【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  ?+ p! O$ p$ o9 F/ d6 |歌词我附在后面。
8 M5 _: \3 _  \4 kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 t* A$ @/ r, d; YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 d# f& N, P( n" b: UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" u$ `$ _. p4 g  B$ X, j# a' r; c0 Z$ MThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ n' b4 @* v) T& c8 FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 A: W% r% P  P0 iYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' }% g' n1 w$ l2 [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 @2 ?6 f5 p4 I  FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; K* v: p+ a5 H' A! }% ?0 ?+ ~0 PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ M& {2 k) z* e2 u; @0 `* VI regret not dying
% i- J+ K) }/ Z: _$ JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 n) p8 {1 v! }& RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* E% y. q$ l" h! M- _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; n" S: }$ d9 O$ Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) _. t/ |: c+ a( X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ h$ t) O- |" j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 n$ `6 L5 g$ A- U5 c: r5 L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# w- r; h; {3 U2 @, L* }! t( {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' v' N8 o* S' Y! n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 x  l' I. B1 |) W, H) [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ w7 W3 N4 r  G5 f1 Y3 F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* a- m: Y0 R3 G# R! o4 @$ T0 }/ A<P>你无需担心</P>
1 o" `& Q: v* _0 \/ v" w, e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' d! T  ]; p# q" p+ v& }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ f$ B( @" i8 s+ M5 x9 L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 |; P  O6 v0 ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 a/ ~( t" c' B6 s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 Q  q9 x' k% h" n4 t* ?- h* C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 {, @8 G# D! O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# ^# {$ e; Q. P+ N0 u' `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ _" W  u3 {- e3 ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 A, f' b$ V* o! k3 N! ]) x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ ^" S; c) @3 |$ W- ^7 Q5 A5 s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( a' c. O8 ^$ e' `5 W' |7 a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" U5 a6 o0 ?2 X$ e, A+ z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 y. Y5 |% y/ p4 a* q6 J; R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: f# K  F$ ^- n4 d0 k6 o7 M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: X' X; V6 u' v0 z% |7 E% o<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 ]: |) @0 B( S0 y) w, Y3 D+ Z我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>