【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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! g3 ~( P: ?4 H- R0 \/ M4 gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ r* h0 ^+ ?9 ]5 X, HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* H. T( E/ U; QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' u7 y" n! d& a+ P! l5 f' ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 h1 g& d) ]7 @  lSeeing the sky content with its love
2 A, _5 ^2 P8 E* x/ M; R  @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% \4 a4 e3 Z" VEvery other word you utter is love
5 N5 ^/ w7 R* S1 Z$ E6 GI really want to know just how much you love me
4 V, H* V! H' Z6 g9 u; dI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 ]  B" h  H7 C9 H( k: nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 z) m0 t9 j; O& \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- s6 z8 |9 m1 |4 F6 e$ \I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 b6 e; {# M8 v* }  xI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ M' r  ?) r! JWith such a tongue as yours,
) w# F) _- P" S' sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; I: O9 N" \# z3 J2 o/ b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 i# t0 V! U1 V" Q# B3 ^5 }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 V; S& ?+ p% h! p4 S8 S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& V/ h& \$ Z* g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 U" c% ?0 {5 J9 ^5 e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ k* ^& E  d; j$ ?# h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 _. Y- @8 s  Y& h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 ~% e1 e0 |$ M) R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 J& x/ C8 G' ?<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% n% H3 R8 M" V8 p1 v: R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# A; w  |& s1 h( l6 I5 _+ I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: H( a1 f% a1 {1 C0 _- C: _; Y+ w: R3 d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- n- r0 v/ @3 ]8 e* Y* U" Y& h- i# ?7 ~1 ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 p2 ~& z0 |; y$ W* C4 @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& m1 z* U% M+ d  i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; B6 x. o! k# ?) h0 a) R: Z& w1 R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 s5 Z/ g! ^$ K) v; k$ b8 C6 Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 G: O& O1 H  U5 p" Q+ o  g# L) @9 p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" k3 M/ C( D2 j+ x# C( W5 ^2 c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& S9 }0 j) u  c, }# d- _, t& ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- i  a1 [; n9 L% F3 C- q+ y# r( [5 i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' m$ O! [8 d- G2 r0 c( u0 n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 X# H1 Q0 W' h* V- a; X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 G1 g" `9 [9 c/ ?6 W4 q: {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ o! e; O8 B/ y/ L8 x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 q; x' |$ W$ ]. L( ]. E+ ]<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; s9 A( o  J/ X' \* x2 B我请你剖开它

0 D) K# Q5 e5 m% L, i* Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 C$ b  b' c; j" f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>