【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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- u' `$ o( k0 j% J4 C& i8 g. u我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 Q5 A# I- B3 c: o3 i& nThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 `3 ]5 `6 w, j6 r" a. {From the first moment we met,
  }" P% ^. C" o5 `% X" l% M4 A( XI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
! b  b/ Y- i. Q1 kBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 b( N& L% [0 V' T4 J4 qI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 ]0 V. P8 b% [# |) C4 G9 kI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 `# ?' Q) i, R3 T3 c* NIf today isn’t too late,
2 V2 x; |2 l( t3 @' JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* g# Y( R2 y8 R. _! m0 @9 f' W! yEntrust my love within your heart
3 i4 Q; M4 R" b. C4 _' [. z; vLove… just the word love
! `$ o' e) R7 AWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
" t' \' U5 D! U1 |6 [But I never did
4 I) u) s+ `% n  b& c8 x* bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 @- ]* H* |, |- Y$ PIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( G: N/ \. i  e' ^* w& b, v9 \6 uCan I entrust it to you?
- u3 |0 A7 S' SEntrust my love within your heart
' q- ^2 ^" d0 U- ]: T, M) M/ SCan I entrust it to you?
: s6 E& Q0 X5 C9 PEntrust my love within your heart
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+ r  G3 x3 F) }( d[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

+ G% q! q! P$ h) D- V/ S: h<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
! I& r: l0 X6 {$ D<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
0 x* L& i' O/ A8 \<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 ~9 X( ]( t9 T& U<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 S3 v- B0 M  F; S2 Y$ J<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% d  m* {+ r, o; v* S7 `; o<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 P- s' h; ^3 b' N7 Y<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 I# N8 M! W) Q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 |% r) Z6 P& D: B6 `<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- I$ m+ G+ B$ J- R7 b" [( u5 v1 a& c" Y3 l<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 X. J$ B, _9 \' N4 m0 q<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 Q5 |  I" \% ~9 s# u+ e! g6 m  w- I<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
# T! [+ M2 g* b+ T) A<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
" V7 \! Y  e8 z0 O5 @" n<P>但我不会</P>
! E) s  b+ f4 K6 u. {<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 z. x, u" x8 B# c2 y3 d8 k# ?3 w<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: V1 w  A* r- Y, o0 q: c3 {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' H4 k: @, K. ~" j0 ?5 ]: N<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 j7 w# z  {) S& @/ Z" V# ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# {* Q* T; z+ |' i- k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ ]+ Z# @0 ?* E! n  x" @5 ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 L2 c: J! j% O1 c$ v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 }; t- K; U; G: ?<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
# O  a0 x2 _- o  W<P>But I never did </P>
6 y/ P8 E$ P& R; Y1 I4 G<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 O1 j. z: ?" _$ |0 q/ u8 V  {<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" S% C- V8 k* n6 X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 E! k" G/ P. w; w! H- f$ f<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ z& a& u4 G, V. u* M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& Y. {" I6 ~( r4 ]- B0 L3 |<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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0 G' O% z4 Y- T; w 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

/ c, Q$ Q! h' \1 a9 p/ ^( [, F8 N这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' e# o# m) q2 i6 K' \6 H这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 H3 l8 @  S; ]: x<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>