【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
4 t( o; b. o# mThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
& s. N/ v# z7 X; R5 C6 r1 b- s  d5 Y, fI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 [0 F" X- }1 d" m/ nI would probably know how you feel
, S8 t1 V  m9 @$ L* _Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 h% R6 l# _' H  G, T# D4 ~I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* }# c  G* ]  f/ N1 j5 [5 j1 hI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  H- `. q) L. n* b5 J4 d7 cCan I entrust it to you?
* g- u- R, j$ w! R4 m; HEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
% ^9 ?/ i4 V' C- @( `Why is it so difficult to express?
' o5 G, Y; W, T% {" u' X1 o& TI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 m" c0 `$ |+ s; O) KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 Y* D0 H; p' U6 u" P( `! f; PIf today isn’t too late,
2 b" p2 f5 z: k* y( ?2 TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' i; [( g* P- T3 c! ^/ qI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
' s( c& |' T" ^) UEntrust my love within your heart
" [4 I- V8 u- b, ~4 ]Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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+ K. ~- X, l& W4 y4 e; `<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% y/ ^6 j! R  u/ @" m2 C<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- |! Y2 L7 I" e) ?; T<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
+ X' o* @: n  q  X: j; E' ]<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 E6 N7 i7 ~8 F* z7 k1 U, H<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 T5 A/ Y; s- @+ ]; B9 x$ h<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 o+ }" ~1 J: u* Y5 S% W# Y<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, A- u. u$ I) l4 A; z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- G% S: g* ?7 I/ ^& G' G. {2 d<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; v2 ]1 Z; g( x" o" E<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  Q& R+ F; e& \6 R- i0 I4 p( _2 t<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 ?5 C, r& |4 ~! v& h<P>但我不会</P>
% U" h( E, N# b/ G! {<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 E6 |/ c' X8 [2 f1 z9 ^<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 k7 q% S& e4 I8 k% E5 b9 n! t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" _7 H$ m) m, |* _7 t<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; q" o, {. ~, [7 L) E9 H: r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 d# h5 Z1 c  I<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 i& e* `4 z* u* C! g2 ^) i' j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 J$ @, _, [1 y5 O6 a1 ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
( W0 P* @) X. l$ K5 k<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 Z. n) r9 L" N3 \# p<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
. H- Z2 N. ]* Z3 I8 J: q0 ~<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; r( P* b& n; ?0 C<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
( x! h: l6 p5 I7 Q: e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 @% t( K, P, ?+ ^( a& m  u<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  q+ G# ^$ L( R8 D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; D) q0 y2 `+ {7 O" q' p% g9 A$ m<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

$ ]+ X3 f5 ?; H6 ?这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" `$ a  K0 e( {7 L) Y7 N4 j<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ q# o# \* A6 {  N: ]<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>