【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* ^' F: @0 v5 G( [/ ^歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 Q2 g6 |8 k/ p+ r) K$ [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 T3 C' Y& s9 F2 S( ?/ |8 {' FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 a6 Q- d, i+ `  HThe sky is happy down to its soul
" @- G" O5 m2 Y  H5 Y% i, BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 d4 y, Q; I" \1 P# K, e2 q% U, AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ e8 M* H% w- V/ u( F. \, OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% S7 n7 ^/ h: Z3 i) \Nothing can compare to my love
3 ~0 T& q; W4 T  F0 CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: u2 @; C. j8 h* c" }4 r" gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 u) G  Z( u' C  eI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 ^4 ]6 w" p: |4 g! cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 y$ h' L9 f* L7 l2 \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. c2 Y" P7 v6 [% H: E! x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 ^) ]3 o* U# G8 t% p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* d: B/ A# |9 W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 g8 o; H/ A9 m$ s) ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# [- l- Y* m' I7 h5 F6 u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& `# y% I8 [* P9 e2 S2 w, M  _, t+ C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: f' a+ `: R( Q( ~7 J<P>你无需担心</P>
5 @( w+ q6 ]4 k! B- F) ~+ j5 ?9 l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 C' T! b, u8 D8 U# z2 B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 l$ \8 ~$ h( {/ x7 {! Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 _! N3 Y* P2 M* n2 M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: x. ~0 l" a& m$ C5 k+ R0 [. C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( F0 c0 W2 O1 @7 x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) E. q+ p) q& H2 z6 v. X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! R+ d4 }3 d8 u, a+ v( ~% p0 M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ ?3 G1 B% R: X$ Y; w+ f9 F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 V8 I. ^2 ~5 X6 w1 D4 {  F  i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; v$ W4 {7 d8 n( h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; }- @2 E3 o5 d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- N/ |. K9 X- C4 \4 E5 \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ d1 h, O8 ~/ g9 C/ Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ l% `' K9 Y% e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# O& M8 E5 P3 ~% y8 V7 ?  J" H% n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; ?4 v6 S' S8 L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* E3 L& D; A0 |/ R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 c2 ~) d1 n, M: J; T7 W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) S( a8 c: S8 V. z$ n' b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 q* Q6 n1 ^0 B0 c( @5 X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 R- ~$ o4 a  V3 v4 {6 X$ T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ V5 w" [% N( }9 @% N6 D* U; n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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+ C- W0 d9 d9 o9 ^6 R/ _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 B* g* U/ B2 ^% B4 P  l) b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>