【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
  D9 j. }& e! ?- K( Z! o3 VI already loved you with all my heart
0 j% M9 _6 h, F9 c$ mWe meet and talk everyday,
$ `  {7 D' |$ kBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ r/ V: g0 S" g% E6 ^& J' MIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 B/ f2 _( {9 P& A1 B* U5 y# g  xI would probably know how you feel
5 H% N2 P" z- H0 V4 MLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! E$ q' f$ f) k6 v1 uBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# M' [& ^. G' PIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* p2 w9 `0 @& `. U; k( o' }3 R  p" HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% B0 @! h! k0 T2 L! B, N# fCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( J/ F$ \5 ]5 ?9 C) q1 ]Love… just the word love
# L  j) h  Q0 z  ?Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 ~7 h2 a" m- {  y# XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* T* _, G& y: z' P* M2 |Can I entrust it to you?
; I" g4 c" ?- z6 ?: {9 z1 A6 mEntrust my love within your heart
5 R7 P& p6 ]* B  k! {* RCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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' C1 T) c4 D! z( P' j9 h; Z7 ]2 f[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. n  @" |, H& d<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 ^. I) H& u8 h4 @* p* o<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# y2 x! R2 |9 n  D$ z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( J5 M& y0 C5 i: q2 p9 k<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
5 n, F' [6 C5 {1 g<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" i: U1 A" u( }. ]; j" \<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ |' m3 P1 H+ v# H+ ]1 O% h2 n4 f<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
( \: R5 w$ T% e4 `9 @  z- [: F9 d8 W<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 x1 Y) M: h  I  u6 q4 X& P<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 \" |- ~* u0 n3 V* G<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) N" m9 {% l# I8 s" [<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% {# l, Z. o, X7 g' H% ~<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: w, f/ B0 i' k' ^. I<P>但我不会</P>
  g2 }, T7 `" i<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% P. c& Y$ w# {' m& d% D<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 w( _' b3 w- n. Q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( @) ^7 Y: O8 D2 C0 `0 y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 |: E4 A; Q9 o) R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 [, T7 s4 C- X6 |<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* S+ F) u3 z1 H2 ^% q<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* A( ?4 J- F; N& V: V<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
: U6 N0 b4 z6 W: W<P>But I never did </P>
4 A( X, y/ @' k3 ]9 D1 }0 {1 F<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
0 s0 R5 B2 L( o3 f1 B& U<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 b: c0 f+ o( U! ?0 G( ?6 M% [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 o# R* U2 X# j# K$ t7 ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 N5 I' u+ K  q7 [; v# _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, w& W9 H" p5 Z4 J, B# |: v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 ~4 F2 G! g5 D3 m; M+ U4 l6 Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& _! T9 ]% e9 T: v/ J+ ?( V5 [<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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) {' r' @* Z' m- c" V, n这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  @; Z! r9 U% m  ]: R# c这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& z6 [* o' f7 U/ M7 k7 J<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>