【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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1 k& v7 [3 _2 L1 q/ [- j7 \7 V我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; f- S9 |: f) y1 AThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' O! E: b0 F$ F. zFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
( ^5 ?- V2 k6 _4 \/ JWe meet and talk everyday,
& `1 \1 b5 O# l  H; f2 K5 s3 t, xBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ Y9 ^8 b* X9 s6 k, {* J, m4 OI would probably know how you feel
, o9 g/ f1 a8 ?Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& g0 H6 z5 m4 u- ^I want to confess that I love you,
: q/ ]! L) l/ n& U3 l2 |3 qBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ ]( V: @2 t1 i' l' A5 K- YIf today isn’t too late,
! p/ ]# }3 Q6 e% m( k- ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! t' d' X9 o, D3 Q' @" iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ s, {: T  J: W& l$ }2 z" eEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ _) m+ f8 A4 A, `, vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; ]( m8 _7 n' w+ u+ q/ i( ~4 _& TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ N6 j& _/ y. `( |0 tCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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3 _" u' t4 F- S* h0 `[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 T# E0 M& u4 v; R5 @5 e. O/ s5 k<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" W4 _1 m  [, O<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" L4 C3 ^5 }" y7 E<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 G# m. _, k, p& q# z2 F<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 f9 x  Q- Z1 D9 I<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
# d3 P  `$ c) l# F<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
! ^0 e6 @  {: D5 K& s7 D% b<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
0 B& ]( s9 u1 X3 Y- e% S<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
1 s* x' f3 \5 B, J, \! c<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. s/ ~  ?/ W: z/ c. n4 l; t<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 r$ e3 S0 K$ u; |" I<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ y0 E2 p" o- z$ V$ u$ J<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' a7 T7 S/ |- G. N" Q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
# o& T: P9 l4 \6 V<P>但我不会</P>
: n$ K9 \2 B2 S# W- R4 h<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* D% k# u7 b& P<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* l2 |# G% }# f. Q7 e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ T3 Z+ J/ o/ x4 A) U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- j. }/ d+ m4 ^8 T- u) J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, K* q. b! @+ K/ n' ?' F( e6 |<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 z6 {) N. l, B& `1 C" P& D<P>But I never did </P>
- ]  q' p  o: r<P>但我不会 </P>
$ w; [5 A) L3 F' A( A<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 m+ V; e/ ?' S/ s' f<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% [+ Y0 ?3 J9 o$ ]<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 I) [# v1 N: `! V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' p1 O8 h8 a' c+ J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 ^+ p3 }  l2 O" u: e4 K. q<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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/ E2 z, ^! `! |2 Z% p这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 u8 ~2 P' a: \. v: t0 X<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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2 f) P4 ~6 n) @7 J# w<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>