【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
. u8 U8 y6 S# S' M/ F* `+ s* zThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
, J% H  d$ W& r3 C2 B0 V. e( x( @' aI already loved you with all my heart
8 t. M" g+ y- ?6 M. q. ?, LWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" X9 y$ q5 V" e3 e0 Z1 x  eIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. f) E% x( i/ F( R0 L3 ^I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: O& q, X8 Y. I* mBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' [% b% ]; I* D8 ?, K9 BIf today isn’t too late,
* N. b9 c; o5 yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, h. e0 b) k" T+ u0 x2 ~* t+ {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# P7 \) K; W7 c' zEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
/ ~; M( p  W$ EWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ w  y( ]! t( e) sBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) G  B4 G, G9 n6 l9 }: Q1 ~+ vIf today isn’t too late,
4 d! A. p2 J% X9 N" k. d1 yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& Q7 t9 ], k5 t% }; zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 k- p- M$ T5 _0 U$ OCan I entrust it to you?
/ f$ H* G/ r4 n) i8 fEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

/ W3 C) h# F3 |2 T7 {& y9 \0 E
<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ v! H3 Z7 J8 L9 E* k/ C  t, Z<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
' H! @  Z" V0 S9 \& N<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 M; e* j) i( @* m& t<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
+ _. ~+ `* f7 B" D7 z0 O<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 ^9 r  M( m6 h: }# F* J<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% D1 n; M$ J# I9 E<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 ?% ^3 S% s) @<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! u2 k7 V0 J" T& t5 f/ Y1 u: _<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& P+ c0 m3 y; f6 s! f" u" `<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 a3 o5 y3 w* z8 W<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% S0 ~$ M, y# y4 C% {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ _1 g  C; n/ J' o& i0 O: o. P, x* [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ `( _6 h, y# {) N1 O0 X* w& p4 V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 F4 n2 \1 T+ P' L8 {) q8 j# ?/ z. r<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; l& [2 Y* o7 }& Y1 r2 S<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( u2 z3 ^6 a7 h2 P& ^3 U6 i/ v  t<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ X' T& [  j0 h. Y4 b0 J9 W8 T% V; {<P>But I never did </P>
1 F* r4 j2 ]; L0 \/ i+ N<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
6 H) \5 G% j3 X9 n* z# l+ o<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! M4 P" @" G, y# U3 B2 I+ }" U2 M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 ?4 ^+ a. S9 h8 _<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 K# K" z0 S( y, s% K5 C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ P% v2 r" r, M. S' z; S# L<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( N. @3 g* u1 q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 Q4 I1 V7 V+ |2 V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 H. W0 K/ g. \+ e  D, c6 w( ^' E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) ?; w3 @4 L- P  V<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& ~5 B8 ?, @( W# z1 Z  T% ]6 _
我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
! v" P$ U( X$ y
$ d) G! Z$ @* I2 \这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' w7 M. D+ `# P7 j- M. u& L7 H
. c. \# B. m# w' q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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% C% c# p) F/ r<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>