【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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+ F) \9 p5 E: r+ w, q% I' ^我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: w% L8 O- c* s* x# N+ \From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
8 s3 i" m5 j( u3 |! ]$ q% k: g% sBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  k: W/ R% F5 r, B/ R  V9 C0 pI would probably know how you feel
/ `5 ~3 p# B: w; v, q* k" jLove… just the word love
( e' j# Q+ z& E: dWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 A& F! Q2 o) k" Y( L% ZBut I never did
/ z: _) n# E; F1 e0 oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* d* S) y& H: `2 z; J/ HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
& I8 R% _4 |) C; jWhy is it so difficult to express?
3 _2 K  J0 {, X) T2 b6 w7 t* `+ m/ }I want to confess that I love you,
5 D( P: H- ]/ u9 F9 \5 i' iBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 M+ h# H$ X4 r$ c) v: a% G; xI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 I* U, b3 ~8 z3 V4 K0 j' T; yEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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' o" W4 `% ~3 T. e# m[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

0 r( e6 ]( Z. R; V5 T<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) m) p9 ^8 f4 H: h<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  f! O' g: X8 w# J<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 p- V$ v3 n" e' }- l<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 O" a: D# _& c/ ]4 j<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( f* U, l* `; Q9 T: ]  @<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 |9 t# H) ~5 @# w6 _* d<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* W' N& T, m- W' n6 R<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
. H, o, I) E/ Q5 _4 W, N<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ m$ u6 L& x: T; ^7 v<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& a1 w9 s3 f" M1 W% T& e<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
6 c, g7 M7 v# z9 E* Y" C<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) z# M  E* }4 V- c; P<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ Z. z' D: V- S9 f5 L3 e( f<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 C, e. T/ \8 t* e" M: ~<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 @* G1 E# ]" i9 A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 f- E  O8 y# Q1 Z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! Z6 i5 m% ?+ P: Q+ b, M" Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 ]: B7 p% W; [$ ]<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ [" v9 u2 n( W% V# k( h$ J+ m<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# `" N2 x& w! T% f; k/ P7 _$ \: R<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
4 ]5 S2 d, H; m: n4 Q7 g" w<P>但我不会 </P>
' D, ^8 j. ^  S$ |2 u" l<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ N. u/ \% R- J1 G! c7 A  x<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 G- N; {7 l/ s- w) r<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 i" O* u  }+ A7 m' s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, a* i4 w, D' R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" T& l) X  {# P/ X# A# E  c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& y: Z; A$ F# d& X# A8 L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 q, C& g! p- h$ a7 y<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 U* a7 d  N6 i( B<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 D& V: L7 n" R0 m 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 g0 j. N9 d# g3 X" Z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! z( V' L7 t7 v, Z7 d3 F<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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  k8 |+ f0 e9 v<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>