【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 V5 }1 q" y7 `5 ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 s5 T! h' ~& N! }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" R4 a3 ^( V# r1 Z# PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- R0 c$ j+ |# m( |# }- ^" S. dYou needn’t fear anything
3 W/ b# h9 Q# M( ^9 o$ gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" L: I- A9 x2 [( S" g# tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- u+ }" x- S1 k, i+ H6 ?Nothing can compare to my love
- ~  P7 l, Q1 o' x$ I7 s/ N' ]( GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' R9 O- r  A: I/ i" v* _3 |: t' }I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 r( N6 Y( L2 [# `" HWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( R1 m2 @' b8 K! A" `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 h- r2 K4 p$ W- E  M, o: _' O( e$ _) y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 m6 [0 P7 B; Y# A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 p5 s8 Z* D/ _2 ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ u/ B' D7 P6 |% K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) V' Q4 k' x# ?+ T% l* g, F9 r5 \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 s0 S5 T, V2 D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: f+ y9 Q, _2 ^" k* |! y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ e. J* ]/ n3 [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' Y( }2 B7 r( w$ m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 J5 a6 l8 X' x8 b" B: d5 x) i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" W5 |' R  t3 Z( s) x' F, I; \<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ ~8 _1 w6 f0 P7 H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 j4 W" C  ^" X; E5 [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 a( c& Y# C+ c; U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, i! R% Y9 K; g- X" L+ g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 N% _6 J" n' B( B2 D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% h& @- b( l7 j* ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 K( q9 F" T  ~" L& H* z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 X3 w& q5 O( t# v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 S$ a0 S: e" J3 G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- r) G* `4 S/ k0 V/ x3 d" j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% ?# H3 K( D  l8 R9 j7 b<P>I regret not dying</P>
. s7 y0 Z  V# B7 t4 A+ C5 Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# Q5 x, G$ C1 p' ]2 v2 U% a8 D5 l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ t( e, M9 l5 ~- }7 a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 w! N# }: f1 ]3 P3 U  ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 `: `' ^0 i7 i3 Z& O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( z: o/ \0 p3 N& \. D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 f! E" P; J. J8 ]7 n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, S% {9 J" t- f8 E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 C; _0 p3 @% r( l. f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 P, E+ W, c1 t) [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* S. w4 w. o; q. l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>