【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 n- p& U- l4 m" y! WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% g0 F+ J, [* t& U$ h5 `' _& kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ N% `  S  O) X2 L* J3 O7 fWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( R- |% [* f/ T4 [1 t( dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 E. ]1 n4 _0 j3 aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  F- M/ P* F( e& o. HI love you I love you with all my heart
/ }5 g! B' n) o+ k7 p/ Y9 `+ Z9 YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 V$ d% Z3 w# ?  i# A2 T& O9 m5 TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 ^0 q) N2 S) s* w: |# F5 S; II want so much to see inside your heart
. u6 v$ h0 ?8 f" |  E4 hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' y+ B, P0 }  E' V& G2 q) MI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 L. T3 F7 F1 MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ ?4 U/ Q! d; N- f* UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- G) X' O9 x; `4 Z( b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) z% _' x8 d- x9 o; B9 ~3 Z7 y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! x5 Z8 P: B+ u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 Q, c) @2 r# k9 |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 w, _5 j; U6 o, U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 J. G. Z: K, n/ B1 A- g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# D, \0 X0 O2 ]/ s  |* i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 _. v8 s, \6 y) n4 v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, e  Y$ d* r: x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, ?& I; T* g  g/ ?7 _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ V8 {; \3 G& d8 _: T2 T0 ?$ R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 B* M8 c2 `: @0 ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; K1 V2 W0 B' p' `3 m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) t  X# W- z( V. o# C# z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* Y+ V- _9 @* D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  m" c* S+ S9 V0 j1 O8 u) [7 C/ t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& M7 r* W3 n" K( {! y. S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" H* M* s/ q. B/ Y: B" f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% q) F' r2 x* k; }6 U0 b& O' R; @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ ^/ n% [! y( ]) R, k4 q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ |( f1 u4 Q. }. N4 D! E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  L  o0 L+ {) W4 j, `5 O0 ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- b# S7 {, l, t- x2 h% W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  g4 E" H* g& k% [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* s% m7 \8 X" }+ e  k% v, M/ V<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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3 a0 [7 L5 o. K2 {" g+ B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 r2 z! W4 k4 J$ y) @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>