【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: F' L/ Q% y5 h* A3 a! q3 ]歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ e0 M- w, M; t* ]/ E) }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 H7 z  w  m% `7 y2 m' IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# t2 K2 _7 f1 u6 R2 O) D4 BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! |4 L( p; B$ SYou needn’t fear anything
( G- }' E9 ^  Y0 C7 x! M+ h5 pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% t$ k8 {- A% t2 t- \9 L! CI really want to know just how much you love me
( a5 T: ~& L1 {3 F2 WI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& ], P1 [4 p* J' {" @8 v  vI’m still filled with fear
: Q5 ]7 A, A; Z/ DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 _; Q- V: }2 i3 k4 jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 u, ]$ E1 S% T6 A, y% ?# ^With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. z7 s* u" D! u8 x4 F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" L9 t- M/ H6 O; F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* C+ {& @; I1 f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) H/ w" m5 ]  c3 X7 a/ p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. F8 E/ Y" E* A, c& L2 w- c4 C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& I; \9 D% C+ t3 X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" b9 t; u5 |, X* u# x1 S- H% Z$ s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ v7 Y  a6 M  L( O' J: z' {8 _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' g# v) u! ^4 e9 z<P>你无需担心</P>
- P5 l  K2 {7 d: @0 M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 L* G6 d% b4 T" V% f2 }" l( o" A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" U; o5 V/ \, a% T0 F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. [2 p' O  s' O9 d' z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( w! J( E$ z, Y3 N% d; ?; k! [6 I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 t* Z) T: l# b5 i+ N3 ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 D2 f' n; A& N0 L. p0 d* e<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 w7 W! \  p5 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 N+ ]4 E4 r, \1 ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 ~- U9 D; U! L) c0 {' B7 m& m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' i* \% M- f3 |/ ~: `. u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! U$ `' n* U2 J+ \+ }! \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 o8 e: {: P& C  h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 j4 @! p$ {8 @2 E' ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 B" d2 L( [: B6 @+ R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( o2 u  Z2 j  C( {0 t+ N# @( j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" s( R- l9 x: P9 a' g- E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 \$ ^1 n( X6 x3 i4 k7 `6 I: [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ i4 o& u% h" ^8 p我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 ]5 n( U9 x6 s1 w5 O8 l) Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>