【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>


歌词我附在后面。
- Z; q: z4 Y6 X; Z8 t# d( N- ?* FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 S6 H+ ?! U2 q  lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ T. V% O% L- u7 G* C7 }- TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 l. K; ]2 X& ]4 \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 v! y0 C- ^2 R7 B# _1 ?8 `You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 C- P9 t, r! J8 w. pEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) Z3 c0 J. B3 d. a  {I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) Z: x4 a8 U+ l$ l  g+ B) i. A" @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, V: n$ f+ G; h( r0 J+ `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( }$ H5 h% r9 K2 L" e6 UI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 w/ ^4 s9 l4 f7 e) m6 d/ NI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" ^7 _8 |/ h+ o6 s$ A# A8 HI regret not dying
: f: ?9 R8 q3 O0 bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 k1 g/ V' k1 y2 hWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 `7 \; R! o' t) ~" t& |% NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 r5 r) a3 z1 J8 M0 S% o; iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; m" l9 p  x0 `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& |) @. y9 D2 p' y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 s( s5 f( E' }8 y, f3 f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ k" u% D* [/ b( W2 l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) d, O- X5 J5 T, ]) D* R# \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 Z0 ]4 Q6 e) X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) u/ \: x/ X5 f+ }* m: r( W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" {/ P% l/ o0 B5 X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 D! q' Y; s3 y8 G$ _. p4 s+ K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# b) j3 y2 @) E. w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ P* B1 E/ _+ [8 S( @- X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ S/ s6 O" F! n, |% q) x  v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- J" w' j$ I) z7 p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; X# I4 M- P5 }" a; V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 R1 N1 H5 d% _& b% h3 }+ N( r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* k" U6 q1 p+ e" Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! G; H# S9 U- Y% c/ }: M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' V+ Q5 K. q+ W! Q5 m( e* X" }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 L" Q) i  m3 i9 W% H) z+ y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ I8 ]  R5 t) }) O  [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ F2 h, F) m+ N7 _9 E3 D' i% I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! h9 D2 l, n& ?# R9 u0 j& [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: B5 Q! C% }5 J/ m' X7 I* C1 l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 \7 f9 F( `& y# Q% s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  q+ j! ^9 {" V1 Y& |6 J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
& z2 W! f: o9 ?7 r3 m! A$ |* v
  q* T% [/ l; [; J$ Q3 q7 ?我请你剖开它
( I+ t! C0 o2 x' v$ M! X
! r, l8 a  L( u% v  h5 w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
3 A3 u" m5 ]% n) J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>