【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 b! n' C6 I3 v# U/ m歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' L9 O5 e: j% G7 a( d4 O! U! @Making the sky glitter like gold,
* |3 }9 y$ X& U: a. }) HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# r5 U# s! }# O* G! [: S9 cWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- E9 Z% m) L+ x( Y0 k. x9 BYou needn’t fear anything
0 s$ W" n  {4 A6 zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 a- ?  ]3 c3 A8 p1 x, [  mEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 P$ Z9 b& ?2 |  n' q/ WI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  X! q+ P0 k- U& F: }8 l5 G" ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 X; f% [* c! W5 g  \I want so much to see inside your heart
  [' t) S0 \6 q0 Z$ k7 B' Y( ^. l2 t+ oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ {0 Y( A1 C; D  p) G* aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ O, S0 s6 G  R' DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% K, C9 x% ~* h( Q2 u. @5 v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 o5 r) {. P6 r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 Y  _( H/ s* P9 \; F" @3 u2 H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 S1 X6 s7 g; ]5 C( S. \5 |- k. p3 ^8 O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# I, n& w3 I1 o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 c: i6 l: T: p, K* X4 e' R% L/ x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 ^5 N* f2 r8 q% U1 P* j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, K- F  l, B( p9 W1 H" p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) j% V, M3 I% D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 O1 \$ P! U  r- l; E3 V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ n9 V) j! ^6 j# f1 j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ [. z3 F- E1 d0 p0 j+ I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 l6 ^, R0 s. K4 |2 C; w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, `4 V% `! R' T4 {' Y9 i6 G1 g! o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- J" A0 {" i" m8 f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' T$ k0 v' e, G, F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& h5 z. W* W6 G& r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ L: r! ?; N+ D3 Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! j& d3 B) \$ ^& g( S9 c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& v- H) R& D9 Z1 L9 f6 R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 F0 r% u# C4 u8 u7 g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ V+ Y* g" \1 F% h6 A: M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# N- l. L0 S9 I( k) l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ a. w8 X* ?" b7 Y+ F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ C; t  [9 O/ D0 D. N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ l- }" |2 z* F" z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>