【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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4 x' y9 l  ~5 R# S/ E- E8 }, N4 T我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& Z: g' }- s4 c. pThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
2 i- E% e3 }' c+ iI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
* S) h* y& B5 @- Z; _! g, i/ UBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
4 X$ s4 U! G" z0 M9 S! HLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) m) q* j2 E( ^& E# T* kOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; D  b1 \) _% j$ [, `If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 ?, n# h" h6 G! z6 hEntrust my love within your heart
+ ^/ q- K: b; o8 J6 e, \! L$ t- oLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# |* K3 I& [8 i$ |6 u; @( H/ QI want to confess that I love you,
6 P* G4 |* O- w5 I6 t9 J8 pBut I never did
0 `4 W6 i, T- U1 j0 ]One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. y& K" D6 @; r- T! \1 g/ \If today isn’t too late,
3 k0 \( i1 C9 AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 P, K8 |4 ^4 u* L- }  `' JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
' x, D- X6 E' E* j4 {4 E3 pEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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; }: {" H/ l9 x) ?2 J+ R  F( e6 c[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& _* b: Q2 v9 l1 h1 J* J4 \<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* l* g( Q  h6 ^% j$ w( w<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* _% b( G! I/ N3 P- {<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* z8 _; D! ~0 U3 T: [<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: {. |5 R2 M( {/ R<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 T: E7 W/ D2 A* v5 ^<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* M8 Q; K% N3 m% f<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ x# l3 O% N& ?& b7 l* r+ b<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
2 C8 f/ u& l9 K* T<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 S2 O, U2 w  H# A" ?<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
. }& @0 I1 ?2 w* u: b<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( c$ b/ u4 B; T8 N, X* {# [<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ d) g* T. a! V$ u% m5 O<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) U) d! o; U7 N, g( p6 W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* x+ `; x0 S7 D2 M2 k4 g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 M! M- }& l7 q: ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 _, o7 I8 z. m; A/ X: o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! l* }4 k+ z1 e% g% |. C- P) P, u+ B<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# o% D9 X* C! t2 @1 ?* @<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" [2 e" j' z4 n( q  ]) P# z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
+ U8 i. }" @) k8 k: }. J6 Z<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
, A2 W7 J! j9 N. R, p8 {( C<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; b. I6 Y% p, e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ [3 \* o+ H0 r& `" {<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; x! S* z) I& U7 m* Z! M& r  `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 K2 q& R2 X, d6 V3 N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) Y; r) s; l5 f: n; |4 y2 j& X1 ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ a1 R) E8 g7 w 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

4 S  I3 @& Q4 w. I% G3 D1 C这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* b* ~' G* x5 W9 Y2 c+ C1 t1 X! a+ k' _<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>