【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 F/ D$ Z4 f! F& ?5 N& z% g歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ H9 v" I; O1 F! d& c# c* V+ \- V' kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 P/ _- I2 t3 m7 hWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' m& g2 ?2 P. v) jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 \9 I0 s* R, j7 ?4 jYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, W. g# U9 ?( p8 A" OI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 Z0 D, |# _3 T) H; s0 E- kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( {* d! U8 j9 aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ Q* u2 U2 \3 y& m# b# ]; N* uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 M; n/ M0 ~. Z' G2 ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ H/ M9 @2 X$ cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 a1 |7 I2 \: _5 h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! ~( G- Y9 A* W2 `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  w5 E5 F8 t! A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 Z) W3 t5 t6 I% u/ d; f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 b" d: ^- A% G( n6 c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& c8 F5 L2 m  |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 X: _0 `* C9 r& ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. D  j( z3 s/ ?: o$ s6 }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
# J  ~6 |( I# t+ ]$ @9 U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, T- \$ @# O, [! a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ \. R4 x3 L  p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! u8 W  I5 g0 d( Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( N0 a3 F; V0 o) _3 |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  t+ Q5 J. N6 p# X' e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, d' I& ~: V- j9 B* s9 W) `+ ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, u' G0 G; L2 n6 i# a0 F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 ^" R3 t& n- X0 Y( A% j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  F$ G. x2 o5 H+ q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 W, y2 v. V  I+ S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; D0 w, P/ O* Y; n7 }  O: ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- q( R& `0 Z9 U' p: ~/ u- j) ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ ?) B% y. ^+ ]; `' H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ _( [, ~5 p: S% P$ ?# M1 F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 E  c3 S- M& I6 e! A% q, c<P>I regret not dying</P>
" z. Z% E1 v& Y  g  o5 h9 f( b) \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 w* B3 _" r3 p, l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 Y: ^. K8 f! |* u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ t% {; P: P( g" h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# ^% A8 G8 [: C" o1 S: D8 H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* h& \9 I: B; V3 N0 g" U, g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>