【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
' g! G2 `9 ~( y( hThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
. V; r: Y. W" y: e- D( C5 [0 \2 dWe meet and talk everyday,
9 d/ Q+ [/ f- y' K4 V. jBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
* o6 d: i: z: k" x' b6 d$ {  WWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ U, e, J, C  T  _But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 H- r" @. B+ _" ZIf today isn’t too late,
- L6 c$ K7 R& f! ?9 P8 s7 ^I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 v- h: e$ e- b- TCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
" s' e  n- q3 T2 MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 _) j9 ~6 E2 x. R$ x% J2 YIf today isn’t too late,
8 e! l0 v2 z/ y, g8 ~5 JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: k& y' `* E- b( {" j* ]4 GCan I entrust it to you?
$ w+ S9 `1 P0 |' L% M  `1 DEntrust my love within your heart
9 `) _5 f% J4 q5 Y5 L2 l4 ACan I entrust it to you?
) X. z" c/ g3 FEntrust my love within your heart
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: [" c* X6 f; q8 i. z[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

& A, s( u  D% j1 I<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: Q- u$ f+ w! V" j! f" K! }& W1 l<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ _, T% t$ J& J; _# s: l<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 a7 K2 `% c4 ~; j& p& @. y<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: w9 h- Y5 F" T+ [, l<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 N+ k. x( ?7 {8 c$ I  T) W2 B<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 f1 {/ e9 ]; m) A<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; G/ d7 L/ W* f! z% l<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, b1 J5 [4 w' d& }+ t+ Y0 x<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# _: ]6 N9 C. B" U' S5 l8 s<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 i" t) @0 d+ x" t1 t" ]<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" n8 s- e* a+ @: l& T<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- k% M9 W, P4 ?) U. M% i; g2 T! Q6 Q: _) v<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  Q* J) q& Z, n<P>我想说我爱你</P>
+ n+ L" K$ n  ~1 T0 l8 u, t<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 K/ p: n( U8 _9 I<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' x9 J( m# Q8 [<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( r4 N. @# j6 r" Q& `! l+ ]<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- R  z% a3 l5 h. P9 H- L9 }7 w# H<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ J, W- c7 \" R! i% I* e" U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 C% Z2 ~4 h5 A5 w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  S1 T3 y$ E  D/ \4 ~( H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 X1 _# s. Q3 {3 y) j- k2 J* G<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! @4 W; {/ e2 K  a7 ~# q+ m7 V4 n<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
2 ~; j5 o0 _! @/ D$ \<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 J! o9 y8 i6 ?- B0 e<P>But I never did </P>
6 I# S& \. `" K# X% h<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ W( l4 X' E8 k2 [, D# k$ [* W! p: J; \1 h<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: c3 X1 E% U: Z7 B! F: J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" h7 F: |2 n6 [' g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ ^: j5 M# Y! c: R, C) n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( j! T! E, i; ^, R% c+ S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 s* t; }8 u0 b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
7 {1 o( ]$ o) S<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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: \7 s1 s" g9 E: M; I9 e! t* c这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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4 K% o3 d3 ]; v; q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>