【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 p+ b' b9 m! @1 d6 n; ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
# q; G' f. \" VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" C+ L# U# C# }% H/ c) s5 K( q( mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 s+ o, m4 J7 A1 o7 aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: \) p  `/ ^$ g. ]8 h' _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ Z2 l1 O' B1 x- z) XYou needn’t fear anything
( o0 s- _2 q; z* }1 [9 e+ y0 S  Y" KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& t) l3 t" |1 q+ O. dEvery other word you utter is love
* u" V% ?8 P9 s5 V+ Q- N: T& HI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  z  d" P( z+ Q9 X1 ]Nothing can compare to my love
0 j7 z8 q  o3 ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" U4 H. n4 ]- {2 `0 G: V0 I- U. I0 nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, Y4 c. g' e: O6 Y$ A; B4 oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, q" W" l, B! A" z3 y! |9 H6 oI’m still filled with fear
- u8 Y* F; V( `4 {9 VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, Y7 ^* }- M4 u( u& s) x  DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 H) `" e! c* w8 l: eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# p- H( ~1 ]. n7 B1 N- D# B$ \) q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. J  t  n' r3 |2 W/ v# d4 W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' j, g& d0 t" D: W% J2 B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% z4 g* W7 A+ `. t/ K9 Y" r5 p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" V% u. s) q- U( |- k3 {7 q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; U. u/ S( k/ b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; `% Q( Y/ p# ?5 d+ p+ q8 K, n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: C' _2 U. L: L9 w9 x1 A% l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" F1 d) ?; p3 v7 r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& _; O6 p! K2 M& Y" k5 I4 r; [  g8 j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# {6 h% h: d1 Z. A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- A3 v2 `+ }% L4 ]8 l- O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 X  }4 F- {1 d; {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; Z; {. v, r4 g& a6 M2 W$ K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ T- z; {! P3 g& z# h8 l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. G9 y: M) F+ W/ d  J( [# [/ O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 ~# a" M3 F/ V4 d! X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( m: S$ g# k; x) g2 r1 @1 E7 Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 o# Z. N' c7 Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  [* a7 f" h6 j3 \5 q1 n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' H7 ?+ Z) k' A: X& W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 h9 G" M4 \9 R% Z0 G  r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 ]; E9 Z. a" ]" {" ?4 J0 @! w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' q; X; L" Z8 M  H8 q  B我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>