【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
  Z0 w6 @- E+ A9 L  {The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ g) l1 v$ l0 a$ J0 z; A* }Making the sky glitter like gold,
: B9 Q/ t/ ^8 Z4 [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; S9 w( H# b# m# R7 Q4 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( {- P$ J# |  E' V1 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
% y. i  Y2 [' u+ H0 u) I* L5 x4 qWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# g1 G1 H) t9 g" t9 I1 JYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 [( F. U2 o$ l  S; j0 oEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& Y2 ^% m9 a+ wI love you I love you with all my heart
- c; m& O( U, s- yNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ u( V. R+ t  d/ @7 IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& W- |* K6 B& C- d! bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 n) h5 P0 C# gI’m still filled with fear
' u1 ]3 `0 u. q" c" b2 ]8 ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 D; Q- W  @8 _% D9 O1 e) OI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 l' Z  Q) R8 }! PWith such a tongue as yours,
2 m6 C& l. h. d# h  Q8 N6 [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 K- R% Y* _0 ?6 D6 d9 E: jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 r6 V8 }$ R, D0 D" l3 k6 \8 @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- w# x4 x, U8 x/ E' L" E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. X5 _4 A4 r9 {5 r% ^2 x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' F6 a% x3 |' n/ z. b% i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 g* B; l% G3 Y9 r" }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 \0 C8 T1 E# W; M<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! j/ u& P8 B8 N2 \, V<P>你无需担心</P>
/ F! w) i9 F* A  [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 O5 ]4 B/ P) x" t2 Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ }6 m- I& a$ D9 p% g% t/ S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 Z& T7 G, ~. @& T7 n! H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% X1 }6 d4 l. Y2 r+ @% F9 @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) e( O" q: ^* z/ O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# g- \' L7 \7 v4 a" W4 _7 F+ L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% B4 v- `: d1 k/ C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ C1 I4 v* j* l0 |( A# Q' v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  G7 N$ ]( N& e# I( k+ |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, v% n: q# }* D5 M<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 t8 s9 Z# ^; x9 d+ w5 O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# J5 N6 R  M" W. i/ \. E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 h2 _3 S& x2 ~' _" Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ q; G" K+ z6 F4 q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 z1 {% g0 e( s9 T8 x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
: \  x& I( d, R* `
我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>