【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& q( p; n+ K" a2 r) @歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# k4 z2 `, V" ~) n* z$ D. E6 o. tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ r9 z! Q; S$ P: SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ M- V% j' v/ DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 J) Q7 O* a1 x1 c2 r8 U% ^8 S/ dThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' B2 e, v2 f0 c0 B! TSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, W7 G3 J' N3 T! vEvery other word you utter is love
5 O! p# Y9 Q3 ?. QI really want to know just how much you love me
  @( f4 p  y0 a' ]$ l+ D9 FI love you I love you with all my heart
, ^& Q: y' ~8 ^: c, `3 uNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 B9 M# U' ^+ j( S2 p! nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 k" E/ ^/ g; e" y8 wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  w. T1 l- t9 ^7 X" P) gI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! ?6 e0 z0 l' [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' ^5 k. T8 S$ u: X% N! b1 zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 A1 ]/ J1 J; l: \3 L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  `: u( c' }  |2 S# T8 N/ j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 A6 b$ b5 w% {$ G$ g0 g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& ~4 n7 f6 R6 @% v; D* a' O<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' A) A. R" p2 ]6 h9 a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, H% \1 d; A& {) B& S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" n% t. ], X* C. x7 y8 h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 z1 V1 L  t+ ^" I+ F% t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% K4 E! X+ d  n+ m' n<P>你无需担心</P>
% A# u. e3 Z! t. r. C) U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- G' L  ~: j# |: `$ v2 o: x2 Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 N9 o: P% l7 f' ?% K% ~: Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% I* n% K  O: p! s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 c1 u2 s9 F; w: Z- \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ q% G, x8 g% m) b2 H- ]! B/ g* b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% J3 d* {. Y" h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! O2 O- ]1 [1 ]; y# P0 y% v3 n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 l% P! j$ j( I; C/ T5 a" C% A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 V, u! R& X$ Y- ~$ }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( }4 b6 m4 g: G/ }% R7 I$ y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( Y. x1 R; Y2 K( s. I/ r7 s) F& o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 Q* N& u3 J& J: O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& F# r! d  N% p$ j<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 z- d" w# M# R4 Z/ o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, U$ C$ ]% {" v) F+ H. M7 E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ J* R6 |  a+ v- Z* ^0 g- B1 T. h+ G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* r7 J. |2 y( M& G! j- X" d3 z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" s, q5 ]7 i' h7 d' G3 ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% q# ?! U4 C. t$ o<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ c% i4 Y# o! N3 m1 b* \! X1 Q我请你剖开它
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) v( N5 Y  o" H9 X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' i/ t7 B* x/ F8 M6 M" \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>