【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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# L/ V2 B. i0 }7 o$ L: C% P我另将歌词附在此。
% S+ U( z3 N" UThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
- S5 }$ S* l) k" A5 _But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* s5 `, q  q% {If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; t, O* W; C% ]& `! HI would probably know how you feel
2 z  M6 N+ p* z$ m) sLove… just the word love
4 s3 `" d% S1 E6 F" JWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ c: C  {1 V9 n- r6 U" p8 l% E: bI want to confess that I love you,
) S2 q- @( q: s- n/ k! v' OBut I never did
4 j2 Z2 V, f0 T5 DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& M8 C3 ^7 h- G7 Y! S5 D& eIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, K5 T8 g$ W7 P7 G' GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ ^0 d0 Q$ ^) q% u; a9 Z) gCan I entrust it to you?
1 y5 o4 c  c8 x" g- kEntrust my love within your heart
! O2 w" z3 z, w$ n2 `% M8 {Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
  K( W. U, O. @) FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ q# j0 ?: J5 |0 J; w+ m7 S* qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 A! T% B3 \/ H+ V% II don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& M1 F0 B& h; }# Z5 L" v* j# XEntrust my love within your heart
; P! \+ u# g' S* zCan I entrust it to you?
  }+ O" {+ l9 aEntrust my love within your heart

* w, r( \% P0 u  s8 H[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  h8 ?7 z" q+ P2 ]& u<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( c1 L/ P/ }" Q& n+ {<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 t: k/ X- d& B4 Q  W7 [<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 f0 }% D5 X, |7 ?/ d! h. m6 s7 O<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
0 H( c! m4 h; g; {<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 T) T* h# p, Y: p<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ j# S1 y7 x( a1 P4 t<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  N0 A4 f$ q: G5 I, G" }+ {$ I# r<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 T! K3 {; i* G0 H- j$ m<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 {3 R' L! f. b<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
+ V8 h4 }& P( D- B1 v9 f" e7 W) J<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
: ~- o" b4 K( J4 ?: Q( X<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# T( t+ y& s! }; [: F8 N<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" Y% v5 V& p( `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ o! g2 K" V( ^& k5 Y<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ y+ d4 e( J1 f3 l<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 A4 T; M5 W: h- k: x% S  @<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ i5 j; d: `2 J7 P<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
9 W  d. p1 f! u2 p! w, o3 C' e<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 b; U8 \$ S4 Z5 f- f& B; X<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ H1 U$ N' f. D<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  v& v  h% A+ c" ^<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 A, b3 V4 j6 K( t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& ]0 J2 c  k0 w' \<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 E% E. [9 I0 V# R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* t- @: N5 i9 N+ r# J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 {3 s5 j, G" [: b* I# M& V<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ b+ s7 q5 T7 C<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

( ?0 I1 j! G' s1 K 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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  G" A, k) f# c) u/ O, h这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. q* j* p/ i0 u4 n<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>