【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, p' [) n$ H: t. yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% z# o1 n8 i7 w( T6 PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 U7 k; W: Q1 J3 nI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' ?6 Z% ]* _/ {. }& uI regret not dying
' |; y( A; |1 F* [4 u4 P" WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& v; B4 v, e+ }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% ?& [$ X; I1 t, P  JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ l% H! X' m* k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# g5 C. u4 w6 M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% B) G8 ]3 Z2 a1 a: g4 r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  X- H$ {* q- C0 f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 u3 p+ J3 L  n$ D2 j! I  U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 a; _8 }" u  Y5 H% D' U/ I1 L<P>你无需担心</P>
5 h; S- U% `$ O* ~4 v/ l+ Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: S" e$ x9 [. D+ }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 t& I# A# O  x8 }9 q7 M1 F# I+ K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 a3 Q# A8 {8 E6 N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 r- A6 e! l6 L% D) X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 o$ v  g( q. Z3 p: ?+ _0 N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ }" V) h6 l* Q( ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 i# H( y) x, _( V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) b: F! S) B" y9 k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ U" \! ^( C4 H" l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 N, V5 A8 ^2 j8 \1 Y9 c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" h% W- z  d+ l! n  M( h: w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 G1 g; i4 J: Y7 H- z- x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( J+ h) D. L  b' i% G' }/ U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. b# w; L5 {) z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  u, i$ R2 l4 @7 Z0 N1 T$ _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' Y! A& N) w0 r5 m- F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>