【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! T- @7 b+ M# v  G$ M% j歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  J2 y9 h) t5 sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& B, g8 S3 |9 @! k( Q5 k' nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' B2 q7 r# y) n1 P& gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ q( N! y6 n# G6 D' {. F% K" NSeeing the sky content with its love
  }& }* L; l  a! J9 t5 |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 G$ J9 m0 |; ~( WYou needn’t fear anything
; \& X/ @) h# v: fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 d; y9 ?+ A9 YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: O" f; ~, k: t( R9 ^: S! `I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 U) T( r7 X2 ]7 P8 j' Y' NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 [$ C' C/ |6 Z1 K/ rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 f; E; D& W8 JI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ L: Z4 N: M8 l, T( cWith such a tongue as yours,
6 [% v. F4 j3 E9 C+ ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 M( ~+ n- Y1 e; b4 t; D( p; N, ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" ~; N7 T" ?) \( E) V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 d0 x! y; S6 x6 U9 G0 o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. O+ b8 ?8 v; S" Y) x5 e' b* y3 S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 ?0 @. X: W( y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! B' `; i* O& q0 t2 v5 n% E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ i- H6 s0 T9 e  v, ~4 ~<P>你无需担心</P>
0 p5 V6 @8 R# [/ y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 A4 ?" t/ Q( Q8 u$ z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. O4 d0 E8 e+ E. K& \( y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& Z+ Q7 U( b3 Y) _* y$ y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 h! s* m# I- `* b6 X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 U1 J" d/ X8 [$ K' u6 v6 c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 c) D; j6 U4 L: r$ E6 b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' N7 R  Q/ q4 {, z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" Q% W* b  {6 i# Q0 q" n: O9 V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ M+ @$ [7 P: T8 P- b/ M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* o  @/ J0 f  r9 o) a# `  D: o6 z8 o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" z4 N* \% S1 {$ c0 H/ s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 a6 f0 H+ |& M" F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, k9 z7 {1 `# S0 @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 R' ^3 u2 l) F! e& o<P>I regret not dying</P>
. H, O+ C0 n5 ^! m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' J: S. l+ j3 p<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 X% @: O1 V8 [5 x( p, a" M. o/ \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 I1 O3 ~# v7 x; [! @( R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* t7 {+ z9 }& V6 u4 j$ J- l% Z; k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>