【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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$ D' ~0 Q4 W& F0 A0 ?* y! R' g我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
/ N- b" ~! J  l3 l; B6 UI already loved you with all my heart
' n2 z: x* {( O% A. eWe meet and talk everyday,
; u$ K& g) L. QBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
2 y' B% S0 i  \; w2 XLove… just the word love
5 C& m$ [" r6 R# H. m9 P, QWhy is it so difficult to express?
* L; T' V+ K' u% UI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- q- C9 T' d. R* T4 nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. N, ~, y1 q( RIf today isn’t too late,
) Y* C" M, v- d* t+ {! p3 S0 C, }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ [9 y; w% l- g" b7 j, i% d; u" LI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. q" r! q8 \# ~6 MCan I entrust it to you?
4 Q% p4 j: |+ Q& e7 |Entrust my love within your heart
7 S4 x1 R8 u4 pLove… just the word love
' A- d" N5 Z% K$ R" q1 ]1 ^Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" X9 Q4 Z6 Q, t& `+ u, `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, N" L3 |$ I; s" z3 l8 r$ ^: g& \Can I entrust it to you?
; N+ z0 L* D* y/ ^Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 p3 e  O# t! F$ e/ l<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 a4 z  V# T7 {7 _# Z2 ^<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
, r( t* ^4 ~" b: w1 E' y6 X+ u<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% j8 Y4 {2 o% i<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. J) S* \/ k" }) I# U" N<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 X5 P" ?  L: M) }' q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 J/ Z4 b9 e. C( x/ S<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( o# S5 H/ r2 s* T& S7 L/ L( y8 Q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  h! j0 D0 B0 ^- F+ M& d8 `<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ n/ `6 a) k9 O3 {+ |2 P<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 i6 j8 ~% ~8 Z5 D" Y<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 e3 U% M' w( ~0 ]<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 d% s% s/ c, I* A' c: w<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 b- W5 ~2 j* t; ~2 Z' g3 ]+ D: e; W<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! j7 X; [- Z' q2 j4 V9 U1 _<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 j0 o7 q* J" N+ i: ]# a2 j- k<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# U) V1 B: z, |. j& k' q6 h) l9 s1 o<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# b5 l! Q3 }+ e6 C" {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 D8 I1 ^) [) Q* f/ ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
1 c, s) s6 b: m<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: H( V- J% a( `<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
# h, Y4 a( I! {. Q4 O% q<P>但我不会 </P>
  T! M, w) G! c$ y9 j, O# Q<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ G) j! k* m" h# `' X: ^7 N<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 S* O/ z! A$ z' W0 s( E<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ e& c/ v6 v+ v* B<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: A# q$ @7 k) G$ X9 K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' t7 l& v1 ]- I  I7 [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. f+ c9 ^; w1 V9 P; c  m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 R5 `" a7 x0 t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
* v( z5 A- ?, t  }7 q- x8 C( N6 k<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
# J4 L* R  z5 P) u7 j/ d/ Z<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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% N3 m1 L3 u! X7 k+ D 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

" m& d- V* ~8 @# v0 Y9 l这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: j$ v; k+ @6 U; u; w1 Z<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>