【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 j+ e; U- N+ p. |歌词我附在后面。
- M- n( R2 ^! _- R0 F2 l8 ?1 wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 O& }& O6 ]% q  L- P& |5 G2 xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% f/ f! |) [  J( n' w" TThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 {9 ~" P9 \# ^5 N* k( Y# k: o1 M& VWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 J" e* o- W  s) a9 a9 h! hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! ]0 X) w% G2 h. P% S+ S3 \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# Y. _$ Z8 b/ o: cI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# ?. {" r* j5 B, }6 TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. p9 D+ p1 `5 R6 Q: o, v  |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 w* H0 C2 }, P- h( ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( y/ P( w$ ?4 C2 k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 H, u2 S7 `% @6 T- v3 N2 E, X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ B' k* b" u: s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ x) K! j* J( O9 C% v* l. W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* w! [" V1 B) C5 `! n5 E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 `$ h" U/ `0 k/ V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* e' ]8 z5 D6 J7 [6 C<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 R# C5 G: y; ?% g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- `: W8 o2 c( Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, |& C3 ^1 |1 n+ m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 ?3 z" V0 N# w$ h; P) k0 G# o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 p1 v" }* Q9 r; E/ \$ ]& h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 z2 M  a6 Y$ |; h5 F' s: ?6 s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" H8 U; y* ^( k* C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 e$ G$ c/ f- X  e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 E9 e9 y4 u5 L& L4 ^* {' v7 B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, F' ~% q2 L2 H% c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) v' _4 U  }! D1 Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# }! l, D# X7 a: J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  G! S* t- v1 f4 J( p* q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. U& S' f3 p& k  Z& Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( G9 o- ^7 E+ O' H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 L, \- q! A1 j5 f6 b& y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ r' b: r% O, u$ S7 S我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( n' `9 `8 c( ]3 [6 U% n- ]+ ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>