【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 o$ D" m% ?) `" d, f歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 ~% a3 t" O+ @( W" i5 ]' nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 L1 J# x. u( m) ?1 Q" OWith the moon kissing it every night
/ X( k6 S' I9 T! r" }+ D2 g9 |Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. j* I/ v6 i) W+ s% o9 LEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# T9 S) i# f  Y8 II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 F" ?# w! E* YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' s0 u' B" s) r3 n' EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 A+ a% Z% O9 c5 o& w6 G9 RI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 M4 t$ m8 |' g" p1 R; JWith such a tongue as yours,
  \- I8 N8 z7 W, fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) V/ H8 n! r. C9 h9 {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 Z% b& S8 ~) L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 a! `, m$ A. p& W. z/ c7 p  L/ F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 m& V5 d7 }: H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& ^0 E; m: p/ X. Z) c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 L$ q0 G/ _: }4 S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 o  ~5 `  {, w; F1 @; M9 G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( F2 a# O: A8 z7 i" {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  X2 C8 N! [- s% B# _8 l/ q2 U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ `1 }) v4 B2 B  }9 W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- L! ]5 P* p+ U( [. z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 @# Z, T5 b0 J: f  N$ B* Y: v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. v& U6 t2 I- A* _! E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% N+ o8 ^( t: C8 R9 @  d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 H( O( v# H+ a6 a2 b7 X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ U- {  H# a: g3 ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 s& _3 ~8 i% k& p5 c9 Z( k! X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( d/ ]! S$ ^+ o9 V# K5 m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 m3 {+ N  y" e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  J7 X3 b& ^5 N* S8 @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* f6 P8 K+ ]# I& M) A7 ?* ~; g& l, ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 u2 V7 e  ~( x6 o6 e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# h& p0 U& Q+ a% I6 a$ b  G# l<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: j: y. U1 `7 P& r" P* w. V3 J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ x" u  ]3 B- _( j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( y: D' X: l0 [1 j4 H- c: l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, n  ~: S- d; e/ E' c' j* |6 o<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) N2 H0 s( t' G; P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 R9 k5 e3 u' D' P' `- U2 v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 d; d# R$ ~, g, L: L* y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( A4 E/ P6 m, K; t$ Y% c! Q( D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% Z( m: Q& C& A) F" I6 Z! o# d% v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  b  x- Y3 m% j2 \5 {8 j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' H$ L2 q: ^/ m* b6 n! ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 e+ x6 _) x3 i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 N0 v# S. u' L) \/ D" [: e<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 M8 I; O: \3 g8 H6 L我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 @3 g& \0 W- B( H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>