【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  P4 J6 z" y6 zFrom the first moment we met,
  C$ t! L  H6 Q: v& I) w; \# i! QI already loved you with all my heart
+ `, k3 m- r4 U) I/ xWe meet and talk everyday,
8 |6 h. R/ ~5 U- c5 M8 L  YBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
3 A+ F0 F2 E, X! c# N2 RLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& q/ Q: Q* J' `+ vI want to confess that I love you,
. ~+ O" k. i$ G3 t: [' OBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 U+ k, p5 m! T9 w5 YIf today isn’t too late,
6 U; b# y4 a3 u0 i4 ^I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- {! W( m+ {$ P. \7 \9 q8 kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: i0 h$ ?6 r$ p: _6 ]9 u' RLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  `# p, U( Z* H* T" l9 v; zI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# X" u3 ~) ^9 @I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; {! k% w. F! r  A$ f  _( YI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% \( g4 E( H0 h8 k+ ?! oCan I entrust it to you?
+ \: @8 ]/ Z- S% q, oEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
# |4 I8 V( T* I( d+ {6 FEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( ]/ S# o4 A1 i( R' T<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; b' K  ^" Q) M" S9 ]<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
1 g% |' b& G! a<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
+ G6 \. v7 v; M4 X7 f<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 m3 g. o' Y. r7 {, c% `1 q, O  I<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 j5 i6 w$ O6 O" p7 f<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 ^) e: s8 i) w& z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
6 ^+ n' r5 G1 e<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! F3 e& |/ V" C0 {<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% d8 a6 V' ?* A$ H) h' W4 y( K<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& i& D5 T7 O( |7 D% Y" q! \<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
. L- \5 `- }9 U<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
& G& T+ A- x6 k<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& @/ r9 _5 q$ L$ ]+ |<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 y) [7 K2 k$ {  M9 {) w2 O5 Q<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( O# S; c& ?& y  W. F2 M% q; I; m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( q' S: u; s' t0 _<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: `/ A* l9 D" y- Z1 E5 {, y% v9 E1 a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 F5 |- G, n" Z% F7 F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, v2 ^0 P. H& e8 X<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 O9 Z4 v' k+ s9 A<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 w5 e. A' J- [1 u<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
7 c, u( h# q, `<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. L1 q9 X$ j% W/ e+ g( j* B- p<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 i4 P5 I- v5 |  z7 L0 g" l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
( D2 Q5 R, U# z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* h3 i- |; N- A. m5 N4 q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- W9 v: G# o+ i# o4 W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 h7 C, R4 m% p8 {4 R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% U- y' y5 S# x) q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. A- v' u& S3 T. I) F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& a8 c+ X4 j9 q5 N: W+ x! m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 x* {( Q7 T1 ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
/ f& A, z4 ~+ W$ _<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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+ S/ C# ^5 l9 T! y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>