【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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' P0 B. ^* Y" n* X9 E" r; A0 f4 y我另将歌词附在此。
. h3 I+ v; b& \3 I5 y+ ?4 W/ CThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' U( D- S% d4 g2 c- ^2 i! o! UThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- [# T" z* O- o, g6 h' _  S, @; aFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
: K+ f9 K- k7 M0 _) |/ H' \/ J% dBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
3 G/ K4 }7 c6 \0 X0 S% C6 k; ?If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  g1 H* Y: k' p5 \I would probably know how you feel
4 l  D7 x: w+ i4 }+ i( G$ r  S2 YLove… just the word love
( Y6 {& x) ]( p  qWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 Z5 ~- s  C# g+ e$ A2 ~1 u2 tBut I never did
+ S: Z( W# }2 M+ z, @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. O9 \* ?3 [8 K+ J2 PIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 u+ b! w% b, v4 ^/ K4 x7 xI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
4 `( U8 w& s) E& o1 \5 IWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* r% `8 d" a' f0 U6 COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ n5 ?. P- p! ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 d0 `% E0 ~: M/ j9 H4 C1 {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  G4 v9 h2 V9 N( H$ cCan I entrust it to you?
# Y* u8 i6 [( qEntrust my love within your heart
3 M% t- ]" g- v9 A  |* sCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

. E0 e. x. p* Z& l7 S<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, B( L/ m5 S* h, b/ A( W2 S<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* u4 L% ]! B3 m" F8 q% ], ~/ i' {<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ i: ?' l0 t1 ^+ J4 p1 ?<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
( O( ^/ k! ?- U& @% O, p<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
) Y, l3 J  v: X  t) w<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 j# U4 Y+ S5 `& `<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
# @  e  ]) M: j0 R, @) q- `<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
! w2 V! o6 M8 k' R) f* O<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
# e4 ?4 l, B0 r; Z& Y% \+ i$ [1 l<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. [. j+ M* K7 L" x/ S. K<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' l, P2 ^" J' h/ T2 g<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 _" |. w9 }, ]<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ C$ W6 N7 e9 U: s<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
+ E7 V2 B( j& g3 @# n<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! |5 a  a. M  j<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 R1 C% L$ V6 |+ H<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 f5 v- e% R& ]4 {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. b& M8 X( V3 v6 Y- ?<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* E5 z; X3 ]- W' ^$ z- w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 c- \! `5 d: L  O/ e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# v+ h: D4 U, O9 s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 v! g/ P+ Z: h4 G; _, Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 ]3 h( P  ?1 ?2 z9 P% A4 t<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ s, V! y2 F- o0 d% R6 \: B<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# L6 ]- @9 N4 R7 _<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* F  k; E" ?: r8 a" _3 @: T, l<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
) _+ }7 k# J) H6 b4 J) D& \0 g9 H<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ q$ E# f2 [6 N$ f- y" O9 a) `<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ I! Z, I" e5 n9 I" h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) ?! O' M/ |+ X: X. J% u# J: L9 q; Y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 @( w; u$ }# M0 K1 Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 b+ \, s1 v# E# N<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) x3 I/ Z7 E& j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- n) C& m  m6 O9 w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 ?3 Q( y  }# I$ V7 f# ^6 j" H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ L9 H: A7 p" _' ?+ Z+ i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ c) Q- u/ X% v) b6 h4 q& u<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

7 @* ^; c* l1 k, V' l* l7 K( D这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 y0 L1 L: Y  F<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>