【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) G6 Y! ~  ^) D0 a) @" CThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
! v" R! g) I' e% w; B% uI already loved you with all my heart
) [. w" q' ?% s3 q; U# BWe meet and talk everyday,
8 o8 l, \3 J' P" RBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
& {% b1 y( E! F# B3 R- q7 B7 DLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
: ?( L: k' \# a& X$ FI want to confess that I love you,
! Q7 Y0 u6 p+ S% X8 _% `But I never did
* ~  f  b! |7 V, xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
! y1 E: e3 n4 H0 WLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
# P4 c: u7 b! D: g) Q& K' }But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 n/ O" S: N6 g1 |9 c3 |7 yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
! C( J4 O: I3 cEntrust my love within your heart
' w1 \2 b8 J1 f) ~1 v. Y1 vCan I entrust it to you?
1 m8 B2 E: O' @! F: B5 NEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
! Y9 n' f) A0 ~' ?<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' }* t" ^% Z$ d* \<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% r( H: s1 A' Z  g. j$ Y) u<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ I  s$ v" ~! k% n2 w<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 k& k1 h, z: J& _9 a# F3 J<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
2 f5 `' T/ B" C. S' V<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 `" B4 _8 ]4 s+ A* e<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( \+ W: X, I9 D4 x) i1 m<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! Z9 u, G; r) g" p4 R<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# B2 l1 r( M& u: \4 g* t( b<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- I- ]9 I8 e- d4 \* n<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ K  C8 w* a5 h/ ]) ^  M3 u<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 k% \; ?/ g) H<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% w. u; t" N! T7 c. D5 X<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! w( Z1 ^; U, \9 x) j) P<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 K: i* e$ \) R2 Q; c<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' \0 G: G/ k6 j* S4 f7 ~7 f( j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 i6 ]) s# ]9 X' ?, j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* K' {: `7 r! }( D! h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 A5 S8 Q* @6 `* @( U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  T3 {" Z" z! b# h1 d<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 E$ L4 S2 H, K5 \1 I<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
0 w! w. q+ `/ x* o2 K! Q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
: b) X, f7 J; P# f+ ?6 G% r9 K<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' Y) K1 B. O0 \, f: G. L<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: R+ D, H" n7 a  T, x2 j<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 A% b# i! F8 n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! O* l6 U, o, Y! G/ L6 Q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* F1 M4 s$ A- t% l; U3 s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. e9 F1 B3 ?8 |! m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 f/ W, v6 v2 d: ?; |) E& N<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% o2 `4 o5 |% L9 W, ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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0 w# p# G; Z0 c" h) e8 Y, d) W这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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" g. S/ B! [- `3 n这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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% A9 T0 v. k5 B5 `( p* _2 b% o<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>