【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' D( D, n. j! ?% B2 ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 q5 ]5 d" ~) I) m; CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ h* S" v2 b6 P! t9 x& fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ A' R5 S& x7 X" C' X$ dI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 J2 c( V. r) a3 m: ]6 E# ~/ s$ aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! Z2 H# y, J" N: V% AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) {  d& J1 n& F$ HI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# I( h9 \/ D# q3 C' q4 f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! L5 m6 A& J* u( m0 M- E2 C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 [  `" i3 I4 d3 T# r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 w/ w1 L1 ~& P+ o5 ^; N" ^2 `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 V- e  u5 Z' h/ Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ E# X4 x( i* J+ x' G2 a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* h* A) O) ?9 B+ K9 k% l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ a0 \" F8 m* J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ X1 S+ s' S: d# k  h" r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% u8 A+ |5 z3 X' L) N4 j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. {: f& c* f6 N# [% ?<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% V0 i9 P7 p" P! V) E9 J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 I* F( t" k6 C6 i: u: N6 N  o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: |0 ^* P; [/ S/ g% ?1 I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 a0 ?4 T& E7 h" D% z+ {, u- P2 ~" ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ [% i; k' d1 Y7 L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' s. H% e9 D3 I/ u: t/ O  J0 g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 S  S% h$ w" m% C2 S8 |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ c9 C* @/ e' D6 t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 g. H1 z0 ]5 ]( |) O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) Z' M" n! r" l0 T8 o4 t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 g6 i; q  L, s1 m6 c! S<P>I regret not dying</P>
% r) C2 F: A* n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 M- \7 R# f, ~( F. G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 G9 U6 s# C+ P# m$ A8 [* A$ i7 z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ C5 Q8 g* g8 b3 ]6 G$ f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 x' k7 T6 k; N- Z6 r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, |+ {! p$ R) m( V$ F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- E  P5 n& b4 [1 ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* [5 j  z6 H4 o8 S- y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" P+ J1 T  P' M/ Y8 P7 _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>