【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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" t0 R4 t! z6 ^! y# y4 T$ l我另将歌词附在此。
: p) C3 b7 _  ]- ~9 oThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 G$ X/ d  a) t- Z  E. XThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
& S' [; d- z# }4 T. E% \$ vFrom the first moment we met,
" r% P. G9 J6 n* Q0 O) yI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( X- O. b) N* Z& DI would probably know how you feel
5 |' n# j; s+ K' a3 }+ M1 jLove… just the word love
6 W4 s, }0 ^' k5 ^Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
  O% }& d* C- d0 @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 d2 ]# f% f  w' U) t9 EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
, I, g3 K" y5 M. o3 L3 CWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ q: W& O# h3 ]& g, [- yBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, r1 x: j% H- Z/ w) J! D2 vIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 k% E4 N& G) }0 V+ G- RCan I entrust it to you?
' i' |5 m! S8 ]# J$ a" j$ ?Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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* ~+ U# a# K. c; P/ ?, M[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 A2 c; ^; c8 Q% T: X<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. p6 E2 k$ z3 |3 [/ H; D<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
7 W: Q  C$ h: U5 T1 v<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 x/ R8 i" a2 U6 y<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" x6 q; i4 `+ Z) b, T2 }3 G<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 f5 }+ `. d9 W  b; R# {<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' ?) C/ s& v: J* N$ x6 v<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, g, e; I7 q& A2 H. i<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 N* z, [8 w' p<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
  \7 s7 l6 o' ~<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
* [! ^* Y$ f- t; q/ z7 V<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( w; I' o, l3 u/ {$ Q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% M# y8 o/ U1 g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 A( h* R& t- w1 c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ X3 e* m7 g1 T, @0 z8 N* |# X: C<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 P0 K6 p* X% K+ k<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% d$ ^& l2 Z. C* C8 r; i. f% I0 ?8 ~' b<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- S# E+ O; _$ A5 d0 e8 q, i<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! n2 Z2 x* N( |( O<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: ^- t2 @/ h1 G<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 p5 E7 I9 m3 T1 [; d$ `  j/ g" l<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( g0 K1 {7 I+ D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ j6 H/ S% h% D/ A2 @0 @7 s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 I9 W0 Q0 _" P3 u. K2 i; \- u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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: y9 H5 R! A! Z& g* Z' v! I. n. z这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

6 D2 Q! w- X2 l0 J! W这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 S/ D+ v: {. l8 V<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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