【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
% i( @3 c2 L3 {- k* L# e  b0 H5 `, bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ k/ N* B% ]' ]# ^) A  GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 V3 w4 N) ?# [6 y5 g- ?0 SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* O) A1 N! B* u8 Q8 aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 U3 |8 t7 E4 v# }  Y$ MSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 }3 Q) ]- q( e4 t0 b" z7 ?Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) A5 z# d* C, TI want so much to see inside your heart
8 j" _0 v9 X2 C7 v1 F6 X: aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& _# I, o. F# s; YI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 l4 X  ?; G2 ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. m+ P/ ^! W( O5 u( R* @' xWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 w; ^+ k1 Q- }% q* IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 v7 O  J5 Z! r  G& h8 s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# {  O5 c+ V! y  L; ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 o7 ~+ d  ?, [/ G4 H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 j, g1 F; a! _( c  h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% r5 v/ D- f: {) s# G: t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& V. ^/ `8 L  V! \2 c/ ?& f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- D0 K0 D2 V1 V+ l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 G7 Q( t4 g* a& |$ q( ^5 ]: x8 u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; A3 K& `3 m7 l) c- }; o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  t* R1 `8 A+ E9 c: e5 _6 ~$ F" m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- b) T3 _. F& t2 V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) G0 G) X9 ]9 J9 p' v$ t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( T3 S' y1 s! P" {5 u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- V0 Q  q# R8 Z& B: P0 R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 [5 `5 M) B! C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 z3 l+ k1 _5 R7 i/ B; P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 W+ Z; i$ ~+ p; N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ ^% w  ^. u8 d6 k. K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 B6 q2 A3 G( H- b$ B9 D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 L- n: d3 W, u2 Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) o6 o4 W4 ~- ~+ o0 b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& B# E+ |5 m6 a& n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, ]6 K4 s( w1 C/ r5 @3 Y4 ^6 i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ l+ O" h; w% ~, ^  k# u; B0 X我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ y, H/ l- L4 O: Q6 E$ l/ }/ Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>