D" y<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 V6 {8 Z0 a. _8 u" G) D2 G1 x<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 J& |  V& L+ @  T1 K, ~' e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 T  Q; u  U+ l7 f# a% e# c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 K. _( {7 h* [5 U0 k0 L: F  A. v; J- u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 n5 M  }# D9 h  K0 u- x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ c) ~! y& m/ w' J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: M# j# ?) x# y2 s9 S% }1 n<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ n; r5 g5 a3 M9 Z. Y) I# `* \7 A<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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! A; \) E: e7 p* l6 b& P4 h这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; g$ u! h5 E3 k+ ]2 H<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>