【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
' [7 D4 V- _. E+ N2 PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# ~2 Q8 `, S0 q* e  |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 u5 o. ]" p8 V2 yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 F* |3 l0 g7 W+ c6 h( u$ d( e% K! yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 j1 }/ y" i- J# t2 }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( V3 K* ]: q) t  S$ eI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! Q7 o( k, x0 D( O! O% O* ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) y6 m* E$ ^% V' T( x6 R, {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! y: i9 P9 Y, V) EI’m still filled with fear
9 F1 V6 m( C: X9 IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 V7 O2 q# F! U* N7 mI regret not dying
3 R5 ]0 K1 }6 E# b. bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 |  z1 {7 }% o  g$ k+ b, PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 H0 x. R/ v; C5 f4 zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 @+ j- |2 L7 ^) {! l7 {+ ~7 X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 f: B$ k2 J  b( [  r0 S, `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ x: B0 w9 W) d% o2 a% K6 w  n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 ^% n: |* E: f5 A+ z* l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ `4 o& G* z# l+ q0 H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 n7 M$ p$ b. l2 H  }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; ~" _" G. P. d% ?* _5 W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. b, S9 z, E8 Y; R$ Z" q( D( J9 u4 T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, A4 {7 Q5 a  \& r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 Q+ C( s( O. B6 d: p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 m# s: |+ O$ [, z% G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, t7 Q) C/ p4 W" _<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* b' W# A/ H2 w: O) j* z8 B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 v& R' k) t6 I/ e9 h. l* ^  y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% @1 v9 \+ d6 u1 m$ [. D& i8 g! I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ U; @, z+ q- s$ c1 A5 q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 g7 s0 V. p/ M& u( i% A<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( q* }8 j' ?- N1 N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# R" [0 v$ ]. C0 E) \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 J" t/ F6 a4 E8 A, {6 \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- K# o3 ^6 q7 k, W- Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 a7 k! K; i0 b& [- F/ _' @4 |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 D( N- y1 F; e8 {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& {- A, u" ^; F  z, H9 l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" P( ~3 j, d' @5 ~5 y$ C& f: V- _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 c+ _; W3 k0 i8 T" F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. b$ \$ F( z: \- u0 V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) o8 q, x3 k) `. m/ q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 q) Y6 {8 r7 e; F: c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ K9 y' W7 {- ?4 E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# g  Y, A, q6 ~5 b2 R2 r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
' g3 n1 Y$ X8 s2 x% r6 i% T
我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>