【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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2 T* C& F2 A& b0 o# u我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& V3 F& F' v7 s0 w" V. yIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' R  z" C/ O" ^* i$ W+ R' VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
: M  m" N  U3 W3 h. `7 _. wEntrust my love within your heart
  z- I; p. j2 s1 d: f6 ~Love… just the word love
! O5 f- C+ e5 k+ G" e+ H. XWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! k1 k. {& k1 fBut I never did
* A5 p& R# `9 v* y3 N5 ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ e3 ?2 l5 w2 E; `2 z8 S" wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 F# v7 j' ]5 uI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 o4 j$ {0 |$ E) T) VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

. s' v. y, L. x1 L# @[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

' F9 H" v( M$ D' j<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, i8 W- E$ {/ }# q: Q% H, g3 F0 p<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* Q; G/ M* }+ C+ e<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 t4 @/ l: _. x, O<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 E" a' o" y+ G, |6 L4 d<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% \; m  q9 f2 N9 j<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 ^' ^: ^" a6 E" t3 p<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 [; `8 C9 u" ^<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 V5 Z+ \8 _2 {2 D<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 j( M! P" Q5 K7 c% n<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  q: ~6 U6 s  S<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& ]- K. U7 S: C9 E4 m# _  Z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 R1 j  J1 x- s7 ]7 m: \<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) g$ u6 ?" j+ k0 q4 q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 ?8 Z- G0 p: g6 Q' p2 s<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 y* M3 B, x$ \  H<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" Q: O3 m8 O9 @' ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" K1 l) a& U8 G% h% r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 B$ }% T  f$ G$ Z" T5 [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 h0 _- Y/ s% V0 X7 c<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
( c8 g" I& C! }" @<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ K. J0 ?  _" T' T0 [( u; e* I<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; Z3 W; X. k  w7 }# O) d- H<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% w1 Y* D: T6 p( c* c3 Z<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 _/ ~9 l0 P  s) x* ]3 ~* Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 S# Y- [  S7 ?2 B: f6 J4 t<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! H  M  P* m) S2 A3 N  O2 x" f& r<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 r3 z4 r  `, q! f# Q, S( c<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 Z* P1 [# t0 H8 O' ~<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 F3 F5 r" c: e0 \9 v3 y+ K& v 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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. X9 D# N/ Z- a5 c1 P* g2 O这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

7 |/ E- b6 \8 |" V# A8 Q; R<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 |) o# ^0 q  D, r2 U3 E% w<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. k7 [! f. G" r<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>