【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
: [, m, T7 R* s3 Z) `The moonlight is shining brightly,
( ~& Y2 ~% C4 u  FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# t' j2 F- ~# x0 j0 E% w$ h$ }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& a1 P+ o, _6 s4 h4 L0 ~8 O6 sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& E( ~8 Q$ {4 M! K# fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! O1 c: h; ^* T0 U* S. zSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ Y* `9 N2 a! K9 [" a9 \& |You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# H  b- F/ R5 ^I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ Q* w+ Z! T& \* P& y) G% E+ D: ~0 Z' eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 e, v2 G  M, |2 c7 A; nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) l, h" u; D- U# _8 q' Y9 |I want so much to see inside your heart
+ b1 _0 V+ I0 w1 Z1 U( yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; k9 d  S/ g1 C( _* o6 _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. T+ [; d/ B1 C! y) s" GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ ^1 n# W9 q$ u. e0 U1 kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  C; a' @; L, HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! l; v( V# N. J- \6 z$ fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 d$ M8 ^5 ?' ?0 U6 [6 v6 A4 I* o- V+ a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( F" p# J  R4 m3 \5 J) m+ J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 O: `/ I5 @4 z7 W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- y9 g* ?1 {+ w0 D* }. Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- h# v+ G8 o$ b1 w/ M( Q$ P! s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 Z2 H6 {* {- v5 k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# s6 _3 K! B/ Z2 A  L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- f# X- `& O7 B$ Y" ]4 W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* \2 [! v4 G. N1 j4 b2 P4 Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* ?& N  X1 t8 H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 r2 e' K* V* A/ r" Q( U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 _; o+ x* c2 M; `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 v! g) z) I5 [0 Z& l, [. I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- L3 s6 s" S' r; |  s% {+ g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 ]2 o* p; e5 l2 J3 E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- Q: ?! _. y4 B7 \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 j- m8 `0 j- S2 ?0 J4 c$ |9 Z% c: J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 Q! d8 Z* I' l8 o<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 ^5 U$ ?- b' ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' Y0 k& g* e6 p# P2 R# ?* o. k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 u$ F7 U% }' ?/ y! `7 u  c0 o$ D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 C( g" j, ~7 y1 O' ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& E- I; y8 |  w: P# o! h9 h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) L" W, |. j5 V: L& q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 X7 T! I) {) ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' W& P4 X, P! n7 J6 T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: |+ M4 |5 B, _- [<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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! R0 c: W2 E  C+ R! k2 @& \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 j7 r# K2 q3 A* x( n* R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>