【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 y# x' a3 D8 K0 [& K4 [! I歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' @, _8 j+ D  DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! f" x" K; c" h+ p5 _. T$ iThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! |% m" @* m8 Q( f9 {5 t" Q: r( OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ L  k' n  D8 k. z: kEvery other word you utter is love
- q/ s( b* K) R1 {% Y& @4 ?' @I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: D# ~/ [* T- JNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 h, W7 m2 K: J1 R) oI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: ^* ]  P% i# m3 CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) a' U; m8 [2 Z0 Q- E8 \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 d' B1 \4 Y' t" n8 q6 t3 @<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 n5 c! s6 m$ c) ]7 c6 h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 N3 R" X- H; }5 H* a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" }) g; y9 \* }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 S( k4 [  b& T1 m% i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# ?) ?, ^' {# `& N) G% M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: g4 k0 q' [( ?. \6 x5 p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 _4 D3 L6 r" D2 C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 M9 H, d9 s+ j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' i/ o/ F+ s- m' N$ b# ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  `7 P6 C. w6 S5 c0 O% Y) J  {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 Y$ |& e4 Q1 y' P& V; r1 S: N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ n0 Y/ A5 m2 S7 |  m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 k- ]" ]- ?2 ^) y. Q3 p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; @- E: T* u5 J4 U6 M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' S  C' R' ^. a. S# V$ c0 `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, Z: Y: Q7 @3 A4 A! Q0 m, P: x4 V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( p, o+ U* x: h8 i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 T; I* ~8 l* y& m* x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! c% r1 e: u8 j; c, _- j$ }1 e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 G0 U/ `+ d1 V$ R  }! w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# C( U  k5 [$ c* f2 U<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

2 J7 \( f$ \0 ~& |1 a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>