【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
7 G# M: Z- D- P& i) W2 M$ F. J1 Z8 T7 h
<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
$ O' ]! x* A$ Y0 g$ c

歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% a" x" u! i8 ?+ |# gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& R& h1 j7 Q0 {: D, q& pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* D- \6 ^$ R0 s  g3 a9 sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 A! f* {7 v* J! e1 w5 sYou needn’t fear anything
% j7 ~: E: C& V4 iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 y- z3 y* a/ [* c1 U) aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; x0 O* Y) Z6 S4 OI love you I love you with all my heart
6 d. }; {2 J( F6 L8 @9 y6 a0 UNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 M3 D- h8 }# UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 \# S/ |+ R& J) EI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 k7 s& |% s) }6 {) f5 g* pI regret not dying
9 |& ?) h( w5 M. C: @  P: tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ G  z# l5 @0 t- KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 T4 V" R7 u, p7 k. n* xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 M9 X" R# P& [5 e& n4 N  ~( ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  v" S& V5 ?9 s
<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' O- C; P, h3 i' v# t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& m5 }: s9 d- \, Y$ A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; c/ c9 B) d: S- i) i) G3 R+ F8 |) C! z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# W' l: a& p/ J+ a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* l3 Y4 b8 J/ X$ M8 A" y2 t& \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ q5 C0 X  J9 [1 B( T6 k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( q& o% B  w! \- S% a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; S% i7 D: h0 u  A9 D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 n. ~' M1 w- S6 }( j' h& e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* @9 n& ?' K9 q5 S  i2 {7 h<P>你无需担心</P>
4 @7 A( O3 G9 Z; E- E% q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 [, x5 |4 |" l$ o8 }9 {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- @) q" t& U& l  D$ q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) Q" `2 m7 H/ ?: ~% x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* y4 S& j9 S( B: P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 q/ s1 M/ Q) K( n) `6 L: g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( X' j* P9 V% \. z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 U, P2 x9 a' F3 R+ P; ?* e- ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ e+ Y5 a! c' `! _$ x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, _- h' O$ V' Y5 N* M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 W' B2 V2 L* g+ a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 k. P, c+ ^! R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, W* }" o4 U# p: P& J; n1 E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( w! V! ~8 [! a- q1 d! i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 [& x6 O) e% W! E" ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' m: J; X1 v8 I( h! \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 D" ?! F- R" C7 ^& q* l4 [% N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, u0 H' X, t7 H, s: C6 e: W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: r# H. H: @8 A6 G4 E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, ]' A% N; v2 t2 `2 B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" a8 @6 v: y, h' a% [<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

9 _2 l& P) U8 \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
( g* z$ o8 ~0 Y$ s( k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>