【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ d3 F5 n' ^# g1 }2 r) o' u歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 X3 S7 s6 i5 b' U" BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. H7 D3 j8 K0 D1 `, FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 j7 Y" p3 J& D/ N7 R8 H! `1 NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) K; K1 D) Q: O" e+ r9 ]; }* ESeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  y$ U" d# K; a. g7 gYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* ]- |+ {! G3 EEvery other word you utter is love
" j" E0 g/ O$ a' g# w) X2 mI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" D- _3 I  W" v6 V1 \Nothing can compare to my love
. L7 ?, @5 p6 h" nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( p# C! M% m5 x( K" {6 E5 m2 J; }) {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& V; h4 I" w+ ^I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ ]/ h  w0 O) A2 v7 Q+ N! \I’m still filled with fear
, ^& d8 D4 l: ]4 O! b6 I& d) ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 b8 Q5 [( X) n5 Q2 B) u7 CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- x3 a7 P7 z9 ]3 qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* U) w- J, V/ H: cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  R2 w& B' ~$ V& e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ _& W! `% i2 x7 Q! B# p; \! }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 w, H3 u9 a- w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) l# v# F- V" I& P( _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 M. B7 ?9 S4 r( c: S+ y: e9 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 a, w& _, w8 }* E% s# c7 ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! H% X3 O; U: J. d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: O8 U* @# g+ V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ U- M& d: g+ J' U+ [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 r' N  h& X) b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( |+ A/ M4 S5 R- e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ N$ w* n7 B( P! O$ S3 ^& ?4 E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 B  j& I- m2 Z7 b# ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 w; |5 \$ t+ U; |2 U; \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. p. G1 |+ E. M$ a& Z* y" G( l# H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( u! e% c6 O4 B* \, }; c" N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 @3 j% a2 Y1 G* p1 x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 E" b2 W# ~# e0 R3 W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- P) ]8 m$ }! w7 T* n# c( C: X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" U: P: ]) ]5 h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) m# r7 ^8 c0 g. B" p9 y& x<P>I regret not dying</P>
& O7 E' c0 z$ e4 R1 @2 ?: h! I3 N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) g) B' h2 U* N  ]0 c1 w5 R( C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 _% K$ Z1 n8 S1 K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 M: n- v$ u% E% v) q8 e8 j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ l6 Z% I7 e0 V% N- u$ _. E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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/ C6 E; N7 n% f: o: P0 j7 y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, ], f3 d( T+ Z6 ^8 @' v' L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>