【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  V+ E' e3 W3 w* Z  b" J& S) yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; i) g: Q  Y3 L+ L7 s) ]+ `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) L: `9 w  c& ]* @. XThe sky is happy down to its soul
; G" a5 o# V0 u: O% ^With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ b; u& _6 b# K5 T$ zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" M# q! f3 [( l6 kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& J" p% t  _4 X2 SI really want to know just how much you love me
( I$ ?- Z, \* q- AI love you I love you with all my heart
2 g' y4 U& y3 i0 u+ Y" ^5 R! nNothing can compare to my love
! R  C0 C0 V. i$ [+ F( T/ R6 eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& l# B2 G/ x7 O8 J) LI want so much to see inside your heart
0 A" g' {2 h* X+ n  WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 a- [9 |6 W4 G, {! t" m# Q5 vI regret not dying
0 \) J" p6 f& C2 LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 }9 X0 q# z. L9 ~7 @With such a tongue as yours,
, x0 T$ `5 d! j, `. tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 _1 p; y: P, L6 R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ ^* R; w0 O' r5 A: E8 n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 }* p# P7 ^+ p: ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. g+ Y, I9 d; i8 Z: y0 o8 f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 C! I$ T- c; G% e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  H/ R$ \% e* _( s<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, \# _* _, c8 y4 Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" T# M2 m% ^) r+ }, S& m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" l5 o1 I1 @8 w- A0 C$ f3 s! p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ h2 e$ Z) u2 s6 v$ c  X" d- @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# w- x- {5 l/ C2 y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; C+ {7 q/ `' K+ X1 d: O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 ?% c( I' p" }* V3 ^% n4 v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% j- [! v. I1 F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 P4 ]5 F4 [" l: Y  S' U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 q% P' B  H5 n/ |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ o( x* c2 C, x  K0 Q! C& `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% d! E; a0 T% U' x6 M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( H/ b! c6 u& J3 ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  q: k$ S2 L% E* ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
: ]7 ?: ^8 f( @4 y, o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, g& ?- D0 I, v9 I' Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 E9 ]; e; R$ R- Q. E) R<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! V3 q  E% W* V2 I9 V) d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 b! m9 u9 R; j6 Z$ i; P. f, I我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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