【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 A! H2 P1 T' }' d' [歌词我附在后面。
* [' \8 h: a2 }& B5 T) `The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ [1 @0 G* e) q* F/ C1 q6 J0 eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 A3 ^3 ^. {; p6 FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, S! Q1 ?7 K$ m+ T" o. |The sky is happy down to its soul
0 v& r8 f& P: b# _, AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) b4 y! w$ e6 ?7 dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; ~' s; _7 @$ x4 l" Q# rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! A+ N) E+ Y) m4 s+ z5 N( `  pEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ H( @* l  a# [' w+ y% Q+ u" i  ?I love you I love you with all my heart
3 y# D: L& ~1 m: `, w2 I; BNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ ]/ a1 ~- b* p( a  FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, }) I5 C( [; G$ O6 p2 uI want so much to see inside your heart
" D3 d0 a& X! L8 ~- TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% z% ^: d# K* z$ u2 e3 p! wI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ d8 q" h) b4 h- AI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 e% R  B$ t: C: k! ?5 }% vWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. A, f. U; M. M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 ]/ a2 J- C, d; f4 I  H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) Y$ w! ^" Y6 g( b) v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  E1 Q' X2 W3 ~; y# R- ]; m" _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 h$ R' a, Y; O% e: ~) T2 y/ t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ R' ~4 b) F' C, n( v/ O" Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 f" ]- f4 Z8 y& e) B/ Q) R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( e4 }, _' j4 h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  z& M: Z2 T& Y2 J4 N4 r<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! L3 a$ d7 m, ?# b9 ?1 y) ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% y0 k+ D+ W! j2 V; R  H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' U0 X7 P8 P. g7 R0 S5 t% h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 H0 M6 G! P  w& S! [6 i( p4 d/ T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 h9 W: @( Q+ \/ F5 w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* k7 g; T' z3 q, s! z' o3 X; _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, ?+ \  L2 }# b' K* T& a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 R( E8 `1 M' o9 }  A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. b: B1 }$ X0 j8 G" l( S5 K" t/ p7 s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* C5 `; @& R& ?$ ]9 Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 Z, s# H& ~  I! C" S: ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  K2 _0 n$ S8 k) N+ d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" [3 P' A: V' U' M) q( W7 v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 L+ i% c& x% t8 _7 ~0 J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% \: X: M2 D# z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: b: ~: n+ n, J, f5 p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. I& N" V* c# d) r' `( L1 s' z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( ^. |: _7 Z4 K/ Z( @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ N: p3 o9 h6 H& H<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 o- G7 X7 C; s% V% ?; f! ]0 X我请你剖开它

6 i# [! ?& n! \- @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>