【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ b* A2 O$ K5 C1 E& N' CFrom the first moment we met,
  S( t4 ^  |. M+ n2 vI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
. i3 I- U) H- w4 o  S0 qBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ R0 t) `# J. e0 a" i; p5 mI would probably know how you feel
0 g! K9 o: R9 Q) R( B1 dLove… just the word love
6 V0 |% T& e9 l( z4 h# @6 }Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' v; L9 z) i1 }* d& kOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ t# K4 M0 Q6 h% d' eIf today isn’t too late,
1 q( U2 A( q3 Y4 m2 q* A2 AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 M) t+ R! Y! n/ uI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* L. j. Y: M. a/ t3 kEntrust my love within your heart
$ x! S% o7 T3 I2 ALove… just the word love
# _. e6 V! Z8 l$ L6 N5 [/ `0 p: FWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 @+ K1 Q, a( [, b" w3 a' t, _But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
3 ~( F" Z  M$ pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
) ~* h: U  B+ ^! j* r' LEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

. _8 E' n% J1 Q( a<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. X5 S3 ?6 r4 Q& f# j<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
) d+ O# Q2 c8 d4 o3 z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 `* j4 I( j7 }7 c/ W9 \' [8 m<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
! G! k& `" S) p9 P! O<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
; I) t- F8 ]' S* E7 K4 }<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 `) s3 f  {$ \% q# V<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
" e/ h" G" Z3 A6 J<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ w* e  F/ B* @. W# e5 w6 y: O6 Z<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 s) X; W- e. C  N; p( q8 G<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
  L5 R5 I7 A+ h4 [; b<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
, A6 {" i5 C0 _) w4 e) R" e- j<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
; @- h0 |( ]: s# w& j<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 a  F4 l8 C% n<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" k& c! s2 ~2 E. D<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
  ?: |, m& H( o3 p6 H6 g4 x% \6 K9 z<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ }( p# T* b- w2 V; F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 e  ^8 y2 @1 G! r) L, N<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* i! b) }) D4 v3 N$ d- t- P<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( ^% A. I& l, j! j0 h% y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 G" a. s. T! Y3 j9 j( n5 e1 w<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  ^5 E3 Y6 k. M& P% l! j# M<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" B. e1 t% `" j8 ~6 b<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
8 K% E9 V9 T. z6 H<P>但我不会 </P>
% o4 |. `) c: u; o0 ^<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- g( `! r# ~+ _<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: m1 ?, o6 A# b4 y5 i' S<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) D! o4 T& ^# f( [9 N' [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. M9 S& w3 y) S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 E6 }! i9 B! U<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( S2 H( L" z0 |0 p! ^- Y, t; K8 i* k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 V6 A4 ~3 Q4 o* x4 x$ ?' r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" [& X3 a& o& v+ e9 G<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ u8 G( k9 D$ u0 A 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>