【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: M3 K+ }4 b2 k1 k1 |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% t; q# i. y. [" M+ l3 @The sky is happy down to its soul
8 [8 M3 i0 P( @6 {  MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 b- }4 N; {. Q, K3 ^% ]0 V8 e1 `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: r9 \& L+ b, c0 e/ pYou needn’t fear anything
& Z) F  ~: K4 |, n/ u4 s8 R9 `2 ]  rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 _3 \7 |/ P4 W2 ^, t& _% DEvery other word you utter is love
* t* c) u- T/ C( P3 J  P: [4 DI really want to know just how much you love me
" t1 ^2 f% o5 h0 @$ T' i- |I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( h( _) N+ J% Y$ U) X: C- ]% x: sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 j& b  ^2 n5 @% @* p! V# J3 J! OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ G/ n' S# h. \" FI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 N3 V( [1 L3 i' e- S/ c: W( R% iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) k. v9 L. f( \& R) f) o9 g3 x) k$ v9 PWith such a tongue as yours,
4 r* o3 h1 ~# u1 t9 r- D0 fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 i: b+ k3 i$ m9 DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 F- m! }' ^6 ?9 C5 d+ o0 vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( h/ ?& F( K1 N. d  Q! T- F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. t2 j+ j$ G8 ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 ~0 ?5 w/ y2 E& T6 x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ O7 v0 H2 B$ W  o' U8 ^  z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, Z' F4 Y" Y9 m9 x: t! S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 n, n' r3 ~6 L( K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. }; v/ B- q3 p+ W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 L& s, V" X: I* u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  @. B0 ~2 A6 _9 H, S0 _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; @) l' ~& u! h  \$ {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* U) F, }8 Z0 I; k8 Q+ y0 k. X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' s9 ]" J& `, N6 Q# c, n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 [: x4 Q% Z2 H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* ~6 C/ A. k! K. v$ t8 H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& h$ Z1 s0 }1 g& f% G" Q3 U% U- F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; G8 l- M+ Q9 z+ {4 O0 _8 m5 s9 r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 j; P- R/ p+ B. V" {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  I2 W. }5 e! A) G0 ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ U1 L1 ~1 R: z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) N6 l1 S6 `1 L+ o- J9 g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; v4 q6 {5 L& L( f% c<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- x; Z0 d+ |. R: h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ ]% U* [" {, e) T6 h5 m8 [0 c" d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. s8 p& k$ b3 Q$ J6 ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& @" V: ?4 ^  w  n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, P! c5 Y; u8 B: u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* P4 a4 s/ {, T/ R<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, g' ~' l8 n7 D: w, O# @$ t  I( F我请你剖开它

2 k' `( r  J, x3 R) c& G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ v$ K, J! W; F/ f: t# H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>