【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
  p1 u- o' p" sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 |2 d& k  q* T$ d# W& r3 d$ {The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ {" W! j# z4 s4 c) E) ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ Y4 R/ e% y1 B) [; S' fI really want to know just how much you love me
$ N6 F$ S! S3 r9 w' i) G+ yI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( q) k# j1 H% n/ t% y; @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; a5 b( a4 u5 ^. R2 NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; h; |' c8 f: V$ f  r  u7 h. L8 c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# k! C! S( ~2 r8 S3 H  D( ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ `/ s6 p# _8 u8 J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  Z3 X! o9 q2 s4 r2 r  s. M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  J6 L" `* e4 i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ V, |% Q$ V  \, U! A0 J1 I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& q5 G9 g: t+ ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# U! H6 I+ y9 I8 U- d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- _3 k' P# g: V  T3 y* T% T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! ~4 f( p! h+ E  @3 ]4 e* U4 [4 V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* S1 Y' l% e. b6 n. u1 y" A7 x<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 u$ s8 x9 D( D# j. k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 B) j5 Z8 A: O+ G7 o$ V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% g$ [" i+ z: e& T8 a: w. R) b' F# p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% x, `8 _. P  ]% P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 G9 b3 u* a0 w6 N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& q; K7 I( X& I$ j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ H( }0 f' P# H# T2 r+ r$ Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  ]0 L% ~* i+ p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 o' U1 A! J4 t) E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* Z! A) K# h, j- [+ j- ]& z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ P+ W, o  I- y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' p7 b( f* a3 e" H4 O$ d- {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( @; s; e- N1 P' S! r9 a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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5 _9 c# W5 q& b7 F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 D0 p/ _1 H2 [  p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>